Qiao Mengfu of the Yuan Dynasty in China said: "Yuefu also has practices: crown, streaky pork and leopard tail, and the six characters are also."

In other words, it should be beautiful from the beginning, just like Phoenix Head. "When you open the beginning of a book, you should pay attention to it with strange sentences, so that you will be surprised when you see it, and you will not dare to abandon it"; The ending should be strong, just like the tail of a leopard. "Everyone's words, on the way to the words, can not only shine a different light, but also leave a long aftertaste." Topic composition, short in length, must pay attention to the design of the beginning and end.

"A good beginning is half the battle." For college entrance examination composition, a good beginning is half the battle.

"Phoenix head" means that the opening of the article should be beautiful and attract readers' attention. A good opening speech should have the following characteristics: first, the opening speech should be directed at the theme, that is, simply reveal the theme you want to express.

Secondly, the opening remarks should be novel and use some stale opening remarks. Even if it is not boring, it will not arouse readers' interest in reading. Finally, the opening should be concise and lively, and you can't drag your feet and make a long speech, which can't get to the point for a long time.

In terms of methods, questions can be set to arouse people's appetite; You can cut to the chase, cut to the chase; Rhetoric can be used to create an atmosphere; You can start lyrically and touch the reader's heartstrings; You can quote famous sayings, which are refined and profound. Either way, all the pressure should be avoided.

The ending of a composition is also an important "process". If you don't write well, the structure of the article will be relaxed and eclipsed; If you write well, it will make the article natural and add luster. This is really a "if she just turns her head and smiles, there are a hundred spells". This smile can make people stop and move.

Generally, you can learn from the following four kinds: first, the enlightening ending. Write down heartfelt words, or passionate appeals, or give people philosophical enlightenment at the end.

The second is the poetic ending. At the end, imagine showing readers a beautiful picture in a descriptive way, or expressing your feelings in famous sayings.

The third is the end of confidence. Finally, tell readers their views on the problem and their feelings about life. Language should be kind, touching, simple and natural.

The fourth is to take care of the beginning and the end. This ending is round in structure, because it echoes back and forth, which often gives people a sense of unity.

Of course, "writing without definite method" is the writer's highest realm, but exploring some rules and skills will make you feel that there are "methods" to follow and "start from". Example 1 The happiness of Shanxi candidates is like a shallow fog, floating in the horizon, floating at the intersection of the village east, blending with the Daoxiang in the dilapidated house and infiltrating into my heart.

For it, I waited for a summer and a childhood. But at the moment, it is like a flute, gently echoing in my heart ... when I was a child, my family was poor.

The sky of the poor is gray in memory, and the poor always has a pair of sad eyes, which is when his children are purring and drinking porridge. That year, my grandmother was ill and my mother lent her a liter of rice. Flour and rice were luxuries at that time.

My mother steamed a bowl of white thick rice every morning and then fed it to my grandmother bite by bite. At this time, I squatted in the corner and swallowed.

Is filial piety defined as leaving good things for grandma to eat? At that time, I often thought so, until one day … that day, the weather was lovely and sunny. In the morning, as usual, it was a bowl of rice and our porridge, but my grandmother didn't get up to eat because she was not feeling well. My mother was in a hurry to get to the ground and asked me to feed her when she left.

Looking at the emaciated me who had served my rice bowl, my grandmother said, "Good boy, my grandmother doesn't want to eat. Go and eat, huh?" Grandma caressed my head affectionately. "hey!" I was filled with joy and hurried away with the bowl of rice I had always dreamed of.

But at this time, an inexplicable feeling came to my mind, and simple thinking told me: "This is grandma's cooking, I can't eat it!" " "In this way, I stared at the bowl of rice, and the sunshine outside the window and the chirping of birds turned into the bowl of rice, shaking in front of my eyes. Several times, I almost couldn't help it At that time, the temptation of a bowl of rice was no less than a big magnet that attracted needles, just like a banshee who smiled beautifully and wanted to suck me in.

And I just sat there, hovering between eating and not eating, and there was a saying in my ear: I can't eat grandma's cooking ... the door was pushed open by my mother, and I turned to look at my mother: "Mom, I didn't eat grandma's rice." I curled my lips and wanted to cry.

My mother's face was stupefied, and suddenly she seemed to understand something. She hugged me tightly, and big drops of tears fell on my neck. At that moment, I knew I had done the right thing; At that moment, I seemed to suddenly grow up.

Because I can finally carry my mother's tears. The sunshine outside the window slanted in and shone warmly on my mother and me. The room is reddish. In this silence, I heartily shared my mother's tears ... that year, I was 8 years old.

Little me, as if I had been baptized by my soul, yes, that's it. I clearly remember that on the night when my grandmother died, I dreamed that she was standing in front of me with a bowl of delicious rice in her hand ... Comments: This is a touching narrative prose.

Full of affection, it has produced a shocking artistic effect. The opening "Phoenix Head", with the metaphor of two images, entered the memory dimly and melodiously, leading the following.

At the end of Leopard Tail, "I dreamed that my grandmother was standing in front of me with a bowl of delicious rice in her hand ..." The lingering charm made people cry and took care of the beginning of the article. When the spring breeze came, the dandelion mother let go of her children's hands and let them find their own shelter with the wind.

Such a seed, after leaving her mother, resolutely chose the land suitable for her growth. It came to a garden with the wind. "There are too many beautiful women here. I don't like them."

It escaped. It came to a prairie again. "There are too many companions here; I can't display my talents. "

It walked away again. It came to an oasis again. Although it is surrounded by deserts, the scenery here is particularly attractive.

"How do you know you can fight a protracted war here?" It gave up again. The wind does not seem to like picky seeds. It felt bored, so it left the seeds on the side of the road and left by itself.

The seed is very distressed. Is this its last choice? The fertile soil in its heart.

That little thing inspired me to start and finish my composition eagerly.

Life is a long journey, and the past years have left traces in time. I turned around, the fog gradually dispersed and I saw the past. Memories rolled with the wind, and I caught a light and shadow, and my mind gradually became clear. That time, that time. (Then there is a transition. I will only give you an example here. Architecture can be changed. ) Nine times out of ten, life is unpleasant, and there are always times when I curl up in the dark. I see hope. (enter the theme narrative of several hundred words here) (then express my feelings) (finally remember to point out the topic) People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. Life is always one after another, or low cliffs or high valleys. That thing has been lingering in my mind, inspiring me to live and grow. I know it will always be with me and inspire me.

3. Help write, there is really no way. How to write in the end?

Phoenix head, streaky belly and leopard tail-composition materials Some people say that the trilogy of composition procedures is: 1. Conception, 2. Writing, 3. Revision. Intention, including "what to write" and "how to write", "what to write" is to select materials and solve the problem of "having substance in words"; "How to write" is the composition of materials, that is, how to lay out a plan, that is, to solve the problem of "speaking in sequence". Proper composition includes proper handling of clues, levels, paragraphs, beginning, end, transition and care of the article. Before we start writing, we should have a "well-prepared" point of view, so that the article will be smooth and coherent. Whether the composition is appropriate or not is an article. Echo before and after, the details are appropriate, the beginning is good, and the end is strong. This is the old saying "methodical" and "dharma". For the overall structure of the article, predecessors put forward the theory of "crested pig belly and leopard tail". This is very insightful and worth learning. The so-called "phoenix head" is a metaphor for phoenix head. A bad beginning will often affect the success or failure of the full text. A good beginning is mainly to help readers grasp the main points and understand the full text easily. Or it can attract readers, fall in love at first sight, stimulate readers' interest and make them happy to read the whole article. There is no uniform pattern at the beginning of a good article, or parallelism, metaphor, rendering, suspense setting, or pointing out opinions, but we must come straight to the point and strive for novelty. Only in this way, the pen is extraordinary, just like the charming phoenix head, fascinating. It means that the main content of the article should be rich, and various expressions should be adopted to make the center of the article vivid and concrete, rather than empty and tasteless. Therefore, a few paragraphs can be used in the middle of the article, striving to have substance in words and flesh in blood. One of the biggest problems in students' compositions nowadays is that the middle part of the article is thin, and there are many abstract summary sentences and conclusive sentences, which are dry, simple and tasteless. So, how to write the article specifically? Narrative should focus on the center, highlight the center to reproduce specific facts, let the facts speak, write the differences of characters, unfold narrative from multiple angles and sides, and be vivid. Argumentation should be based on facts and reasoning, and the arguments should be strong. Explanatory text should grasp the characteristics of things, make clear and accurate explanations, and use various methods to make people know. The ending is the last link in the composition structure. There are good and bad endings. This has a considerable impact on the article. As the saying goes, "weaving baskets depends on harvesting." Don't be anticlimactic in writing, but carefully design "leopard tail". The so-called "leopard tail" means that the end of the article should be short and powerful. A leopard cannot change his spots. There are not many words at the end of the article, and often only one paragraph is enough, but it is very strong. The composition attaches great importance to where it should end and how to collect the pen. We should not forget these old sayings. There are various methods at the end of the article, either profound or straightforward, or implicit, or exposed, or abruptly stopped, or thought-provoking. Common ending techniques include making the finishing point, echoing from beginning to end, or expressing feelings. In short, the composition materials are "crested, streaked and leopard tail".

4. The warm moment of composition should start after the festival, and the crested leopard tail should not be Baidu's.

The warm instant world is beautiful because of help, brilliant because of care, and gorgeous because of humility. On the way to grandma's house by bus the day before yesterday, I saw a warm moment. After school on Friday, the sky was gray and it was raining in Mao Mao. I came to the station alone, and the platform was crowded with people waiting for the bus, chattering and making noise. I waited for half a century. I'm waiting for the bus that starts slower than a snail. As the bus slowly pulled over, the crowd crowded forward. I followed the crowd into the car. "Ding" and "Ding" ... The crisp sound kept coming. Suddenly, the crisp voice came to an abrupt end. I looked at the coin place. It turned out to be a very gentle young man in his twenties, wearing a pair of glasses, and I saw him turn it over in a hurry. I turned my pocket upside down, but I didn't find a coin, only a five-dollar change. Obviously, this is a passenger who forgot to bring a coin. At this time, he blushed to his ears and said to the driver in a voice lighter than mosquitoes, "Do you have any change?" The driver turned him down coldly. The young man stood embarrassed and didn't know what to do. The people waiting in line behind the bus were impatient, stared at him with sarcastic eyes and said in a sarcastic tone, "Hey, your family is too poor to even buy a dollar!" Do you want us to donate money to you? ! Get off immediately if you have no money! " The crowd immediately burst into laughter, which was full of ridicule. At this time, an old man in his seventies came out of the crowd and said to the young man, "Young man, keep the change. Broken pockets are more than one yuan! " As he spoke, he took out a dollar and put it in the coin box for the young man. The laughter suddenly stopped, and the man who had laughed at the young man blushed.

5. How to write the composition of crested streaky pork and leopard tail?

A composition, crested pork belly and leopard tail-beauty.

A career, a phoenix head, a pig belly, a leopard tail-success. An animal with a crested pig's belly and a leopard's tail-a strange beast.

Life is like a phoenix head, a pork belly and a leopard tail-I beg to differ. In this life, if you live to be a rockhopper, a pig's belly and a leopard's tail, then you are a monster-there is no doubt about it.

Childhood is the head of life, and the head of every life is equal in size and different in shape. If you ask me, this head should be fat, cute and interesting, so I say the head of life is a pig head.

A chubby pig, a pig that everyone loves, because childhood is the most carefree in life. This is my definition of the head of life-pig head.

What's the plan in life? If you ask me, this middle-aged period is a stage in which people's careers and families have to struggle, that is, a good pony's body and limbs, streamlined body, developed muscles and powerful limbs are suitable for speeding on the social road, and you can't drag a pig's stomach slowly on the social road! This is my definition of the body of life-the body of a horse. The end of life is the beauty, sadness and profundity buried by the coming night. Seeing the sun, although it has a brilliant side.

I would like to believe that it is a dog's tail, which swings flexibly, symbolizes tolerance, throws it up and whirs, showing hitting the ground and authority and strength. Because it is the tail of life, it is impossible to be as full of kings as the leopard tail.

But what is certain is that this tail is tolerant, warm, friendly, authoritative and powerful. This is my definition of the end of life-dog tail. A composition, pig head, horse body and dog tail-literary rubbish.

Career, pig head and dog tail-failure. An animal, a pig's head, a horse and a dog's tail ―― a monster.

Life is like a pig's head and a dog's tail ― I think it's quite good.

6. What is the beginning and end of the composition, and what kind should it be divided into? For example, writing the whole story of an event and writing the opening of a character article.

How to learn the beginning and end of a composition? 2. Improve writing skills. How to write a good beginning of a composition? The ancients said that "the phoenix head and leopard tail", that is to say, the beginning should be graceful and colorful. Just like the head of a phoenix, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of a beginning. Similarly, it is of great significance to the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. 1. Ten taboos at the beginning of the composition: 1. Avoid cliches; 2. Avoid mystifying. At the beginning of some articles, you deliberately play games, beat around the bush, and deliberately make people confused and enter the "maze" without wanting to write the meaning directly. In fact, this mysterious practice is precisely the disadvantage of writing. 3. Avoid sudden start. At the beginning of some articles, there seems to be a lack of proper explanation. I don't know what I'm talking about. ④ Avoid unnecessary explanations. At the beginning of an article, you can't suddenly, without explanation, or make unnecessary explanations. ⑤ Avoid expressing feelings out of thin air. ⑤ Avoid going around in big circles. 8 avoid the accumulation of famous sayings and repeat at the beginning. Some articles introduce the background at the beginning, and then feel that the center of the article should be revealed first after writing, so they start again. Pet-name ruby don't blindly write scenery. Or to set off the atmosphere, if it has nothing to do with it, generally speaking, such a scene is meaningless. Attending don't blindly quote. According to the needs of the theme and the center, avoid blind quotation. Second, a good beginning should follow the following principles: 1. Close to the theme: Liang Qichao: "You should know the purpose of the article at a glance, so that it is easy to move." The beginning must be moved. Serve the excellent center. For example, the Romance of the Three Kingdoms: The general trend of the world will be combined for a long time. 2. Be short and pithy: the beginning should not be too long, and it should be short and powerful, refreshing and shocking like firecrackers. For example, Mao Dun's Hainan Miscellanies begins with: "We have reached the famous' Tianya Haijiao'." Fog. Chen Guokai's "Fog" begins with only four words, which explain the time and environment of the story and hint at the ending of the story .56666.666666666666 3. Be fascinating: don't make people feel boring at the beginning, and strive for beautiful language and novel ideas. Grab the reader's eye. For example, "Youth is the nectar made of blood drops of will and sweat of hard work-lasting mika. "Youth three. Writing skills at the beginning of the composition: (1) Get to the point. That is, at the beginning of the article, the people, things or things to be described are directly put out and introduced into the text to directly express the author's feelings and express the author directly. At the beginning of talking about backbone, the author pointed out: "We in China have backbone. "At the beginning, we directly cut to the chase and reveal the theme. 2. methods that start with love, such as: poplar is really extraordinary, I praise poplar! Mao Dun's Praise of Poplar begins with emotion, which makes readers can't help but blend in. 3. Go straight to the plot method. For example, when I went to school that morning, I was very afraid that Teacher Hamel would scold me. Besides, he said to let us divide words, and I couldn't even say a word. I think I should stop going to school and play in the wild. Dude adopted this method in "The Last Lesson" to extract the beginning that can lead to the main content of the full text. The language should be very concise and attractive, which will arouse readers' desire to read. (2) using skills, that is, using suspense, contrast, contrast, and contrast at the beginning of the article, setting a clever beginning, leaving a deep impression on people. (3) Ask questions and ask questions in a way that first flashes back the result of the matter, sets suspense, or sets questions to reveal the facts first. Another example: Zong Pu's "The Fall of Wisteria" I couldn't help but stop. "Methods: ① Ask an unsolved question first; (2) first intercept a wonderful event fragment; (3) first explain an object that plays a clue role; (4) first arrange a scene that triggers the story; ⑤ Introduce the characters closely related to the story first; 2. Compare the advantages and disadvantages. For example, for a person who is used to living in Beiping, such as me, if it is in winter, and it can have warm and sunny weather, Jinan is really a treasure. The contrast between Lao She's Winter in Jinan is so great that there are both positive and negative sides, which is convenient for readers to grasp and can be skillfully used, so that the article is full of waves. Using rhetorical devices such as quotation, metaphor and parallelism at the beginning of the article can also give people a refreshing feeling. The quotation type is: "Please bring my song back to your home, please leave your smile ..." Whenever this familiar melody rings in your ear, it's like meeting an old friend I haven't seen for years, and it feels particularly cordial. (Selected from the composition "Singing and Smiling" or quoting common sayings and proverbs to explain things. Such a simple and clear beginning can enhance the momentum of the beginning, but we should pay attention to being as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual mistakes. 2. parallelism is repetitive, such as: "a friend is someone I can pay sincere feelings to;" A friend is someone I can trust completely. Friends, share with me when you are happy, and walk with me when you are in danger. Life without friends is like life without sunshine. I have such a good friend. Friends 3, incisive metaphor, such as: love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which dispels the cold frost; Love is a shower after a long drought, nourishing a broken heart; Love is the beacon in Wang Yang, which indicates the hope of a new life. (Excerpted from the perfect composition "Bring Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province) Wonderful metaphors can make the beginning of the article novel, and enhance the attraction and expression effect of the article. (4) Description and rendering. At the beginning of the article, people, events and scenes are described first, and the atmosphere is rendered.