In reality, people like Arrow are not uncommon. They once depended on their supporters, but soon they all disappeared. Countless examples tell people that we should "eat our own food and sweat our own sweat" and stand on our own feet. You can't grow good crops just by fertilizing others. Only by absorbing nutrients from the soil independently can you grow strong. At the beginning of the founding of the People's Republic of China, we inherited the mess left by the Kuomintang, and there was a shortage of funds and talents. At this time, the Soviet Union extended a helping hand to us. Later, relations with the Soviet Union deteriorated and cooperation with China was terminated. However, under the guidance of Chairman Mao's thought of "self-reliance and hard struggle", the people of China still stood up. Of course, some people are still willing to rely on others, such as the Taiwan Province provincial authorities. They tried their best to flatter the United States, hoping to get the shadow of the United States. The result of this practice can be imagined. The military in Taiwan Province Province used computer simulation to fight against the mainland. Without the participation of the us military, the Taiwan military was defeated in a week. If the U.S. military intervenes, it will be another scene, and the result will be "natural" that the Taiwan military will "win a total victory." So, the authorities in Taiwan Province Province put all their bets on the United States. As we all know, Americans have always believed: "There are no eternal friends, only eternal interests." The mainland has become one of the major trading partners of the United States. How could they be willing to throw away this gold mine? This wishful dependence of Taiwan Province authorities is ridiculous! In short, having said so much, I just want to tell people that it is very important for individuals and countries to do their own things well and strive for self-improvement like eagles. (Xiang Xiao) Gossip "Help" An eagle is flying freely in the sky of Wan Li, and an arrow swished from its side and flew straight into the blue sky. However, the "brilliance" of the arrow was fleeting and soon fell to the ground. The arrow asked the eagle, "Why can you fly freely and for a long time in the sky?" But how can I ... "replied the eagle," you flew into the sky with the help of others. What about me? I rely on my own efforts-you know, my own strength is the most reliable. "Indeed, your own strength is the most reliable. However, in the real society, there are many people like "Arrow". Take the traitor Wang Jingwei for example. During his stay in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, relying on the support of the Japanese, he openly betrayed the country and defected to the enemy, and set up a puppet national government. However, with Japan's defeat and surrender, he was unanimously condemned by the people of the whole country and came to a sad and shameful end. This shows that relying on the "help" of others or even reactionary forces cannot last long and is doomed to failure. Fortunately, there are more "eagles" than "arrows" in real life, and they can do a lot by their own strength. Let's have a look, young man. For example, Chen Jingrun, a famous mathematician, almost reached the forefront of the world by his own strength in proving Goldbach's conjecture, and won the crown jewel of mathematics. Big, we look at a country. China people, under the leadership of China Production Party, used their diligence and wisdom to build poor and devastated old China into a free, democratic and prosperous new China in just 55 years. This is a fruitful result of the spirit of self-reliance and self-improvement. Of course, while vigorously promoting self-reliance and self-improvement, we should not go to extremes, let alone pretend to be "hard-hearted". If you really need others' help, and others are willing to provide you with sincere help, then you should take the initiative to ask, accept it sincerely, and don't make unnecessary refusal. Otherwise, I'm afraid I will still suffer. As his savior, the arrow flew with a bow, but it could not fly as far as the eagle. For a moment, it could hardly breathe the freshness of the blue sky, and then it plunged into the ground. In this way, the help of others is only temporary, helping others for a while, but not helping others for a lifetime. Relying on others is not a long-term solution, and success depends on yourself. There is such a story: one day, Napoleon met a drowning man on his March. The man kept shouting for help, which was pitiful. Napoleon not only didn't send someone to save him, but pointed a gun at the man: "You swim up yourself quickly, or I'll kill you!" " "The drowning man had no hope for help, so he had to struggle to climb ashore by himself. In the abyss of suffering, we all want to catch that life-saving straw and never care whether it is tough or not. After reading this story, everyone should understand that "many people are not enough to rely on, and we have to rely on ourselves to survive." "Nowadays, in the extremely cruel social competition, few people sincerely help you. I'm afraid "pulling" you usually has ulterior motives. If you want to remain neutral in the society, you must make a sky on your own! Do you still remember the legendary experience of the little donkey in Aesop's Fables? Unfortunately, the little donkey fell into a dry well. Because it was New Year's Eve, the owner had no time to take care of it, so he sent someone to bury it in the well. The first shovel fell, and the little donkey kept moaning; The second shovel fell. Instead of howling, it shook off the dirt on its back and stepped on it ... Finally, a miracle appeared, and the little donkey walked out of the dry well smartly in people's amazing eyes. It's really "it's better to ask others than to ask yourself". Stupid donkeys can still survive on their own, but as the "spirit of all things", shouldn't people be more angry and strive for maximum development? Self-reliance is the cornerstone of our success and the foundation of our life. In the abyss of suffering, be your own savior, and don't expect others to be our savior! (Tan) Comment on students' essay, about 300 words. These essays are written by students in my class, although they are immature and superficial (you can forgive them, because they are "toddlers" in the argumentative essays in the last semester of Grade Three. ), but there are also quite a few points: (1) correct views, clear-cut, dare to express their views on life phenomena. For example, in the article "Gossip for Help", the young author boldly suggested that when accepting help, he should not go to extremes, but "actively request and sincerely accept" sincere help from others. In this way, the discussion has the color of philosophical speculation, which is also quite wise. ⑵ Familiar with common argumentation methods such as example argumentation, quotation argumentation, contrast argumentation and metaphor argumentation. In particular, the factual arguments in the article have a wide range of sources, a strong sense of life, a strong sense of the times and a good eloquence. ⑶ The demonstration process is clear, and there is a close logical connection between each step. (4) The argument language is vivid, sharp and measured.