Delicate grass, fresh leaves and colorful flowers all gather together like a market, forming a dazzling spring with tears. Swallows are no exception, flying breathlessly from the north, adding a lot of vitality to the glory of spring.
Pairs of swallows crossed the mountains and rivers, crossed the lake and came to the south. They are exhausted, but they think spring is so beautiful. They seem to eat a lot of chocolate and become active and energetic. Playing in spring, flying over green fields, hovering on the water, some tired swallows standing on telephone poles.
Ah! What lovely notes, played as audible music on the staff. The campus in spring is more colorful.
The beautiful winter jasmine is welcoming us! The avenue is lined with trees, and the path is lined with flowers. Flowers can be seen everywhere on campus. From a distance, it looks like a thick layer of snow on campus. Seen from a close distance, people feel beautiful snowflakes floating in the sky.
The lawn is green, with a century-old tree in the center and a few beautiful flowers on the side, which makes the lawn more charming and beautiful. Just like a beautiful picture.
Spring is really beautiful.
Write a 250-word composition with the overall structure of the total score. I can't forget many things that happened in my life, especially when my father took me to climb mountains when I was a child. I remember that day, it was a sunny day, and my father took me to climb the Jade Emperor Mountain with great interest. Looking at the towering mountains, I am a little timid and a little trembling. But my father is by my side to encourage me to refuel. So I gritted my teeth and tried my best to climb to the top of the mountain. Suddenly, accidentally, I tripped over the vines on the side of the road and fell heavily, which seemed to crack in pain. I couldn't help crying: "I can't climb, I want to go home!" " "When my father saw it, he said to me earnestly," Son, it is inevitable to encounter difficulties in life. How to back down when encountering problems? "I bowed my head in shame after listening to my father. Finally, with my father's encouragement, I finally climbed to the top of the mountain by myself and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Although it has been a long time, this belief in overcoming difficulties has always remained in my mind. My father is an ordinary worker, but his seriousness, enthusiasm and hard work have been praised by everyone. I remember once, it was already dark, and my father still didn't come back. I was so anxious that my mother and I hurried to the factory to find my father. As soon as I entered the workshop, I saw that my father was the only one in Nuoda's workshop who was still busy working. He ran to the computer to find some documents, and then went to the machine to repair parts. He frowned thoughtfully for a moment, as if stumped by something, and then spread his eyebrows like a child and smiled. It seems that the problem has been solved. I quickly shouted: "Dad, why haven't you got off work yet!" "Dad smiled apologetically at us:" They all have things at home, and these tasks need to be completed today! " "Say, began to get busy. Dad works so hard, no wonder his colleagues always praise him. I am proud to have such a father. I want to be a serious and enthusiastic person who treats my work like my father.
3. What are the advantages of writing a composition with a total score structure? Total: it is the central meaning. A layer of ideas you want to express.
Sub: Hierarchical narrative is generally a structural way to express the relationship between general narrative and sub-narrative.
Total score is always a structured way to analyze articles during reading and writing. Put forward the argument at the beginning (straight to the point), several sub-arguments in the middle, and a general argument at the end (or reiterate the argument or summarize the quotation). Several sub-arguments can be parallel, hierarchical and comparative. , but they cannot be inclusive or cross-related.
Total score is always a common structure in argumentative writing, which has several variants, such as total score, sub-total score and sub-total score.
General introduction
The first is a short beginning, or the cause of what is described below, or a general statement of what is described below, which is generally expressed in general language. Then there is the argument. There are two versions. One is the juxtaposition argument, which juxtaposes with each other without obvious traces of time, such as several different sides of a person, several aspects of one thing and several different things under the same center. The second is coherent argument, and there is obvious time lapse between the two, such as different stages of things' development, different things for several days in a row and so on. No matter which form it is, it is composed of fragments, short and pithy, independent of each other and subject to the same main line. Between several fragments of a sub-sentence, it can be expressed by subtitles, displayed by spaces, or like ordinary fragments, but it has obvious jumping. The end of the article is also a general statement, which can be an echo of the opening or a summary conclusion. The total score method exists not only in the relationship between sentences but also in the relationship between paragraphs. The total score method has three basic forms. Let's first look at a passage in Flying a Kite (five volumes): There are more and more kites in the sky, which is very lively. The golden "little bee" erected two green wings, as if flying around among the flowers. Bright red "big goldfish", wagging its tail, seems to swim in the water. There is also the exquisite "small satellite", shining with golden light, as if flying in the universe ... The first sentence of this passage generally says "there are more and more kites", which is very lively, and then the second, third and fourth sentences specifically write three kinds of kite-flying scenes, which obviously constitutes the relationship between the first and second. There is also a passage like this: "The meat of squirrels can be eaten, the hair on their tails can be used to make brushes, and the skin can be used to make clothes." The squirrel is really a lovely and useful little animal. " Is the relationship between the first points and the total. Another way is to summarize first, then divide and then summarize, such as the last section of the sun.
classify
The total score structure can be divided into three types: parallel, comparative and progressive. (Take strong as an example) A juxtaposition: There are four kinds: (1) Strong is **(2) Strong can be **(3) We are strong because **(4) Strong requires ** B contrast: positive first, then negative. First of all, talk about the advantages of being strong, then spend time in the middle (however ...), then talk about the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally sum up the C-level advanced (more flattering, have something to write, and appear more profound in thought): What is strong-why do you want to be strong-what do you want to do if you want to be strong-what does it mean to real life?
4. Write a composition with a total score of 200~300 words to praise the pine tree.
I praise the sycamore trees that shelter people from the wind and rain, the tenacious bamboo, and the fruit trees that send fruits to people. Among them, pine is my favorite.
In the cloudless and breezy autumn in Wan Li, only pine trees are full of vitality and stand upright. In the cold winter, the pine tree still stands upright, like a straight sword.
Sending a tree has never been more beautiful than that beautiful peach tree, nor is it richer than fruit trees, but it grows on a small piece of land. In the face of the hot summer sun, it never bows its head, and in the face of the cool wind, it never bends down. Unlike other trees, it never falls in the fragrant snow blown by the autumn wind, and stands tall like a big spear in the four seasons.
Pine trees won't cause people any trouble. No matter on flat land or steep slope, it can grow as long as there is sunshine and water, unlike some trees that need watering and fertilization. Song Shu's death will not bring people any trouble, but contribute to mankind and serve the people.
I like pine trees. I want to learn from pine trees and be a person like them.
5. Write a composition (200 words) about flowers with the structure of total score.
I walked quietly on the quiet path, enjoying the breeze blowing across my cheeks. A kapok fell from the sky, and I leaned down and looked at this beautiful flower like a flame, and my heart was filled with emotion. ...
There are few kapok trees in the street now. Different from ordinary trees, kapok trees are lush, which can block the dazzling sunshine and spread coolness to the world.
But kapok is always fragrant and sweet, attracting the admiration of many poets and the admiration of tourists.
Kapok blooms so big, inconsiderate, and the bright red petals are tightly connected, so strong, even if the flowers fall, they still look up at the blue sky, and no petals are separated, just like a soldier who never gives in, never gives in, and never gives up.
Kapok doesn't need any green leaves to set off, it doesn't cover up, it doesn't grandstanding, it doesn't pretend. They will open their own unique style and bloom their most brilliant faces.
One after another, kapok, like clusters of eternal flames burning in the branches, is like a lingering red cloud, shining brightly on the earth in spring.
6. Write a composition about appreciation with the total score structure. The rain poured down and moistened the earth.
Quietly, the rain stopped and the earth showed great vitality. A rainbow spans the sky like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun opened the white barrier and suddenly jumped out. The warm sunshine shines on the earth.
Birds dust off the water droplets on their feathers and fly into the air, or fly to the wire to sing, just like the notes in the staff, the songs are crisp and melodious, very beautiful. There are sparkling pearls on the grass, reflecting the sun and dazzling. When it falls, it will make a "tick-tock" sound, as if playing a cheerful music.
The beetle musician swaggered out of the cave for a concert. He stood in the center of the stage, singing loudly, flapping his wings with rapt attention, and dancing with beetles and butterflies.
Kobanawa grass also intoxicated. Xiaohua smiled and danced excitedly, and the grass kept swaying. After the rain, how full of vitality, full of vitality.
7. Write a composition with a total score of 500 words after the rain.
The rain poured down and moistened the earth. Quietly, the rain stopped and the earth showed great vitality.
A rainbow spans the sky like a colorful bridge. The clouds floated slowly and leisurely. The sun opened the white barrier and suddenly jumped out. The warm sunshine shines on the earth.
Birds dust off the water droplets on their feathers and fly into the air, or fly to the wire to sing, just like the notes in the staff, the songs are crisp and melodious, very beautiful.
There are sparkling pearls on the grass, reflecting the sun and dazzling. When it falls, it will make a "tick-tock" sound, as if playing a cheerful music.
The beetle musician swaggered out of the cave for a concert. He stood in the center of the stage, singing loudly, flapping his wings with rapt attention, and dancing with beetles and butterflies.
Kobanawa grass also intoxicated. Xiaohua smiled and danced excitedly, and the grass kept swaying.
After the rain, how full of vitality, full of vitality!
Going to the seaside for the first time
There are many firsts in a person's life that will be unforgettable and treasured in our hearts.
When I first went to the seaside, I was fascinated by the sea. "Wow-wow", the waves beat against the rocks and splashed crystal water. The waves rushed to the shore, stroking the soft beach and reluctantly returned. Draw a silver edge on the beach and inlay shells. . The sea breeze is blowing slowly, and I am greedily enjoying the charming sea.
I can't wait to get on the inflatable boat, row to the sea and let it float on the sea. I plopped into the water and sat on the swimming ring to play with the water. When you are tired from swimming, you lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine and beautiful scenery.
After a while, I was full of energy again, building sand castles, picking up shells and opening canals. I made a big love with my feet and used shells as decorations. I lay in love and became the scenery of the beach. I also run on the waves, shuttling between water and sand, feeling how beautiful the world is. I was intoxicated by the sea. I love its magnificent broad mind and charming scenery.
This will be the crystal spray in my heart.
Music Tour The night sky in summer is dotted with stars, and the music fountain in the square in the area is particularly charming. At 20 o'clock sharp, the performance began, the music sounded, the water splashed and the melody was beautiful: sometimes like a blooming flower, the petals stretched everywhere; Sometimes it is like a crystal clear and lifelike water butterfly, flapping its wings and flying around the pool; Sometimes it is like a crystal clear barrier, which makes people intoxicated in the haze. . A piece of music is coming to an end, accompanied by colorful lights, full of poetry and painting. The most spectacular scene-"Two Dragons Playing Column" was presented to us. I saw a water column rising into the sky, and two water columns bent to both sides, like two dragons. Isn't this "Erlong Opera Column"? The onlookers exclaimed in surprise with a surprised expression on their faces. They were all stunned and intoxicated by this wonderful sight. After the wonderful scene, a disaster fell from the "sky"-the "downpour" was coming, which beat us everywhere. People fled everywhere. I was trapped in the crowd and couldn't get away. I personally experienced the taste of "downpour", all over my body. Some people who get wet will twist their clothes and hair, "very busy"; Some boys simply take off their clothes, wring them out, and throw them on, regardless of anything. . Everyone was immersed in a happy atmosphere, and laughter echoed throughout the square. This beautiful midsummer night, this charming music fountain!
Shy spring, like a shy girl, comes quietly. With a gentle wave of her hand, the earth is full of spring and vitality. You see, the earth is recovering, singing and dancing, and hibernating animals sleep late to welcome this beautiful world. The grass sticks its head out of the soil and looks forward to this brand-new world; Willows comb their hair by the stream, and the warm wind blows "flying"; Bamboo shoots are not afraid of difficulties and keep drilling upwards. . The sky in spring is particularly blue, birds are flying happily, and clouds are changing quietly; The stream is exceptionally clear, and even if the road ahead is difficult, he will go forward bravely; The air is particularly fresh, with the smell of rain, which makes people intoxicated in this vibrant picture. The continuous spring rain moistens everything. After the rain, the flowers are blooming with crystal dew, making them more beautiful, ah! Beautiful spring! After the rain, the Beatles "strutted" out of the nest, flapped their wings and stood on the grass with rapt attention, singing loudly, with a mellow voice and beautiful melody, like a spiritual spring flowing out, which was pleasing to the ear. Spring is so subtle, shy and charming, which makes people daydream and irresistible. .
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8. The composition of the total score and the overall structure of the story are interesting in childhood.
The best time in life is childhood. Childhood is like a palette, which can make a monotonous life colorful. Open the floodgate of memory, and a series of "interesting childhood stories" emerge in front of you.
First, water the flowers with warm water.
One winter, the weather was very cold When drinking water, I found that a cup of hot water will warm my body a lot. So, I thought: plants will * * everything all winter, * * * must be very cold. Thinking of this, I picked up a cup of hot water and went to the balcony to touch the plants. The weather is really cold. So I poured hot water into the evergreen flower box, and just after pouring it, I saw the leaves rolled up and steaming. I, a self-righteous person, thought I had done a great good deed and jumped into the room happily. The next day, grandpa looked at the flowers he planted on the balcony. Suddenly, grandpa shouted from the balcony: "Nothing, come to the balcony!" " "I thought I sold my grandpa new flowers and ran to the balcony. I saw grandpa seriously pointing to Changqing and saying to me, "Look, did you do this?" "When I look at the evergreen with drooping leaves and drooping branches, it doesn't look like evergreen. Naturally, I was very surprised. I immediately told grandpa what had happened, and grandpa couldn't help laughing. Grandpa told me about the growth characteristics of some plants. Then I suddenly realized that plants can't be watered with hot water!
Second, treat fish.
Another summer, I caught a cold at home and my parents went to work. I am bored. I wandered around the house and walked to the fish tank. I fed some fish food. The small fish that usually likes to eat fish food sank to the bottom of the water and refused to eat it. Did they catch a cold, too? I don't think so. On a whim, I immediately took out a pack of antiviral granules and poured all the medicine inside. I saw all the small fish floating up and exhaling bubbles. I thought they were taking medicine. I was very happy to see the small fish "eating", so I went back to the house to watch TV and didn't care about their lives. I was so absorbed in watching TV that I didn't notice my father coming back from work. Suddenly there was a loud cry outside the house: "The fish is dying! Nothing! What did you put in the fish tank? " I hurried to the living room and saw my father pointing to the fish tank and asking me. Confused, I told my father what had happened. My father smiled, but I was still in a daze and didn't know what was going on.
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Many interesting stories of childhood are still fresh in my memory, and I will laugh at some things in retrospect. Of course, I also understand that when I grow up, I must distinguish between right and wrong, think twice before acting, and do "think twice before acting"!
9. How to write a composition with the total score structure How to write a composition with the total score structure:
1, the so-called total-sub-total structure, as the name implies, is that this composition is roughly composed of three parts: total, sub-theory and summary, and find the layout of the article.
2. Then, the composition will enter the "sub-theory" part, and discuss the phenomena, problems or viewpoints mentioned in the general part from different levels and angles in several parts, put forward the sub-arguments of each part, and then find arguments to demonstrate and discuss. And there is generally an inherent logical relationship among sub-theories, which is gradual, deepening, obeying and serving the core issues of composition.
3. The conclusion is followed. From the content point of view, its purpose is to echo the beginning of the composition, and at the same time summarize the sub-arguments formed in the sub-discussion part to present the research conclusion; Formally, a summary can be a summary by listing a title or just one or two paragraphs. Then the composition is over.
This is to talk about the overall structure from the perspective of the overall picture of a composition. If it is an internal "sub-theory" component, in fact, each sub-theory may also present a variety of organizational structures.
Extended data:
The significance of the overall structure of the total score: the "total" at the beginning either puts forward the topic or the argument; The "total" at the end is generally to reiterate the point of view or deepen the argument. What is more complicated is the middle part: it can be the juxtaposition of arguments, arguments from different angles, contrast and juxtaposition, and progressive extension.
It should be noted that no matter what kind of "division" it is, it must be controlled by and serve the "general". The general structure of the total score should be properly marked, especially in the "score" part, and there should be relatively consistent sentence patterns or words that take care of each other to express the relationship between "scores", so that the article can be clear to readers at a glance.
10. Do you want to use four words temporarily or the total number of 100 words for the composition with general structure? It is the central meaning. The level of meaning you want to express: level narrative is generally a structural way to express the relationship between total narrative and sub-narrative.
Total score is always a structured way to analyze articles during reading and writing. Put forward an argument at the beginning, put forward several sub-arguments in the middle, and put forward a general argument at the end (or reiterate an argument or summarize and extend it). Several sub-arguments can be juxtaposed, layered and compared. , but they cannot be inclusive or cross-related.
Total score is always a common structure in argumentative writing, which has several variants, such as total score, sub-total score and sub-total score. When school is over, it is very lively outside the school.
Not far from the school gate, it is already three floors inside and three floors outside crowded with parents. There are many parents who come to pick up their children, including amiable old people and young parents.
They look different, some stand on tiptoe, craning their necks and looking around as if looking for their own children; Some are like ants on hot bricks, muttering, "Alas, why don't you come out?" Some sit on battery cars and wait patiently; Some can't wait, and they are discussing with the security uncle at the door whether they can go in and have a look; There are also small groups, talking and laughing.