The center of some topics in the examination composition is relatively clear; Some topics are deliberately off topic, metaphorical, profound and implicit, showing several different centers. This requires candidates to carefully analyze the topic and grasp the deep meaning of the topic. Even if the article has a variety of angles and ideas, once it is implemented on specific topics, it must form its own writing center.
Otherwise, "the meaning is too messy." Remember, you can't have your cake and eat it.
The main idea of narrative should not be too broad; Arguments in argumentative essays should always remain the same. The whole article should stick to a central point to prevent deviation from the meaning of the topic.
However, some students do have multiple centers in an article. This paragraph is about this principle, but the next paragraph is the next paragraph. For example, the topic of a candidate's composition in Henan Province is "Let Go". The first paragraph says to face the reality frankly, the second paragraph says not to pretend, the third paragraph says that Madame Curie has made achievements to share with others, the fourth paragraph says that a foreign child learned to use chopsticks with perseverance, the fifth paragraph says to make people progress with humility, and the last paragraph concludes: relax yourself.
Anxiety and depression, East and West. Therefore, when establishing an opinion, you must be single.
After the establishment of the center, the composition outline must be listed. Having an outline is like building a house with a sketch, which helps the author to grasp the overall situation and avoid putting the cart before the horse. This can improve the writing quality and speed up the writing.
Secondly, carefully select materials and stick to the center. All the materials closely related to the central idea and outstanding and powerful in expressing the central idea are selected in the exercise, otherwise they are discarded.
After selecting materials, choose the most innovative materials. For example, Zhejiang volume full score composition "Drunk Hometown", this article is very atmospheric.
The author first points out the truth that everything in the world is empty with a four-line poem, and then points out the word drunk hometown with a set of neat sentence patterns, which leads to the full text. In the body part, the author takes Li Bai, Zhang and others as examples. As an example, we should not get lost in ups and downs.
At the end of the two paragraphs, with poetic language and beautiful artistic conception, the author once again emphasizes the need to exile his own soul and find the happiest and most natural hometown where he can lead a drunken life. Starting with Vanity Fair, the author leads to the topic of "getting drunk", which is closely related to life, interest and other topics.
The listed characters Li Bai and Zhang and the ethereal situation they created all highlight the theme of "drunkenness". Carefully select materials, stick to the main idea, and make the article center stand out.
However, if the selected materials can't be closely related to the topic, even if they are fresh and vivid, they should "reluctantly give up what one favours". After the selection, not only record the material, but also analyze how the material represents the center. Only in this way can the selected materials truly serve the center.
In addition, skillfully use techniques to highlight the center. Be good at pointing out the center, which is more important in the composition of the examination room.
There are various ways to ask questions: in terms of expression, there are lyric questions, argumentative questions, narrative questions and descriptive questions. At the end of the essay "Smoke flies with the wind, name flows with history", it is our blessing to dissolve the moon, forget what should be forgotten and leave what should be left behind.
Let the past go with the wind, watch the clouds roll and relax, smell the fragrance of plum blossoms floating in Wan Li, and recall the elegant fragrance of flowers. The description is fluent and natural, such as flowing water, and points out the theme of "forget what should be forgotten and leave what should be left".
Rhetorically, there are repeated questions, rhetorical questions, arranged questions, quoted questions and figurative questions. Wei Wei's "Who is the cutest person" begins: "Who is our cutest person? Our soldiers, I think they are the cutest people. "
Ask questions directly and lead to the description of typical cases. There is a sentence "Please save the symbol of Beijing" in the perfect composition "Symbol of Beijing" written by the examinee of Beijing Volume One. These three sentences are placed at the beginning, one at the end and one at the end.
These three sentences are repeatedly pointed out and reflected, which not only highlights the main idea of the article, but also sorts out the structure and renders the feelings. From the position of the topic, you can put the topic in the topic, at the beginning and at the end.
We know that the marking speed of college entrance examination composition is very fast. If you bury the main idea of the article in the text, the marking teacher will not probe it carefully with tools like an engineer sweeping the floor, and will not help you summarize it.
Therefore, the center of the composition in the examination room should be prominent.
2. How to highlight the center when writing a composition The so-called "central prominence" means that the central idea or argument of the article should be concentrated and distinct.
The expression of the center can be dominant or recessive; It can be a rational generalization or a strong sense of color, but it must be vivid. As Tolstoy said: "It is not enough that the ideas in the article are correct. We should also be good at expressing these ideas so that everyone can understand them. "
So how can we make the center stand out? First of all, the viewpoint is single and the center is clear. First of all, we should do a good job in examining questions, clarify our thinking and finally determine a center from multiple angles.
The center of some topics in the examination composition is relatively clear; Some topics are deliberately off topic, metaphorical, profound and implicit, showing several different centers. This requires candidates to carefully analyze the topic and grasp the deep meaning of the topic. Even if the article has a variety of angles and ideas, once it is implemented on specific topics, it must form its own writing center.
Otherwise, "the meaning is too messy." Remember, you can't have your cake and eat it.
The main idea of narrative should not be too broad; Arguments in argumentative essays should always remain the same. The whole article should stick to a central point to prevent deviation from the meaning of the topic.
However, some students do have multiple centers in an article. This paragraph is about this principle, but the next paragraph is the next paragraph. For example, in 2005, a candidate in Henan wrote an essay entitled "Let Go". The first paragraph says to be calm in the face of reality, the second paragraph says not to pretend, the third paragraph says that Madame Curie has made achievements to share with others, the fourth paragraph says that a foreign child learned to use chopsticks with perseverance, the fifth paragraph says to be modest and enterprising, and the last paragraph concludes that he should relax himself.
Anxiety and depression, East and West. Another example is the composition "The answer is colorful" in the 2000 college entrance examination. An Anhui examinee put forward the argument that "the answers are colorful" at the beginning, but the examples listed later showed that "there is always only one true correct answer". It says here that "everyone has everyone's ideas". What the author thinks is elusive.
Therefore, when establishing an opinion, you must be single. After the establishment of the center, the composition outline must be listed. Having an outline is like building a house with a sketch, which helps the author to grasp the overall situation and avoid putting the cart before the horse.
This can improve the writing quality and speed up the writing. Secondly, carefully select materials and stick to the center.
All the materials closely related to the central idea and outstanding and powerful in expressing the central idea are selected in the exercise, otherwise they are discarded. After selecting materials, choose the most innovative materials.
For example, in 2006, Zhejiang wrote a perfect composition "Drunk Hometown", which was very atmospheric. The author first points out the truth that everything in the world is empty with a four-line poem, and then points out the word drunk hometown with a set of neat sentence patterns, which leads to the full text.
In the body part, the author takes Li Bai, Zhang and others as examples. As an example, we should not get lost in ups and downs. At the end of the two paragraphs, with poetic language and beautiful artistic conception, the author once again emphasizes the need to exile his own soul and find the happiest and most natural hometown where he can lead a drunken life.
Starting with Vanity Fair, the author leads to the topic of "getting drunk", which is closely related to life, interest and other topics. The listed characters Li Bai and Zhang and the ethereal situation they created all highlight the theme of "drunkenness".
Carefully select materials, stick to the main idea, and make the article center stand out. However, if the selected materials can't be closely related to the topic, even if they are fresh and vivid, they should "reluctantly give up what one favours".
For example, there was a 37-point article in Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2006. In the second paragraph of the article, I quoted a famous sentence about the deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others. Although the materials are vivid, they are far from "spirit". The deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others mainly show people's will to fight tenaciously in adversity. "Will" and "spirit" are not the same thing.
After the selection, not only record the material, but also analyze how the material represents the center. Only in this way can the selected materials truly serve the center. In addition, skillfully use techniques to highlight the center.
Be good at pointing out the center, which is more important in the composition of the examination room. There are various ways to ask questions: in terms of expression, there are lyric questions, argumentative questions, narrative questions and descriptive questions.
Ru Zhijuan's "Lily" concluded: "In the moonlight, I saw her eyes glittering and translucent, and I also saw a quilt with white lilies on the bordeaux background, symbolizing purity and emotion, covering the face of this ordinary young man dragging bamboo." This poetic description pushes the work to a higher artistic level: Lily, a pure and emotional flower, reflects the noble soul of the protagonist with his body and will remain in the reader's heart forever.
In 2005, at the end of the essay "Smoke flies with the wind, fame flows with history", "It is our blessing to dissolve the moon, touch the wind, forget what should be forgotten, and leave what should be left. Let the past go with the wind, watch the clouds roll and relax, smell the fragrance of plum blossoms floating in Wan Li, and remember the elegance of flowers. "
The description is fluent and natural, such as flowing water, and the theme of "forget what should be forgotten and leave what should be left" is pointed out from the rhetorical point of view, including repeated questions, setting questions, arranging questions, quoting questions and figurative questions.
Wei Wei's "Who is the cutest person" begins: "Who is our cutest person? Our soldiers, I think they are the cutest people. " Ask questions directly and lead to the description of typical cases.
In 2006, there was a sentence "Please save the symbol of Beijing" in the perfect composition "Symbol of Beijing" written by the examinee of Beijing Volume One. These three sentences are placed at the beginning, one at the end and one at the end. These three sentences are repeatedly pointed out and reflected, which not only highlights the main idea of the article, but also sorts out the structure and renders the feelings.
From the position of the topic, you can put the topic in the topic, at the beginning and at the end. We know that the marking speed of college entrance examination composition is very fast.
If you bury the main idea of the article in the text, the marking teacher will not probe it carefully with tools like an engineer sweeping the floor, and will not help you summarize it. Therefore, the center of the composition in the examination room should be prominent.
For example, in 2006, the perfect composition "Let Life Walk with Health" in Zhejiang College Entrance Examination began: "Life is an irreversible journey. In this journey, only constant pursuit, unremitting efforts and unremitting struggle can create the value of life. Kong Ziyun:' I have no interest in life.
It clarifies life.
3. How to highlight the center of a 500-word composition is the fundamental task of writing and the basic basis for teachers to evaluate the quality of the composition. The center here refers to the author's basic views or intentions expressed by the author through all the contents of the composition, that is, the author's understanding, evaluation, desire and intention of objective things. Its basic requirements are centralization and uniqueness. The so-called concentration means that a composition can only have one center, and the whole composition should revolve around this center. Before we start writing, we should first carefully examine the questions and establish a center according to the needs of the composition, which is the premise of highlighting the center of the composition. The establishment of the composition center must start with all the materials and grasp the essence of things. Many students' compositions are not satisfactory, and they have not given any opinions and reasons for a long time. Or the center is scattered, and several viewpoints and truths go hand in hand without command. The result is like a dragonfly, meaningless; There are still some words that are eloquent but digress. Wan Li didn't even know what to say; There are also small articles and limited materials, but they insist on pursuing a high, large and comprehensive center, giving people the impression of making a mountain out of a molehill and mystifying. These problems are all caused by writing without establishing a center in advance. The so-called salience means that the center of expression must be clear, definite and unambiguous. The center has been established. In our composition, we should also mobilize all available means to serve the center. There are many specific ways to highlight the center, and the two most commonly used are to come straight to the point and make great achievements. At the beginning of the student's composition "Songs that Touch My Heartstrings", we wrote, "On that day, I knew you were leaving, but we didn't say a word …" This beautiful song rang in my ear again. However, my heart is shaking and I am crying. I'm amazing. At the beginning of the article, the emotional tone of the full text was set, and the author's guilt and anxiety about his father were written. Another student composition, Tolerance, wrote, "I accidentally spilled water on my teacher. I was frightened. The teacher forgave me and didn't pursue it. At the end of the composition, I suddenly feel that the road today is really spacious! The words "the last one is really spacious" not only highlight the center of composition, but also sublimate the theme. These two student compositions, the former comes straight to the point, and the latter shows the same way of highlighting the center. We can also highlight the center of the composition in the development and change of things according to the plot content of the composition. For example, the student's composition "Banana Fan Unemployed", from banana fan to electric fan, selected people's cooling tools in summer. Seeing the big from the small vividly shows the great changes that have taken place in rural areas of China since the reform and opening up. In his composition, the author did not simply compare the past and the present, but noticed the twists and turns, such as the lack of electricity in rural areas, the installation of electric fans but the inability to use them whenever they want, and so on. Let us truly feel how rural reform and development came from one side. The composition is simple and realistic. Similar methods include suppressing contrast and playing hard to get. The principle is the same as above, and the center of composition is clearly shown in these comparisons. In the language and writing of the composition, we can also highlight the center by echoing back and forth, rendering the topic or talking through association. For example, the student's composition "Little Things in Autumn" begins with autumn leaves, and writes that my father borrows books, sends books and sends clothes to me. With the change of "I" mood: "a burst of ecstasy", "my heart moved" and "my heart trembled" until "tears seem to come out", I repeatedly played up and asked questions, from a seemingly simple thing, my father's deep love for his children became sad and vivid. The characters in the article are in rags and the climate is miserable, which implies many hardships and vicissitudes, and people can't help but hiss.
4. How to "highlight the center" In the college entrance examination composition scoring standard, the second item of the development level content part is "highlight the center".
This is a commonplace topic, and it is also an exhortation that often echoes in my ears. However, students' compositions are often criticized as "the center is not prominent", which still affects students' composition scores.
In fact, the reason why the center is not prominent is not complicated. Immature thinking, no backbone, no clear goal, infatuation with the scenery along the way: use examples when discussing, but deviate from the direction when expressing, and the pen and ink shift to aspects unrelated to the topic; Narrative tells stories, but puts aside the main line of the plot and tells episodes derived from events; Describe the scene in the description, but leave the expressive scene idle, pay attention to the idle flowers and plants outside the camera ... or, in many materials that point to the center, the article will be unclear and unclear.
To overcome this problem, we must grasp several key links in the composition, stop rambling "mind", stick to an idea and clearly show the center of the article. First, the title: it is best to let the semantic center of the title communicate with the established article center, so that the marking teacher can see at a glance.
Such a composition will at least be classified as a first-class product that meets the meaning of the question. But the title should not be too straightforward or too shallow, because "people have the same heart and the same reason", others will first think of the title that directly expresses their thoughts. Repeat the same thing, and naturally no one can take advantage.
Therefore, the naming of article titles is very important: excellent titles are often implicit and unique; The second kind of titles should have clear meanings and elegant sentences; Three kinds of topics are often related, and sentence patterns are common; At the end of the article, the words are meaningless and the sentences are unreasonable. For example, in the composition with the theme of "affirming deep reading", the titles such as "Why don't you go slowly in echo each other", "The beauty of deep reading", "Reading is a kind of enjoyment" and "Reading articles in a down-to-earth manner" belong to four different grades in turn: the first title "Why don't you go slowly in echo each other", with Su Shi's famous sentences as the topic, not only reveals the center of recognition of deep reading, but also makes people unforgettable. The second topic, "The Beauty of Deep Reading", directly shows that it is in favor of deep reading, clear and concise, and also helps to reflect the center.
2. Inscription: Inscription of soul mate is not a necessary part of the composition. If useful, highlighting the center should be its main mission. A good inscription should be rigorous in language and reveal the main idea.
Famous sayings and sentences skillfully matched with thoughts, philosophical and wise words that fall in love at first sight and come naturally by accident can all be used as inscriptions. When writing an article, if you are worried that your winding path will not be easily seen by the reviewers, you'd better use the inscription to make a deliberate interpretation or explanation.
For example, when writing the essay "Neighboring with You" published in Guangdong Volume 20 10, some candidates wrote the inscription "When you eat other people's bread and wear clothes sewn by others, you can still say that you have nothing to do with anyone" in Ji Bolun's "Shamo", which implicitly expressed the central idea of the article "Neighboring with others and caring for each other", thus truly achieving the theme and theme of the inscription. It is worth noting that the inscription must not be arty for the unique form.
Because, such an inscription can not only add color to the article, but will be self-defeating and counterproductive. Third, the beginning: confess your inner rule that "literature seems to look at the mountains but does not like peace" is suitable for usual writing or literary creation, but you should try to avoid exam-oriented composition.
Because the length of 800 words is difficult to bear twists and turns, and it is not allowed to understand the subtle meaning of the article word by word at all, it is the first choice to open the exam-oriented composition by getting straight to the point and hitting the center directly. For example, there is a 20 10 excellent composition of Jiangsu college entrance examination, which reads: "With the end of Copenhagen conference, low-carbon economy and green life have become an irreversible new trend.
In fact, each of us should be a practitioner of "green life" because "green" is very simple. "This beginning, the beginning of the topic (titled" Green Life "), not only clarifies the main idea of the article, but also provides a copy for the later writing. It is indeed a good beginning that does not give reviewers a chance to misjudge.
Fourth, the text: focus on the main idea, grasp the main line, grasp the tone, and never give up, in order to write the central article. For example, the successful The Secret Behind quoted famous sayings at the beginning to clarify the center of the article, and then demonstrated it by putting facts and reasoning, with the following arguments: "Behind success, perseverance is needed", "Behind success, perseverance is needed" and "Behind success, the spirit of hard work is needed".
It is precisely because the full text only focuses on revealing and expounding "successful The Secret Behind" that the structure is symmetrical and the level is clear, which makes the direction of the article clear and concentrated, and then highlights the center of the article well. Fifth, the end: speak from the heart. China's traditional style of writing emphasizes "phoenix head, streaky belly and leopard tail", and demands that the ending should be firm and forceful.
In other words, we should not only reiterate the theme and convey the meaning of "center" again, but also pay attention to echo the beginning, take care of the main body and deepen the theme in the process of migration and expansion. For example, at the end of The Secret Behind's success, "no pains, no gains", success is hard-won. You must work hard if you want to succeed.
This is the so-called "sword front from sharpening, plum blossom fragrance from bitter cold." "If the white jade is not destroyed, what is it?" Bud, after wind and rain, can bloom human flowers; Success needs tempering to shine.
Behind the success, it must be our contribution. This kind of ending, which points directly at the center of aphorisms and famous sentences in content and echoes the beginning in form, is indeed a "leopard tail" that can correctly convey and deepen the central meaning of the article.
In short, the exam-oriented composition is an article that is consumed as a "fast food". It will be a bit "romantic" to be painstaking and meticulous, but the prominence and prominence of several key chapters will clearly present the center of the article to the reviewers.
5. How to highlight the center of the composition, the beginning and end of the 500-word composition 1 Principles to follow at the beginning of the composition: 1. Centrality.
At the beginning, we must closely follow the main content and central idea of the full text in order to highlight the center. 2. simple.
Language should be concise, and it is best to come straight to the point. FAQ at the beginning: 1. Beating around the bush is too far from the point.
I always beat around the bush when I put pen to paper. Some people compare it to a big-headed doll.
2. The same format is fixed. Just a few words at the beginning.
3. Pursuing tricks is self-defeating. It is well written, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is unclear, unclear and untrue.
Common compositions begin with: 1. Point to point style. Cut to the chase, don't beat around the bush, the first sentence is directed at the title of the article.
Novices had better use this method. For example, at the beginning of Kingfisher, "Kingfisher likes to stop on a reed by the water."
Another example is Edison. 2. explain.
The beginning explains the "four elements" of time, place, people and events. For example, the death begins with: "Comrade Wang Ruofei was unfortunately arrested in Baotou (local) in the late autumn of 193 1 year" 3. Descriptive style. Or describe people, animals, buildings or the surrounding environment.
Give a clear impression. For example, the beginning of Swallow: "A suit of black feathers, smooth and beautiful, a pair of handsome and light …" 4.
Ask questions at the beginning, or attract readers' attention, or stimulate readers to think, or make suspense fascinating. For example, the beginning of Underwater World: "Do you know what the depths of the sea are like?" 5. quote.
Start or quote famous aphorisms to point out the center; Or quote the language of the character to highlight the character; Or quote poems to arouse readers.
6. How to highlight the center of the composition and clearly highlight the center of the article is the fundamental task of our writing and the basic basis for teachers to evaluate the quality of a composition.
The center mentioned here refers to the basic views or intentions expressed by the author through all the contents of the composition, that is, the author's understanding, evaluation, desire and intention of objective things. Its basic requirements are centralization and uniqueness.
The so-called concentration means that a composition can only have one center, and the whole composition should be thorough around this center. Before you start writing, you should first carefully examine the questions and establish a center according to the needs of the composition, which is the premise for the composition to highlight the center.
The establishment of the composition center must start with all the materials and grasp the essence of things. Many students' composition words are not satisfactory, and they have not said any opinions and reasons for a long time; Or the center is scattered, and several viewpoints and truths go hand in hand without command. The result is like a dragonfly, meaningless; There are still some words that are eloquent but digress. Wan Li didn't even know what to say; There are also small compositions with limited materials, but they insist on pursuing a high, large and comprehensive center, giving people the impression of making a mountain out of a molehill and mystifying.
These problems are all caused by the fact that the center of the composition is not established in advance and the writing is very casual. When I say different, I mean that the center of expression must be clear, definite and unambiguous.
After the establishment of the center, we must mobilize all available means to serve the outstanding center in our composition. There are many specific ways to highlight the center, and the two most commonly used are to get straight to the point and make great achievements.
At the beginning of the student's composition "Song that Touches My Heart", it says, "We didn't say a word when we knew you were leaving that day ..." This beautiful song rings in my ear again. However, my heart is trembling and crying.
I really want to say to you sincerely: "Dad, I'm sorry! At the beginning of the article, the emotional tone of the full text was set, and the author's heartfelt guilt and anxiety about his father were written. Another student composition, Tolerance, wrote that "I" accidentally spilled water on the teacher. I was frightened, and the teacher did not pursue it and forgave me.
At the end of the composition, I said, "Walking on the campus path, I suddenly feel that the road today is really spacious! The words "the last one is really spacious" not only highlight the center of composition, but also sublimate the theme. The composition of these two students, the former comes straight to the point, the latter focuses on Zhang Xianzhi, and the method of highlighting the center is similar, both of which clearly show their views.
We can also highlight the composition center in the development and change of things according to the plot content of the composition. For example, in the student's essay "Banana Fan Unemployed", the changes of people's cooling tools in summer, from banana fan to electric fan to air conditioner, vividly show the great changes that have taken place in rural areas of China since the reform and opening up.
There is no simple comparison between the past and the present in the author's composition, but he pays attention to twists and turns, such as the lack of electricity in rural areas and the installation of electric fans but not their use, which makes us truly feel how the reform and development in rural areas have come from one side. The composition is simple and realistic.
Similar methods include modulation and contrast, playing hard to get and so on. The principle is the same as above, and the center of composition is clearly shown in these comparisons. In the aspect of composition language, we can also adopt the methods of echoing back and forth, rendering the topic or highlighting the center through associative discussion.
For example, the student's composition Little Things in Autumn begins with the fall of autumn leaves, describing my father borrowing books and sending me books and clothes, supplemented by changes in my mood: "a burst of ecstasy", "my heart moves" and "my heart trembles" until tears seem to come out ",repeatedly rendering, pointing out the topic, and telling my father's deep care for his children from a seemingly simple thing. The characters in the article are shabby and thin, and the climate is sad, which implies many hardships and vicissitudes, and people can't help but hiss.
In short, writing a composition should be carefully examined, the center should be established, and various writing skills should be flexibly used to serve the center. Only in this way can we write a composition with a clear center and a clear theme.
7. How can writing a composition highlight its central idea? The so-called "central prominence" means that the central idea or argument of the article should be concentrated and distinct. The expression of the center can be dominant or recessive; It can be a rational summary or a strong sense of color, but it must be vivid. As Tolstoy said, "It is not enough to express these ideas correctly, but also to be good at expressing them to everyone." So how can we achieve central prominence? First of all, the viewpoint is single and the center is clear. First of all, we should do a good job in examining questions, clarify our thinking, and finally determine a center from multiple angles. Some topics deliberately digress, metaphorically, meaningfully and implicitly, showing several different centers. This requires candidates to carefully analyze the topic and grasp the deep meaning of the topic. Even if the article has many angles and ideas, once it is implemented on specific topics, it must form its own writing center. Otherwise, it will be "chaotic". Remember, you can't have your cake and eat it. The narrative theme should not be too broad; The argument of an argumentative essay should always remain the same. The whole article should stick to a central point to prevent deviation from the meaning of the topic.