Come and go, linger, full of interest, shining.

Excerpts from good sentences:

On the blue surface of the Volga River, orange-red ships are upstream, and golden leaves are slowly drifting downstream.

I am so afraid of my grandfather that I always feel that his green eyes are staring at me.

Music is full of sadness, like a river running down the mountain, stirring in the room.

People often hear their songs and stop to look at them from the window. The upturned face reminds me of dirty dishes that haven't been washed yet.

Excerpts from excellent paragraphs:

"Well, you people ...! "He often sighs suddenly like this, and he doesn't know what he is sighing about. "Man ..." The ending is always dragged on by him.

Tzgang blushed and walked into the middle of the kitchen, jumping like a flame: his hands were raised high, his steps were indistinguishable, his shirt trembled and shone like a flame. He danced wildly, as if he could jump all over the city by opening the door and letting him out! Everyone was infected by him and trembled with him.

In singing, grandma sometimes advances, sometimes retreats, sometimes flies, and youth instantly returns to her, making her present a kind of flower-like beauty. Everyone was attracted by her.

My feelings:

The author writes well about the dirty environment in which the hero lived at that time, and makes great efforts in language description. Make the article vivid and immersive, and have a deeper understanding of beauty and ugliness and people's complex feelings.