30. Read the following materials and write as required.
A physicist once devoted himself to a subject, but changed his field because of his poor grades. As a result, he unexpectedly made many new discoveries. Many colleagues praised him for sizing up the situation, but a great scientist didn't think so. He said, "I respect such people, but I can't tolerate such scientists." He took out a piece of wood, looked for the thinnest place, and then desperately drilled many holes in the easy-to-drill place, saying, "Is it ok to do scientific research like this?" "
What do you think of this?
Requirements: Synthesize the content and significance of the materials, choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up a good topic by yourself; Do not copy or copy; Not less than 800 words.
Intention analysis
This question examines students' ability to write expository, practical and literary texts. The ability level is expression and application. This composition is task-driven. Before writing, read through the material, grasp the content of the material as a whole, and understand the truth contained in the material. Then choose the right angle to conceive. This material discusses how scientists conduct scientific research. A physicist once devoted himself to a subject, but changed his field because of his poor grades. As a result, he unexpectedly made many new discoveries. He was praised by his peers as "sizing up the situation", but a great scientist didn't think so. He used the metaphor of drilling the thinnest part of the board to illustrate that he thought that scientific research could not be such an attitude. In this material, the practices of physicists can be recognized. If this road is impassable, open another road. Learn from another direction and recognize his flexibility and flexibility. You can also recognize the views of great scientists. You should be able to concentrate on scientific research, chew hard bones, be energetic, persevere and not give up easily.
Intentional quotation:
1. "Poor grades" means that there are many difficulties and risks, and there are always unavoidable or unavoidable "poor grades" in life. Personally, "drilling the thinnest place" means lacking tenacity, being light and not afraid of heavy, and looking forward when encountering difficulties; Dare to "drill into the thickest place", not afraid of difficulties, overcome difficulties, and finally sharpen their true skills, harvest their true talents, and embrace different scenery. He who does not seek comfort will succeed, and he who does not seek refuge will enter.
2. As far as the country is concerned, if the core technology cannot be broken, it will always be subject to people; If the "biggest threat" of corruption cannot be eliminated, it will lose people's hearts; If the "roadblock" in deepening reform is not removed, it will affect the pace of progress. These are unavoidable or unavoidable "places with poor grades". Facing the test, facing the difficulties, drilling in and learning thoroughly are conducive to creating a new situation of career development and national rejuvenation.
3. "Instead of spending a lot of time and energy digging many shallow wells, it is better to spend the same time and energy digging a deep well." Instead of cross-border development, it is better to be single-minded and persistent. If you do one thing well in your life, you will achieve great success.
The era of great development has given you more choices. Those who judge the situation win, those who innovate and seek change are strong, and finding the most favorable place is to find the "thinnest place" on the plank of life. Only by replacing brute strength with clever strength and boldly crossing the border can we achieve more achievements in our limited life.
5. Growth cannot be cut short, and success is not short and fast. When writing an argumentative essay, the viewpoints should be clear and accurate, the arguments should be typical, the arguments should be strong and hierarchical, and the arguments can be demonstrated from the surface to the inside and from the superficial to the deep. The method of argument cannot be single. To write a narrative, we must write about people and things, pay attention to details, and move people with emotion.
Methods the finishing touch
The full name of task-driven composition is task-driven composition with narrative style and new materials. Its essence is a "commentary" composition in some places, and its essence is still a material composition, but a clear directional task is added on the basis of materials, which is intended to enhance the purpose of writing and prevent plagiarism. This kind of composition focuses on students' attitudes and views on a thing or social phenomenon, the depth and breadth of thinking, and the clarity and fluency of expression. Therefore, when writing this kind of composition, some basic things are essential, and only with basic elements can we meet the requirements; Only with the basic framework can we be in an invincible position in the examination room.
What are the basic components of task-driven composition? The author thinks there are five parts as follows: ① A resounding topic: On the basis of examining the topic, clear your mind, choose the writing angle and draw up an eye-catching topic. This title should be the "core idea" extracted from the material as much as possible, and it is a concise phrase or sentence composed of keywords and phrases selected from the material. Try to replace attitude with opinions or opinions. It is better to use the established words to transform. It's better to be unconventional. ② Quotation+statement+opinion: The first paragraph of the text adopts the form of "quotation+statement+opinion" to achieve the effect of "debut". Citation can be direct or indirect, but it must be targeted. The position must be firm, decisive and clear. Don't procrastinate, but get to the point. (3) explain the reasons at different levels: there is no reason to stand with an attitude and an opinion. Therefore, the third step of the composition must explain your reasons. Elaboration must be organized, that is, divided; Also pay attention to the hierarchy of content, such as from shallow to deep, from surface to inside, from concrete to abstract. Only in this way can we show the depth and breadth of a student's thinking. ④ Further elaboration: This step is difficult for ordinary students to play. How can we go deeper? The author believes that the most basic way is to put forward a feasible and meaningful solution to the problem, that is, to solve the problem. In addition, you can also "horizontally expand" and "vertically dig" and simply refute. In particular, refutation can presuppose the opposing party first, and then persuade it euphemistically, which reflects the thoroughness of the author's thinking and meets the requirements of "civilized reasoning" in task-based composition. ⑤ Connecting with practice and finishing quickly: Any article should consider its practical significance. If there is no practical significance, the article will be much inferior. Therefore, it is necessary for students to combine exercises with compositions in the examination room. But this link should not be too mother-in-law, and it should come to an abrupt end like the end of a piece of music.
An exercise is built with the above five components, and it has been very good. If you can add some necessary condiments, such as ginger, onion and garlic dishes, you will definitely get high marks and favorable comments.
The necessary persistence and flexibility in the selection of model essays.
Haining is a clever man. The backlog of quartz watches has put enterprises in trouble, but Heinig's flexibility-65,438+02 quartz watches are left every month, and the rest are all destroyed, which leads to the high price of quartz watches as limited editions.
Heine's flexibility is a kind of wisdom.
"There is no doubt about mountains and rivers, and there is another village" is a portrayal of Liu Xiang. What a familiar title "Flying Liu Xiang"! Liu Xiang's outstanding performance in the 1 10 meter hurdles shocked people all over the world. People may think that he is a natural hurdler, but this is not the case. When Liu Xiang first started as an athlete, his training program was high jump, but he was unknown in this field and did not achieve excellent results. Later, in a training session, Liu Xiang was attracted by a coach and invited him to join his training team and practice the 1 10 meter hurdles. After much deliberation, he turned to the 1 10 meter hurdle. Finally achieved "Flying Liu Xiang".
Liu Xiang's flexibility is also a kind of wisdom.
Tao Yuanming's realm is "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely". Tao Yuanming is a famous pastoral poet. His elegance and comfort are enviable. Such an uncontested poet used to be full of blood and wanted to make contributions to the country. But the reality is that Tao Yuanming, who is not allowed to enter the officialdom, has been frustrated many times. He witnessed the corruption and darkness of officialdom, but he didn't want to go along with them. In his struggle and melancholy, he made a choice-giving up everything in officialdom, living in seclusion in the mountains and living in the countryside. Only in this way can there be those famous sentences of the ages and a famous pastoral poet like Tao Yuanming.
Tao Yuanming's flexibility is also a kind of wisdom
Sometimes, people fail just because they insist on the wrong things, but they don't know how to change them. If Zhou Yu knows how to be flexible, how can he sigh, "If Yu is alive, how can he be bright?" If Xiang Yu knew how to be flexible, how could he throw himself into the river? If Shang Yang knows how to be flexible, how can cars split in the market?
But not all of them are flexible, and success can be based on it. The so-called flexibility is actually opportunistic, turning around and slipping out of the crooked curve. The police interrogation "changed" into lynching abuse, resulting in the disability of the suspect; Yogurt manufacturers "changed their minds" to take leather shoes as raw materials, which is miserable; The "flexibility" created by urban planning is the repeated demolition and construction, which leads to the waste of manpower and money ... This is not a normal flexibility, but a twisted trick, which is a hidden pain of Chinese people.
Persistence is a boundless desert, and flexibility is an oasis in the desert; Persistence is a gloomy cloud, and flexibility is a spring breeze that blows away the haze; Persistence is an endless swamp, while flexibility is a bird singing by the swamp. ...
Learning to be flexible is also a kind of wisdom.
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