Thinking of writing: Simplify task language directly. In narration, direct narration should be changed into indirect narration, and the language of characters should be simplified as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentence is "concise".

After school, like other students, I walked on my way home. Suddenly, I saw Han Qiang and Chen Xiao quarreling on the lawn.

I immediately stepped forward and asked them why they were quarreling. It is understood that when Han Qiang and Chen Xiao were sweeping the floor in the public area in the morning, Han Qiang picked up 10 yuan's money and took it with Chen Xiao to the principal's office. But Chen Xiao took all the credit for it. Hearing this, Han Qiang felt very wronged, but it was hard to say it in front of the headmaster. He can only eat coptis for the dumb-there is nowhere to tell the pain.

After class, Han Qiang came to get even with Chen Xiao. At this time, Han Qiang said, "I picked up the money. Why should I make you the payee?" ? "So they quarreled with each other. I went up to them and advised them, "You can give the money to the headmaster on your own initiative. This good spirit of collecting money is commendable, but you shouldn't do it for fame and fortune.

If everyone does good deeds for the sake of fame and fortune, or even takes the initiative to do good deeds, it will not only lose the meaning of doing good deeds, but also be shameful! Han Qiang picked up the money, and Chen Xiao should not take all the credit for himself, but should truthfully report what happened to the headmaster.

"After listening to my persuasion, the anger on their faces gradually disappeared, so I struck the iron while it was hot and said to them," In fact, it doesn't matter who gets the credit, what matters is the humility between people. Without humility, a moment of greed will turn two people against each other.

Their anger was completely defeated by my persuasion and they shook hands and made peace.