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Wan Wei Senior High School Entrance Examination Full Score Composition Electronic Edition
Wan Wei full score composition electronic version:

At that moment, I shed tears.

In our life, there are always some touching moments that make us cry. It was a summer night, and my family and I were walking in the park.

The park is full of trees and flowers, and the beautiful sunset makes people feel relaxed and happy. My family and I walked on the path in the park and felt very comfortable. Suddenly, I heard a cry. This is the cry of a little boy. I followed the sound and found the little boy sitting on the ground crying and looking helpless.

When the family saw this scene, they immediately ran over. After asking, we learned that the little boy and his mother were separated and he didn't know what to do. My mother immediately began to comfort the little boy and told him not to be afraid. We will help him find his mother.

We started looking for the little boy's mother in the park. Dad went to ask the park manager, and my mother and I took the little boy to the park to look for it. We constantly comforted the little boy not to worry.

After some efforts, we finally found the little boy's mother. When the little boy saw his mother, he immediately ran to hug her. At that moment, I saw the smile on the little boy's face and the gratitude in his mother's eyes.

When I got home, I recalled the scene at that moment, and my heart was filled with emotion. I understand that love is selfless and great. We should cherish the affection between family members, care about the people around us and let them feel warm and caring.

The tears at that moment made me cherish the people and things around me more. I understand that the meaning of life lies in giving and caring. Only by feeling the beauty of this world with your heart can you grow and progress.

The method of writing an excellent composition:

1. Determine the theme and goal: Before writing, make clear the theme and goal of the article, and ensure that the content of the article is closely related to the theme and the purpose of expression is clear.

2. Prepare materials: accumulate relevant materials through reading, observing and thinking, and make notes and arrange them so that they can be called at any time when writing.

3. Make a writing plan: Make a reasonable writing plan according to the theme and goal of the article, including the article structure, paragraph arrangement, language expression, etc. Ensure that the article is organized and logical.

4. Pay attention to the beginning and end: the beginning and end of the article are the key to impress readers. Pay attention to the eye-catching beginning and summarize the views at the end to make the article coherent as a whole.

5. Use vivid language: Using vivid, vivid and concrete language can make the article more appealing and readable, and increase readers' interest.