(1) Avoid cliches. Some articles always proceed from the situation and say "under the leadership of XXX, with the support and care of XXX, with the help of XXX". Some articles always start with "the sun", "the moon" and "time flies, the sun flies". These songs are always sung, and these routines become boring cliches.
Avoid mystifying some articles at the beginning, deliberately playing games, beating around the bush, deliberately confusing people, entering the "maze" and unwilling to write the meaning directly. It seems that this is where the article is novel and ingenious, and the level and skill can be seen. In fact, this mysterious practice is precisely the disadvantage of writing.
(3) Don't start suddenly. When some articles are at the beginning, they lack the proper explanation, which seems sudden, mindless and unintelligible. For example, some articles have no "feeling" at first. At the beginning of writing a composition, I said, "After reading this material, I have a profound experience ..." It was too sudden to write like this without mentioning the content of the material.
Avoid unnecessary explanations at the beginning of the article, not suddenly, not without explanations, and not with unnecessary explanations. For example, you don't need to spend a long time explaining the composition of the women's volleyball team, the time and place when the women's volleyball team won the championship five times and with whom. Of course, according to the need, it is also necessary to give an appropriate explanation to the written questions.
⑤ Don't express emotions out of thin air. Some articles, especially the beginning of argumentative essays, have no relationship with the center and theme. Before the discussion has started and the problems have not been clarified, they constantly sigh with emotion. This kind of lyricism out of nothing can only be called moaning without illness.
6. Avoid the beginning of some articles in big circles. Whether the center needs it or not, it has nothing to do with the theme. It was said in the pre-Qin and Han dynasties, before and after the village. Irrelevant, empty talk, write a thousand words, digress Wan Li, and go around a big circle before getting to the point.
⑦ Avoid piling up famous sayings and epigrams. At first, I wanted to take the lead and couldn't think of a good way, so I moved out all the proverbs and aphorisms, thinking it would be a good start. In fact, this practice is blind and the effect is often poor.
Avoid repeating articles at the beginning, but some articles have two beginnings. For example, some articles originally wanted to start with a quote, but after they were finished, they thought it was better to talk about the topic, so they started again. Some articles introduce the background at the beginning, and then feel that the center of the article should be revealed first after writing, so they start again. So there will be two beginnings. In this case, according to the requirements of the topic or the center, start with one of them.
Pet-name ruby don't blindly write the main purpose of the scene, or to highlight the theme, or to depict people, or to set off the atmosphere, if it has nothing to do with this, generally speaking, such a scene is meaningless. Some articles really don't need to start with "flowers", "birds" and "grass".
Attending to avoid blind quotation should be based on the needs of the theme and center, and should try to avoid blind quotation. Especially for the composition, if the materials provided are very long, if they are quoted at the beginning or copied completely, the focus will be unclear, the theme will be unclear, the words will be inaccurate and blind, and they will be repeated later, so you should choose to quote.
Then words are also important Unit 1
Dizzy, weeping, crying, shaking the sky, can't help laughing, being caught by butterflies, fairy dew, manna, dishes, Wolong, watching the little things of autumn, cranes (Li), clouds (wind), a smug behemoth.
Second unit
Living in a unique place, ordinary people, exquisite, embryonic form, wisdom, persistence, dedication, trampling and sudden death, I don't know how to warm my body, but I don't think about it. If you don't learn, you will be wise. Siqi still has a long way to go, die and do what you want me to do. Don't do this to others.
Third unit
Call friends, Dai Li, beautifully dressed, respected, bent down to dream. The bleak mountain island is full of bright stars, magpies sing and vines wither, and old trees are faint.
Fourth unit
Bones growl, lush silence is even better, which is beyond my reach, even in my mind.
Fifth unit
Farewell to painstaking depravity (depravity), chills are in their proper places, the water waves are swaying and shocking, and the echoes are ethereal, laughing and playing with moon beads, stumbling twins (playing chess happily) every cloud has a silver lining (knowing that it is not a blessing)
The second volume of the seventh grade
First unit
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Second unit
6. The top of the mountain is turbulent and turbid, and it is foraging. 8. The mountains and rivers are steep and the cliffs are steep. 9. Towering green and colorful rumors have a tacit understanding, pollution 10, splashing and confusing.
Third unit
1 1, let others do their best. After death, everyone knows himself. As everyone knows, Marco was buried, and Ran Yan worked hard. 12, Yang Zhigao persevered. Try your best to concentrate on the bullfight, 13, in a mess, 14, full of sound and feeling, knowledgeable, stroking your ankles, stroking your beard, crying and laughing, generating 15, saying goodbye for three days, that is, treating each other more with amazement.
Fourth unit
16, provincial reminder 17, hot and quiet, windy and rustling, dark and clear, fetters come to an abrupt end, 18, cheerful and uneven 19, joys and sorrows, frown, frown, smile, frown and scowl.
Fifth unit
2 1, drag the wind, eat, sleep, be tired, bully, be dissatisfied, be late, worry, swallow recklessly, be incoherent, be tired, be weak, give timely help in the snow, be depressed, be cold and hungry, be serious, be on the top of the earth, be persistent and tireless.
Sixth unit
26, mottled with lush eyelids and eyes, 27, in a dilemma, the sky is spotless, childlike, slightly better, dazzling in the air, stunned by the connection. 28, the hustle and bustle (the soul) 29, Pentium arrogant, the shadow is even worse.
The first volume of the eighth grade
First unit
1, unstoppable, unstoppable, 2, shivering, 3, worthy of the name, 4, unique and dazzling, shocking, no great achievements, 5, Nazi absurd vision resounded through the sky naked.
Second unit
6, pale, fear shock, 7, it never rains but it pours, chaos, selling classics, shocking the world, unable to express their feelings in the middle, 8, young and spacious, indifferent, watery eyes, low eyebrows, clumsy and irritable, 10, long journey, poverty and sadness, travel-stained, sigh, sigh, great strength.
Third unit
1 1, ingenious, lifelike 12, lingering moonlight in the breeze, fascinating, a thousand miles away, 13. According to local conditions, it is rugged and unique, and quiet and leisurely are considered 14.
Fourth unit
16, disappearing from the wind and snow, the road keeps winding, the grass grows and withers, the warbler flies 17, the reproduction is on the verge of extinction 19, the extinction is increasing day by day, and colorful things are accused of competing with natural selection and doing whatever they want.
Fifth unit
2 1, the grass is delicious and colorful, the land is flat and spacious, and the houses are like buildings. Chickens and dogs hear each other, and yellow hair hangs on the treetops. Nobody cares about it. 22. The case of Dexin Hongru is clear and not rampant. The game in seclusion. Because of the situation, it is vivid (the calendar can be counted)
Sixth unit
26. Su Tuan Qing Tang Jun Maolin Su belongs to a hollow valley, and the mourning has turned for a long time. 27. the scales are sinking and the water is empty.
28. Swallowing the sky is like walking on the ground. 30. The barren hills are heavy and the water is bright.
The second volume of the eighth grade
First unit
1, oil and light can be used as ups and downs guides to teach deep pain diseases. 3. Dally, miserable. A dark face is a lock of clothes, a lock of clothes is shoddy, a lock of clothes is rough and imposing, and a lock of ignorant and unhappy people stand out from the crowd, sitting in a critical position in the literary world, with sincere fears lowered, sharp and shiny armor, a three-point smile, eclipsed and full of fun. Large tracts of shiny, naked poking at the key. 5. Water jump, beautiful flowers, beautiful flowers.
Second unit
6. Eyes burning 7. Shoot proudly and gallop. 9. Jade winding 10. Swear to make a deep sigh and give the dead of night. Qian Shan Wan Gu screamed at the top of his lungs to clear the way, and his pride was soaring and slender (tracker)
Third unit
1 1, the mess around us dwarfs the unfathomable delicacies 12, and dryness devours the vicissitudes around us 13, which is comparable to the provocation and confusion of running around, being wiped out by the whole army, beautiful aquatic plants falling into a wrong path, impatience and frequent silence 15.
Fourth unit
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Distinguish praise from criticism, and be good at seamless connection.
Fifth unit
2 1, the wind and smoke are clear, the blue sky is rushing, the negative potential is attractive, the sound is loud, and the rhyme turns a thousand times (one). The kite is flying, the sky is looking at the peak, the heart is resting, the world is peeking at the valley, and I forgot to turn back (back) 22. Be quiet, don't talk about it, don't worship Li Rong, and don't ask for a short brown. Holding the scripture, he begged Delong to help the suspect, leaned down, dragged his feet and kowtowed when he was happy and angry. I am holding a Tang Wo irrigation, embroidered with Zhu Yingrong, smelly with Ye Ran robe, wearing my clothes, breaking my halberd and sinking sand.
Sixth unit
26. Green trees and green vines shake, shake, shake, shake, move, die, fight, snake, dog's teeth are poor, and they are lonely and sad with each other. 27. People and all kinds of waste tools thrive on luxury soup, and moved poets to rain, kill ghosts, roar, apes, cry, homesickness, fear, ridicule, spring scenery and beautiful scenery, floating gold, still shadows and sinking walls. 28. The forest valley is deep and beautiful, and the peaks turn to wind and frost, and the water comes out. Coming out of the cage, Juan ran fresh and cool, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, soft-pointed cloak, sipping waves, thirty, golden cup, jade plate, precious shame, stopping for a cup, throwing a big cover, abrupt, brocade, dry sea, flute switch red
The first volume of the ninth grade
First unit
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Second unit
5, respect the music group out of context, full support, words are not as good as words all day, foul language, idleness, wandering, forgetting food, joy, forgetting worries, strength, 6, curse, summit, extreme sadness, obsession, bullying, becoming angry from embarrassment, calm and wise, tolerant and compassionate, conscientious, 7, repeating the same mistakes, unforgettable.
Third unit
9. I was startled, scoffed, scoffed, scoffed, 10, plunged 1 1, the trestle was poor and rich, 12, a slap in the face.
Fourth unit
13, deep-rooted, tireless, self-evident, persistent, persistent, realistic, cunning, hard to find a chapter. Chewing tastes like chewing wax, talented, picky, arrogant, arrogant, arrogant.
Fifth unit
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Sixth unit
2 1, I am disappointed in my own cultivation, sorry for my country, afraid that I have no hat, afraid that I have a rest, afraid that I am sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry. Collapse, fatigue, weakness, openness, holy hearing, grandiose metaphor, disloyalty, loyalty, exhortation, punishment, concealment, ambition, loyalty, purity (with) your majesty's legacy, kindness, self-abandonment, arrogance, arrogance, ignorance, ignorance, consideration of gains and losses, good words, good manners, good manners, good conversation, and so on.
Book 2, Grade 9
First unit
1, a 2, caressing the ravaged brocade, seaweed, wormwood, haggard 3, wrapped in the new buds of the snail beach barge, puffing clouds and puffing fog 4, comforting and indifferent, inlaid with deep affection for the darkness.
Second unit
5. Those who wait on the guests generously are just pen and ink, but they still disdain to argue and are upset. 6, affectionate, heavy taste, outstanding, walker (fiber) flew into a rage, control the wonderful hand, rejuvenation, extraordinary, literacy, manners and etiquette, ancient post road, courtesy, corporal banter, shameless, majestic. The clever and witty show of the broken wall man, with his head down, is as dull as a needle felt and eager to try. 7. Chekhov. No one smokes, he is fleeting.
Third unit
9, hanging on a cliff, the soul is frightened, arrogant and extravagant, the leaves return to the roots 10, and after the rain, the green drops lead the neck to be slaughtered. The stars are suddenly enlightened, boundless and silent, and there is no dispute in the world. All the birds are silent, the rocks are steep, the rocks are barren, and the excellent wolves howl.
Fourth unit
13, compassion avoids telling evil, and group recording (the first one) compromises right and wrong (the more you do, the more you do. This idiom can be seen in this article, P 104. (4) There are examples of noble spirit that can help 14. You can come and go when you are happy, snore when you sleep, and you can't breathe. You can prevent haze and guilt, sob and curl up 15, and you can't forget the towering peaks with rippling blue waves.
Fifth unit
17, Fuzao Wenxuan is spacious, 18, Dodd helps many disadvantages, and less virtue helps Sumi to cope with hardships, with fatigue, hunger, weakness and discomfort. The invasion of a foreign enemy was born in sorrow and died in happiness 19. If you give up your life for righteousness, you will get it (all at once) (idiom about "righteousness": give up your life for righteousness)
Fifth unit
2 1, sacrifice jade and silk, trust, fail in small and big prisons, and expect high spirits, and I will be exhausted.
Beautiful appearance, clothes being stung and slandered, entering the door. If the market cycle is 23, Wan Ren Jizhou is in harmony with the country. 24, my fair lady, carefree, tossing and turning, squatting by the water.
The above words should not only be written, but also explained.
How can I make the composition that the teacher sees fall in love at first sight?
First, open your mind-what can you write?
Second, determine the policy: style: narrative-six elements argumentative-sentence and argument style: safe-plain, conventional, adventurous-novel and unconventional.
Third; Determine the center; Differentiate treatment; For and against centralization; Highlight one thing or several things;
Noble (connecting society, life and the world)
Fourth, choose materials: (pay attention to the scope of the topic) fresh-innovative, typical-social significance, easy to write-content, twists and turns.
5. Determine the topic: 1. Meet the requirements. 2. The topic should be simple and clear. 3. No language diseases. This is easy to write.
6. Suitable cutting: 1. Identify key paragraph 2. Arrangement details (important) 3. Delete the content unrelated to the center.
Seven, write an article: 1. Around center 2. Clues run through the whole article 3. Describe or analyze (concretize the article) 4. Elaborate key paragraphs (to set off a climax) 5. Discuss lyricism (about this matter) 6. Take care of the beginning and the end (ensure relevance) 7. The language is lively and humorous (improving the grade).
8. Check: 1. No, it doesn't matter. Check question 3. Inspection center 4. Check the structure (whether the head and tail are coordinated) 5. Look up the language (change the sick sentence) 6. Check text 7. Check punctuation. Format.