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Dear leaders, please comment on the copy I wrote in my circle of friends and add or delete the words in brackets. Thank you for your advice.
The ones in brackets are redundant and should be deleted.

In addition, "lust" can't be used like this, mainly because it can't take quantifiers. Also, punctuation needs to be adjusted. Can't "tease to the end." Namely:

At that time, I never thought that this easy-to-enter school gate would exclude me. Eleven years in the Spring and Autumn Period, let me look back greedily at the place where my youth began. ...