Examination composition is a composition on special occasions, and there are many special factors (tight time and heavy tasks) in the evaluation of this composition. It is undoubtedly meaningful to study the taboo of composition in examination room and avoid it in writing. It should be said that all questions in the composition are taboo, but due to special reasons, as a composition in the examination room, the following nine taboos are particularly worthy of our attention:
1, avoid using the topics used in the previous college entrance examination as topics.
If we are a conscientious person, we will find that no matter how the college entrance examination changes, there are always places where the contents of the college entrance examination are connected with each other. Think about it, take the three propositions of "the answer is colorful", "the choice of soul" and "the relationship between emotion and cognition of things" as examples. Are you among them? With the passage of time, the number of provinces and cities with free propositions has increased year by year, and the interconnection of college entrance examination compositions in content is inevitable. By extension, everything in the world is always related, so it is not accidental that the college entrance examination propositions in different years converge in content. In this case, of course, you can learn from the content of the previous college entrance examination composition, but you should pay attention to try not to use the topics used in the previous college entrance examination when drafting your own questions. With such a topic, no matter how good the content is, it is easy to leave people with the suspicion of plagiarism, so it is best to put it another way.
2. Avoid using the perfect composition routine that has been repeatedly hyped before.
After the college entrance examination every year, the media always hype up a batch of perfect compositions. Many of these perfect compositions are surprising and innovative in their forms of expression. Of course, it is worth learning from, but these compositions are familiar to everyone. If we use these perfect compositions mechanically, there will be no new ideas and no high marks. This is like a metaphor that someone once said: the first woman is a genius, the second woman is a scholar and the third woman is a fool. Don't use it unless you have to. Think about it. When others advertise, you advertise. When someone else prescribes a prescription, you also prescribe it, just change the name, place name or other details. At first glance, this is nothing new. Obviously, the so-called "alternative forms" are exactly the same, and the possibility of getting high marks is too small. It is better to adopt the conventional form honestly. As for the change of loan, this is not the case.
3. Avoid making up bizarre stories
Marking the college entrance examination papers is really a very tiring thing. In the past, many candidates made up an absurd story in their compositions, which gave the tired marking teacher a reading pastime, a literary interest, an ideological hint and a good score. Especially after the proposition of "if memory can be transplanted" appeared in the college entrance examination, there will always be a number of absurd story compositions in the college entrance examination every year. The problem now is that many students have misunderstood the absurd story, mistakenly thinking that since it is absurd, I will make it up at will, making a story bizarre, humorous and symbolic, and some are just a chaotic hodgepodge. Some even piled up a lot of idealistic and fatalistic things on the test paper, thinking that this would make the marking teacher have a strong interest. The result is just the opposite. As a Chinese teacher, the marking teacher always advocates the standardization of composition and always puts the ideological content of the article in a very important position. In addition, while encouraging innovation, the scoring standard of college entrance examination composition always requires standardized expression, healthy thinking and making up bizarre stories, which is naturally a taboo.
4. Avoid quoting propositional background materials at the beginning of the composition.
There is no taboo to quote materials in a composition. The problem is that many composition propositions provide background materials, so we should be careful with the background materials. If it is a feeding composition, the materials provided are the starting point of our composition. Of course, it is necessary to make necessary explanations in the composition and quote at the beginning of the article, but the background materials provided by the feeding composition and the topic composition are different. The background materials provided by the topic composition can be quoted or not. What we are going to discuss now is that no matter what kind of materials are provided, if you want to use them, it is best not to quote them from the beginning. When marking the college entrance examination papers in recent years, we saw that I didn't know how many compositions were quoted at the beginning, and some candidates simply copied the materials. In this way, the article is very dull and lifeless in expression, and the marking teacher will feel bored if he reads too much, which will naturally affect the score.
5, avoid reporting other people's materials throughout.
Whether the article is good or bad, you should say your own words. We see a lot of college entrance examination compositions, almost all of which are paraphrased from other people's materials, and only a few harmless words are said at the end of the article. Such an article can't get high marks. Many students may have been influenced by readers, Yilin and Motto. The format of the composition is to tell a philosophical or touching story first, accounting for about 90% of the length, and finally add a few comments. The viewpoint is correct, and the materials to prove it are true, but it always feels like someone else's article when you read it. If the materials used are well known, the taste will be even worse. If the story material is compressed, combined with some facts or personal experiences in reality, reproduced in refined and vivid language, and some analysis is added to the narrative material, the effect will be very different.
6. Don't be ignorant.
This is indeed the case when writing a composition. Some materials feel valuable, but they can't remember clearly when they want to use them. They didn't know much about some problems and wanted to express their opinions. Therefore, many candidates don't know what they are thinking, and make a lot of jokes, which has a very adverse impact on the composition score. Here are two examples: "Yue Fei chose loyalty to serve the country and died. He has been through many battles all his life, so that Xiongnu soldiers are afraid of him. " Yue Fei was a native of Song Dynasty, and he fought against Xiongnu before Han Dynasty. Isn't this a big smile? In fact, isn't it just to leave "Yue Fei chooses to be loyal to the country and would rather die than surrender"? Why gild the lily? "I remember Mr. Lu Xun once said: Go your own way and let others talk." Dante said the exact words. Why did he write them under Lu Xun's name? Directly quoting "go your own way and let others say it" does not affect the expression of the article at all. Obviously, the examinee certainly didn't mean it. The problem is that when we are not sure about the memory of some materials, we'd better avoid it or adopt the method of fuzzy explanation. For example, you can explain: "A famous person said …" "It is said that …" "I don't remember exactly, but there is such a thing …" Being an honest person, even if he still makes mistakes, will certainly be forgiven by the marking teacher.
7. Avoid expressing grandstanding.
The so-called grandstanding mainly refers to two situations: one is to adopt the so-called "new" form, such as no space before the natural paragraph, one word as the natural paragraph, half a sentence as the paragraph, or the combination of word games. This kind of expression is not standardized, which will arouse the resentment of strict Chinese teachers. The second is to flatter the teacher in a disgusting way, and attach a flattering sentence to the article or after the article is written. Limited to space, I won't give examples. This is a very bad style of writing, and ordinary teachers are ungrateful.
8. Avoid complaining.
The college entrance examination composition has always affirmed individuality and always demanded profundity. Many candidates may misunderstand and complain in their compositions, thinking that this is individuality and profundity. Not knowing the true personality and profundity of the content is the embodiment of the author's knowledge and thought. There are different views on some issues, and analysis and judgment can cause readers to think deeply. Please look at the following fragments of college entrance examination composition:
Yes, science is great. It has promoted and is still promoting the development of human society, and will surely make mankind create new glories. However, as a philosopher said, "science can be used to solve problems, but it can't explain why it should be solved." Human development is three-dimensional. When we are busy building the science building, the palace of human nature has already quietly risen. When we are racking our brains for the planning of the science building, have we considered that the palace of human nature may be unstable? When we have advanced scientific and technological means, have we ever thought that science, a double-edged sword, can cut through thorns and kill people? When we put aside the numerous scientific and technological achievements, have we ever thought about where to find the ultimate destination of human mind?
In this passage, the author looks at science from a new height, and as a thinker, he sincerely warns people not to ignore the palace of consolidating human nature while building a science building. Isn't this a personalized opinion? Who doesn't appreciate its profundity? Look at the next paragraph:
Look at today's society, where people steal, officials are corrupt, people cheat each other, and officials collude with each other, where there is humanity! It's a pity that Lu Xun died, otherwise I wouldn't have to worry about the inhumanity of China people.
This statement is obviously complaining, the language is extreme and the view is unacceptable. Is there no humanity in this world? Is it only when Lu Xun is alive that China people are human? This is definitely not to warn everyone to speak steadily, but to ask for a realistic judgment and a dialectical point of view, otherwise readers will not accept it.
9. Avoid unclear opinions.
Examination composition is a special kind of composition. Due to the time limit of marking and the examiner's psychological reasons, if the theme is not clear, our composition will be very bad. Some people may ask, can the usual composition be unclear? Of course not.
The ideas here should be clear and literal, so that people can definitely understand a paragraph or sentence in the composition for a few seconds. Usually, the composition can be subtle, and it is best to be clear in the examination room. At the beginning, transition and end of a discussion article, it is best to have sentences that can show the main point. Narration is the finishing touch.