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How to write a wonderful composition at the beginning of the 2022 national examination?
As we all know, article writing is the key and difficult point in the application examination. Many students hope that their articles can catch the eye of the reviewers at the beginning, but they have no clear ideas and can't start. Then, Chinese public education will share some wonderful examples of opening questions and analyze them with you.

Example 1

With the implementation of the strategy of getting rid of poverty, the poverty-stricken areas in China have undergone earth-shaking changes: from muddy roads to clean streets, from dilapidated houses to livable life, from barren farmland to prosperous industries ... Grassroots cadres have overcome thousands of difficulties and won this dazzling achievement with unchanging faith. At present, the tough battle against poverty has reached the second half, and the poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "biting hard bones and attacking villages". It is even more necessary for us to stick to our feelings and dreams in order to make greater changes in the countryside!

Zhonggong analysis

We noticed that the word "you" in the first sentence pointed out the background, then talked about the earth-shaking changes, and led to the specific content through the colon. This series of contents are all positive changes. Then use the word "achievement" to summarize the above changes as a whole, and then further point out the status quo and clarify the views. The overall idea is in line with the "summary" writing idea, that is, "pointing out the background+summarizing the problems/achievements+analyzing+clarifying the general argument".

Example 2

Based on the status quo, China's agricultural structural adjustment has been promoted in an orderly manner, agricultural green development has been steadily promoted, rural reform has been steadily promoted, and agricultural and rural development has made historic achievements. However, the fight against poverty has reached the second half, and the poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "biting hard bones and attacking villages". Only under the support of unchangeable feelings, unchangeable beliefs and unchangeable dreams, can we "chew on" the last hard bone and win greater changes for the countryside without doing anything difficult or shirking heavy responsibilities.

Zhonggong analysis

First of all, we see that "based on the present" points out the status quo, and the following content describes a series of development achievements, which is an exposition of achievements. Secondly, we use "however" to make a logical turn, saying that our development work has entered a difficult period, and then further lead to our theme and distinct views. The overall idea is a "turning point", that is, "good phenomenon description+problem description+analysis problem+clear point of view". Intentional classmates will find that the content is repeated with the generalization in the example 1. Therefore, in order to facilitate everyone's memory, it can also be understood as "opposite content expression+generalization".

Example 3

People's ideal for the countryside is "the land is flat and spacious, and the houses are just like it", people's ideal for the countryside is "the traffic between buildings, birds and dogs hear each other", and people's ideal for the countryside is "yellow hair hanging down, enjoying themselves" ... However, there are still many rural houses in China, the farmland is barren, and the farmers' spirit is depressed. The fight against poverty has reached the second half, and the poverty alleviation work has entered the sprint period of "biting hard bones and attacking villages". Only under the support of unchangeable feelings, unchangeable beliefs and unchangeable dreams, can we "chew on" the last hard bone and win greater changes for the countryside without doing anything difficult or shirking heavy responsibilities.

Zhonggong analysis

The first part of this opening will be more attractive than the above two examples, because there are more famous sayings and aphorisms in the content and the sentence patterns are written side by side. But it is still a logical turning point, leading to problems, pointing out the difficulties and obstacles of development, and then clarifying the point of view and explaining how to do it. There are many combinations of this opening writing. First, the first sentence is "parallelism", followed by "problem", and then analyze the problem and clarify the point of view. The overall idea is the combination of parallelism and turning point, which is arranged as parallelism famous sentences (indicating positive content)+problem description+analysis+distinct views.

The above are the opening writing ideas carefully selected by Zhonggong Education for all students. I hope everyone must prepare for the exam step by step and persistently, so as to improve the quality and speed of opening writing!