Jin Shiwei from Linhai No.6 Middle School

There is a proverb in China: "A clever woman can't cook without rice". If writing a composition is compared to cooking, then the materials used in the article are like rice for cooking. The so-called accumulation is the process of collecting things together, from less to more, and composition is a process of continuous accumulation from beginning to end.

As the ancients said, accumulation is the premise of finding a composition. Classroom, textbooks and accumulation are very limited, and you need to accumulate a lot of materials to write a good composition. If you want to use words accurately in your composition, you must accumulate vocabulary; If you want true feelings in your composition, you must accumulate feelings; To be novel, you must accumulate various structures, materials and refining methods for a long time; If you want a profound composition, you must accumulate ideas. Meditation without accumulation will only make people tired and get nothing, which is what Confucius said: "Thinking without learning is laziness." The skills and theories that I used to scribble with students can't be taught to accumulate honestly, and it's not pleasant to say. It's just "setting off firecrackers on the plane-thinking (loudly) high" and getting nothing. Even writers, without accumulation, may not be far from "Jiang Lang's exhaustion". Having said that, the most important thing is to consider how to accumulate. Therefore, we must strengthen the guidance of composition accumulation in composition teaching.

First, the accumulation of life

Life is the source of creation. Accumulation should be a comprehensive life-oriented accumulation, not a single scattered mechanized accumulation. The former is a hard and happy process that is conscious and synchronized with self-growth, while the latter is a passive and blind labor that has nothing to do with quality improvement. The former writes for life, while the latter writes for composition. All-round life-oriented accumulation should first attach importance to life, that is to say, the core of accumulation is to improve the perception of the surrounding world, enrich the thoughts and feelings of the self, cultivate love for the motherland, society and people, and stimulate the enterprising spirit of life. To do this, we must carry out or participate in the corresponding activities, participate in the corresponding life to experience, and be regular until we reach the level of consciousness. In addition, we should pay attention to the law of accumulation and don't regard life itself as accumulation. We are opposed to writing for the sake of writing, but we do not cancel our conscious preparation for writing. As an art, composition has its unique regularity. If we ignore this point, no matter how rich our life is, I am afraid it will be difficult to write an excellent composition. For example, people who have seen the sea may not necessarily write articles about the sea; Each of us often looks at the moon, but it is difficult to write a beautiful paragraph for the moon. One of the key reasons may be the lack of great emotion caused by the sea or the moon. It is difficult for a person who is indifferent to life or knows nothing about life to be so moved. This kind of touch is not superficial, nor is it preaching, but comes from a true love for life. The higher the sensitivity of this true love, the stronger the internal driving force of composition. This sensitivity of true love needs to be cultivated and stimulated, and the process of cultivation and stimulation is accumulation, which is a gradual and subtle process, not overnight, which determines that accumulation must be directional and planned. (1) directivity. It must be clearly felt. (2) planning. The plan should include the cultivation of direct feelings (first feelings, that is, direct physiological feelings) and indirect feelings (second feelings, indirect physiological feelings) of the things being felt. The former is usually hazy and personal, but it is important, true and basic, and its approach belongs to life itself, which is often ignored by people who write for the sake of composition. The latter is clear, with a strong social color, and is the collation and sublimation of personal feelings. Its main ways are reading and intentional observation and thinking. People who "write for the sake of composition" generally attach importance to this point, but because they ignore the former, the composition will inevitably contain mechanical imitation or even false preaching, although some compositions seem so "rich" in content and emotion. Only by combining the former with the latter and doing it alternately and repeatedly can we live and write, reflecting the idea of "improving life and writing at the same time"

Second, the accumulation of writing materials

Writing must accumulate certain materials. The accumulation of constituent materials is equivalent to the basic materials such as bricks, ashes, sand, cement and steel bars necessary for building a building. Material accumulation is the first step in writing.

The ancients had a famous experience in reading and learning: "eyes, mouth, heart and hands." It means seeing more, speaking more, listening more, thinking more and practicing more. This "four arrivals" is just a good experience to accumulate composition materials.

1. Eye-to-eye is an important window for us to obtain external information. We should accumulate writing materials by observing and reading other people's works. More observation can accumulate original materials, more reading of other people's works can strengthen rational understanding, and at the same time learn other people's writing methods and expressive arts. Teachers create teaching scenes and multimedia teaching in the classroom, which is an artistic reproduction of the original materials we usually accumulate. Mr. Lu Xun said: "If you want to create, you must observe first." "Watch and observe silently, learn by heart, then concentrate and wave." This requires us to observe carefully and be good at observing, that is, to learn to write, to observe things around us carefully at any time and place, to be purposeful, methodical, meticulous, in-depth and comprehensive, and especially to observe details.

2. The material source of language description in oral note writing.

2. Composition: My own shortcomings Original Publisher: CoCo Lee

How to Write My Shortcomings How to Write My Shortcomings The latest detailed model essay reference article "How to Write My Shortcomings How to Write My Shortcomings" will be collected if it is useful, and I hope it will be useful to netizens. How to write 1 for my shortcomings? I am anxious, impatient and eager to get things done. 2, impetuous, not calm enough to do things. 3, like to eat and drink, smoke, young people have no motivation to drink, and are irresponsible for their health. 4. Sometimes I am too confident and think that my work is well arranged, but I am sleepy. 5. At work, don't take the initiative to learn foreign professional knowledge. 6. Lack of language skills. 7. Weak organization and management ability. 8. surfing the internet at night took up my study time, so I didn't make good use of my time to improve myself. 9. Young people and inexperience lead to inefficiency in doing some work. 10, when making friends, I like friends with rich stories, but I don't like friends without stories. It's too dull. 1 1, weak personality, sometimes putting too much pressure on yourself, rushing for success and going too far. 12. As a team leader, when it comes to the interests of team members, sometimes too much consideration is given to team members, resulting in more time spent on decision-making. 13. Work style: Work style is not solid enough. After working for a long time, there is nothing new, and there will be a feeling of boredom. Sometimes, my attitude towards things is different from down-to-earth, and my resume is only superficial, and the handling method is relatively simple. Is there an innovative spirit? Sometimes, you don't have to do anything except what you have to do, so as not to get into trouble. Sometimes I regard work as a burden, but I don't notice that the perfection of working methods will bring motivation to work. 14, surfing the internet at night took up my study time, so I didn't.

3. Writing is always less than 800 words. What should I do? You are right. Generally speaking, the composition of the college entrance examination is to be tested. To really write a good composition, especially an argumentative essay, I suggest reading more magazines like Yilin and collecting more materials about the debate. More importantly, don't panic when writing an argumentative essay, and don't be busy putting forward opinions about common phenomena at the beginning and then go from shallow to deep.

For example, you can't talk about courage at the beginning, but you should have an introduction, such as an example of being brave or a counterexample, and then lead to courage. When you expound courage from all sides and then discuss it with examples, don't rush to arrange your examples in chronological or logical order. Don't treat argumentative writing as a simple debate, you can use some common skills in writing, such as exaggeration and satire. It can add aesthetic feeling and rendering power to be convincing, at the same time, it can solve the problem of insufficient words in the composition, and of course it can add points to the composition. This is just my own experience, but it is still quite effective. I hope it helps you.

4. Writers who are diligent in accumulation and good at reflecting on their compositions at all times and in all countries can write many excellent works because of their extensive accumulation.

Tolstoy, a famous writer, always takes a notebook with him when he goes out in order to accumulate creative materials. When he saw valuable materials, he wrote them down at once.

His notebook is like a small encyclopedia, with different contents, wonderful words, vivid details, a lot of proverbs and aphorisms, and all kinds of little knowledge. This is how the vivid contents and details in his works are obtained, so Tolstoy said, "Accumulation creates miracles! In our daily study, we should pay attention to; Read more, remember more, write more, and have the spirit of turning a drop of water into a stone, and the spirit of gathering sand into a tower and accumulating armpits into fur. Only by diligent accumulation and accumulation can we organize our knowledge in an orderly way and form our own achievements; In order to apply knowledge to daily study and life, we can achieve mastery through a comprehensive study.

But can you learn by accumulation alone? Of course not. We should learn to reflect. Reflection is actually looking in the mirror, looking at yourself, looking at your own advantages, and looking at your own shortcomings.

For example, every time we hand out the test paper, we should analyze it, deeply reflect on where we are wrong, where we are weak and where we need to improve. Only in this way can we learn from it and constantly improve our performance. In short, there are many benefits of accumulation and reflection, so act quickly.

You can't take the Wan Li Road without accumulating steps, and you can't become a river without accumulating small streams. I wish the students good study and continuous progress.

5. How to write a 400-word composition? Because every flower comes to rest, but not every flower can bear fruit. Every successful person is young, and not every teenager can succeed. What makes the flowers wither? What makes them great? Feelings are the accumulation of years of precipitation.

The burning peach blossom, its China changed my life. Beautiful peach blossoms are more shiny than peaches. Youth is not the winner of youth introversion. The Prime Minister looks beautiful. However, its root is the exploration of its origin, and its essence and expression are different. After years of accumulation, it has become a peach fruit, with light weight and preserved internal quality. People wash away lead and internal bodies.

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Accumulation does not mean living in a trance, but refers to the passage of time, meditation, accumulation, and then some precipitation, so that their original inner emptiness is gradually filled with quantitative change to qualitative change, and the pupa is molting and moving towards success.

Throughout the ages, it is the accumulation of many years of success ladder. If Su Hao had not experienced painful imprisonment and demotion, how could he let his introverted personality accumulate itself? If you don't accumulate over a long period of time, how can you stand such an article interview? From Su Liang's beautiful appearance to numerous fruits, this is the accumulation of many years.

Hours, big is not necessarily good. No matter how excellent the talents are, IAC will be abandoned without years of accumulation, and the mass extinction between their heads has been revealed. This kind of activity has existed since ancient times, and I assert that with this, there is still a future. Just like wasting time, the result is often unsuccessful, and so is "young people".

Even if some people have a low starting point and poor talent, they can seriously precipitate and accumulate there. In the long years, fruits and flowers can also be achieved to make up for the shortage of talents. A late bloomer, many men's handwriting is old, and their skills and tastes are gradually revealed. Sarkozy's ancient paintings did not gradually enter a lofty experience until the 1950s. Qin could not be stupid, and the ancients deceived me.

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Accumulation is the basis of extraction, which has a broad foundation, if more essential essence has been extracted; If there are only a few well-founded impurities to worry about the so-called "essence", even in the so-called "essence", it depends on a person's achievements and their essence. How can there be no huge accumulation? What is the real essence? Without years of accumulation, Compendium of Materia Medica and Dream of Red Mansions are probably nonsense.

Therefore, the accumulation of flowers in a year not only makes the results of various factors the key to a person's success, but also makes some achievements.

6. What if the composition is not well written? First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which explains the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.

"Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the common experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".

Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards.

The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.

(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.

Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.

Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery.

The article written in this way is flesh and blood. (3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation.

Opinion is the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial.

Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.

"One more miss, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.

So you can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.

The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms. In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand.

Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe that Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" for literary youth: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more. Here, "seeing more" means observing more.

This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing. Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. "

It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable. Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time.