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Zhu xian
Author: Ding Xiao
"Zhu Xian" was written by Ding Xiao, and was first serialized on the website of the online classical Xianxia novel "Magic Sword Book League". Zhu Xian's plot is full of ups and downs, and his characters are distinct. A question repeatedly discussed in the book is "what is the right way". The theme of this novel is "The world is ruthless, and everything is straw dogs". It is also called "the Three Wonders of the Internet" with Wandering Journey and The Legend of Little Soldiers.
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The story begins with an ordinary boy named Zhang Xiaofan. By chance, a monk named Pu Zhi in Yin Tian Temple taught him the true Dharma "Da Fan Prajna" which was kept secret by Yin Tian Temple during his lifetime, hoping to practice Buddhism and realize the dream of life and death in Zhang Xiaofan.
Houcaomiao village suffered a bloody massacre. There are 42 households with 247 people in the village. In addition to two children and being rescued by Pu Zhi, there are three woodcutter named Wang Ershu, none of whom are spared. Qingyun Gate on Qingyun Mountain couldn't bear to witness this tragedy and took in the three of them. Lin Jingyu was gifted and intelligent, and was accepted as a disciple by the first Taoist priest of Cangsong Mountain in Longshoufeng. On the other hand, Zhang Xiaofan is dull and unlovable. In the process of export, the first Tian Buyi of "Great Everest" accepted him as an apprentice.
After entering Qingyun Mountain, Lin Jingyu became very fast, and he was full of pride. Soon, he got the true story of the pine tree and the "Dragon Sword". However, Zhang Xiaofan's talent is dull, coupled with the dual cultivation of Buddhism and Taoism, which leads to the slow progress of repairing the truth. Master and other disciples had long given up hope and were arranged to cook in the kitchen, but their cooking skills were good and commendable. Tian Buyi's daughter Tian Linger is Zhang Xiaofan's good playmate. After a long time, Zhang Xiaofan has been secretly in love with Tian Linger. However, Tian Linger didn't take a fancy to him with average qualifications, but took care of him as his younger brother. What he admires in his heart is his brother Qi Hao, who is both talented and handsome.
In the process of cutting down bamboo, Zhang Xiaofan and Tian Linger went into the depths of Qingyun Mountain in order to catch up with a three-eyed monkey. Inadvertently, Zhang Xiaofan used his Xue Jing to refine two bloodsucking beads and the mastermind into a multiplier. Zhang Xiaofan didn't know it, but used it to light a fire, so he called it a fire stick.
Qimai martial arts
In the "Seven-pulse Martial Arts Society" of Qingyun Sect, Zhang Xiaofan, by virtue of his exceptional good luck and the evil spirit of "burning a fire stick", actually entered the top four, reaching the best result since Shuiyue taught Xue Qi to practice "Big Bamboo Peak". In this tournament, he met the teacher elder sister, Lu Xueqi, who is like the frost in Little Bamboo Peak. This is a semi-final for the top two. The two sides are evenly matched, and the decisive blow has a chance of winning. But Lu Xueqi's eyes reminded Zhang Xiaofan of Tian Linger, who had a crush on him. His heart was disappointed and he lost the will to win. He was kind-hearted, but he was seriously injured by lightning strike caused by Lu Xueqi's "Sword of Thunder". Lu Xueqi is having an affair.
Wanbat ancient cave
After the contest, Qingyun sent the top four winners to the "Wanbat Ancient Cave" in the empty mountain to exorcise demons in order to hone his disciples. The process of exorcism is both dangerous and abnormal. Zhang Xiaofan tried to protect Lu Xueqi and was seriously injured. Lu Xueqi was moved by Zhang Xiaofan's risking his life. When Lu Xueqi fell into the abyss of the necromancer, instead of surviving, he joined the tumbling in the abyss to save Zhang Xiaofan.
In this action, I met Baguio, the daughter of the demon king Zonggui. After wallowing in the abyss, Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi were separated, but together with Baguio, they were forced into the blood hole by the black water Xuan snake and trapped in the hole for many days. These days, they live alone and have a constant relationship. In the cave, Zhang Xiaofan got the first scroll of gobbledygook, and Baguio got the relic of Mrs. Golden Bell-Acacia Bell.
Heishidong
After getting out of trouble, I met the ghost king and learned the origin of poker in my hand. Later, when I came to a small town, I met the only descendant of the "King Kong Gate" owner, "Da Li Zunzhi". In order to help the town get rid of the demon, I went to BlackRock Cave to get rid of the fox demon. Before entering the cave, I met Zhou Yixian, a descendant of Qingyunzi 13 generation, and his granddaughter Xiao Huan. At the bottom of the cave, he was enlightened that the three-tailed fox demon could not live and die with you. At the request of Vulpix White Fox, Zhang Xiaofan threw the dying white fox and the three-tailed fox demon who committed suicide into the magma. Before Vulpix White Fox died, she gave her "Xuan Huo Jian" to Zhang Xiaofan.
Liuboshan
In the Battle of Liubo Mountain, the demons occupied Liubo Mountain on a large scale, and people from the right path came here intermittently to stop the demons. Zhang Xiaofan and Tian Qing overheard the magic teaching trying to get the eternal beast in the cave-the real talent cow. Later, in the process of people in the right path preventing the Magic Sect from taking the real cow alive, Zhang Xiaofan was forced to use the Great Brahma Prajna at the foot of the real cow, besides saving Tian Linger at Taiji Xuanqing Road and Yin Tian Temple in Qingyun Gate. Although he saved Tian Linger, he was accused in the right way because he was suspected of stealing the secrets of the Yin Tian Temple and eating blood beads with the most evil weapon.
Qingyun mutation
After returning to Qingyun Mountain, Zhang Xiaofan was heard by three famous Taoist masters, but Zhang Xiaofan would rather die than say where he learned the great Brahma Prajna, because he promised universal wisdom. Just when people wanted to punish Zhang Xiaofan, he took evil things, cheated his teachers and apostasy. They didn't want to. Lu Xueqi, who is usually taciturn, risked his life to intercede for Zhang Xiaofan and save his life. Zhang Xiaofan was deeply moved.
Baguio hit with a sword, but at this time, the demons took the opportunity to storm Qingyun Mountain, and Qingyun Gate suffered heavy casualties. In order to save the defeat, Dao Xuan presented the immortal sword and defeated the magic religion with it. When Zhang Xiaofan was interrogated again after defeating the magic religion in the right way, he didn't want to tell a shocking story of Fa. I can't believe that Pu Zhi, who is as loving as his father, is the murderer of the whole village that Zhang Xiaofan has been looking for for for many years. However, Tao Xuan didn't expect that the magic religion didn't lose heart, but pretended to retreat but turned back. The gate of Qingyun was terrible, Daoxuan was forced to offer the sword of Zhu Xian again, and the magic religion was defeated again under the incomparable power of Zhu Xian and Gu Jian. Baguio encouraged Zhang Xiaofan to enter the cult of magic. Finally, fearing that Zhang Xiaofan would fall into the cult of magic, Daoxuan actually killed Zhang Xiaofan again with the sword array of Zhu Xian. At a critical juncture, Baguio read a spoony spell for his beloved Zhang Xiaofan:
The spirit of the nine secluded places, the gods and demons of the heavens,
Sacrifice my blood.
Three lives and seven lives, forever in Yamaraja,
Just for love, although I die without regret.
With a Xie Jing, it became a curse, bouncing off Zhang Xiaofan and blocking the sword array for him, but he had passed himself and never survived. Fortunately, I have an acacia bell on me, which has suppressed all the scattered three souls and seven souls, but even so, I can't be resurrected. Zhang Xiaofan has suffered an unprecedented blow and can no longer believe in the so-called "right path". He defected from Qingyun Gate and joined the Demon King Gate of the Demon King School, and changed his name to Ghost Li.
Rebellion against the devil
10 years later, Ghost Li killed countless people. In the magic religion, he was called the Blood Son. I got the second volume of the gobbledygook from the ghost king, and made rapid progress in fellow practitioners of Buddhism, Taoism and demons. Lin Jingyu accidentally got the guidance of Wan Jianyi, the first person of Qingyun Sect who lived in seclusion in the ancestral temple, and made great progress in cultivation. Lu Xueqi, on the other hand, struggled hard with unimaginable efforts, and achieved the state of supernatant by virtue of his natural intelligence and inhuman diligence, and the progress rate was only slightly lower than that of Julia. But no one knows that what she deliberately endured physically was only to alleviate her doomed love, which was even worse.
Dead ze
Ze's death, ghost Li and desperate struggle, but in different ways, but they can't bear to hurt each other. In the battle with Blackwater Xuan snake, Ghost Shirley saved Lu Xueqi when he was about to fall into a coma, entered the treasure house of heaven and earth together, and obtained the third volume of gobbledygook, while Gray drank the water inside, which led to great changes in his body.
South Xinjiang (Xianggu, Tianshuizhai, Qilidong)
When he came out, Ghost Li found that many of his people had died at the hands of fishermen. Therefore, southern Xinjiang lowered the investigation of the truth. A nine-tailed white fox was rescued from the mysterious altar of incense burning valley, and was later called Xiaobai. In Sweet Water Village, Ghost Li and Ghost Li meet again, but they are close at hand. Lu Xueqi struggled in his legacy and love, and seemed powerless. Under the bright moon, she finally danced a sword for the ghost. This is the sword she danced in the dark behind the "Little Bamboo Peak" for ten years. Although the sword has been finished, but the string can't be cut, Lu Xueqi is very sad.
With the help of Xiaobai, he found the Miao wizard in Qilidong and asked him to collect souls for Baguio. Unfortunately, the Miao nationality was attacked by the Li nationality that night. With the help of the beast demon, the Li nationality defeated the Miao nationality, snatched the sacred black staff and bone jade, and seriously injured the wizard. The wizard promised to save Baguio. Although I knew I was going to die soon, I followed the ghost back to Qishan to save people. Helpless, the wizard was seriously injured, and successfully recovered the three souls and seven spirits, but failed to bring Baguio back to life. But put the three souls and seven souls in the acacia bell and passed away.
The disaster of beasts and demons
The beast demon finally came back to life, because he was resentful of the exquisite witch empress. He vented his anger on the whole world and vowed to kill all living things, so he commanded a large number of monsters to attack the middle earth, which was unstoppable. The Ghost King successfully used the monster beast to eradicate all the poisonous sects and the Acacia Sect, and he also lost half of his disciples.
When attacking Qingyun Mountain, Qingyun Gate joined forces with Xianggu Temple and Yin Tian Temple to defend against the enemy, but the other side was too strong. In times of crisis, Taoist Xuanren played the role of slaying the immortal sword array, but unfortunately he still couldn't kill the beast demon. In desperation, Dao Xuan opened the secret seal and finally defeated the beast demon with the hostility of Qingyun Mountain. Unfortunately, the sword was cracked, and opening the secret seal itself caused hostility and seriously injured Dao Xuan.
In the battle, Ghost Li was taken to the back of Qingyun Castle by Mr. Ghost, and he wanted to enter the abode of fairies and immortals to find out. I met Wan Jianyi who was guarding the ancestral temple. In the battle with Ghost Li, Mr. Ghost attacked, causing serious injuries and being killed by the unknown Ghost Li. After entering the abode of fairies and immortals in Gengetsu, Lin Jingyu also arrived. He was very sad to find that Master had been killed. He questioned Ghost Shirley when she was present. Although Ghost Shirley knew that Wan Jianyi was killed by mistake because of Mr Ghost's sneak attack, Wan Jianyi really died by his own hands, so Ghost Shirley didn't make any excuses, simply admitting that he did it himself, and the brothers turned against each other. As far away as Lu Xueqi, Qian Shan, I vaguely felt that my loved one was on the rise, and then I felt that I saw a fighting ghost in the abode of fairies and immortals in Gengetsu. When the ghost fell into the lee, he saved him and stopped Lin Jingyu. At this point, Zhu Xianjian returned to the abode of fairies and immortals. Ghost Li hated Zhu Xianjian, who killed Baguio, and hit it off with his soul. However, Zhu Xianjian's evil spirit is too heavy, which is worse than the mastermind and the bloodthirsty bead. It eats Xie Jing in Zhang Xiaofan.
Yin Tian Temple
Finally, Zhang Xiaofan was rescued by a black man dressed as Master Pu Hong, the abbot of Yin Tian Temple, and recuperated in Yin Tian Temple. Puhong told Zhang Xiaofan Puzhi's last words that Zhang Xiaofan forgave his master after sitting in Puzhi's cabin for a day. In order to influence Zhang Xiaofan, Pu Hong took him to the treasure in Miaozhen Town, Yin Tian, to help him eliminate evil spirits in his chest, and didn't want to cause "heaven punishes thunder". During this period, the fourth volume of gobbledygook flashed on the wordless jade, and Zhang Xiaofan understood it. Under the harsh punishment of heaven, the silent jade seems to feel something, and all the lightning leads to herself. As a result, the silent jade was destroyed, but Zhang Xiaofan was safe and sound.
After bidding farewell to the temple, Ghost Li went to southern Xinjiang to slay the demon and get rid of it, and tried to get a gluttonous beast. During this period, Taoist wild dogs have been following Xiaohuan's grandparents and grandchildren because of their love for Xiaohuan. In the process of going south, Xiao Huan and Zhou Yixian were attacked by a monster, and Taoist wild dogs gave their lives to save them. Finally, he was exhausted and died with the last monster. In order to thank the Taoist wild dogs for saving his life, Xiao Huan spent 20 years of his life to collect souls and recover souls for Taoist wild dogs. It's a pity that my mana is low, and I almost died in the spectre of the trick. Mr. Ghost happened to pass by here. Seeing Xiao Huan's soul-collecting technique for many years, he really couldn't bear it. He rescued Xiao Huan, took him as a disciple and taught him ghosts and demons.
Linglong and the beast demon
Linglong, a witch of the Black Witch clan, assimilated the atmosphere of heaven and earth here with witchcraft and occultism in southern Xinjiang, extracted the essence from it and created a beast god. Because the noumenon of the beast god is born of the qi of heaven and earth, with the knowledge of God, it naturally begins to absorb the hostility around it and gradually becomes stronger until it is comparable to the exquisite Taoism. The beast god thinks that the Taoist method is meaningless and tells Linglong that he just wants to be with Linglong, but Linglong doesn't believe it. One day, the beast god didn't want to stay in that house all the time, broke the exquisite ban and came out. Because the beast god looks terrible, it caused panic among the civilians, angered the fury of the beast god, and killed countless black witches as a last resort. Linglong attacked the beast god with witchcraft, but the beast god can recover quickly, but the beast god still escaped to the ancient cave of the real magic. Linglong didn't want to kill him at first, but at the strong demand of the black witches, he was about to kill him. However, the beast god came back, and Linglong badly wounded him with the Eight Fierce Xuan Fire Array and fled back to the ancient cave again. Linglong took seven warriors to the ancient cave of Zhenmo, entered it alone, and expressed his mind to the beast god, saying that he didn't believe it because the beast god was immortal, but he would die. Therefore, the beast god is willing to become a human body, and Linglong uses his own body to make the beast god become a human body, and says that as long as the five artifacts return to the ancient cave, the beast god will be resurrected, but he will become a statue at the mouth of the cave to contain the monster beast in the cave. After the resurrection of the beast god, he vented his anger on the whole world, destroyed the whole world, and then committed suicide, but on the Qingyun Mountain, he was hit hard by Zhu Xian. Finally, in a duel with Ghost Li, he was burned to the ground by eight wild fire dragons.
Yizhuang decisive battle
Ghost Shirley survived the war with Lu Xueqi. After a short hug, Lu Xueqi returned to Zhu Xiaofeng. Ghost Shirley brought back gluttony, and the ghost king was as crazy as a madman. He and the ghost Shirley narrowly escaped and got into a fight with each other. Ji You angrily reprimanded them and left. At that time, Daoxuan was possessed by evil spirits, and Tian Buyi came to the ancestral temple to exhort him, but a war broke out. Suru came to see them, but they were all missing. Shui told Lu Xueqi the secret of killing immortals and the truth that Wan Jianyi and Daoxuan were killed, and told him to go down the mountain to find Daoxuan and kill him. Zhou Yixian and others met Daoxuan in Yizhuang, surrendered without fighting and were sealed in a coffin. In another place, Shangguance chased the lich to find the secret of skyfire until Yizhuang outside Heyang City. In order to escape, the lich got into the coffin and found Tian Buyi among them. Besides, he was locked in a coffin. Shangguance cast a spell to avoid the lich's array, but was ambushed by Xiaobai. In order to save his life, he knelt down for mercy and managed to escape. Xiaobai rescued Zhou Yixian and others, and Lu Xueqi arrived in time to rescue Tian Buyi. The Lich told Xiao Bai the secret of Skyfire and left separately. Tian Buyi said that he was willing to help persuade Ghost Li to come back and propose her marriage. Ghost Li found Daoxuan collecting ghosts in Caomiao Village, chased Yizhuang, met Tian Buyi, and the three men fought with Daoxuan. Tian Buyi was controlled by Dao Xuan, who seriously injured ghost Shirley. Lu Xueqi killed Tian Buyi in order to save the ghost. Tao Xuan suddenly remembered Korosensei's past, woke up in a rage and left in pain. Tian Buyi told Ghost Li before he died, don't blame him, let Ghost Li take himself back to Mount Everest, and let Ghost Li advise him not to be angry. Ghost Shirley was in great pain and badly hurt, so Lu Xueqi sent them back to Dazhufeng. And told the ghost the secret of Li Zhuxian. Later, because Su Ru committed suicide in the back hill, he followed Tian Buyi. Hidden very sad, told Wen Min to let her call Song's adult to propose marriage, and said that Lu Xueqi should go to ghost Shirley. If Ghost Shirley forgives Lu Xueqi in the future, she will help Lu Xueqi hold the canon and let Lu Xueqi marry Ghost Shirley. Ghost Shirley left the Great Everest, found Zhou Yixian, got Zhou Yixian's guidance, and walked with Zhou Yixian for many days.
The finale of the Shura catastrophe
Ghost Shirley learned from Zhou Yixian that Gan Kun's reincarnation plate might save Baguio, so he lent it to Pude, a monk in Yin Tian Temple, but Pude didn't know how to use it for decades. Ghost Shirley didn't save Baguio in the cold room, but was deceived by Mr. Ghost, who untied the Gan Kun lock of the Four Spirits Blood Array, so that the Ghost King successfully possessed the power of Shura! Baguio and Albizia Bell also disappeared in the chaos caused by the Four Spirits Blood Array. Ghosts and ghosts lie in Caomiao Village all day, depressed. After that, they rallied under the care of Lu Xueqi and the beating and scolding of Xiaobai. At the call of Zhu Xian, Gu Jian, they went to Gengetsu to become the new owner of Zhu Xianjian's abode of fairies and immortals, and at the same time studied the fifth volume of gobbledygook. At the critical moment, they killed the ghost king who had the power of shura and saved the people all over the world. Later, they lived in Caomiao Village and met Lu Xueqi again. This is the end of the book!
If you just want to see Super B, just watch the stars.
Comparison: Zhu Xian.
1. About the plot, Zhu Xian's protagonist has a rough fate, a chaotic life, many ups and downs of natural plots, and the author's writing style is more subtle. Focusing on "Heaven and earth are ruthless, everything is a grass dog", the center is clear, there are many suspense, and the characters, plots and language are all successful. On the other hand, the stars have changed, and Qin Yu has a smooth life. It is the home of emperors and is naturally qualified. Although I can't practice at first, once I start, it's terribly fast. In the end, he was mastered by a craftsman for hundreds of millions of years, and it is really bizarre that he can learn well in tens of thousands of years. Wherever he went, experts helped him, not a magic weapon, but a group of people with high status helped him. Nowadays, everyone worships heroes. Heroes are always invincible, but they are too smooth. The plot setting is not very successful, and it is very similar to the magic blade fairy edge I have seen before. People who come up from almost supreme status support the lower bound, and then, although it is hard all the way, it is more chic.
2. A lot of things about money will go bad when it comes to money, which can be seen in both novels. I don't know what happened when Zhu Xiangang came out, and I don't know whether it was published while writing. I can see this from the changes of stars. The more bizarre the plot, the more ridiculous it can be. It can be said that it is nonsense, slowly diluting the image and slowly dragging its feet. This is what tomatoes said when they stopped updating, which is very helpless.
3. As for the angle, Zhu Xian looked at the whole thing from all angles, as if describing what happened in many aspects at the same time, which made people feel a little realistic. However, Star Change is that most people only look at the problem from the perspective of Qin Yu, and it also highlights the protagonist, but it is a bit too heroic. Personal preferences are understandable.
4. On the issue of release time, Zhu Xian was released earlier, which can also be said to be the older generation of fantasy. Since then, novels like Xiuzhen have become popular, and Chen Xing can stand out among so many similar novels. Naturally, it has its commendable characteristics, and many rankings have been ranked first for a long time. If Zhu Xian were here, it might not have this effect. However, in this way, the stars have also fallen into the torrent of fantasy novels. People, immortals and gods have all practiced, and all realms have gradually broken through, but they have fallen into some stereotypes. Zhu Xian is more humane, paying attention to the feelings of the characters and moving people with emotion, while Chen Xing has changed his focus on the development of the plot.
As for other problems, it's not so bad compared with Zhu Xian. At least it is much better than the legend of Baal, which topped the list before. Personally, I suspect that the author of Ahriman is a narcissist who wants to commit suicide. Also, there are too many fantasy novel, who is on the list now, and there are always wives and concubines, as if all the good women in the world belong to his family, laughing their heads off. Even Huiming and Lost in the Last Years of Kangxi are like this. At first, they were absorbed in everything, and later they had more than a dozen wives. Tougher than Wei Xiaobao. At least, so far, there is only one heroine among the stars. I hope that when I get to the back, I won't put off 23,456 women with such funny and old-fashioned reasons as "I'm helpless, I have no choice, she's too good for me to live up to". I only expect the stars to change.
I eat tomatoes. The writer introduces the starting point columnist.
Resume: I grew up in Yangzhou, a land of plenty, and now I live in Suzhou, a paradise on earth! Twenty-year-old, Department of Mathematics, Suzhou University.
Work: Title: The stars have changed.
Author: I eat tomatoes.
Content abstract: A fantasy novel with the truth set in a big background, in which the protagonist Qin Yu is the third son of a prince. The Story of the Stars tells the story after he got the tears of a meteor ... Inadvertently, Qin Yu even discovered the legend of' Nine Swords' in overseas practice, which made countless practices crazy. This campaign covers overseas repair, including Qianlong mainland! Comments: The background is grand, the characters are pure, which makes people excited and upgraded, and the love with the heroine is unforgettable. No matter in what way, Chen Xing has reason to make you intoxicated and make you laugh and grieve with this book. Since the inception of the starting point, this book has always been the first in the total collection, the first in the monthly recommendation, the second in the total click, the first in the general list of martial arts Xianxia, and the first in the special collection list, which is enough to explain the quality of this book. In addition, tomato's "Inch Mang" was originally one of the most popular books with a large number of loyal readers to follow. Such an extraordinary achievement is undoubtedly that the star has become the first novel, and there are "novels that change without reading the stars, which are called bookworms."