This article is different from the general biography, and even more different from the narrative written by ordinary people. Instead, we will introduce an outstanding scientist and patriot in perceptual language with thousands of years of culture in China as the background, with a century-old national complex and a 50-year-old friend's deep affection as the keynote. The form of the article is "scattered", without systematically introducing Deng Jiaxian's deeds, but also inserting ancient prose, poems, telegrams and other contents, but the theme is concentrated: the excellent traditional culture of China for thousands of years gave birth to Deng Jiaxian, and outstanding figures like Deng Jiaxian made the Chinese nation stand on its own feet in the world.

This paper is divided into six parts.

The first part introduces Deng Jiaxian with the history of China and even the history of the world in the past hundred years as the background. The author uses the case of 1898 in which China was divided up by western powers to illustrate how "old China was at the mercy of others". Today, the people of China "stand up". "There is a little-known scientist for a long time: Deng Jiaxian." In this way, the author makes readers realize that Deng Jiaxian is not an ordinary figure, but a historical figure and an outstanding scientist who has made great contributions to the development of the motherland and the nation.

The second part briefly introduces Deng Jiaxian's life experience and contribution. He affirmed Deng Jiaxian's position as the "father of the two bombs" and praised Deng Jiaxian's glorious life of "doing his best and dying".

The third part compares Deng Jiaxian with Oppenheimer, the "father of the atomic bomb" in the United States. Oppenheimer is a sharp-edged top figure. Deng Jiaxian is the most inconspicuous figure, honest and honest, sincere and frank, and never proud. He is "the most simple peasant in China". People know that he is selfless and absolutely trusts him, which is why he can lead everyone to make historic contributions. Draw a conclusion from the comparison: "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest dedication bred by thousands of years of traditional culture in China." "Deng Jiaxian is China's ideal party member" shows that only China's traditional cultural background can produce Deng Jiaxian's noble character, and only Deng Jiaxian can meet the needs of China society and make great contributions to national development. Comrade Deng Xiaoping said: "I am the son of the people of China, and I love my motherland and people." Deng Jiaxian's temperament, personality and dedication are consistent with Comrade Xiaoping's voice.

In the fourth part, the author writes that he got the news that China's atomic bomb project was completed on his own without any foreigners, so his feelings were greatly shocked and he burst into tears for a moment. This is the author's 50-year pride in the Chinese nation and his friend Deng Jiaxian.

The fifth part, first describe the desolation of the workplace in Deng Jiaxian, and guess what it is like for Deng Jiaxian to lead his men to struggle and sacrifice in such an environment; Then, it is pointed out that Deng Jiaxian needs physical intuition, mathematical insight, bold courage and steady judgment in this work, and is concerned about whether Deng Jiaxian's hands tremble when he shoulders the heavy responsibility and signs the key plan. Then write Deng Jiaxian's spirit of daring to take the lead and not being afraid of sacrifice in the face of endless problems under extremely difficult conditions. Finally, a song from the May 4th period is quoted as a portrayal of Deng Jiaxian's life, which echoes the first part and puts Deng Jiaxian's contribution in the historical background of nearly a hundred years.

In the sixth part, I quote some paragraphs from the author's telegrams and letters to Mrs Deng Jiaxian. These words are a general evaluation of Deng Jiaxian, which is permeated with the author's deep affection for his friends. This part is also the summary of the full text.

Second, the problem research

1. What is the connection between the six parts of the full text?

The first part can be said to be the "small introduction" of the full text, which is equivalent to a hat. The sixth part can be said to be a summary of the full text. The second part briefly introduces Deng Jiaxian's life experience and contribution. The third part can be said to be the supplement, extension and expansion of the second part. By comparing with Oppenheimer, it highlights Deng Jiaxian's temperament, character and dedication. The fourth part, from another angle, expounds Deng Jiaxian's great contribution. This part can be said to be an extension of the second part. The fifth part focuses on Deng Jiaxian's profound and extensive national cultural background, extraordinary creative ability, strong will, firm belief and lofty spirit of dedication to the motherland. He is the "man" in China's male voice. This part is the embodiment of the second part.

2. Why didn't the author introduce Deng Jiaxian's life story and great contribution in detail?

It stands to reason that Deng Jiaxian is the founder of "Two Bombs", and the article should focus on describing Deng Jiaxian's great contribution to the development of "Two Bombs". The reasons for writing like this now are: first, the author is a great scientist and writes about a great scientist. Scientists write about scientists, focusing on scientific spirit, scientific attitude, temperament, personality, values and life path, rather than focusing on the description of specific details of events. Second, the author has a 50-year friendship with Deng Jiaxian. Writing this article about Deng Jiaxian contains the author's endless yearning for his old friend. At the same time, writing about Deng Jiaxian's life track is permeated with some things like Deng Jiaxian's in his life. Therefore, this article is often written from the perspective of the author's own communication with Deng Jiaxian, so it is bound not to focus on the specific details of the incident. Third, although the author and Deng Jiaxian have a friendship of 50 years, they are separated by the ocean for more than 20 years, so it is impossible for them to know a lot about the specific situation of Deng Jiaxian's works and to master a lot of materials. Besides, this is another essay, so don't write it out. Therefore, it is very clever to write like this, making full use of strengths and avoiding weaknesses.

3. Some people say that the author of this article is generous, where is it generous?

The author of this article has a traditional vision, a historical vision and a global mind, so the article is extraordinary and superior, which is beyond the reach of ordinary biographers. For example, from the perspective of China's traditional culture, the author praised "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest dedication bred by China's traditional culture for thousands of years" and "the most simple peasant in China". Because the author has a profound traditional culture, we can look at the problem from the perspective of traditional culture. For another example, starting from the humiliation and slaughter suffered by the Chinese nation in the past century, this paper quotes Li Hua's Hanging the Ancient Battlefield in the Tang Dynasty and the China Boys' Song that the author learned from his father when he was a child, so that readers can follow the author and look deep into history. Because the author is a descendant of China people, he grew up in Chinese mainland and was influenced by the national spirit since childhood, so he always looks at the problem from the modern history of China in the past hundred years. For another example, the author compares Deng Jiaxian and Oppenheimer, and always puts Deng Jiaxian on the international stage, which shows the author's global vision and promotes the realm of the article at once. This is because the author has a thorough understanding of Chinese and western cultures and a broad mind about the world, so he has the conditions to compare the top figures in China and the United States. In a word, because the author is familiar with the traditional culture of China, has a historical vision and a global vision, and the text is rich in connotation and profound in details, which highlights a three-dimensional radiant image of Deng Jiaxian.

Some people say this is a heartfelt article, what do you think?

The author's sister, Ms. Yang Zhenyu, said in the article "Father, Big Brother and Us": "This is a heartfelt article that describes Deng Jiaxian's life. I think this also describes the ambition of big brother. "

Affection is manifested in the author's feelings for the Chinese nation and his old friends who have had 50 years of friendship. For example, when the author learned that China's atomic weapons project was successful without any foreigners, he was so excited that he burst into tears, showing his deep feelings for the nation and old friends. For another example, in the fifth part, the author wrote: "I wonder if Jia Xian remembers Hanging the Ancient Battlefield that we recited together in Kunming …" "I wonder what it was like when Jia Xian buried his colleagues and subordinates in the desert with broken grass?" "I wonder if your hand trembled when Jia signed the secret contract for the first time?" These words are permeated with the author's deep affection for Deng Jiaxian.

Practice note

First of all, read the text with emotion, grasp the meaning of the text and complete the following questions.

1. Why did you outline the history of our country for nearly a hundred years before writing about Deng Jiaxian?

2. Why compare Deng Jiaxian and Oppenheimer?

3. "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest dedication bred by thousands of years of traditional culture in China." "Deng Jiaxian is China's ideal party member." Try to explain these two sentences.

4. "If Jia Xian chooses his life again, he will still take the road he has already taken. This is his character and quality. " Tell me your understanding of these two sentences.

The purpose of the topic is to let students master the meaning of the article and Deng Jiaxian's ideology, morality and dedication; At the same time, practice generalization ability and oral expression ability.

Reference answer:

1. Let's summarize the history of China for nearly a hundred years, so as to show that Deng Jiaxian is a scientist who has made great contributions to the great transformation of the Chinese nation from "being trampled on" to "standing up" and a historical figure who has had a great influence on historical development.

2. By comparing Deng Jiaxian and Oppenheimer, we can more clearly highlight Deng Jiaxian's personality and enterprising spirit, and naturally draw the conclusion that "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest enterprising spirit bred by China's traditional culture for thousands of years." "It is China's ideal party member."

3. "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest dedication bred by thousands of years of traditional culture in China." This means that Deng Jiaxian is completely different from the edgy Oppenheimer. He is the most inconspicuous figure, honest and practical, sincere and frank, never proud, and has no narrow mind. He likes the character represented by the word "pure" all his life and has the most simple temperament of China farmers. The traditional culture of China for thousands of years pays attention to the harmonious relationship between people, living in harmony, honesty, modesty, sincerity and simplicity. Deng Jiaxian absorbed these excellent parts of China traditional culture and formed his own temperament. "Deng Jiaxian is China's ideal party member", which means "he has no selfishness, and people absolutely believe him". During the "Cultural Revolution", two mass organizations, the workers' propaganda team and the military propaganda team could be persuaded. China's aim is to serve the people wholeheartedly, that is, to lead and unite the broad masses of people to advance together. Deng Jiaxian regards these as his code of conduct, so he is an ideal party member.

Dedicate one's life to the rise of the Chinese nation and the interests of the broad masses of people. This is Deng Jiaxian's life. It was Deng Jiaxian's character and quality that decided him to take such a life path. So the author says that if Deng Jiaxian chooses life again, he will do it again. These two sentences always describe the greatness of Deng Jiaxian.

Second, the language of this article is very distinctive and the sentence patterns are changeable. Sometimes the sentence patterns are neat, sometimes long sentences and short sentences are used alternately, and the use of sentence patterns is completely subordinate to the need of expressing feelings. Can you give some examples to illustrate?

The purpose of the topic is to let students know the characteristics of the text language, accumulate language and cultivate a sense of language.

Reference answer:

Sometimes the sentence structure is very neat, for example, the section from "being slaughtered" to "standing up" quotes four examples of "being slaughtered" in 1898; Another example is the "two bombs" part, which introduces Deng Jiaxian's resume and contribution in chronological order, and the sentence pattern is relatively neat; For example, in the fourth paragraph of the fifth part, the sentence pattern is also relatively neat.

Sometimes long sentences and short sentences are used interchangeably. For example, in the section "Deng Jiaxian and Oppenheimer", the fourth paragraph introduces Oppenheimer's character and personality, and long sentences and short sentences are used alternately.

Sentence patterns are changeable and play a role in expressing thoughts and feelings. The orderly arrangement of sentence patterns often creates an imposing manner, which impresses readers deeply. Long sentences and short sentences are used alternately, forming a kind of staggered beauty. Long sentences are easy to express complex and strict meanings; Short sentences are lively and fast-paced Used together, it has a special expression effect.

Third, check the information from the library, retrieve the information of Deng Jiaxian and other China "two bombs and one satellite" scientists, write biographies for them respectively, and then publish a wall newspaper entitled "Stars Shine" in the class.

The purpose of the topic is to extend and deepen the theme of the text and strengthen the education of students' outlook on life.