My new home

Last month, I bought a new apartment. It's in the center of town. It's on the twelfth floor. This house is beautiful and big. There are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a dining room and two bathrooms.

It's easy to get from your home to mine. It takes about 30 minutes from your home to mine by bike. You can also take the subway to Sunshine Park. Go straight ahead until you see the traffic lights. Then cross the street and walk towards the post office. Turn left at the first crossing. You will see garden buildings. I live in room 1202. ?

Test analysis: This is a composition for materials, introducing a new home. This paper gives detailed materials, and determines the main contents such as tense, sentence pattern and vocabulary according to the materials before writing. From the content point of view, this paper is mainly about the simple present tense, and the person problem is more complicated, so pay attention to the consistency of subject and predicate. Pay attention to the use of conjunctions and the diversity of expressions in writing to make the meaning coherent and logical.

Comments: writing should first pay attention to people and not confuse people; Secondly, we should pay attention to the English of verbs and determine the form of verbs according to different people; Thirdly, sentence patterns should conform to English expression habits; Finally, make sentences with sentence patterns that you are proficient in.