1, unique structure
The full text adopts a "plate-type" splicing structure, cleverly sets the theme subtitle, puts Deng Jiaxian's life story and outstanding contribution in a broad social and cultural background, and shows the characters' character and excellent quality from many angles and aspects, making them look tragic, great and lofty. The logic between the six parts is tight, interlocking, relatively independent, each with its own emphasis, and at the same time connected into a complete whole. The first part is the introduction, the sixth part is the summary, the second part introduces Deng Jiaxian's life and contribution, the third part is the supplement, extension and expansion of the second part, the fourth part describes Deng Jiaxian's great contribution from another angle, which is also the expansion of the second part, and the fifth part is the concretization of the second part.
2. Colorful sentence patterns
In order to meet the needs of expression, the author uses changeable sentence patterns to make the article vacillate in expression. Articles sometimes use whole sentences. For example, the first part lists four examples of "letting others be slaughtered" in 1898, and the fourth paragraph in the fifth part is relatively neat. In addition, in the "two bombs" section, Deng Jiaxian's resume and contributions are introduced in chronological order, and the sentence patterns are relatively neat. Sometimes long sentences and short sentences are used interchangeably. For example, in the section "Deng Jiaxian and Oppenheimer", the fourth paragraph introduces Oppenheimer's character and personality, and long sentences and short sentences are used alternately. Sentence patterns are changeable and play a role in expressing thoughts and feelings. The arrangement of parallelism can create an imposing manner, full of emotion, and read forcefully, leaving a deep impression on readers. Long sentences and short sentences are used alternately, forming a kind of staggered beauty. Long sentences are easy to express complex and strict meanings, while short sentences are lively and fast-paced Used together, it has a special expression effect.
3. Flexible and diverse expressions
According to the different contents of each part, the author chooses the corresponding expression and uses it comprehensively. Discuss lyricism on the basis of narration, so that the sentences about lyricism are rich in connotation and sincere in emotion, and strive to echo from beginning to end and complete in structure; Coupled with contrast, the narrative content is more specific and substantial. In comparison with Oppenheimer, readers can more clearly feel the temperament and character of China people represented by Deng Jiaxian. The author also vividly depicts his pride and Deng Jiaxian's hardships in the desert. The quotation of poems and the flexible use of punctuation marks profoundly show the profound traditional cultural background of raising Deng Jiaxian, and express their deep feelings and Deng Jiaxian's rich spiritual world.
4. Affectionate brushstrokes
The author's emotions run through all chapters of the full text, ups and downs, touching. Praise, nostalgia, pride, pride, reverence, cherish and joy ... the author's feelings for old friends and the Chinese nation are impressive. For example, when the author learned that China's atomic weapons project was successful without any foreigners, he was so excited that he burst into tears, showing his deep feelings for the nation and old friends. For another example, the author wrote in the fifth part: "I wonder if Jia Xianji remembers that we recited Hanging the Ancient Battlefield together when we were in Kunming ..." "I wonder what it was like when Jia Xian buried his colleagues and subordinates in the desert with broken grass?" "I wonder if your hand trembled when Jia signed the key plan for the first time?" These sentences are permeated with the author's deep affection for Deng Jiaxian.
5, the right choice, the right angle
Arguably, Deng Jiaxian was the founder of "Two Bombs". The article should focus on describing Deng Jiaxian's great contribution to the development of "Two Bombs". The reasons for writing this way now are as follows: First, this article was written by a great scientist. Therefore, the focus of the article is scientific spirit, scientific attitude, temperament, personality, values and life path, rather than focusing on the description of specific details of the incident. Secondly, the author has a 50-year friendship with Deng Jiaxian. This article about Deng Jiaxian contains the author's endless yearning for his old friend. At the same time, the writing of Deng Jiaxian's life path is permeated with some similarities with Deng Jiaxian's own life. Therefore, this article is often written from the perspective of the author's own communication with Deng Jiaxian, and it is inevitable to avoid focusing on the specific details of the incident. Third, although the author and Deng Jiaxian have a 50-year friendship, they have been separated for a long time, so it is impossible for them to know much about the specific situation of Deng Jiaxian's works, and it is impossible for them to master a lot of materials. Besides, this is a short essay, so don't write it out. Therefore, it is very clever to write like this, making full use of strengths and avoiding weaknesses.
6. Traditional vision, historical vision and global mind.
The author of this article has a traditional vision, a historical vision and a global mind, so the article is extraordinary and superior, which is beyond the reach of ordinary biographers. From the perspective of China's traditional culture, the author praised "Deng Jiaxian is the son with the highest dedication bred by China's traditional culture for thousands of years" and "the most simple peasant in China". Because the author has a profound traditional culture, we can look at the problem from the perspective of traditional culture. In addition, the characters are written from the humiliation and slaughter of the Chinese nation for a hundred years. It quoted Li Hua's Hanging the Ancient Battlefield in the Tang Dynasty and China Tongzi Song, which the author learned from his father when he was a child, and led readers' eyes to the depths of history. The author compares Deng Jiaxian with Oppenheimer, and always puts Deng Jiaxian on the international stage, which shows his global vision and promotes the realm of the article at once. In a word, because the author is familiar with the traditional culture of China, has a historical vision and a global vision, and the text is rich in connotation and profound in details, which highlights a three-dimensional radiant image of Deng Jiaxian.