A poet in the Tang Dynasty changed a word and ran for dozens of miles, which is also a touching story. "Moonlight before the peak" is bound to appear "the peak covers the moon", and the moonlight will not cover the whole river. It is both practical and poetic to change it to "half river".
Dengfeilai peak
Song-Wang Anshi
Fly to Chihiro Tower on the mountain,
It is said that the cock crows and the sun rises.
Not afraid of clouds covering your eyes,
I'm at the highest level.
Wang Anshi (1021-1086), a character festival, was a great statesman in the Northern Song Dynasty. He served as prime minister and carried out reforms with Zongshen's support, which was called "Wang Anshi's political reform" in history. Wang Anshi is also a writer, and his poems are well written. He pays great attention to rhetoric. It is said that his famous saying "Spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan" has been revised dozens of times before the word "green" was selected, and it has become a beautiful talk that has been circulated for thousands of years.
1. Lin Bao Feilai Peak outside Shaoxing, Zhejiang.
2. Chihiro Tower-describe this tower as very high. In ancient times, a search was equal to eight feet.
3. Fate-because.
This quatrain was written by Wang Anshi when he was a local official in Zhejiang. The first two sentences describe the image of Feilai Tower, and the last two sentences describe the feeling of climbing Feilai Tower.
The mountains are towering, the towers are towering, and the towers at the top of the mountain are towering. How high are Feilai Peak and the pagoda above it? I don't know that the poet only told us that the tower alone is more than 8,000 feet-this is of course an exaggeration. The poet also told a legend: standing on the tower, the cock crows at the fifth watch, and you can see the sunrise at sea. Please think about the momentum of Feilaifeng.
Although the pagoda is high, it is not out of reach. In a blink of an eye, the poet has climbed to the top of the tower, and everything in the world has a panoramic view. Drifting clouds can no longer block the line of sight! "I'm not afraid to float around to cover my eyes. I'm at the highest level." At first glance, it seems to be talking about the experience of seeing the scenery; If you think about it, you will understand a philosophy of life: in social life and ideological cultivation, don't you have to stand tall to see far? ! In the poet's view, this is ambitious self-encouragement; For readers, this is an inspiring revelation.
Su Xun is either a gifted scholar or a talented woman, which is of course inseparable from his teachings.
It is said that one day, Su Xun bought a picture to match a couplet, but after he drew up the couplet, he didn't write the words in the middle, so he copied it out for his children to fill in, so as to test their talents:
Breeze and willow trees
plum blossom
Su Shi (Dongpo) was the fastest writer, and immediately filled in two words, which made:
The breeze shook the willows.
The light moon reflects plum blossoms.
Su Xiaomei said, "My brother filled it out well, but the words were not brilliant enough. What if we use the words "help" and "loss"? "
Breeze helps willows.
The lost plum blossom on the pale moon
Sue asked the second child's opinion. Su Zhe praised his sister and said, "This is a refined word. With the word "help", the wind is gentler. With the word' lost', heaven and earth can become one color, confusing and poetic. "
Su Xun also thinks little sister is good, and Su Shi admires little sister's talent.
Ren Fan (person's name) wrote a poem on the wall of Taizhou Temple: "Before the peak, the moon shines on a river, and the monk opens a green bamboo building." If you go, if you have an audience, take a pen and change the word "one" to "half". Turn (turn) a few lines in ten miles and get the word "half". I want to change it back. When I see the changed words, I sigh, "There are people in Taizhou." -(Li Dongyang's "Poetry in the Foothills")
A poet in the Tang Dynasty changed a word and ran for dozens of miles, which is also a touching story. "Moonlight before the peak" is bound to appear "the peak covers the moon", and the moonlight will not cover the whole river. It is both practical and poetic to change it to "half river".
2. The ancients were earnest in tempering words when writing articles. There are similar stories, the most famous of which is probably the allusion to the word censorship.
Deliberation refers to the author's repeated selection and transfer of words and phrases in the process of text operation in order to accurately and properly materialize psychological images into stereotyped products.
Jia Dao was a famous poet of Kuyin School in Tang Dynasty. What is the complaint school? Just for a poem, or a sentence in a poem, I don't hesitate to spend my time and effort. Jia Dao once wrote a poem a few years later. After writing the poem, he burst into tears, not only happy, but also distressed himself. Of course, he doesn't work so hard every time he becomes a capital. In that case, he is not a poet.
On one occasion, Jia Dao rode a donkey into the official road. He is thinking about a poem, the whole poem is as follows:
Isolated, with few neighbors,
The meadow extends to the desert garden.
The bird stayed in the tree by the pool.
The monk knocked at the door.
Bridge color separation,
Move stones and move cloud roots.
Come back here for a while,
You don't keep your word.
However, there is one thing he can't make up his mind about, and that is "the monk pushes the moon down the door" in the second sentence. But he doesn't think it's appropriate to push. It's better to knock or push. My mouth is chanting. Unconsciously, he rode a donkey into the honor guard of Han Yu, a senior official.
Han Yu asked Jia Dao why he trespassed. Jia Dao read the poem he wrote to Han Yu, but he couldn't make up his mind whether to say it again with "push" or "knock". Han Yu laughed and said to Jia Dao, "I think it's better to knock. If the door is closed, how can you push it open? Besides, it is polite to knock on other people's doors at night! In addition, the word "knock" adds a little more noise in the dead of night. There is movement in the silence, is it not lively? " Jia Dao listened to nodding. Not only did he not get punished this time, but he also made friends with Han Yu.
Since then, deliberation has become a popular word, which means to ponder and consider repeatedly when doing an article or a thing.
3. Write a composition on the topic of tempering. As usual, white clouds floated lightly under their feet, and a group of birds became quiet because they entered this extremely sacred place. I leaned against a tall and ancient stone pillar, silently looked at the messy ruins on the earth, folded my hands and sang the Bible for mankind.
Not long ago, a commotion spread from the ground to the sky. In that place called "Land of Abundance", the power that Mother Earth has accumulated for thousands of years broke out in an instant. The beautiful city was destroyed once, people fell into panic, heavy rocks and huge houses rushed to helpless human beings without hindrance, people shouted helplessly, and hoarse cries and desperate growls lingered in my ears for a long time.
A tear flowed from my red eyes, slid across my face and landed on my white robe. ...
People who escaped from their clutches are frantically digging for their loved ones, and their rough hands are covered with blood cut by cement blocks. ...
A huge steel bar was pressed on a little girl. A group of adults tried desperately and hopelessly to lift the steel bar, but the steel bar didn't want to move a step, lying on the little girl's thin body, ignoring her pain.
Once, the school with loud books disappeared, and it was replaced by bricks and messy textbooks scattered on the ground. And the owner of the textbook is under pressure from the catastrophe. Their vitality is being sucked back and forth by disasters until the end of their lives.
There was an unfathomable crack in my heart: it grinned and stung me deeply, making the bright halo on my head dim gradually, and the sacred cross on my chest was not as clean as before, and rust eroded it bit by bit.
"Boom-!" There was another loud noise, and pieces of sand and boulders poured down from the majestic mountain, blocking the originally flat road and making it impossible for the rescue team preparing to break into the disaster area to move forward. The boulder sneers at people contemptuously: Look at how weak human beings go to the rescue. People didn't lose heart. They stubbornly climbed the boulder, climbed mountains and mountains, and sent the materials and help that the people in the disaster area were in urgent need, and sent their hopes.
"Wow-!" Listen, the rain is coming from the disaster area again. Originally gentle, she also became a horrible demon, ruthlessly plundering the energy of the trapped. People looked at the sky in despair, looked at me in heaven and shouted, "God! Why do you treat us like this! " Then throw yourself into the intense rescue.
However, no matter what it is, it can't defeat the power of human beings! My heart tells me. So, I shook my wings curled up behind me, and it opened as if it were ready to do something for mankind, and the plump feathers seemed to cover up all human suffering. ...
Look, the power of family! Mom and dad exchanged their lives for the dazzling life of their 3-year-old daughter.
Look, the power of friendship! After a student managed to escape, he went to rescue his classmates regardless of his personal safety. ...
Look, the power of that stranger! Bottled water, bagged instant noodles, cars, these are the power of strangers. ...
I roared and ran on the ruins, watching the busy people on the ground, watching the lives crawling out of the ruins, and a warm current spread all over my body. Then, I turned into a beam of sunshine, which shone into everyone's heart and into mine.
4. Writing a composition can often use words to describe a character's expression: energetic, cheerful, dancing with pride, energetic, cheerful, energetic, cheerful, cheerful, flustered, depressed, sad, frightened, restless and weak. Smooth-tongued, carefree, embarrassed, flushed, stupefied. Words describing the psychological activities of characters: anxiety, nervousness, anxiety, anxiety. Words describing characters' qualities: selfless, strong, unyielding, loyal, unyielding, unswerving, unyielding, unyielding, unyielding, unyielding, unyielding, unyielding, unyielding. Immortality, indomitable spirit, magnanimity, conscientious, magnanimity, magnanimity, openness, perseverance, honesty, integrity, honesty, shame, fear of death and impudence. Greedy for profit, cruel as a wolf, cruel as a tiger, arrogant, picky, careless, selfish, selfish. Don't hesitate to enjoy your success. Gossip describing learning: learning is endless, but never tired of learning, good at learning, never tired of learning, diligent in asking questions, strong in body, forgetting to eat and sleep, racing against time and being tireless. Stupid birds fly first, smell chickens and dance, strive for self-improvement and strive for the upper reaches. Concentrate on one person's strengths, concentrate on one person's vision, stick to many a mickle makes a mickle, be hungry, and be diligent. As long as you work hard, grind the pestle into an embroidery needle, learn from each other's strengths, practice hard over time, learn less, and eat fish for three days. Two-day contact network describes modest words: I am not arrogant, I am smart, I am stupid, I am unsuccessful, I am not arrogant, I am all ears, I know, I am cautious, I am proud, I am arrogant, I am complacent, I am self-righteous, I am conscious, I am cautious, I am cautious, I am proud, I am arrogant, and I never talk, laugh, talk or talk. Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue, Ao Xue. I don't care about the snow on his tile, his front door, his front door, his front door, his back, his back, his back, his back, dew, money, snow yard, wind, wind, snow. Snow, snow, snow, snow, snow, snow, snow, snow, snow fingers and claws, snow cellar, snow kiln, snow in ice days, giving charcoal in the snow, indulging in snow mud, tracing snow mud and claws, adding insult to injury, tired plum bones, snow days, fireflies mats, washing dishes, washing snow, forbearance.
Four words to describe action: intently looking at action, intently staring at action, staring at action, looking around, blinking, looking forward, looking far away, looking at action, looking at action, looking at action, looking at action, looking at action, looking at action, looking at action, looking at it, looking at it, looking at it, looking at it. Mixed feelings, touching, touching, passionate, passionate, grateful, grateful, grateful, grateful, frustrated, frustrated, frustrated, frustrated, giving up, completely disillusioned, completely disappointed, heartbroken, angry, fussy, inexplicable, distracted, calm. I can't help laughing and gloating. As if nothing had happened, I was considerate and kind. I'm depressed and embarrassed. I was surprised and suspicious. I'm confident and scared. I'm angry. I'm all ears, I'm all ears, I'm full of air, I'm alive, I'm full of spirit, I'm in a trance, I'm holding my breath, I'm smiling, I'm angry, I'm angry. Anger, anger, anger, tears, tears, sigh, tears, cry, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, think hard, laugh, laugh, be complacent, panic, panic, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh. Stunned and dumbfounded, stunned and ecstatic, the two men stared at each other. They are depressed, depressed, frowning and afraid. They held their heads high and panicked. In A, the word AB is confused, careless, flustered, vulgar and eccentric. ABAB's words are very useful.
5. The story of the ancients writing articles to temper words: Wang Anshi used "green" and Jia Dao used "scrutiny" to dig out the poem on the wall of Taizhou Temple: "The moon shines on the river before the peak, and the monk opens a bamboo building in Cuiwei." If you go, people with opinions will change the word "one" to "half" with a pen. Turn (turn) for dozens of miles and you'll get it. Because of the sigh, there are people in Taizhou. (Li Dongyang's "Lu Tang Shi Hua") tells the story of a poet in the Tang Dynasty who changed a word and ran for dozens of miles. It's also very touching. The moonlight on the front peak will definitely cover the moon, and it will not spill all over the river, which is both practical and poetic. Wang Anshi (1021-1086), a famous politician in the northern song dynasty, was a prime minister and carried out reforms with the support of Zongshen. Wang Anshi is also a writer, and his poems are well written. This has been a beautiful legend for thousands of years. 1. Feilaifeng-Lin Bao outside Shaoxing, Zhejiang. 2. Chihiro Tower-describe this tower as very high. In ancient times, a search was equal to eight feet. 3. Fate-because this quatrain was written by Wang Anshi when he was a local official in Zhejiang. The first two sentences are about the image of Feilai Peak Tower, and the last two sentences are about Dengfei Peak Tower. I don't know. The poet only told us that the tower alone is more than 8,000 feet-this is of course an exaggeration. The poet also told a legend: Standing on the tower, you can see the sunrise at midnight. Please think about the momentum of Feilaifeng. Although the pagoda is high, it is not out of reach. In the blink of an eye, the poet has climbed to the top of the tower and seen everything in the world. Drifting clouds can no longer block the line of sight! "Don't be afraid to float around to cover your eyes, you are at the highest level." At first glance, you seem to be talking about the experience of enjoying the scenery; If you think about it, you will understand a philosophy of life: in social life and ideological cultivation, don't you have to stand tall to see far? ! In the poet's view, this is ambitious self-encouragement; For readers, this is an inspiring revelation. Su Xun is either a gifted scholar or a talented woman, which is of course inseparable from his teachings. It is said that one day, Su Xun bought a painting and intended to match it with a couplet, but after he drew up the couplet, he didn't write the middle words, so he copied it out and asked his children to fill it in, so as to test his talent: Su Shi (Dongpo) has a light wind and a light moon. Su Xun asked the second child what he thought. Su Zhe praised his sister and said, "This is a refined word. With the word' help', the wind will be gentle. With the word' lost', heaven and earth can become one color, confusing and picturesque. " Su Xun also thinks his sister is good, and Su Shi admires her talent. Ren Fan wrote a poem on the wall of Taizhou Temple. Pick up the pen and change the word "one" into the word "half". Turn (turn) for dozens of miles, and you will get to the word "half". If you are eager to change it, you will see the changed words, because you sigh, "Taizhou is occupied." -(Li Dongyang's On Lutang Poetry) tells the story of a poet in the Tang Dynasty who turned around and changed a word and ran for dozens of miles.
6. Some good words in writing describe time, study hard, study hard ... for example, describe time as precious: it flies in an instant, the sun and the moon fly like a boat, and time waits for no one to describe it. Correct mistakes: famous. Change the description from time to time: the whole world is famous. Describe learning endurance: perseverance, perseverance, dripping water wears away the stone, and tirelessly describe the lively scene: singing and dancing. Watertight, in full swing, changing with each passing day, brand-new, full of waste, thriving, praising the new face of the motherland. Great changes in hometown: thriving, earth-shaking, brand-new, praise teachers: tireless teaching, teaching and educating people, unlearned, diligent in teachers' ethics, having both ability and political integrity, full of people's feelings. Idioms: anxiety, panic, unhappiness, excitement, anxiety, expressing joy. Smile, laugh, be ecstatic and overjoyed. Anger is expressed by anger, anger, rage and gnashing of teeth. There are: hateful, hateful, hateful, hateful, sad. Sadness is expressed by crying, wanting to cry, crying and sobbing. Depressed. Express excitement: excited, excited, mixed feelings, extremely excited, deeply moved. Express comfort: comfortable, carefree, carefree, relaxed and happy. Express anxiety: impatience, haste, impatience, haste, anxiety. Express guilt: regret, regret.
7. The growth of 900-word composition with the theme of tempering is an important stage for everyone to experience and temper their will, and it is also an important stage for us to combine learning with games. Growth, like a fruit tree growing green leaves and flowers, is about to bear fruit. In this short and important course, we need many excellent qualities to grow healthily, and most of these qualities are learned from some classic works.
Growth must be one of the trilogy of quality: stretching childlike innocence and promoting nature. What is the most important thing for a child-naughty boy Ma Xiaotiao series? It's not learning, it's not competition, it's just a carefree life and a healthy and happy childhood. According to experts' investigation and statistics, children's favorite intellectual games are a very good exercise opportunity, which can develop their potential and play a great role in their future growth. Nowadays, children begin to study hard very early and compete in their studies. After all, the child is still young. Does he have such a strong ability to resist pressure inside? Now, this is an opportunity for children to enjoy their childhood, develop their intelligence and cultivate their rich imagination. Didn't all scientific inventions in history rely on rich imagination?
The second trilogy of growing up must have quality: be kind to others and treat others sincerely. Counting the origin of names-the education of love. In daily life, a person's communicative ability, that is, interpersonal relationship, has the most important influence on him, so how should we treat people around us? We should associate with others with kindness and honesty. We should thank our parents, teachers and classmates. "People can't stand without faith", this sentence points out the importance of honesty. If we don't keep our promises, we will be hated by the world and spurned by our friends. On the one hand, we should treat others with kindness and sincerity, which is the fundamental principle of a person's foothold in society.
Growth must have the qualities of trilogy: optimism, firmness and unyielding. Count the origins of names-childhood. What kind of attitude should a person take towards upward? This is a far-reaching topic. In life, it is inevitable to encounter stumbling blocks. We should face life optimistically and see the bright side of things. Isn't this an upward sign? Furthermore, when encountering bumps, we should be strong and unyielding, not bow to difficulties, and challenge it again and again.
8. The growth of 900-word composition with the theme of tempering is an important stage for everyone to experience and temper their will, and it is also an important stage for us to combine learning with games.
Growth, like a fruit tree growing green leaves and flowers, is about to bear fruit. In this short and important course, we need many excellent qualities to grow healthily, and most of these qualities are learned from some classic works.
Growth must be one of the trilogy of quality: stretching childlike innocence and promoting nature. What is the most important thing for a child-naughty boy Ma Xiaotiao series? It's not learning, it's not competition, it's just a carefree life and a healthy and happy childhood.
According to experts' investigation and statistics, children's favorite intellectual games are a very good exercise opportunity, which can develop their potential and play a great role in their future growth. Nowadays, children begin to study hard very early and compete in their studies. After all, the child is still young. Does he have such a strong ability to resist pressure inside? Now, this is an opportunity for children to enjoy their childhood, develop their intelligence and cultivate their rich imagination.
Didn't all scientific inventions in history rely on rich imagination? The second trilogy of growing up must have quality: be kind to others and treat others sincerely. Counting the origin of names-the education of love.
In daily life, a person's communicative ability, that is, interpersonal relationship, has the most important influence on him, so how should we treat people around us? We should associate with others with kindness and honesty. We should thank our parents, teachers and classmates.
"People can't stand without faith", this sentence points out the importance of honesty. If we don't keep our promises, we will be hated by the world and spurned by our friends.
On the one hand, we should treat others with kindness and sincerity, which is the fundamental principle of a person's foothold in society. Growth must have the qualities of trilogy: optimism, firmness and unyielding.
Count the origins of names-childhood. What kind of attitude should a person take towards upward? This is a far-reaching topic.
In life, it is inevitable to encounter stumbling blocks. We should face life optimistically and see the bright side of things. Isn't this an upward sign? Furthermore, when encountering bumps, we should be strong and unyielding, not bow to difficulties, and challenge it again and again. .