(a) from the topic.
The common feature of these topics is: give priority to the place names that have been visited and explain the whereabouts. The last topic is the most eye-catching, with fantasy color and more personalized.
(B) from the content point of view
These four articles all show the common features of travel notes:
1. They all explain the wandering path and use the method of changing scenery;
2. The scenery is strange;
3. Use the first person;
4. Take advantage of the scenery to express emotion, with description, discussion and lyricism;
5. The structure has two parts, which are in contrast;
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Difference: A drop of water passing through Lijiang has a complicated journey, a long time span and rich historical and cultural landscape. The other three articles are all natural landscapes.
(C) from the perspective of writing
These four articles have their own characteristics.
Hukou Waterfall has a unique perspective, and the choice of time and perspective. Choose the unique time to see the waterfall in the dry season and walk into the "river center" fixed-point viewing perspective. It is typical to express the wonders of Hukou Waterfall in the Yellow River, including overall observation and detailed description, describing scenery and expressing emotions.
The author's experience of visiting the ice tower forest in winter in Gladin, the source of the Yangtze River, vividly shows the author's physiological and psychological feelings in these rare scenery. Language is not gorgeous, but it can impress readers.
Mont Blanc first describes the scenery of Mount Braun in the process of climbing with the style of prose, and then describes the incredible climbing process with the style of novel, which complement each other and have unique interest.
A drop of water over Lijiang is not about people's sightseeing, but about the experience of water. The process of melting a drop of water to form a big river is a string of Lijiang's scenery and architecture, humanities and geography, history and reality, with full and implicit feelings.
(D) From the theme point of view
Hukou Waterfall: This article is a lyrical travel essay. In vivid language, the author describes the majestic momentum of Hukou Waterfall in detail and praises the indomitable spirit of the Yellow River and the strong spirit of the Chinese nation.
Graton at the source of the Yangtze River: This paper describes the author's experience of traveling with the film crew in winter in graton, enjoying the winter in graton from different angles, showing its magnificence, expressing the author's praise for the magical power of nature and showing people's strong perseverance in exploring nature.
Climbing Mont Blanc: This article describes the experience of visiting Mont Blanc with another humorous friend. It not only describes the wonders of the mountains, but also the wonders of the King of Cars, shows a beautiful and legendary journey, and expresses infinite emotion and admiration for Mont Blanc.
A Drop of Water Crossing Lijiang: As a drop of water, this paper tells the story of my experience from snow to glacier, from a drop of water to a drop of water, describing and praising the beautiful scenery of Lijiang River basin and the splendid civilization of Naxi nationality.
(5) From the perspective of language characteristics.
Hukou Waterfall: This article has a strong sense of rhythm and relaxation, and the description has a sense of picture; Making good use of personification can not only express the form of water, but also help to express the modality of water, and can also implicitly reflect the author's mentality and write the scenery vividly; The words are rigorous, expressive, elegant and concise, paying attention to charm and short sentences, and occasionally using parallelism and antithesis.
"At the source of the Yangtze River, Gladanton": On the whole, the language of this article is relatively plain and free, some sentences are concise and vivid, and some sentences are cordial and natural. The language is concise, accurate and vivid, and the short sentences have a strong sense of rhythm. In addition, there are many humorous sentences in the article, which reveal the author's optimistic and strong spirit.
Mont Blanc: The language in the landscape writing part of this article is free and easy, rich and accurate in color, vivid in image and quite innovative. Strange figurative sentences with strong expressive force; In the part of remembering people and writing things, the extremely exaggerated satirical art and the hearty humor full of philosophical meaning permeate it, which is intriguing.
"A Drop of Water Crossing Lijiang": The poetry of the language in this article is first reflected in lyricism and rhythm. Sentences are short, long, complete and scattered, with changeable rhythm and poetic elasticity; Secondly, the thickness and texture of language can arouse readers' association and imagination; Finally, there are many philosophical sentences in the article, which express a sense of integrity and flow like water.
(6) How to write a creative travel note?
1, the scenery that the writer has never been to, or the scenery that the writer has been to but has not seen.
I write my heart by hand. Write "the scenery in my heart" instead of "the scenery in my eyes".
3. It is easier to write new ideas by learning anthropomorphic writing methods such as "A Drop of Water Crossing Lijiang" and changing a new perspective.