"Why?" The teacher asked lightly.
"Because my eyes are good, he is nearsighted."
I didn't tell the teacher. In fact, I have the worst eyesight in my class.
Almost all the students sitting in the last row are naughty boys. I have nothing to say with them. I want to go to class, but I can't see the blackboard clearly. So every time I have a class, I just stare at the blackboard with my eyes glazed and daydream meaningless-I have been a person with strange ideas since I was a child. For example, why is plum blossom called plum blossom? Why do plum blossoms bloom in winter? Can I become a plum blossom? If I were plum blossom, would I be Bai Mei or Hongmei? ……
I just muddled along for half a semester. The head teacher was transferred and replaced by a young female teacher. She has a red shirt and a white skirt, and her ears are full of short hair, which looks very sweet. I don't like teachers, but my cousin, and of course I'm not as kind as my cousin.
"My name is Bai Ming, and reading backwards means' understanding', which means that I can clearly know the situation of every student." She introduced herself with a smile.
I looked at her disdainfully. Is she really that good? Will she know that I am nearsighted? Will she know that I don't want to sit in the last row, but I am stubborn and sit in the last row? She'll know ...
Unexpectedly, a few days later, she actually noticed me.
In the Chinese self-study class that day, the students were all making exercise books, and I also spread out my exercise books and pretended to do them. In fact, I am too lazy to do anything except making sentences, looking at pictures and writing, which are suitable for me to play casually. While I was thinking, I reached out and took my exercise book. I was surprised to find that Miss Bai had stood behind me.
"What's the little brain thinking?" She fondly played with my skull. I have never enjoyed such "courtesy", but I still can't help feeling warm, but I still honestly lie on my desk and listen timidly to the sound of her leafing through the exercise books.
After the longest and shortest minutes in the world, I was afraid to wait for the habitual thunder and anger, but I was surprised to hear her gentle laughter.
"Did you make all these sentences yourself?"
"hmm."
"Very well, very imaginative. How spiritual it is to listen attentively to the sound of spring on the branches of flowers and bones. But why don't you say' listen to the footsteps of spring'? "
"Sometimes, spring has no footsteps, but it comes with green tulle and wind." When I received such a reward for the first time, I suddenly became courageous.
She didn't speak. She patted me on the head, walked onto the platform and made model sentences with my exercise book. That half hour was the first time I felt happy and happy since I went to school. I think I must be a little dizzy and drunk. It was not until after class that my classmates borrowed exercise books from me one after another that I woke up like a dream and stuffed them into my schoolbag in a panic-how shameful I would be if my classmates saw the large blank area above.
That night, I made up all the questions I didn't do seriously and stayed up all night.
In the following days, Mr. Bai paid special attention to consulting my exercise books and exercise books, asked me about the results of other courses with concern, and took the time to tell me some simple literary knowledge. Every time she stopped behind me with a faint scent and left with that faint scent, every time she bent down and whispered to me, I felt more nervous, excited, ashamed and happy than ever before. Only then did I find out how ignorant and stupid I was when I was angry and gave up on myself. My vanity and fragility make me culpable of punishment, because I have never accumulated wealth that is respected and cared for and proud capital that I can be proud of! -Students like me actually deserve to sit in the last row.
With my clumsy and diligent efforts, my grades in all subjects have made rapid progress. However, I couldn't see the blackboard clearly because of my myopia, which also caused some minor obstacles to my study, but I didn't tell Miss Bai. I asked myself: What qualifications do you have to ask Miss Bai?
One day, she came to class for a math class, because there was no textbook, so she sat with me and watched it. She watched me do exercises in class.
"PJ7, IJ 1 ... This is 8, not 3 ..." She corrected softly: "How did you copy so many mistakes? Are you nearsighted? "
I didn't speak, but my tears were dripping down.
The days passed slowly. Finally, one day, Mr. Bai announced a Chinese test and solemnly announced that "the top five won the prize". Of course, the prizes are exciting and the students are secretly busy. I've always been indifferent to exams, so I can't help being busy-I just can't win the prize, at least I'll do better in the exam than before.
The day came when the results were announced. Teacher Bai finished the paper and finally announced the score: "First place: Qiao Xiaoye ..."
God, I'm the first one!
I was shocked.
"In this exam, the students' scores are generally good, and some students have made great progress, such as Joe. She sat in the last row, her eyes were short-sighted, but she was not afraid of difficulties, worked hard and finally achieved excellent results. I will not only give her the top five deserved prizes, but also give her special rewards. Zhang Yujuan, Jiang Chunxia, Chen Qinglong, Li Mingyu ... You guys stand up and change seats, Joe Xiao! "
I stood up.
"This is your seat," she pointed to the middle seat in the first row. "From now on, you have to sit here."
I sat there in a daze.
"I hope the students learn from Joe. You know, there are seats in the last row in the world, but there will never be people sitting in the last row. "
My tears welled up.
It has been many years since this happened. I have forgotten many people and things over the years, but the position in the last row and Miss Bai's smile are unforgettable. I know I will never forget her, and I will never forget such a person, who led my life and soul to another kind of warmth, light and high enjoyment.
(1) is not contradictory. It is the first time that teachers have paid so much attention to it, and it is also the longest time in terms of feelings. Objectively speaking, Zhong Ziran is the shortest. (2) Nervous, worried about not meeting the teacher's requirements; Excited and grateful to be concerned by the teacher; Ashamed of one's previous mistakes; Happy, because the teacher's care and help and progress and happy.
2, a. Using parallelism, specifically write the teacher's constant concern and help for "I", full of gratitude to the teacher, and enhance the momentum of the language. B. rhetorical question, emphasizing that "I" is not qualified to make demands on teachers and expressing "I" strong remorse and regret.
3, mainly in two aspects: First, the teacher's care, help, guidance, encouragement and so on. ; Second, "I" work hard and make continuous progress. After that, this is an open question. It is advisable to talk about feelings from two aspects of the previous question, and it is best to talk about it in combination with reality: a person's progress needs the care and help of others, but also depends on his own efforts.
From the content, I made progress sitting in the last row, and there was a pun. Judging from the structure of the article, this title appeared three times in the article, which has the function of promoting the development of the story and connecting the story structurally.
5, open questions, such as the original "red shirt and white skirt, ear-length short hair, sweet appearance" and so on. You can use specific sentences to describe "young and beautiful".
6.( 1) My excitement and mood are forgotten in my memory, but Miss Bai's smile and concern are in my heart; Teacher Bai's care encourages me to make continuous progress. (2) Open questions can be agreed or opposed. Because it is possible from the perspective of incentive education, in fact, it is precisely because of this incentive that the "I" in the text has made progress; From the perspective of humanistic care, it is unfair to students and psychologically exciting.