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20 12 Chongqing English college entrance examination composition and model essay. Urgent! ! !
Four, writing (a total of two sections, out of 35 points)

Correct the mistakes in the first section of the composition (a total of 10 small questions; 1 for each small question, full mark 10)

Every line marked with the question number below has errors, please find out and correct them according to the following situation;

There is another word in this line. Cross out the redundant words with a diagonal line (\). Write the words on the right horizontal line of this line and cross them out with diagonal lines.

There is a word missing in this line. Add a missing word symbol () to the missing word, and write the added word on the right horizontal line of this line.

There is a typo in this line. Draw a horizontal line under the wrong word and write the correct word on the right horizontal line of this line.

Note: Please answer on the answer sheet.

Dear Grandpa:

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. _________

When I was in college a year ago. Whenever I think of' 77. _________

I felt very happy in the past days. I still remember when I was 78 years old. _________

When I was a child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories. _________

Until I fall asleep. We often go to the fields to enjoy the happy 1980s. _________

Look over there. You tell me the names of different plants and their 8 1. _________

Features. I'm crazy about Biology 82. _________

When I entered university, I chose to study biology. It's 83 now. ________

My friend Ann will go on a field trip with me. ________

These findings will serve as materials for our study. Since' 85. ________

We will do this research in our hometown, and I hope to see you then.

Yours,

daisy

Section 2 Written expression (full score: 25)

An international website provides personal idle goods exchange service. Now, you are going to exchange one of your idle items with others through this website. Please post on this website in English to release commodity exchange information. The contents shall include:

What items would you exchange?

Describe the project in detail.

What do you want to change?

Please leave a message for friends who are willing to communicate.

note:

(1) The number of words is around 100;

(2) the format is not limited;

(3) The examinee's real name and school name shall not be used in the text.

The first paragraph corrects mistakes

Dear Grandpa:

How have you been recently? I've always missed you very much.

76.these

When I was in college a year ago. Every time I think about it,

77. Because

In old times, I felt very happy. I still remember when I was

78. Happy

When I was a child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories.

79.a

Until I fall asleep. We often go to the fields to have a good time.

80. Fall down

Look over there. You tell me the names of different plants and their

8 1. Name

Features. Gradually, I became interested in biology.

82. Interested

When I entered university, I chose to study biology. at present

83. Go into ...

My friend Ann will go on a field trip with me.

84.yes

These findings will serve as materials for our study. because

85. Used

We will study at home, and I hope to see you then.

Yours,

daisy

Section 2 written expression