Wonderful model essay
I pay homage to all the gossip with indifference.
Meishan yi candidates
I'm not afraid of all the gossip, even 1000 decibels.
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The faint sunlight came in through the window glass. I casually hold a book and stare at the title page with my eyes waiting for a while, but my heart doesn't know where to fly.
My ears are filled with my friend's bitter words, and my heart stings. Although I have broken up with Xiao Ai, those rumors are lingering, alas! I always cared.
"Xiaoya," my mother's kind call pulled me back from my sadness, "a heel severely stepped on Violet's foot, but Violet left the fragrance on her heel. Why? " I looked blank, only knowing that this was a famous saying by andrew matheus, but I didn't really understand it. Mom smiled faintly: "Why didn't your good friend come recently?" ……"
I put down my book gently and went to the window. The sunshine outside the window is warm, the birds are singing tactfully in the trees, the flowers are blooming beautifully, and they are coming to me unscrupulously. ...
"Mom, a winter has passed and so many flowers are still there!" I suck greedily, and I like their fragrance.
"That's because they have tenacious vitality and they are strong enough."
Yes, plants that are strong enough have such strong endurance. No wonder they can survive the winter and stand firm in the wind and rain!
Just like violets. Because of forgiveness, you can take it lightly and leave the fragrance in your heel. Only in this way can it be strong enough. I smiled gently and welcomed the flowers with open arms, as if the wind was filled with faint violet fragrance. ...
The next morning, I took up my schoolbag and walked into the campus with brisk steps, facing the breeze.
"Listen to Xiao Ai, Xiaoya patted her ass and left after using others. It's really hateful. "
"That is, that is, listen to Xiao Yu affection, because she is in the way, Xiao Yu affection and Xiao Ting haven't reconciled, even Phillips is on her side. Is really mean ... "
I turned around and two weak girls were whispering. When they saw me, their faces turned red. I smiled and passed by. Well, since I can't control other people's mouths, I can only be myself, and I'm not afraid of rumors! The best way to smash rumors is to accept them frankly, "rumors stop with wise men"!
So, I learned to be indifferent and buried a humble and promised friendship with indifference ... I looked up and smiled. At this time, the sun is shining, and clusters of violets are beautiful under the blue sky! (Recommended teacher/Hu Shengchun, Wang Sanyi)
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1. Ingenious conception and profound artistic conception. The title is eye-catching, and the words "indifferent" and "memorial" permeate the author's unique and profound understanding of life. The article is closely related to the materials, and the meaning of tolerance and openness is vividly displayed. The article is complete in structure, echoing from beginning to end, and the writing is natural and smooth. The faint scent of violets permeates the whole article, fresh and elegant. The little author can observe life deeply, and the plot is full of twists and turns and unconventional.
2. Chew on life and suddenly realize. After listening to her mother's encouragement, the "she" in the article suddenly let go and prepared to bury the hatchet with her friends, but what she heard was intensified slander, abnormal plot, jumping out of the general writing thinking, and the contradiction suddenly escalated, which was extremely explosive. However, the little author's "faint smile", all the storms and all the gossip all seem so pale and humble! At this point, this kind of "indifference" has come to the bottom, which is not only an attitude towards life, but also a realm of life. This is the young author's profound philosophical thinking about life, and it is also the epiphany for young authors to chew life! Rare! Rare! (Comment on Teacher/Hu Shengchun) (originally published in China Youth Publishing House "20 12 Full Score Composition Express")
Masterpiece 8
Have a tolerant heart
Meishan yi candidates
Heaven and earth contain every cloud, so the sky is wide and far away; The sea contains every drop of water, so the sea is boundless; The earth contains every grain of soil, so the earth vast expanse; People should therefore have a broad mind and a tolerant heart.
When getting along with friends and family, there will always be times to express opinions on the same issue. Everyone should not only agree with their own views, but also agree with their own views, because they should actively learn from others' suggestions and listen to others' opinions. If you want to tolerate others, you must first respect and tolerate others. There is a good saying: "To respect others is to tolerate yourself." This sentence is to let us have a tolerant heart?
Tolerance can make the world beautiful, harmonious and inclusive, just like rain, which moistens the growth of everything in time; Tolerance, like sunshine, illuminates the whole earth; Tolerance is like a shell, decorating the beautiful beach. If you have a tolerant heart, you will find tolerance everywhere.
I remember when I was in primary school, my home was far from school and I needed to go to school by bus every day. That day, I was still waiting for the bus, and I saw two people sitting on the chair next to me. One person accidentally spilled breakfast on another. At that time, I saw that the man was blushing, so I immediately wiped the napkin for the other person, and the man just smiled and said, "Nothing, nothing." Watching them smile happily, the bus is coming. When I got on the bus, because there were many people, someone stepped on my foot and my newly washed shoes were dirty. I was very unhappy at first, but I couldn't help but dispel my unhappiness when I thought of the scene just now. The man even apologized. I just smiled and said, "Never mind, just wipe it." We smiled at each other, and that smile was really sweet. I have a tolerant heart like that stranger.
Yes, there are so many clouds because of the tolerance of the sky, so many water drops because of the tolerance of the sea, and so many soils because of the tolerance of the earth. One person's tolerance is a great asset to others. Therefore, everyone should have a tolerant heart. (Recommended teacher/Huang Zhiwei Chen Fayu)
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Parallel concept and explanation of 1. tolerance. The full text begins with a set of wonderful contrasts, pointing out the center of the article-"everyone should have a tolerant heart." In this paper, two "mutually inclusive things" on the bus are used to illustrate that tolerance can infect and pass on each other, which deepens the center of the article.
2. Echo from beginning to end and sublimate the theme. The last paragraph echoes the first paragraph, with implicit contrast, compact structure and more prominent center, which sublimates the main idea of the article. (Comment on Teacher/Zhang Li) (originally published in China Youth Publishing House "20 12 High School Entrance Examination Full Score Writing Express")