Xu huangyan district Experimental Primary School Grade Three 2009-06- 13 Comments (0) | Browse (16443)

My hometown is huangyan district Jinyiyuan, a small city with beautiful scenery. There are many trees in my hometown: Cycas, Cinnamomum camphora, osmanthus, bamboo, pomegranate, palm and so on. And there are many flowers and plants: dandelions, roses, water lilies and so on. The most interesting thing is the rows of straight bamboos. Those bamboos stood straight there, just like a strong man. A spiny cycad, like a big green flower; The trunk of a palm tree is tall and straight, cylindrical, unbranched, with brown hair outside, large leaves, deeply parted palms, yellow flowers, rectangular drupe and blue and black. The specialty of my hometown is oranges in Huang Chengcheng. As long as you peel it off, the juice inside will shoot on your face or eyes. It really looks like a little doll washing steam. Sometimes the little doll is covered with juice and seems to be crying. When eating, the little doll shoots juice at others! This is my hometown. I love my hometown, I love oranges in my hometown more, and I prefer to eat oranges in my hometown.

Comments by famous teachers:

Xu Kangdi, a junior, wrote a good composition. This paper introduces the hometown of the young author to us with the structure of the score. The little author's observation is very careful. When describing the bamboo, Cycas and palm trees in his hometown, he can describe the details very clearly, which is great! Young writers, in particular, can also use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to make the language of the article interesting and increase the readability of the article. The end of the article is concise and powerful, but it fully expresses the little author's love for his hometown! The teacher expects you to continue to introduce us to other interesting places in your hometown!

(Special Teacher of Happy School: Teacher Chen) 2009-6-1321:57: 59