Basically, I can give 10. . . It's already good. There are some grammatical mistakes and Chinglish. There is also the misuse of transitive verbs and intransitive verbs. In particular, it should be special, in a world. What does this mean? Look again, the verb is followed by the difference in income currency. There are some grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes, and the overall content is good. . You can get 10 integral. . Ha ha. . I gave a hint. Check it yourself.