No matter how hot the weather is, everyone still keeps exercising.
See below for the answer.
02
The task assigned to me by the company commander was successfully completed.
03
After education, the victims of "FxG" have brightened their eyes and raised their awareness.
04
Students must obey the traffic rules to prevent accidents.
05
In class, Xiaohua's eyes have been staring at the teacher.
06
I bought a pen, a ruler, an eraser and some stationery, and then hurried home.
07
No matter how good you study, there is no reason to be proud.
08
Martha is wearing a blue trench coat and a yellow hat.
09
Tonight, the sky is like a mirror and stars are everywhere. What a beautiful night scene!
10
The square was crowded with countless people.
answer
1. Change "No matter" to "No matter" 2. Replace "execution" with "completion".
3. How about "letting go" of the victim?
4. "Prevent" and "Don't" conflict, and remove a 5. "Don't blink" means "stare", remove a 6. Replace "and" with "etc".
7. Replace "although" with "even if" and "wear".
9. It is scientific common sense to change "starry sky" to "moon stars are scarce". 10. "Many" and "countless" are combined into one
1, the method of modifying sick sentences
(1) Improper use of words
(1) I feel that the color of * * * is inappropriate. His earnest and hard-working learning spirit is worth learning from each of our classmates. "Youyou" means "not learning well" and is derogatory. It's not appropriate to use it here. It should be changed to "learning". )
② Incorrect use of related words. Only by insisting on verification can the Iraq issue be resolved peacefully. When only and only are used together, the word just should be changed to only. )
(2) Improper collocation
① Improper collocation of subject and predicate. His lofty revolutionary qualities often appear in my mind. ("quality" can't be "budding", but it can be changed to "his great revolutionary image". )
② Improper collocation of verbs and objects. For example, Shanghai Science and Technology Development Center has gathered a group of professional teams who are enthusiastic about serving the development of science and technology and are good at management. ("Gathering" should be "specialized talents". )
8 Improper collocation of subject and object. This last day's work is the most stressful, enjoyable and meaningful day for students. ("labor" and "one day" are not properly matched, so "labor" should be deleted. )
④ Rhetorical words and head words are not collocated properly. He has made great efforts in cultivating improved varieties. ("great" and "painstaking" are not properly matched and should be changed to "many". )
(3) Incomplete ingredients
(1) The subject is missing. By studying Lei Feng's touching deeds, I learned a lot about being a man. The word "yes" makes "I" lose its subject function and should be deleted. )
(2) lack of objects. Seeing his photo reminds me of the time when we played together and read books at the same table. This sentence lacks an object head word. "Scene" should be added. )
(4) improper word order
① Improper logical word order. The school has adopted and studied new rules and regulations. The order of "passing" and "learning" is reversed. It should be "learning" before "passing". )
② The related words are in the wrong order. I trust not only him, but also his friends.
B: Not only I trust him, but also those who opposed him before trust him now. When two clauses are the same subject, the related word comes after the subject. For example, in A, the subject of both clauses is "I", and "not only" should be behind the subject "I": when the subjects of the two clauses are different, the related words are in front of the subject. For example, B, the subjects of the two clauses are "I" and "person" respectively, and the related word "not only" should be placed before "I". )
(5) Inconsistent
① Inconsistency. Whether you can study hard is the key to improve your academic performance. "Yes" and "No" express two completely different situations, so "Yes" should be deleted. )
② Negative redundancy. For example, individual doctors don't talk about medical ethics and want red envelopes. Hospital leaders are not without responsibility for this. ("not without responsibility" means responsibility, and adding "not" is the opposite, so "not" or "no" should be removed. )
The scope is not clear. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters about Macao's history hanging on the walls of the corridor. ("Pictures" include "posters" and should not be juxtaposed, but should be called "posters and other pictures". )
(6) Repetition, for example, the heavy schoolwork burden of primary and secondary school students is a chronic disease that plagues our basic education. ("Chronic disease" and "disease" are duplicated, and one of them should be deleted)
(7) Ambiguity: For example, a shepherd boy is eating grass with a cow. Is it a "grazing shepherd boy" or a "grazing cow"? It should be changed to "the shepherd boy leads the cow, and the cow is eating grass." )
2. Knowing these basic types of sick sentences, we must master the basic methods of modifying sick sentences.
(1) Check the sick sentences and find out the reasons. Look at the original sentence first and see what is wrong. Grammar, rhetoric and logic have different requirements for review. Finding out the reason is the premise of modifying the sick sentence.
(2) Take the initiative first, and then prescribe the right medicine. If it is a sentence caused by grammatical errors, when modifying it, we should first find out the trunk (subject, predicate and object) of the sentence to see if it is incomplete, if it is properly collocated, if it is disordered, and correct the mistakes found; Then, we should check the additional components (definite, adverbial and complement) and correct them one by one.
(3) On the basis of not changing the original meaning of the sentence, we should add (add words), delete (delete redundant words and phrases), adjust the tone (adjust the word order) and change (replace other words) to the sick sentence. You can't make new sentences.
Last year, China's oil production was one of the largest in the world.
We should inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of working hard to realize the four modernizations.
In the middle of the night, suddenly thunder rumbled, and then lightning flashed.
4. Rice is an important producing area in Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces.
After a while, we cleaned several dirty places.
At present, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world come in an endless stream.
7. Mr. Wang is very kind to us. His words are always sweet.
8. Swallows, woodpeckers, frogs and other beneficial birds are good friends of mankind.
In September and March, there will be more than 70 new films in Beijing cinemas.
10. Our teacher has a good eloquence and tells a lot of truth.
1 1. The Party Central Committee attaches great importance to and supports scientific development.
12. Every student should be a worker in moral education, intellectual education and physical education.
13. Today is my little cousin's fifth birthday.
14. His illegal mistakes were criticized by everyone.
15. Light light blue's spirit of helping others deserves everyone's touch.
16. The students are all listening to the teacher in high spirits.
17. The comrades of the British model group reported complaints to all our classmates.
18. Interest groups of two schools started their activities yesterday.
19. It was not until1the second half of the 9th century that coral was discovered as a carnivore living in the sea.
On the first day of the exhibition, many people, such as workers, farmers, soldiers, students and women, came to visit.
2 1. When Eight-Nation Alliance invaded China, it burned and looted the Yuanmingyuan in the western suburbs of Beijing.
Wang Ping and Li Huajian have established a profound friendship.
23. At work, teachers and Datong students do heavy work, while female students do light work.
24. Looking back on your own growth, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of "gardener"
Through hard work, Xiaodong's careless problem-solving has made progress than before.
26. Studying law is one of the important issues at present.
27. Air, like other things, has the characteristics of expanding with heat and contracting with cold.
answer
1. Last year, China was one of the countries with the largest oil exports in the world.
We need to inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of working hard to realize the four modernizations.
There was a sudden thunder and lightning in the middle of the night.
4. Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces are important rice producing areas.
After a while, we cleaned up a few dirty places.
At present, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world are in an endless stream.
7. Miss Wang is very kind to us and always speaks softly.
8. Swallows, woodpeckers and other beneficial birds and frogs are good friends of mankind.
In September and March, Beijing Cinema is going to show more than 70 new films reflecting the contents of ancient and modern China and foreign countries.
10. Our teacher is eloquent and logical.
1 1. The CPC Central Committee attaches importance to and strongly supports the development of scientific undertakings.
12. Every student should be a worker with all-round development in morality, intelligence and physique.
13. Today is my little cousin's fifth birthday.
14. His wrong way of violating discipline was criticized by everyone.
15. Light light blue's spirit of helping others is worth learning.
16. The students all listened attentively to the teacher.
17. The comrades of the British model group gave a report to all our classmates.
18. Two interest groups in the school started their activities yesterday.
19. It was not until1the second half of the 9th century that coral was discovered as a carnivore living in the sea.
On the opening day of the exhibition, many people, such as workers, farmers, soldiers and students, attended.
2 1. When Eight-Nation Alliance invaded China, it looted and burned the Yuanmingyuan in the western suburbs of Beijing.
Wang Ping and Li Huajian have established a profound friendship.
23. At work, teachers and male students do heavy work while female students do light work.
24. Looking back on your own growth process, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of the "gardener".
25. After hard work, Xiaodong's untidiness has changed.
26. Studying law is one of the important tasks at present.
27. Air, like other substances, has the characteristics of thermal expansion and cold contraction.
After the sports meeting, he officially retired from his sports career.
I think it is unnecessary to describe this, and no one can't imagine it.
There are all kinds of things that Lenin used in the past.
4. The class committee should pay attention to the artistry of blackboard newspaper.
Answer:
1. After the sports meeting, he officially retired from sports.
I don't think it's necessary to describe this. No one can imagine it.
There are all kinds of things that Lenin used.
4. The class committee should pay attention to the artistry of blackboard newspaper.
First, verb-object collocation
1 the fundamental purpose of developing productive forces in socialist countries is to improve people's living standards. (improvement)
The article fully reveals the noble heart of the hero through ordinary and daily details.
A small house is located outside the city.
The old workers help the traffic police to maintain traffic order on the road.
This year, our teacher Wang was gloriously awarded the title of "advanced class teacher in the city".
It is an arduous historical task to realize the western development.
In order to write this report well, we investigated many stories about Lao Yang.
With the education of teachers and the help of classmates, his learning attitude has improved obviously.
Second, consistency.
1 composition level is one of the important signs to measure a person's strong Chinese ability.
Whether there is a solid knowledge base is the premise of further study.
3. The key for China's films to go global is to dare to go to the peak of world film art..
Third, double negation.
1 In order to prevent traffic accidents from happening again in the future, you must conscientiously sum up your experience and lessons and study driving skills hard.
In order to avoid making similar mistakes in the future, we must strictly observe discipline.
You can't watch the solar eclipse directly with your eyes to avoid burning your eyes.
Fourth, there are few subjects.
1 Through hard training, athletes can achieve excellent results in the Olympic Games.
With the help of teachers and classmates, his grades have improved rapidly.
As there was no accident in this autumn outing, both teachers and students were very happy.
I remember when I met him, I was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) The logical order of verbs.
1 We should constantly improve and cultivate our ability to find, analyze and solve problems.
The teacher adopted and solicited the students' opinions on how to further run the literary society.
We passed and discussed the squadron plan.
Sixth, related words
1 As long as you exercise regularly, you will continue to strengthen your physique.
Even if Japan beautifies aggression again and again, it can't cover up the historical truth.
I run long distances every day. Although I have made great progress, I am not afraid to participate in the 800-meter race in the sports meeting.
He can not only read English prose fluently, but also pronounce it accurately.
Seven. conflict
It took me two whole hours to do these math problems well.
I guess he must be a sixth-grade student.
Eight, adverbial
1 We successfully found the hunter in the deep mountains according to the sketches drawn by Lao Gaotou.
Swimmers break world records again and again.
Many teachers talked enthusiastically with him in the lounge yesterday.
Nine. attribute
1 Reading and writing more is still a good way to learn Chinese.
He is one of many surviving victims.
Nostalgia is a song that can never be sung.
X. the sentence patterns are mixed and the components are missing.
1 China people have been interested in him since the day he went to school.
The story of "the Goddess Chang'e flying to the moon" has been widely circulated among the people since ancient times, which is one of its causes.
We came to the military museum and saw so many advanced military equipment, which made people proud.
Xiao Liang's shoulder was overwhelmed by the heavy rice bag.
Sauced duck, ham and Dongpo meat are very popular Spring Festival foods in Hangzhou.
The Slender West Lake in March is the season of warm spring in bloom.
7. Guiding students to read famous books and writing and acting textbooks have a positive effect on the development of personality.
Answer: Do the rest yourself. If not, you can deepen your impression by asking the teacher.
2 exposure-display
3 brackets
4 Maintenance-Maintenance
5 Delete the title of ""
It is an arduous task to carry out the western development.
Many deeds of Lao Yang.
8 improve-improve or correct his learning attitude.
There must be a wrong answer to the revision of sick sentences in the fifth grade: the changes in the old and new societies are really great!
Correct: Great changes have taken place in the old and new societies!
Wrong: I guess he must have done this problem wrong.
Correct: I guess he made a mistake on this issue:
Wrong:> The author was written by Lu Xun.
Correct:> The author is Lu Xun.
Wrong: After watching this TV series, everyone was deeply impressed.
Correct: After watching this TV series, we were all deeply impressed.
Wrong: Huang Jiguang not only died heroically, but he will live in our hearts forever.
Correct: Although Huang Jiguang died heroically, he will live in our hearts forever.
Yesterday, the students took bread, eggs, apples and instant noodles to the suburbs for an outing.
There is not much time before the exam, so we should step up our review.
In class, we should always pay attention to the class.
Choose a sentence with clear meaning and no mistakes from the following groups of sentences. Make a change.
1 ( )
A, an excellent basketball coach with more than 20 years of teaching experience came from the national team.
B, in the construction of new China, they are exerting their infinite hidden power.
C. There are all kinds of things that Lenin used in the past.
D. Whether this seed should be changed has aroused extensive discussion among leaders and the masses.
2 ( )
A, we came to this world-famous museum and saw a dazzling array of art treasures, all of which made people feel proud.
B, the strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the flickering lighting effect make people see things in a blur.
C. If the opinions in an article are problematic, even if the text is good, it is unacceptable.
D, Unless confrontational training is strengthened, it is possible for China football to go global, otherwise even Asia will not be able to rush out.
3 ( )
1. Cotton production in China could not be self-sufficient in the past.
B, I think this reply and the investigation and handling of this problem are irresponsible.
C before liberation, my father and brother didn't earn enough money to support their families.
D, we don't completely deny that this poem does not reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.
4 ( )
A,1October 1 1 day, with the idea of learning from the Ministry of Aviation, our blackboard newspaper was also published.
B in addition to the tickets issued, members' family members must have family badges. If any of them is missing, they can't enter.
C, it can be seen how weak the attitude of being responsible for the concern of the working class is.
D, recently launched a comprehensive quality inspection activities, in this activity to complete the establishment and strengthening of technical management system and a series of work.
5 ( )
First, now the fishermen have elected their own administrative team leader, who is responsible for mastering the fishermen's life and production management.
B, it's been ten years since Lao Zhang died.
C. People's Republic of China (PRC) was founded and the program was promulgated. Women are equal in law.
D Mr. Kan Kan, although his voice and smile have not changed, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unhappiness of these years.
6 ( )
One, only close contact with society, contact with the masses, can put forward insightful opinions on national security and people's worries.
B, "Reading 300 Tang poems, you can't recite them", which is suitable for writing poems as well as writing.
C, the dispute over right and wrong on scientific issues should not be forced, especially not to engage in things like literary inquisition. Whoever does this in history has never had a good result.
D. When driving through this place, he found a sign with red letters on it, which looked illegible.
7 ( )
A, "Physician Law" clearly stipulates that registered physicians in many countries and regions in the world must join local medical associations.
B, using the theory and method of social science to study the Internet is a new topic for social science workers.
C, the plaque style is vulgar and grotesque, although indecent; Worship foreign countries * * *, with colonial culture color, but also for China people.
D. The issuance scale of China's national debt this year is1952 billion yuan.
8 ( )
A. The filter developed by Transportation Research Institute can purify the tail gas of low-grade diesel oil, which has contributed to environmental protection.
B. In order to implement the Teacher Law, Wanshou County reimbursed all the medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8.
Director C of the wood processing factory reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the equipment of the factory and mobilized employees to learn how to use new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.
D. Shops openly sell pirated software, and we must crack down on this act of trampling on the publishing law.
9 ( )
Since the people of China accepted Marxism, the China Revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade * * *.
Second, reform and improve the new scientific and technological system that conforms to the objective laws of scientific and technological development and adapts to the socialist market economy.
C In September this year, two young people under the age of 30 from "Xihu Dali" were promoted to the important positions of executive vice presidents of knitting branch and clothing branch, which means that "Xihu Dali" began to implement its awareness of snapshot in the cultivation of human resources.
D. 100 years ago, a 57-year-old stubborn single old man could still hear thunder, but he couldn't hear a large symphony orchestra playing his own music. He raised his fist to the roaring sky for the last time and then passed away.
10 ( )
A, those congressmen who talk about "human rights" but keep their mouths shut about "human rights", what is the "human rights" implemented by the white police in the United States?
B, mountaineering clubs in Austria are all over the country. It has 250,000 members who pay a certain membership fee according to their annual income.
C. At present, the most fundamental problem facing China's economy is still insufficient demand. From the macro perspective of the current economic situation, it is still necessary to continue to implement a proactive fiscal policy, promote economic restructuring, and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.
D in the past ten years, the number of books published each year has more than doubled, while the total print run has remained basically the same, which indicates that the average number of books has more than doubled.
1 1 ( )
In the past three years, the total grain output of this county has increased by an average of 20% every year, making great strides.
B, the source of river water is not only groundwater, but also rainwater.
C, Huai Su's bold and unrestrained, Badashanren's personality is the pride of the Han nationality, but Van Gogh's * * * and Matisse's rhythm have long been dumped by Chinese people.
D the national conference on the preparation of enrollment plans for colleges and universities was held recently in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, the enrollment plans of universities affiliated to the central government for the western region and ethnic minority areas will increase this year, and the admission rate of college entrance examinations in all provinces, autonomous regions and municipalities directly under the Central Government will exceed 30%.
12 ( )
A, this is the mother of a hero, an open-minded mother.
This paper analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.
C cigarette smuggling is rampant, and China Customs places emphasis on cracking down on cigarette smuggling.
D. The limitations of the author's own time and class have to be reflected in his works, which is a problem that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.
13 ( )
A, the temptation of surfing the Internet makes modern people unable to refuse, but the expensive online consumption makes netizens feel heartache.
B Recently, it has been confirmed by the relevant departments that the new senior high school students who entered school in September 2000 in China will no longer use the current senior high school Chinese textbooks that have been used for 20 years. According to their own situation, middle schools around the country can decide to choose one of the two new textbooks, the Chinese Experiment Book for Senior High School and the Chinese Experiment Textbook for Senior High School, which are compiled by People's Education Publishing House.
C, overcome the tendency of focusing only on the development of tourism and neglecting the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to do a good job in dike protection.
D According to statistics, there are at least 200 million paulownia plants in Henan Province, and the intercropping area between agriculture and paulownia has increased to10 million mu.
14 ( )
A. In Tsinghua University, online testing is adopted, so that candidates can "speak freely" with professors online, and then a number of professors vote to recommend them, and finally the school decides whether to accept them.
If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it is imperative to properly manage the protection of intellectual property rights and the implementation of trademark law.
C, made a breach in Zhengzhou Huayuankou, which directly flooded more than 6 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces, with a population of more than 6190,000.
D. Lu Xun attaches great importance to children's literature creation. He pointed out that the fate of children is the fate of the future.
For reference only:
12. replace "serious" with "serious"
13. Replace "and haircut" with "etc"
16. Move "should" before "ba"
17. He thought about these problems for a long time.
18. He treated many patients.
19. With your help, I finally improved my understanding.
Yesterday, the wind blew down all the trees. Class 1, Grade 5 is the largest class in the school. Everyone in our school took part in the activity of "East and West Red Scarves Hand in Hand, Millions of Books Tell the Truth". On this issue of principle, he has a firm attitude and never gives in. Under the teacher's education, he corrected his learning attitude and made clear his learning purpose. 8. Teacher Liu was honored as "model class teacher". 9. The teacher encouraged me to keep working hard and get better grades. 1 1 I especially like playing football and table tennis 12. Grandma told me the story of the past.