Writing tasks:

At present, there is a phenomenon in some primary and secondary schools: some students have excellent academic performance, but there are some problems in their lives, such as "unwilling to associate with classmates and not knowing how to respect teachers". In view of this phenomenon, please write an English article of 120- 150 words around the question "What should students learn in school" to express your views on this issue and publish it in your school's English newspaper.

Analysis:

1. By analyzing the requirements of the topic, we can know that this writing task is the topic composition. The topic gives a social phenomenon, asks a question for students to think about this phenomenon, and then expresses their opinions. The hints it gives are relatively simple, and students should clearly show their views by analyzing the existence of this phenomenon. This composition requires students to give full play to their imagination and creativity, expand their own themes and organize the structure of the article, which can not only reflect students' active thinking, but also reflect their ability to use English flexibly.

2. For topic composition, examination is the key. The examination questions should be clear and accurate, that is, the context, person and tense of the examination. Be reader-conscious, read the article in the first person, find out who the speaker is and see the requirements of the topic clearly. This paper gives the theme: What should students learn in school? )。 This person can use the first and third person. When expressing your own views, you can put forward your own views first and then describe the reasons. Analyzing the topic, we can see that the topic mentions two aspects: learning book knowledge and learning how to be a man, and we can focus on these two aspects when expressing our views. Finally, summarize your point of view in one sentence.

First draft:

Some students do well in their studies, but they have many difficulties in communicating with others, including their classmates, teachers and even family members. The question is: What should students learn at school?

In my opinion, first of all, we should learn what we can from books, because I think it is very important. Secondly, it is necessary for middle school students to have some life experience, such as how to make friends or communicate with others. We should also learn some basic rules, such as respecting elders and helping people in need.

In a word, I think learning how to be a man is more important than just learning from books. Therefore, schools should pay more attention to the development of students' personality.

Teacher's comments:

1. This article is written in three paragraphs, with clear structure and clear logic, which shows that the author has a certain ability of material organization and logical thinking.

2. At the beginning, a phenomenon leads to a problem that needs to be discussed, which is to put forward an argument, which is more reasonable.

3. Problems in the article:

1) the second paragraph should be the discussion part, which is to answer the questions raised at the beginning. Through it, we should ... we should also ... readers feel that the author's point of view is that it is important to learn knowledge and learn to be a man. The third paragraph should be a summary paragraph, and we should reiterate our views. The second paragraph says that both are important, but the third paragraph concludes that I think learning how to be a man is more important than just learning from books, which is inconsistent.

2) The problem in the second paragraph is that the arguments given are insufficient and unconvincing. Let's look at the revised draft:

Manuscript:

Recently, it has been reported that some students with good academic performance find it difficult to communicate with their classmates, teachers and even family members. This raises a question: What should students learn at school?

In my opinion, learning from books is very important for middle school students, but it is equally important to learn how to be a good student with good moral character. Middle school students are in the process of growing up; Therefore, it is necessary for us to cultivate life skills and good character so that we can live a decent life. We should also learn some basic rules, including respecting elders and helping others. Without these good qualities, we can't live a good life in the future.

Generally speaking, I think learning how to be a good citizen is as important as learning from books. Now it is time for schools to pay more attention to the development of students' good character and make them grow into noble and qualified citizens.

Powerful sentences:

1. A good education is essential for people, so that they can live a better life.

2. Education is also very important for personal development. Of all the factors for the success of our future career, nothing is more important than education.

One of the important goals of school education is to teach students how to become students with good character.

Consolidation exercise:

According to a survey, some students think that they don't need to continue learning Chinese after they go to college. Please write an article on this issue, express your views and describe the importance of learning Chinese. You can refer to the following:

1. Language is not only a tool, but also an important part of culture;

2. Mastering the language can help you learn other knowledge better;

3. Language learning can improve people's thinking ability.

Word count: 150 or so.

Reference model for the 33rd consolidation exercise:

The importance of learning Chinese

According to a survey, some students don't think it necessary to study Chinese in university. But I think learning Chinese is an important part of learning, and we need it all our lives.

First of all, language is not only a tool for communication, but also an important part of culture. Learning Chinese is conducive to the spread and maintenance of our traditional language and culture. Second, language is a basic skill and all other subjects are related to it. For example, if you want to publish a physics paper but don't know how to express yourself, you might as well give up your idea. As a result, they will never be known by others and will never be useful to the world. More importantly, learning Chinese can improve our thinking ability. There are profound thoughts and wisdom in China's language, which will help us to correct our world view.

In a word, Chinese is very important to us. I don't think Chinese should disappear from college courses.