Autumn scenery's fourth grade composition 1 teaching objectives
1, write the characteristics of autumn in a certain order, and the content should be specific.
2. Attention should be paid to arousing students' thoughts and feelings of loving nature and fully mobilizing students' enthusiasm for writing.
3. Cultivate students' observation and imagination by guiding them to observe, feel and express.
Teaching focus
1, guide students to write this exercise, and be sure to highlight the characteristics of autumn.
2. The statement should be fluent and coherent.
Teaching difficulties
Make students learn to "convey the spirit with form", and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration to express the scenery as a living and emotional thing and write their own inner spirit.
teaching method
Observation method
teaching process
First, stimulate an interesting dialogue and introduce autumn:
Teacher: Students, the teacher said some words and poems. Students can guess which season it is: good years, you need to remember, the most are oranges, oranges, greens (the last half of the sentence indicates that the fruit is ripe), and moon cakes. Can you guess what season it is?
Health: Autumn.
Teacher: Good. Although the cool autumn has passed, it left a deep impression on us. Today, we follow the footsteps of autumn and start a composition about scenery.
Second, new funding.
1, the premise of writing autumn is to observe autumn carefully.
Teacher: We should choose a place we like as an observation point. The scenery of this place will have some obvious seasonal changes in autumn. What places did the students think of?
Health: Tianye Orchard Forest Park
Teacher: Well, these places will have different changes in autumn. The changes that have taken place need us to observe carefully and find its characteristics. How can we observe it to describe its characteristics?
Health: Look, listen, smell and touch.
Teacher: The students' answers are wonderful. The teacher writes on the blackboard (eyes-looking at the body-feeling cold hands-picking fruit mouth-tasting autumn (fruit) feet-stepping on fallen leaves ears-listening (fallen leaves, running water)). At the same time, we can also make a simple observation record, take photos or complete a sketch to find and record the footprints in autumn. When we approach autumn, we will definitely feel the coolness, colorful colors and harvest of autumn.
Master the method of describing autumn scenery.
(1) Learn to observe carefully, be good at discovering things that others have not discovered, and gradually develop the good habit of observing carefully.
The color of autumn-golden yellow
(2) When observing different scenery in a place, we should follow a certain order, such as top-down or bottom-up, from far and near or from near and far, from all around to the center or from the center to all around.
Look! How beautiful are the clusters of maple leaves! At the moment, I can't help but think of Li Bai's poem "Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are redder than the February flowers". Yes, maple leaves are like our palms and chicken feet. There are many pinion-like edges on the leaves, which makes the unique maple leaves more beautiful!
From a distance, those leaves are clusters, clusters, clusters, like intimate friends whispering. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay, yellow is like gold and green is like emerald. They compete with each other and shine in the sun.
(3) Highlight the characteristics of autumn scenery. For example, autumn leaves not only have different shapes, but also show various colors because of temperature changes; In autumn, the fruit of the branches ripens and changes in shape, color, smell and many other aspects.
Example: A Apple tree is covered with red-faced apples, pears in Huang Chengcheng bend the branches, and oranges are covered with green leaves, like small lanterns hanging on the tree.
B The yellow grapefruit hangs on the branch, and the heavy grapefruit bends the branch, just like a little classmate on a swing.
C all the leaves on the persimmon tree have fallen, but the red persimmon still hangs on the branches, like orange lanterns, bending the branches.
When I went to Qiu Lai in summer, the grapes were ripe, and a bunch of grapes hung in the cracks of the leaves. They are crystal clear, like carved with crystal and jade. They look like huge purple pearls. All these are water, which makes people water DC.
E the earth put on a golden sweater, and yellow poplar leaves and bright maple leaves fell down, as if several colorful butterflies were flying in the air.
(4) When describing the scenery, you should also write your own feelings and your own imagination.
In autumn night, the golden moon hangs on the starry sky like an endless sky lantern, sprinkling its bright and gentle Yin Hui on the earth, so that the vast night sky is stained with thick moonlight and the whole field appears more pure, quiet and serene.
The sentence with "-"is the author's feeling and imagination.
(5) Pay attention to the accumulation of good words and sentences describing autumn, and use them properly in your own practice, which can also add a lot of color to the article.
Appreciation of the first paragraph
Autumn is a colorful season, autumn is a beautiful season and autumn is a harvest season. In my mind, colorful autumn has already surpassed white winter, green spring and fiery summer! The hot summer passed and the cool autumn came. Do you know the colors of autumn? Please come with me to the stadium!
Appreciation of the ending paragraph
Autumn is a season that I miss. The fallen leaves in the yard and my thoughts piled up in a thick pile, but the full rice made the world in my heart happier. Autumn is a beautiful season, full of fairytale beauty, laughter of tourists and joy of harvest season, which constitutes an ideal picture. Autumn is not as beautiful and fragrant as spring; There are not so many small creatures singing in summer; Not as beautiful as winter. However, it is the most beautiful in my heart. I happily let out a cry: autumn is so beautiful, I love autumn! I ran, and Miss Qiu stroked my head, as if to say to me: You must learn enough knowledge every year and run in the ocean of knowledge.
Think back to where you observed autumn scenery and complete the table in activity 1.
According to the characteristics of autumn scenery, imagine what you think when you see a golden leaf falling with the wind, and what you think when you see the fruitful scene in the orchard in autumn.
Complete activity three.
blackboard-writing design
Observe autumn: eyes-look at the body-feel cold hands-pick fruit mouth-taste autumn (fruit) feet-step on fallen leaves ears-listen (fallen leaves, running water)
Autumn color-golden yellow representative-corn, grass and leaves
Looking for autumn: in the field orchard, forest park campus
Grasp the characteristics and highlight the specific image of rhetoric when describing.
Harvest Autumn: Express your true feelings and praise of love.
1, first of all, from the color of autumn, what is the main color of this season, and what representative things, such as corn, grass and leaves, have turned yellow.
Show pictures such as pear tree, apple tree, grape tree, persimmon tree, etc. Describe each picture in detail, which requires the guidance of the teacher, and observe from what aspects, such as size, color, shape and taste.
2. Then observe the pictures of crops in the field, such as rice, corn and sorghum. Teachers can guide students to describe pictures.
3. Finally, guide how autumn scenery makes you feel.
Third, summary: The main goal of this lesson is to let students master the characteristics of autumn writing in a certain order, and the content should be specific. Attention should be paid to stimulating students' thoughts and feelings of loving nature and fully mobilizing students' enthusiasm for writing.
Four, blackboard writing:
Autumn scenery
Color: golden corn and grass leaves
Orchard: fruity smell (smell)
Pears, apples, grapes and persimmons
Fields: sorghum, rice and corn
Feelings: quiet and beautiful harvest, joy and love.
It's autumn in autumn scenery. It's getting colder and colder, and the wind is getting stronger and stronger. People are wearing autumn clothes. In autumn, we can observe things that have changed.
Autumn is the harvest season. Once, my parents took me to pick persimmons, entered the persimmon garden and looked at a large persimmon tree in front of me. The green leaves are big and beautiful, and the slender veins and oval leaves look really beautiful! Although it is autumn, the leaves have not fallen a lot, and it is still a forest. Look at the persimmons hanging on the branches. They are red and round, just like the glowing little sun. How cute! My eyes are greedy, I really want to eat!
When I go to my grandmother's house, as long as it is autumn, I can always see a lot of peeled corn or corn kernels drying there from the roadside. Golden corn kernels bask there, looking from a distance, like sparkling gems. It's round and makes people feel cute.
Autumn has come and the trees have changed. Some leaves turn yellow, some leaves turn red and some stay green. Look, there is a maple tree, and its leaves are about to fall out. The breeze blows, and the maple leaves dance with the wind, just like a dancer dancing. Really beautiful!
In autumn, if you pay attention to observation, you will find more and know more about this beautiful season!
The scenery in autumn is colorful. In autumn, we will have: the dance of plants, the harvest of people ... Let's walk into autumn, feel its beauty and listen to its voice!
Look! The maple forest was covered with colorful carpets, and Miss Maple Leaf and Mr Maple Leaf both changed into red gauze skirts and apricot yellow dresses. At this time, they are no longer frolicking like before, quietly waiting for the arrival of Aunt Houqiu.
Miss Qiu came in a flowered skirt and brought some musicians-autumn wind and autumn rain. "Hoo, hoo." Accompanied by the sonata of autumn wind, autumn rain also played beautiful dance music: "Tick tock, tick tock."
Maple leaves dance, somersault for a while, turn around for a while, and fly around like butterflies for a while. How beautiful! "Let's be beautiful!" A proud maple leaf girl said to the rice field next to the maple forest.
Rice people envy maple leaves and put on golden dance skirts and dresses. "Come along!" "Rice said to sorghum, that's it, one is passed on to the other, and everyone dances together, like a colorful ocean.
"Swish, swish" huh? What's that noise? It is neither autumn nor autumn. Ah! It's the farmer's uncle. They are here, too. They played a harvest song, welcome Miss Qiu!
Autumn, a season with wonderful sounds.
Autumn scenery autumn, like a beautiful girl, comes to us gently. ...
In the field, a bunch of full ears of rice bent the stem. "Whoo-hoo-"Autumn wind blows, and golden rice shakes and shakes, just like a golden ocean rolling up waves. "Swish swish swish-"Every rice tree shook a string of small bells and played a symphony in late autumn. Looking carefully, the soybeans on the ridge are now bulging and swaying in the autumn wind, as if proudly saying, "Look, my stomach is so big!" " "
The osmanthus tree in the middle of the yard is in bloom! Small yellow osmanthus flowers cling to the trunk in clusters, emitting a strong fragrance. What a sweet osmanthus! The most interesting thing is that a gust of autumn wind blows, and the small osmanthus falls to the ground like golden snow particles, as if to cover the earth with a thin yellow floral skirt. Look at the maple trees by the wall. Its leaves are as red as fire. From a distance, it looks like a burning fire on the wall.
The orchard is very lively. It turns out that the fruits are holding a grand carnival dance! Mr. Li told a cross talk with his freckled cheek, which made everyone laugh: pomegranate sister grinned and showed rows of neat teeth; Navel orange brother happily exposed his navel; Not to mention Brother orange, he smiled and let go of his hands and fell from his mother's arms to the grass! Looking at Brother orange lying on the ground, everyone laughed into a ball and the laughter spread throughout the orchard.
Autumn is a season of harvest, beauty and joy.
Autumn scenery Grade Four Composition 5 Autumn is beautiful, brilliant and colorful. Let's go to nature and see what color autumn is.
Autumn is red. The red maple leaves are like the palms of our hands, and more like the mountain peaks where small fans are given to people. Strings of red flowers and bones are strung together by flower stems, like strings of sweet candied haws, and like strings of firecrackers we set off in the New Year. In the orchard, red persimmons are covered with branches. Like a red lantern, the branches are bent. They squeezed and touched one by one, and let the farmer's uncle choose! In the field, sorghum is like a drunken red-faced man, from face to neck.
Autumn is yellow. Gu Nian painted the green leaves golden with her magical brush. As soon as the naughty doll blows, the leaves fall from the tree and dance like a yellow butterfly, which is very beautiful. The rice is ripe, too Seen from a distance, it looks like a golden ocean. When the wind blows, rice is like a golden rice wave. In order to thank the farmers' uncles for their cultivation and care, they bowed respectfully to thank them.
Autumn is white. The white clouds in the sky make us drool just like the marshmallows we usually eat. The white clouds in the sky became strange and changeable, and then turned into a few lovely little sheep grazing on the grass. As soon as the wind blows, another fierce big German shepherd comes, and then a big lion comes. As soon as the wind blows, they disappear again. The cotton on the ground is like a snowball, just like covering them with a continuous snow quilt.
The colors of autumn are colorful and beautiful! No wonder Liu Yuxi, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty, said, "Autumn has been sad and lonely since ancient times. I said autumn wins spring tide! "
Autumn scenery Grade 4 Composition 6 Autumn is coming, and the sky is getting colder and colder. Autumn morning, milky fog, all kinds of things are bathed in the morning fog, hazy.
I opened my sleepy eyes and got up from the warm bed. I quickly put on my clothes and put on my schoolbag to go to school. There are rows of trees on the roadside, green and yellow leaves swaying gently, and occasionally a few butterfly-like leaves flying in the air, so light and elegant. Autumn wind stings your face like a sharp needle, which is painful and icy. After a while, my face turned into a ripe apple.
Walking through a stream, the stream flows slowly, and the murmuring stream makes people feel cool and comfortable. The water is shining with dazzling white spots, like stars at night. There are ripples on the water, and then they disappear quietly. The quiet stream looks so elegant and beautiful in the early morning, just like a quiet and gentle little girl. The pleasant autumn scenery makes us have infinite feelings and infinite reverie!
Students, which season do you like best among the four seasons of the year? I like autumn best. The scenery in autumn is really beautiful.
In autumn, the trees are covered with different colors, and the farmland is like a golden carpet. The autumn wind blows, and the golden wheat fields are undulating like a golden ocean. Chrysanthemums on both sides of the road are in full bloom, purple, pink and white ... Pick one, smell the refreshing flowers and look at the beautiful flowers. I love this beautiful autumn more!
Autumn is still the harvest season. The orchard is full of sweet and delicious fruits, such as oranges like lanterns, persimmons from Huang Chengcheng and my favorite pears. It's really crispy and delicious. The farmer's uncle is full of smiles, harvesting ripe fruits, and there are laughter everywhere! Autumn is really like a beautiful Chinese painting.
Students, do you like this beautiful autumn? Come on! Let's embrace this colorful autumn, this harvest season!
Autumn scenery Autumn is my favorite season. I can eat all kinds of fruits I like, such as apples, oranges, oranges, seedless raisins … I can also see many beautiful scenery.
One day, my mother and father took me to Fuzhou Agricultural University to see a piece of small ginkgo forest in the back. As soon as I came to that small forest, I felt strongly that autumn was coming! I found that the leaves of ginkgo trees are golden yellow, like handfuls of small fans. Small fans are flying in the air, like butterflies. The ground is covered with golden leaves, just like a golden carpet. It will click when you step on it, which sounds very comfortable!
In the afternoon, my mother and father took me to visit Jiangxin Park. I found thousands of small crabs on the shore, and now they are all gone. I think it's because it's cold in autumn, so everyone is hiding!
Later, we went to the orchard and looked down from the mountain. Wow! Most of the leaves in the whole orchard are golden yellow, and the apple trees are all red apples, just like small red lanterns; Oranges in Huang Chengcheng are like small light bulbs hanging from branches, which seem to fall to the ground as soon as the wind blows.
Then, we came to the field. The golden rice in the field is bending down and bowing to us; Wheat seems to smile and nod to us; Cotton spits out snow-white cotton, and farmers' uncles and aunts are busy harvesting grain.
Autumn is really good, with my favorite fruits, my favorite scenery and my favorite rice.
I like the scenery in autumn!