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Through this study, I received a profound education. Modify sick sentences.
Revised as: Through this report, I received a profound education.

Reason: lack of theme

On the premise of not changing the meaning of the original sentence, the words with obvious language defects are modified to make the sentence smooth, correct and more perfect. The content to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including subject, predicate, object, attribute, adverbial and complement.

Extended data:

Incomplete composition includes incomplete subject; Predicate is incomplete; An incomplete object; Incomplete modifier; Incomplete speech.

For example:

1. The business sector actively responded to the government's call to publicize and educate the masses in a big way and the importance of promoting products. (The word "clarification" should be added before "sale". )

After a semester's study, the students in our school have deeply discussed that the meaning of life lies in dedication and great changes have taken place in our school. (The word "make" should be added before the second word "school". )