Part I: Integrity and credibility, a perfect combination of pearls and pearls.

Bottom line: Zeliang Runshuo has beautiful mountains and rivers.

Horizontal batch: Xinze Pearl Embroidery

Your friend's masterpiece has a beautiful artistic conception. But as a real couplet, there is still a considerable gap.

The following are the six stages of couplets provided by Baidu for your reference.

The basic meter of couplets can be summarized into six elements, namely, word equivalence, content correlation, part-of-speech equivalence, structural proportionality, rhythm correspondence, balance and harmony. These six elements can be understood from three aspects: foundation, grammar and temperament.

The six elements of couplets here are the six phases of couplets. Need a lot of elaboration. Comparing the six issues, we can see that there are some gaps in the parts of speech, structure and harmony of your friends' masterpieces. In addition, according to the basic rules of couplets, the feet of the bottom couplet should be flat. This was originally a Millennium iron law, but it seems to be broken by modern people who are used to innovation. Couplets are concise and concise, and they also pay attention to avoiding crimes. It is usually required that horizontal comments and couplets should not be reread; Moreover, it is best to have a flat sound at the end of the word, so as to complete the meaning of flying. When enterprises come to the door, there is usually no horizontal approval.

Because you want to hide the embroidered words, it is difficult to form a perfect couplet. In my humble opinion, it may be harmless to use it in factories, but it may lead to some arguments when it is used in crowded places.

Four-character inscribed couplets can usually take the form of double gouge, which is adopted by your friends. Because embroidery is silent, it seems that it is better to use a thick platform grid. Broken brocade lattice (that is, broken flow lattice) is also possible, but many people don't know these embedding methods now. The heavy platform case is embedded with "Xin Ze" and "Zhu Xiu" respectively in the first two words of the upper and lower couplet.

According to this rhyme, my humble work is as follows for your reference.

Heavy platform grid

Part I: Shinzawa Changsheng is famous all over the world.

Bottom line: Pearl embroidery is full of honor.

Horizontal approval: great achievements.

Double gouging (non-compliance)

The first part: Julian, the wonderful hand of Xincheng Yulong

The second part: Hui Ze Runde carefully painted embroidery.

Horizontal criticism: wonderful workmanship