800 words of college entrance examination composition: educational background gap
It is every parent's expectation of their children, and every family treats their children differently. Some let nature take its course and let children play freely; Some are eager for success and have strict requirements for children's learning.
Xiao Ming and Xiao Wang are deskmates, and their parents treat their studies differently. Xiao Ming's grades are excellent, and his parents hope that he can have a good future, so he has strict requirements for his study since he was a child and can't make any mistakes. Xiao Wang's grades are not very good. Although his parents were disappointed, they always encouraged him to study. In an exam, Xiaoming got full marks, and his parents were very happy. They kissed Xiaoming and asked him to get full marks in the next exam. Xiao Wang failed the exam, and his parents were very angry. They slapped Wang and told him to do better in the exam next time. When Xiao Ming didn't get full marks in the next exam, his parents slapped him, but this time Xiao Wang's score improved a little, and his parents bit him hard!
The different ways in which the two parents treat their children's grades can show the different performances of contemporary education. As the saying goes, "the golden rule makes a good man", this idea is not entirely correct. Parents are too strict with their children's learning requirements, which will eventually backfire and only make them tired of learning. If parents show more concern, encouragement and greetings to their children's studies, it will also be a good comfort to their children's heavy studies. After all, every parent came from an early age and had the same feeling! This cartoon first points to family education, that is, love and punishment and their functions. In my opinion, both slaps are wrong and both kisses are right. After careful analysis, a kiss with a score of 100 is earned by a high score, which is love, but the content of love is relatively simple, so 98 will be slapped; A slap of 55 points is wrong, and parents are rude, but a kiss of 6 1 point is particularly warm, with rich contents of love, affection, encouragement, tolerance and waiting. Judging from the effect, children who have been slapped with 98 points may be afraid from now on, their learning mentality will be greatly damaged, they will enter a relatively mechanical and rigid learning state, and their creative spirit will even be suppressed. It is possible that the next exam will become 90 points or even lower. The kiss of 6 1 minute may become a kind of motivation, thus forming a positive spirit. Children's psychology will be in a relatively relaxed and free state of health, which may have a good development in the future. It is almost certain that the score will be higher in the next exam.
Although this cartoon seems to be mainly talking to parents, it is actually talking about education in China. An important drawback of China's education is the theory of scores, and scores determine everything. Kissing and slapping in cartoons are also the result of fractional determinism. The negative consequences of fractional determinism in educational development and talent selection are increasingly apparent, which deserves the reflection of the whole society.
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College entrance examination full score composition 800 words: ruler
From 100 to 98, beaten; 55 to 6 1, kiss. This seemingly absurd story often happens around us. Many people think that it is natural for the former to regress and be beaten, while the latter to progress and be close to relatives.
We often say that we need a ruler to measure it to the end. In real life, it should be said that the ruler is the fairest, but if you hold it in different hands and measure different people, different results will appear. We are used to my mother's busyness in the kitchen, and we can always eat delicious meals on time for three meals a day. But one day, when we came home and faced the cold stove in the dry pot, the first thing that came to mind was that there was no food to eat. When we are depressed, we look sad and even blame, completely ignoring that she is tired and sick, unable to hold on, and even has no strength to boil water. And our father occasionally cooks a bowl of noodles in the kitchen, but it can make the family feel extremely satisfied. Inertia makes our ruler flexible, but it can't measure the depth of love.
Every unit is mixed with good and bad, some are doing things, some are making trouble, and there are always some bald men and monks mixed together to make up the numbers. Strangely, what you do is always doing, and what you see is always watching. The more you do, the more mistakes you make and the more criticism you get. Those spectators, who occasionally steal a chance to make a show, will gain fame and fortune. Even the troublemaker becomes smart, which will make the leader and a seat happy and satisfied. Inertia makes our ruler deviate, and we can no longer unite everyone's strength.
Do you remember the eldest sister-in-law who gave up porridge in Beizhen? Every winter, she gets up in the middle of the night, cooks three pots of hot porridge, and gives them to cleaners, poor people and beggars who cringe in the cold wind for free. For several years, she has never stopped. And one day, when an old man ate a grain of sand inside, he immediately poured a bowl of hot porridge on his sister-in-law, and the people who took porridge were instantly divided into two camps: some people said that the old man should not run wild, and some people accused her of not mixing sand. Cheap feelings distort our ruler and make many kind hearts cold.
In Kaixian, a CMB bus full of 19 passengers suddenly fell into a pond five meters deep. Jin Youshu, a local villager, jumped into the icy water, smashed the window and rescued all 19 passengers. However, he suffered from lung disease due to long-term cold water immersion and was in debt for several months. He had no choice but to leave the hospital and die at home. 19 None of the survivors visited the hospital, let alone sent him. Jin Youshu wrote a letter before he died. The first sentence is: "I saved 19 lives. Who will save my life now? " Indifference makes our ruler break, leaving endless regrets.
Everyone has a ruler in his heart. We use it to measure others, and we should always measure ourselves. This world should have such a ruler, full of warmth in emotion, fair in reason, just in law and always shining with the brilliance of human nature. As long as we insist on starting from me, starting from bit by bit, being strict with ourselves, being lenient with others, a single spark will surely start a prairie fire, and the world will eventually be full of sunshine and love.
800 words: a fairyland of the soul.
Mom:
I miss you so much that I finally met you yesterday, and I saw your face full of relief and slight fatigue. I am very distressed and grateful to you. I know that you came back to Hunan from Tibet just to take the exam and cheer for me in person. I can imagine you bumping on the Qinghai-Tibet Railway all night, wearing clothes that are incompatible with others on the train, and looking forward to my eyes eagerly. I know who is your heart and who can be your scenery! Mom, you know what? The moment I met you, all my previous complaints about you vanished.
Mom, to be honest, I hate you. You are a glorious people's teacher, but you make me miss three years of maternal love. Three years ago, I successfully entered high school, but you chose to teach in Tibet at such an important moment. You stayed for three years in such an environment.
Before you left, you said that you would only fight me for three years. I realize my dream, and you dedicate your career. I asked you to stay, crying and saying, "Mom, it's so bitter and tired there that you can't take a bath for several days." Don't go, will you stay with me? "Your hazy eyes are full of painful choices, and you held me for a long time without saying a word.
You have been to Tibet once before. The sacred Potala Palace makes you linger, while the legendary Lake Cuo in Lamla makes you linger. But I know that the children there are the ones you can't let go of. You carefully take out their photos. Thin children under the blue sky and white clouds are trying to smile at you with their typical plateau red faces. I know, it is these smiles that make you miss day and night.
It is this yearning that makes you sign up to teach in Tibet regardless of obstacles. You said that my study environment is good, and those poor children also need an equal opportunity to change their destiny.
I won't keep you any longer. You leave with a thick suitcase and go to the fairyland in your mind. What you told me before you left was the initial refueling. You only hope that I can find my own fairyland in three years' study. Looking at your smile, I am thoughtful.
The network is blocked and the traffic is inconvenient. I only got a few calls from you within a year. You said, "Without water, it is really difficult to have frequent power cuts. But I am calm and comfortable. " Yes! You let the children in Tibetan areas share my simplest and truest maternal love: you taught them to read, accompanied them to grow up, guided them to be human beings, and gave them the opportunity to change their destiny, thus realizing your career dream. I know your peace and happiness. I also realized the spiritual wonderland that you and I worked together.
Mom, I saw you yesterday. You took out the praying doll sewn for me by Tibetan children. They asked you to tell me, thanking my sister for giving them a good mother and wishing me success in the exam. It also has crooked Tibetan "I love you". Looking at the apologetic but happy faces of the praying dolls and their mothers, I once burst into tears.
Mom, today, I was thinking and writing my life answer sheet in the examination room of the college entrance examination. I will move forward calmly with such love and hope that you have given Tibetan children. I will learn from my mother your persistence in faith, and your willingness to contribute to and repay the society. I will learn from my mother your devotion to my career and create a landscape that truly belongs to me.
I admire your daughter the most.