Modification symbol of sick sentences 1
1. Delete symbol: used to delete words, punctuation marks, words, phrases and long sentences or paragraphs.
2. Recovery number: also called reserved number, used to recover deleted words or symbols. If more than one word is recovered, it is best to mark the recovery number under each word to be recovered.
3. For key signature: used to change the position of adjacent words, phrases or phrases.
4. Correct numbers: correct wrong words or symbols to be correct.
5. Add Numbers: Add new words or symbols between words or sentences and paragraphs.
6. Point: It is dedicated to praising well-written words and sentences.
7. Prompt number: used for problematic words, phrases, sentences and paragraphs to prompt the author to analyze the mistakes and correct them by himself.
8. Assignment number: used for long-distance transmission of words, punctuation marks, words, sentences and paragraphs.
9. Paragraph numbering: divide a paragraph into two paragraphs to represent another paragraph.
10. Parallel paragraph number: the next paragraph is connected with the previous paragraph, indicating that it should not be segmented.
1 1. Indented number: the text at the top of a line is indented by two spaces to indicate a new paragraph, and the text is delayed and moved back.
12. Forward number: the text moves forward or the top space.
Modifier symbol 2 of sick sentences
1. Among the following sentences, the sentence with bad language is (modify the sentence with bad language, which means to modify the sentence with bad language so that it does not change its original intention and the sentence is more fluent. What are the causes of sick sentences? The following is the reason why I said the wrong sentence. Welcome to reading.
What are the causes of sick sentences 1
First of all, inconsistency
The sun didn't show up all day this Sunday morning. (deleted in the morning)
Second, improper use of words.
With the help of my classmates, I improved my mistakes and improved my academic performance.
Third, the lack of ingredients.
I heard that there would be an essay contest, and (everyone) signed up one after another.
We should form the habit of loving cleanliness and stressing hygiene from an early age.
Fourth, repetition.
I corrected all the incorrect typos in my exercise book. (There are typos, and the incorrect ones are deleted. )
Five, improper word order
At the class meeting, the students discussed and listened to the monitor's speech. (Listen and discuss)
6. inappropriate related words
In spite of the bad weather, we always get to school on time.
Seven, the concept is unclear
There are many toys in the children's shop, including cars, dolls, doll pictorial and so on. (Doll Pictorial is not a toy and should be deleted)
What are the causes of sick sentences?
1. The official salary of foreign experts should generally be higher or maintained during the probation period, but not lower than the probation period. (It has been defined as "above or maintained", and "below" is explicitly excluded, and then "below probation salary" is repeated and should be deleted)
2. Five-star winery decided to punish Chen Xinyao and others for staying in the factory for two years. During the period of punishment, living expenses will be paid every month, and no bonus will be paid. (In front of the second sentence, it has been stated that "only living expenses are paid" and bonuses are excluded. Let's talk about "free bonuses" again. Duplicates should be deleted. )
3. Xuelian brand shirts, regardless of style or quality. Still packaging, it can be called first-class in the country. ("Kan" originally means "can", so "can" should be used in front of it, which is repetitive and should be removed. )
Judging from his weak breathing, he is not dead, and he still has a breath. It has been said that "weak" and "not dead" are already included.
The reason why I didn't do well in this exam is because I didn't carefully examine the questions according to the teacher's requirements. (The redundant subject "reason" is repeated with the following "because", and the "reason" or "because" is removed)
6. Lao She's writing style has always shared weal and woe with the people. ("Style" should be removed)
7. The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class. (The predicate "continue" is redundant and should be deleted)
Ten players on the basketball court are playing fiercely. ("Dozen" is redundant and should be deleted)
9. Balzac, a famous French novelist, devoted his life to the compilation of Human Tragedy. (The object "redundancy" is redundant and should be deleted)
10. Today, I came to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited the Baita, Diaoyutai and Wu Ting Bridge. ("place" is redundant and should be deleted)
1 1. There are fertile land, rich mineral deposits and mountain villages full of countless treasures. (The word "various" with redundant additional parts is redundant and should be deleted.)
12, before the start of school, we had a military training, and the coach in charge of military training was the company's beard and small eyes. ("Responsible for military training" is redundant and should be deleted)
13, judgment is a form of thinking that affirms or denies whether something has a certain nature. ("Whether" is redundant and should be deleted)
14, fruits are everywhere: pears, apples, persimmons &; Hellip & hellip ("Everywhere" and "everywhere" are repetitive, so it is better to delete "everywhere" because "everywhere" has more emphasis. )
15, in order to simplify the number of words, we have to delete some slightly. ("Yes" is the same as the previous "slightly supplemented", but it can be deleted))
"Harmonious society", a word full of China's wisdom, describes the ideal state of international relations and is being understood and recognized by more and more countries.
B in B.2020, Jiangsu will take the lead in basically realizing modernization in China, and its consideration factors include 30 items in four categories: economic development, people's life, social development and ecological environment.
C. Chinese and western comparative poetics belongs to a branch of comparative literature. It focuses on the comparative analysis of Chinese and western literary theories, from which we can find the common laws and unique characteristics between them.
D. In recent years, David's New Year's Eve concerts have caused audience aesthetic fatigue due to serious follow-up, lack of creativity and no characteristics.
Analysis: item d, the sentence is mixed and should be changed to "because &; Hellip& amphellip has no characteristics "or" following the trend is very serious &; The result of hellip& amphellip. China Education Network
Answer: d
2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A People are generally worried that the emergence of human cloning will fundamentally change the sexual reproduction mode of human beings for millions of years sooner or later, and make human beings face great challenges in ethics, morality and law.
B. Many people also find hukou in big cities such as Beijing and Shanghai so attractive, mainly because these big cities have high welfare guarantees such as medical care, education, employment opportunities and old-age care, which is the reason for the temptation.
C. In today's society, the phenomenon of making and selling fake goods has been repeatedly banned and intensified. The fundamental reason is driven by huge economic interests, which should arouse our reflection.
D in winter, some students are often late, on the pretext of heavy traffic and long waiting time for the bus.
Analysis: the structure of item B is chaotic, "because &; Hellip& amphellip became the cause of temptation. The structure of item C is chaotic. " The reason is&; Hellip & hellip and "& hellip& amphellip" are mixed, and one of them can be deleted. Item D has a confusing structure, so delete "Taking the&"or change it to "taking & hellip& amphellip name".
A: A.
3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad and has a clear meaning is ().
A. I suggest that the teacher's suggestion be carefully studied, which is good for both the school and the teacher.
B: I remember when I first met her, I was an eight-year-old child, so innocent and unrestrained.
C. Around mid-April, US President Barack Obama published the Nuclear Situation Assessment Report, which expounded the future nuclear strategy of the United States and promised not to use nuclear weapons against non-nuclear countries, except North Korea and Iran.
D. The dispatched offices of the Supervision Department of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection should take strengthening supervision as their first duty, effectively strengthen supervision over leading cadres, and prevent power from being out of control, decision-making mistakes and misconduct.
Analysis: A. Ambiguity. It can be understood as "suggestions made by teachers" and "suggestions for teachers". B. the references are unknown. Who is an "eight-or nine-year-old child"? Is it "me" or "her"? You can add "I" or "she" before "or" to clear up the ambiguity. C. the meaning is not clear. Delete the word "before and after".
Answer: d
4. In the following sentences, the one with clear meaning and no language defect is ().
A. The EU ambassador stayed up all night after meeting with Long Yongtu that day; I went to the University of Economics and Business to give a report the next day, so my blood pressure rose very high.
B the complete success of the first manned space flight has greatly stimulated and enhanced the enthusiasm and confidence of the Chinese nation to create a bright future and achieve great rejuvenation, and will surely drive and promote the vigorous development of various undertakings in Socialism with Chinese characteristics.
C A couple came to the donation center on their wedding anniversary, and one person donated 1 0,000 yuan.
D. Throughout the ages, bamboo has attracted countless painters. Bamboo painting is a bright pearl in the Chinese painting garden, symbolizing the firm and tenacious integrity of the Chinese nation.
Analysis: A. Ambiguity. "He" can refer to both the Ambassador of the European Union and the Ambassador of Long Yongtu. C. there is ambiguity. There are two understandings of "one person": one person in a couple or everyone in a couple? D. the reference is unknown. "It" can refer to both bamboo and bamboo painting.
Answer: b
5. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. After the earthquake, while a large number of soldiers went to rescue, many professional psychological rescuers also went to the disaster area to help the victims recover from the psychological trauma caused by the earthquake.
B Xu Shen, the author of Shuo Wen Jie Zi, classifies Chinese characters by radicals, which is a great pioneering work in the field of philology. Its achievements are unprecedented, and future generations are far behind.
C. With the rapid development of economy and culture today, more and more people realize the importance of mental health, and people hope to have a healthy spirit and good body.
D. An article in the American magazine Prevention pointed out that it is good for the elderly aged 70-80 to spend more than 1 hour every day on shopping, cooking and housework.
Analysis: a. illogical. Will "restore &; Hellip& amphellip changed "creation" to "cure and treatment"; & amphellip creation. "B. There is a contradiction between" there will be no descendants "and" there will be many descendants (meaning there are still people) ". "D. illogical." Doing housework cannot be juxtaposed with buying food and cooking.
Answer: c