Of the 50 marks for writing a composition for the college entrance examination 1 Chinese for the college entrance examination 150, 70 marks are composition marks, accounting for almost half of the Chinese marks, which should be valued by students, but the phenomenon of losing marks in composition is very common. At present, the average score of Chinese in the city is about 100.4. Even the students in key middle schools are far from English in mathematics, physics and chemistry, mainly because they lose more points in their compositions.
According to the composition analysis of the college entrance examination in recent years, the key to poor composition lies in the following points:
First, I don't understand the proposition orientation of college entrance examination composition.
The current college entrance examination composition questions guide students to pay attention to the future and destiny of life, society, motherland and mankind. 1996 The topic of the college entrance examination composition is My Wealth, which is completely personal, but it completely deviated from this pattern from 1997.
1997 college entrance examination composition topic is "I see extracurricular reading", which is a hot issue involving students; 1998 is an article about the Japanese film "The Moment of Self-esteem and Destiny" which denies aggression and beautifies war criminals. This is a hot issue in some parts of the world that Asian people care about. The title of 1999 is Enlightenment of Echo. Write an analogy article through the dialogue between a child and a hill. The year of 20xx is a topic about the World Expo, and it is a topic of concern to all mankind. The year of 20xx is a reflection on cultural heritage and a topic of concern to all China people. Facing the sea in 20xx, thinking about the problems of life; Miscellaneous in 20xx covers common phenomena in nature and human life, which is a philosophical proposition.
It can be seen that the current college entrance examination composition proposition has completely deviated from the scope of expressing personal feelings and telling private things. Under the current requirements of quality education, students need to jump out of their own small circle and embrace the people of the motherland. Some students don't understand the change of composition orientation in college entrance examination. They can write their personal feelings very delicately and vividly, but they can't do anything about the topic of atmosphere. Some school teachers ask students to write compositions, but these compositions still do not jump out of the box of personal feelings, nor are they hot topics in society now. They can't put forward their personal feelings and opinions and write their own opinions.
How to write an excellent composition
■ Candidates should pay attention to life, society, the motherland and the future and destiny of mankind. If they just turn a deaf ear to the things outside the window, are indifferent to current affairs and just live in their own small circle, then they will certainly fail to meet the requirements of the college entrance examination composition.
■ Today's college entrance examination questions are all about writing articles about the atmosphere, which is not petty, but students will not write articles about social phenomena at a high level, and they will often contact themselves when writing about social phenomena.
Of course, atmospheric articles are not full of empty words or high-profile rhetoric. The so-called atmosphere article is to think in the social background and write in combination with the problems in the process of social development. This is the real atmosphere.
■ In recent years, argumentative essays are the main types of college entrance examination compositions. 20xx faces the sea. Although the style is not limited, it is most suitable for students to write argumentative essays. Some students think that writing an argumentative essay is an argument+argument+conclusion, but it is actually a fake in an argumentative essay. Such an argumentative essay lacks a sense of hierarchy. The value of argumentative writing lies in solving some ideological and cognitive problems of people. Pay attention to whether the opinions put forward are insightful. Worth readers' thinking? Are the cited arguments familiar to everyone?
■ I noticed the diversity of problems.
● Material composition. 1998' s composition topic is a very long material, which may have many angles, so students are required to extract an angle by themselves and then write the article according to this angle.
● Topic composition. 20xx, 20xx and 20xx are topic compositions for three years, and this year's spring exam is also a topic composition, with the most times.
Common ground: both the title and the attached materials limit the content of the composition; Difference: the composition of the material must buckle the material, run within the given range of the material, and throw it away after you can't extract the idea; After cutting into the topic and limiting the content of the article, you can throw away the attached materials. )
● Metaphor and analogy constitute. As long as you understand the requirements of analogy composition, it is easy to write. The most important thing is not to stick to the literal title, but to consider which phenomena are consistent with the title.
● Refute the paper. 1998' s essay topic is rebuttal, but many candidates' articles are soft and lack the strength to refute.
● Propositional composition. 20xx facing the sea is a propositional composition without any materials.
Second, the inspection is not careful enough.
The composition of the college entrance examination is limited, so the examination of the questions can never be ignored. The inspection mainly focuses on the following aspects:
(1) style. When you encounter questions that don't require style, write in your own style, and don't risk writing in a style that you are not good at.
The content of the article is the content of the article. For example, what exactly is the "cultural heritage" of 20xx? It's not a cultural heritage handed down from home.
(3) The focus of the article. The focus of the article is the pertinence, writing intention and value of the article, and people should think of what they can't think of. If you write My Ideal, and then mention Premier Zhou, Zhang Haidi, Chen Jingrun and so on, say that your ideal is just like them, too conventional, and it is difficult to get high marks.
Third, the writing angle is not good.
Generally, the college entrance examination composition will provide several angles for candidates to cut in, and candidates should choose a good angle to enter. For example, last year's Miscellaneous Notes asked students to write from their own perspective, but some students covered everything and wrote a hodgepodge of articles, without choosing the right angle or choosing the right angle.
A good angle should include the following points:
■ The angle should be small and specific;
■ The angle should be innovative, not platitudes;
■ I have something to say, and it is meaningful to say it.
Small composition: focus on expression. The last essay test for the college entrance examination is at 1999. This year's college entrance examination is likely to take another short composition, which will be to write a scene, a thing, rewrite an article, explain a thing and so on.
For small compositions, students should pay more attention to the examination of questions. 1995 asks to introduce a small shop. In this requirement, you can first confirm that the style is explanatory and the writing object is a small shop. Some students blindly write small shops, ignoring the "introduction" required by the topic. They should introduce the characteristics of the store, not just write "small". In addition, due to the short article, special attention should be paid to not having typos and sentences.
Finally, we should pay attention to the correctness and neatness of the composition. Don't write cursive, you won't get high marks.
Writing college entrance examination composition 2 Haier's enlightenment
In the eyes of many people in China, Haier, a successful enterprise, is already very powerful and remarkable. However, what about a Huan? Basket 6? Do you want to carry this burden? Hey? Hey, did you get to school? 6 "sense of hardship" is the strongest. Zhang Ruimin, CEO of Haier Group, often said, "You are walking on thin ice." The average annual growth rate 16 reaches 8 1. 6%, the annual sales revenue has exceeded 40 billion yuan, not only at home, but also abroad, enterprises can have such awareness, which deserves our deep thought. According to Zhang Ruimin, their strategy of marching into China is simple: winner takes all. Their goal is not to leave you any market or territory. Needless to say, many of our enterprises, not to mention small and weak enterprises, are outstanding people like Haier. Compared with the world's top 500 companies, there is still a gap, and we dare not relax and slack off. Realistically face up to the seriousness of the challenge, fully estimate the strength and difficulties of competitors, think about the worst and work hard for the best, and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Great China boy.
A woman from a certain country came to a primary school in China, found five children and asked them to cooperate in one thing. The lady took out a bottle with five balls in it, and each ball was held by a rope. The lady said to the five children, "Each of you must pull a small ball out of the bottle within 7 seconds, or you will be drowned by the water in the bottle." Remember, there is only room for a small ball here. Whoever throws the ball slowly is in danger of drowning. "The eldest of the five children thought for a moment, then whispered a few words to the other four children, and then gestured to the woman to swear that she had received the following orders. The lady said, "Go! "I saw the youngest child pull the ball out first, then the second, third and fourth balls, and finally the oldest child pulled it out. All five balls were pulled out in 7 seconds. The lady was stunned by the behavior of China's children, and then shed tears of excitement. She said: "I have done this experiment several times in other countries, and all the children are struggling to pull it out." As a result, no one could get out and drowned in it. China's children are amazing! "
Friendship and cooperation
Hilton Group enjoys a high reputation in the hotel industry in the world today, with more than 200 towering and spectacular high-rise buildings around the world. Hilton Group can be in an invincible position in the fierce competition. The most commendable reason is that the Hilton Group is United from top to bottom. Donald Hilton once said, "I may be the luckiest person in Texas. This blessing comes from friendship and like-minded partners. I hope my life will last forever.
housewife
Chen Chong, a film actress, described her life like this: "Everything in life is trivial. In fact, I am a housewife in my life. I have a husband and two children ... I may have been very concerned about my career when I was young, but I am really calm now. What I care about most now is the people around me. As long as they live well and still love me, I will be happy. "
Zhao Benshan played eight roles.
In his very dramatic life, Zhao Benshan also played many roles, such as chairman, deputy to the National People's Congress, husband, father and friend. In the recording scene of Art Life, Zhao Benshan won eight roles in his life. Film and television actors: 70 points; Essay star: 80 points; Director and producer: 70 points; Deputies to the National People's Congress: 80 points; Chairman: 50 points; Father and husband: 10; Friend: 80 points
Write a composition for the college entrance examination 3 1. "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, you can see Nanshan leisurely." Who among China literati can be so pure, leaving only chrysanthemums in Nanshan? Tao Yuanming chose the road of seclusion. This road is chic and clear. However, what did Tao Qian do besides drinking and picking chrysanthemums? This may even be something he can't answer. The road of seclusion has been chosen by countless literati in China, but as Mr. Yu said: "The morality of self-improvement leads to the overall immorality." Perhaps the chance of history contributed to a literary monument. But if the road of history is extended forward, can thousands of Tao Yuanming come out?
2. Tao Yuanming, an idyllic poet in Jin Dynasty, is also keen on officialdom and wants to show his ambition in his career. However, when he made the Pengze county magistrate and learned about the darkness of officialdom, he resolutely resigned and retired. "Birds are tired of the ancient forest, and the fish in the pond miss the ancient garden." He still likes the life of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely". From then on, he plowed and stayed away from the world. He found his place and realized his life value.
3. Tao Qian picked chrysanthemums leisurely under the East Mansion, accompanied by dancing butterflies in "Saint Zhuangzi daydreaming, Butterfly Bewitched". Facing Nanshan, Yuan Ming chose to forget the ugliness of officialdom and all the unhappiness he encountered. This is the choice of the soul, the wise choice made by people crossing the river on both sides of the strait, and the wise "ferry".
4. He is a hermit who "picks chrysanthemums under the east fence and sees Nanshan leisurely", an elegant person who "knows the fun of playing the piano, why bother playing the strings" and a farmer who "hoes Dai Yue", right! It's him, Tao Yuanming, who is famous in the literary world for a hundred years. He doesn't want to "bend down and pick up five buckets of rice" and hang it in the countryside. He forgot the frustration of officialdom and the lack of official career, but remembered the wishes of the world and wrote down the sacred place in his heart-Peach Blossom Garden.
5. Stay away from the world, live in seclusion in the countryside and watch the flowers bloom and fall. Tao Yuanming's life is quiet and free, like white clouds in the blue sky and fish scales in the sea. Because of chrysanthemum, his desire for freedom has been bound by the cage of officialdom for too long. No sustenance at all? Choose chrysanthemums! Fresh and elegant, otherwise it's just like his unruly personality. It was Tao Shi who pinned his heart on the chrysanthemum and found the pure land of his own soul. It was also Tao Shi who made the chrysanthemum wear a high-quality and uncontroversial hat.
6. Clusters of fragrant chrysanthemums are quietly placed in the yard, beautiful butterflies are dancing among the flowers, and the clear spring of the mountain stream has been flowing through the door. In the morning, the fog gradually dispersed. In the dim sunshine, an old man walked into the yard with a hoe and a bamboo basket. "The weather is getting better every day, and the birds are back." He sang a poem and walked leisurely into the yard. He is Tao Yuanming.
7. The faint fragrant chrysanthemum is his companion, working in the field and self-sufficient.
In my spare time, I will brew a cup of clear spring chrysanthemum tea and savor it. When the farm is busy, I will sleep with chrysanthemum and enjoy it together. Tao Yuanming does live a comfortable life, full of unique leisure and broad-mindedness!
8. Carrying the shadow of too many years really made him tired. Indulging in the past will also make him lose his present and future, so he chose to leave. In the middle of the night, when he was asleep, he took a lonely sail shadow and set foot on the boat back home alone. The moonlight is still hazy, and the surroundings are still quiet. His sleeves fluttered in the wind, but at this time, he was a little calm and happy. With the rising sun, a new life is about to begin. He went out early and returned late with his relatives and friends, enjoying the joy of the countryside, enjoying the simple and carefree friendship and rare affection with them. This essay makes us contact with Tao Yuanming's ease of staying away from officialdom, his joy of returning home, his pastoral purpose, and many delicate and natural language embellishments in his narrative. )
9. The boat swayed and floated gently on the water. The breeze brushed my clothes, brushed my cheeks and stepped on the songs of tits. I was drunk in the mountain spring in front of the boat and behind it. The green hills echoed with the water stirred by paddles, crushing all my homesickness. In front of me is a thick, vague black-and-white photo with weeds on both sides as its background. I listen to the duet of birds and the solo of insects. The sun shines obliquely on my way home. From a distance, you can see a quiet and warm hut, shrouded in light smoke, ethereal and nothingness (this is the work that can best reflect the blending of scenes. That kind of leisurely and serene Chinese painting has always come to us, and the boat, wind, rhyme and sunshine combine into a seemingly static and moving picture. Tao Yuanming lived in such an environment, and we realized that Mr. Wu Liu, who was so far away from us, was so free and easy. )
10. In the increasingly competitive modern society, Tao Yuanming is very lonely, and there should be very few people who take him as their confidant. People should care about their income, professional titles and housing, their children's study, employment and marriage, their bosses' intentions and even their facial expressions, and modern people who are full of various practical problems in their career progress. Where do they have leisure time to watch the pines and admire the chrysanthemums like Tao Old Master Q? Especially in the minds of some people who claim to be the greatest hermit in China, they even disdain this attitude of avoiding the world when they are frustrated. Relative to Du Fu's concern for the country and the people, it is no different from Du Fu's concern for the country and the people.
Which is more brilliant, flowers or starry sky? How should they transform from the river of life? Which is more brilliant, farming or harvesting? How should they change from the path they have taken? Which is more brilliant, tears or laughter? How should the love they gave me be transformed?
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Every time, I am strong in the loneliness of wandering, and every time I am injured, I don't cry. I know I always have a pair of invisible wings to take me far away.
I am a person who likes looking up at the sky. The clear sky taught me tolerance and openness, and the deep night sky helped me hide my inner anguish and loss. So I always like to look up at the sky when I am alone, and imagine that I have a pair of invisible wings to fly with me to a mysterious distance.
Stop and look back. I always thought that a day had passed, but I didn't know it had slipped away for a year. In the simple to almost cruel years, I came to this long-awaited battlefield-the senior high school entrance examination in the action of raising my head and bowing my head.
I vaguely remember that three years ago, my mother took my hand and walked into a strange junior high school campus. For three years, I have been showing my youth, showing my ability and writing my own sky. Now, I have been sitting on the roof of the teaching building watching the sunset, painful and happy. Recall the capable boy, smile silently, and then let go.
It's too cold up there. Looking back, I don't regret it, although my eyes are crying.
In the past three years, I have experienced the biggest difficulties and challenges in my study, the cynicism of my classmates and the indifference of my friends. But I never gave up, because I believe I have a pair of invisible wings, which take me to the distant place of success and look for more brilliant things in life.
Spread out the palm of your hand, and a year will surge in your hand and eventually return to peace. I also began to wait silently for my next sky. I have never doubted my choice, never underestimated my ability, because I believe I have a pair of invisible wings that take me to the distant place of hope.
Life in junior high school, tenacity and failure coexist, dreams and pain coexist, riding invisible wings, flying to unknown distant places, looking for the treasure of victory.
In the final stage of writing the composition for the college entrance examination, I think that four words should be emphasized in the composition for the college entrance examination: "write correctly", "write well" and "write well" are mainly the requirements for examining the questions, and "write well" includes true materials, ingenious structure, novel content, novel conception and beautiful language.
The exam is always on the road-accurate and comprehensive.
Candidates should pay special attention to the exam training before the exam to ensure an accurate and comprehensive understanding of the materials.
Accuracy is to accurately grasp the core meaning of materials. For example, the core implication of Jiangsu 20xx college entrance examination composition is the understanding, thinking or emotional experience of cars in life. Leaving the car in life and writing it as a virtual car, such as the car in history and the car in public opinion, is not an accurate understanding of "the car in life" and "the car coming and going", but a digression. Only by grasping the understanding and thinking of "Shuo", "Long" and "Short" in 20xx can we accurately hit the core of the material.
Comprehensiveness means grasping the meaning of the material as a whole, rather than grasping a sentence or a word of the material to determine the meaning of the material. Therefore, it is necessary to ponder every word in the material repeatedly in order to accurately grasp the center of the material. I suggest you read the composition carefully for five times, and then compare it with the raw materials to see if the thinking is correct, so as to avoid the danger of "one careless move will lose the whole game". After the examination of the questions is determined, a writing outline should be drawn up to prevent the phenomenon of writing errors, which is often called "secondary errors"
The examination of questions determines the "life and death" of writing, and it is necessary to ensure that the composition is "written correctly".
Organize your own materials-unique and rich
Candidates have accumulated a lot of writing materials in high school for three years, but in the final stage, candidates should use their own eyes to screen these materials and strive for the uniqueness and richness of the materials.
Narrative material should grasp its own unique experience and rich and profound material of life. The material can be classified into traditional culture, family friendship, ordinary greatness, vulnerable groups, touching scenes and tortuous stories. The material of argumentative paper requires that the arguments should be original, novel and diverse, with cultural thickness and ideological depth. The original argumentative material can be started from these angles, such as "a unique celebrity", "a rich masterpiece", "a city with personality", "a culture with rich background" and "a phenomenon worth thinking about". When quoting these materials, we should make appropriate changes according to the concept of materials, highlight the key points, and make the writing content better consistent with the materials.
In addition to case materials, we should also properly sort out our own thoughts and emotions, do some refining, and form our own systematic ideological understanding and emotional experience. Only when there are things, feelings and reasons can we write a thick article, that is, "realism"
Establish your own framework-standards and intelligence
On the one hand, the college entrance examination composition emphasizes the standardization of style, and narrative should have the "six elements" of narrative, including events, narration and description; Argumentative writing should conform to the structure of asking questions, analyzing problems and solving problems; But don't "model composition" to prevent "one thousand people". This requires a little agility, a little fancy, a little thoughtfulness and wisdom outside the norm.
For example, narrative can consciously set flashbacks, twists and turns, interspersed, and can set one or two core scenes and detailed descriptions. On the other hand, argumentative essays can be set up from scratch, and the argumentation structure from phenomenon to essence, positive and negative contrast, layer by layer depth and dialectical analysis can be constructed during analysis. In this way, we can establish our own writing framework. With the writer's management of the structure and the writer's "brand" and "personality", the composition has the characteristics of "agility" and it is easier for the composition to win the favor of the marking teacher. In the final stage, according to your own writing framework, you should repeatedly write several compositions or write several composition outlines.
In addition, in the choice of writing style, I think ordinary students should stick to the style they are good at and be faithful to one. However, students with similar writing skills in the two styles decide their writing style according to the topics in the examination room and the feelings on the spot. If they can think of a touching story, they will write a narrative, and if they have good knowledge and materials, they will write an argumentative paper, but they should quickly determine their writing style in the examination room.
To construct one's own composition structure is simply to pursue the exquisiteness and agility of the structure, that is, to write skillfully.
Revise your composition repeatedly-upgrade and file.
In the last stage, I suggest to revise many of my compositions to improve my composition by one or two grades. So how to modify it? Mainly reflected in the profound, beautiful and innovative writing.
Deep writing: that is, accurate and profound thinking.
Re-examine the questions and improve the accuracy of examination. On this basis, we should readjust our thinking to make the article full of "self" feelings, such as thinking about the value and pattern of life from the perspective of "life", exercising dignity, good and evil, etc. Thinking about life style, human morality, compassion, etc. from the perspective of "humanity"; Reflections on cultural tradition, civilized accomplishment, social cornerstone and backbone soul. From the perspective of "nation"; From the perspective of "grass roots", we should think about the ordinary and the great, the living state, the quality of life, the spiritual space and the happiness index. Think about what changes have taken place in your knowledge from these angles, sum up these understandings into concise sentences, and integrate these thoughts into your composition, so that your article becomes rational, inspiring, speculative, profound and diverse.
Beauty of writing: that is, the language is beautiful and delicate.
The composition of college entrance examination should not be gorgeous and empty, nor should it be poor in vocabulary, but should be a work rich in language literacy and cultural taste. The examinee's language is permeated with rich cultural background and conveys a beautiful and exquisite aesthetic feeling.
When revising the composition, candidates can change the original declarative sentences into rhetorical questions, change the original long sentences into short sentences, compress and refine the original complex and lengthy words into concise and clear words, change the original simple words into colorful languages, and integrate some cultures, allusions and poems into their own expressions.
Writing new: that is, fresh materials and unique angles.
Whether narrative or argumentative, we should try our best to start with the phenomena in real life and the latest events. This composition is not only full of life, but also gives people a sense of freshness.
Secondly, to conceive the composition from a unique angle will also give people a refreshing feeling. The narrative perspective can be special groups, such as migrant workers, empty nesters, disabled people and so on. And it can be a special perspective, such as the dilemma between traditional culture and modern science and technology, traditional culture and economic development. Argumentative writing can be written from a person, a city, a work and a culture. This writing angle is unique and gives people a sense of freshness.
The novel materials and unique angles can be called "writing new".
Strengthen the awareness of bright spots-attract people's attention
There must be bright spots in the exam composition in order to catch people's eyes and attract people's attention.
Highlights must be highlighted in the best position, such as title, beginning, end, beginning of paragraph, transition and key paragraph.
Highlight sentences are usually rhetorical sentences, philosophical sentences, quoted sentences, transitional sentences, humorous sentences and so on. Detail description, wonderful dialogue and psychological activities in narrative are all highlights; Profound arguments, unique viewpoints, dialectical analysis and typical arguments in argumentative essays are also highlights.
The beginning is concise, and the question enters quickly; The ending should echo the beginning and reveal the theme. When writing in the middle, there are leading sentences, turning sentences and general sentences with some nature at the right time. Even in narration, the topic or meaning should be pointed out by the language of the characters, the psychology of the characters or the evaluation of onlookers.
Take the initiative to avoid the problem that affects the score-avoid the "reef"
First of all, don't copy the composition of the college entrance examination, avoid the perfect composition of the college entrance examination over the years, and conceive according to your own examination questions, so as to achieve "I write my heart by hand"
Don't write sensitive political issues or politicians, don't write about middle school students' love, don't write about magic, castles, ancient tombs and other topics that appear in online novels, and don't make up new stories. Don't be a cynic; Don't disrespect the teacher; Don't be negative, don't be depressed. Don't write such abstruse and irrelevant inscriptions or postscript. The hierarchical structure of the article should not be chaotic, but clear.
The writing language should not be "abstruse", "philosophical" and "aesthetic", and the narration or discussion should not be arbitrary, illusory, vague, vacillating, emotional and mysterious. Don't use online language, don't mix Chinese and English, don't mix foreign languages with Chinese, and don't use foreign names such as "Mike" and "John".
Don't be badly hurt: you can't lose the topic; There must be no typos in the title and the first and last paragraphs; Be sure to write 800 words; Write clearly and the number of words should be appropriate.
In short, we must "write correctly" and "write well", highlight the highlights and avoid the reefs. I think the examinee can definitely write the ideal result.