Let the teacher feel that our composition is "ingenious in conception, clear in structure, novel in examples and rich in literary talent".
How come?
1, about brilliant ideas: what can be met but not sought. Once the idea is extraordinary, match it with upper-middle language in structure and set up a class. Pay attention to guessing at ordinary times.
2. About structural clarity: summarize various structures in the model essay. As a senior three party, I can give my own partial summary:
The beginning 1: 1, concise narrative summary materials, sense of picture and power.
Step 2 reveal the connotation
Three hundred and eighty pounds is actually unnecessary. The source of life, the pump of blood, and the necessary little heart are buried in Leo Roston's thick excess fat. This is an interesting tragedy. In order to survive, he originally only needed a simple and light body. Similarly, life only needs the simplicity of the mind.
Trees are the sword that the earth pierces the sky. When it was dark, there was lightning and thunder, and there was a storm, but the tree stood still, stubbornly resisting the wind and rain, insisting on an upright posture and perseverance. And even if it is broken, don't forget to leave a few wooden thorns in the broken part, pointing to the sky. ...
Being alive is a gesture. Even if the tree dies, his shocking breaking still maintains his pride and gives the viewer a shocking and tragic aesthetic feeling. The difference between a big tree and a small grass is not the final result, but the persistence of posture. For people, the persistence of posture is sometimes more important than ultimate success.
Beginning 2: "If ...
(1) If you don't try your best, you can't achieve your ideal; If you don't learn from the silkworm to make cocoons, you won't be exposed to wonderful and profound fields; Without isolation and loneliness, we can't create unprecedented great achievements. You are very clever, please tell me, in the long night without anyone, can you be willing to be lonely and search hard?
People who have stood at the peak of their thoughts throughout the ages have given affirmative answers.
(2) If the real society does not tolerate spiritual freedom, if only flatterers can climb to wealth, if you are talented, you are doomed to endure poverty and poverty, and if you appreciate wealth, you are doomed to eternity: salieri, please tell me, what would you choose?
Top three: 1, quoting famous sayings or short stories or ordinary people's theories.
Step 2 agree or refute
3. Explain and put forward opinions.
A philosopher once said, "A nation that produces only heroes is sad." I quite agree with this sentence.
Heroes are tall and hard, just like stones in a jar. They are the backbone of a country. But a country needs more than a backbone. A nation with bones and flesh is a truly great nation.
Sand fills the cracks in the stone, and water is injected into the cracks in the sand. The trinity creates a solid entity. Stone, sand and water complement each other, which is the proportion of a strong nation.
(2) Superman is just an ordinary person. After taking off his robe, he fell from his horse and became paralyzed. However, actor christopher reeve knows how to turn on a gloomy night-"This' No Traffic' sign is not to stop you, but to remind you that it's time to turn."
Some things can't be accomplished by passion or perseverance, just like the brothers Grimm can never find the history of human development hidden behind fairy tales. When the dusty grimm's history turns into colorful grimm's fairy tales, dotted with colorful dreams of countless children, it's time for us to think about how to reverse our thinking.
One day, a philosopher taught his students an "apple just picked from the orchard" and asked them if they could smell the apple. All the people replied that they smelled it. Only one person was silent for a while and said, "Teacher, I don't smell anything." Other students scoffed, but when the philosopher asked everyone to pass the apple, they all blushed: it was a fake apple made of wax! This philosopher is Socrates, and the student who sticks to the truth is Plato.
Socrates said, "Don't believe the so-called experience. Only when doubt begins will philosophy and thought be born. "
As Socrates said, truly valuable thoughts must belong to those who seek them alone in the long night. They ignore the eyes of others and are not afraid of the dark night without people, because they understand that the truth that has just been discovered and the source of world progress will always be in the hands of a few people.
(4) People often satirize self-restraint, but for some people, self-restraint is just to break the cocoon, and the long darkness and silence are just for the brightness and brilliance of become a butterfly. Therefore, in many cases, it is a kind of great wisdom and great strategy to "tie oneself in a cocoon"-people who tie themselves in a cocoon know how to endure loneliness before they can achieve a great cause.
5. Some people always say, "Struggle is a misinterpretation of natural operation mode and an infringement of human freedom." Look at the debates of netizens who hold different views on a hot issue on the Internet, or look at the words of some experts when debating academic issues. It seems that it is really time to think that this statement is correct-all kinds of people are full of swearing and swearing, which really embarrasses our great country, which is called "the country of gentlemen".
However, is this the fault of the struggle itself? Or is there something wrong with people's understanding of "contention"? When it comes to "struggle", people's minds are full of tension, recklessness and shameless ... does "struggle" just mean these? Not exactly. In my opinion, there can be grace in "struggle", principle in "struggle" and human touch in "struggle". This is a gentleman's war.
[6] krylov said: "The reality is this shore, the ideal is the other shore, and there is a swift river in the middle. Action is a bridge on Sichuan. " I think this is the best interpretation of action.
Line is a bridge to the ideal and an axe to crush hardships. Without the help of "doing" and "doing", all the sparks of our thinking can only flash by and never start a prairie fire.
(7) A scientific expedition from the West went to Africa and hired local people as guides. After a few days in a hurry, the local tour guide refused to go any further, asked why, and replied, "I'm waiting for my soul to catch up."
In today's high-speed development and ever-changing society, this sentence undoubtedly sounded the alarm for us. When we are spinning around things like whipping a top, when we are chasing things like clockwork puppets, have we slowed down and thought carefully about what we want?
Zhou wrote: "Man is an overly practical plant. He is busy watering and fertilizing himself, but he often forgets to bloom. " I think, whether people's hasty request is the result or not, at least it is the tree after all, unforgettable.
Top four: 1, analogy; Metaphor comparison 2. Bring back the given materials and point out the main idea.
(1) A grain of sand that accidentally enters a clam will not become a jade-like pearl without the daily sharpening of the clam; A tree species accidentally left in the gap, without a rock-solid ambition, will not grow into a welcoming pine on Huangshan Mountain!
It's like-everyone only says that the publication of Grimm's Fairy Tales is accidental, but they don't know the painstaking efforts of the Grimm brothers!
⑵ The glorious Tang Dynasty has long passed, but poetry has spanned thousands of years and still flows quietly in people's hearts; The ancient Greek city-state has already declined, but the spark of freedom is still spreading, burning hope in a wider land.
In the face of time, the most magnificent monument is just a handful of broken soil in the dust of history; But the spirit and thoughts we created, after their carriers and bodies disappeared, turned into the fragrance in the sand and lingered for thousands of years.
(3) The seeds live in dark and moist soil, but they can still germinate and spread their branches and leaves. The baby eagle lives in the ravine of the cliff, but it won't curl up and wait for death. It can also hone itself and soar for nine days. Lotus, out of mud but not dyed, clear but not demon; Mei, ling cold is driving alone, and the fragrance is full of snow.
Environment certainly affects people, but it doesn't play a decisive role. As Milan Kundera said, our steps are moving towards their chosen destination. It is oneself who decides whether a person will achieve something in the end.