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20 17 the first round of review unit in senior three in China detects Chinese volumes. 2 Discriminate and modify sick sentences.
First, the word order is improper

1. Among the following sentences, () is not bad (3 points).

A gutter oil, melamine milk, clenbuterol, dyed steamed bread? These special provisions warn us that in order to eliminate the chaos in the food market, we must hold high the sharp weapon of law, strengthen supervision in an all-round way, and call on enterprises to have moral blood in their veins.

B. The slow-moving integrated road of Jinan Wenhua West Road adopts colored asphalt, which can not only improve the urban landscape effect and increase the modern urban atmosphere, but also avoid the black monotony of ordinary asphalt pavement and improve the attention of drivers and pedestrians.

C. Although employees of Tokyo Electric Power Company risked their lives to stick to the Fukushima Daiichi nuclear power plant, the opposition between the victims in Fukushima Prefecture and Tokyo Electric Power Company is growing. Tokyo Electric Power Company decided to send 25 cadres to various shelters to apologize to the victims.

D. Since this year, China has implemented a stricter protective mining policy for rare earths. 19 10/9, the Ministry of Land and Resources announced that Ganzhou, Jiangxi Province is a national planned rare earth mining area, and the exploitation, exploration and storage of rare earths in this area will be more strictly controlled.

【tutorialno。 29530032] Analysis: In item a. B, the progressive clauses are not in the right word order, and the contents after "not only" and "also" are exchanged. Item C, "although" is not appropriate, it should be placed at the beginning of the sentence. The word order of "mining and exploration" in item D is improper, and the positions should be exchanged.

Second, improper collocation.

2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points).

A. Nanshan Scenic Area is the first in the province to launch free intelligent electronic tour guide services. Visitors who buy tickets every year can get an electronic tour guide and enjoy one-on-one explanation service, which enriches the tourism quality and cultural connotation of the scenic spot.

B. A number of targets in Tripoli, the capital of Libya, were attacked by western warplanes in the air on the evening of March 2 1. This is the third time that western countries have attacked Tripoli since 19.

C. In order to ensure the smooth entry of the "Four National Treasures" of Qinling Mountains into the World Expo, Shaanxi Provincial Forestry Department has organized scientific research personnel to discuss plans for many times, and made careful preparations for the cages, routes and personnel to be transported.

D. The cartoon "Confucius" created a brand-new image of Confucius in the form of animation, which broke people's rigid thinking habits about Chinese studies in the past, aroused widespread concern from all walks of life, and won many national awards.

【tutorialno。 29530033] Analysis: The selection of item B.A. "Enriching the tourism quality of scenic spots" is not properly matched. Item C, "establishment" is inconsistent with "route" and "personnel". Item D, if not properly matched, should be changed from "molding" to "molding".

Third, the composition is incomplete or redundant.

3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points)

A. Should the old man be helped when he falls? When this simple question is to be discussed as a topic, it shows that our moral quality and spiritual civilization need to be improved urgently.

B the inter-governmental dialogue channel between the ROK and the DPRK was interrupted due to the repeated deterioration of relations between the ROK and the DPRK this year. The Six-Party Talks provided opportunities for contacts between representatives of the two sides and were highly praised by all parties.

C libraries, theaters, basketball courts and activity rooms for the elderly. Some cultural and recreational facilities in these cities are available in many villages and are open to villagers free of charge.

D China continues to maintain the fastest development speed among the world's major economic systems, leading the world to economic recovery, which is first attributed to the hardworking and tenacious ordinary workers in Qian Qian, China.

【tutorialno。 29530034] analysis: choose item c. A, the subject is incomplete, and the preposition is abused, so that the subject is missing before the "representation". Improper collocation, "spiritual civilization" and "improvement" cannot be matched. The subject of item B is incomplete, and the preposition is abused, so that the subject before "cause" is missing, and "cause" should be deleted. Item D is redundant, and "credit" means "credit belongs to (individual or group)", which is the same as the previous "credit".

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

4. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points).

A. China's foreign trade development environment began to see a slowdown in international industrial transfer, and neighboring countries accelerated the transfer and the cost of production factors increased. Therefore, the era of China's foreign trade sustained double-digit high-speed growth for many years no longer exists.

In the "Spring Festival Evening" program of B Year of the Horse, there is no doubt that the comedy sketch "Help or Not" carefully created by Mahua FunAge team won the unanimous love of the audience with its rich life atmosphere and obvious comedy effect.

C although some cities have started the pilot project in cross-border electronic commerce, their development has not reached the expected goal. Breaking institutional barriers is the key to the development of cross-border electronic commerce.

D China now has the conditions to launch a Mars probe to explore around Mars, but when to launch Mars exploration depends on national financial resources and decision-making.

【tutorialno。 29530035] analysis: choose a and b, the sentence patterns are mixed, and delete "no doubt". The sentence pattern of item C is mixed, and "emphasis" or "key" is deleted. D sentence patterns are mixed, and "it depends" is deleted.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

5. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points).

A. In the last few days of hospitalization in Yang Shanzhou, apart from his family, he was accompanied by two special "relatives": Zi Hongxue, former director of Daliangshan Forest Farm, and Su Jiaxiang, former secretary.

At this conference, he pointed out that the biggest mistake in the 30 years before the founding of the People's Republic of China was not to engage in family planning. Many mistakes can be remedied and corrected, and hundreds of millions of people have been added at once. Who can correct them?

C Jin Hu tires were exposed at the CCTV "3 15" party, and the company apologized and decided to recall all the faulty tires. In this event, enterprises will pay huge economic costs and heavy reputation costs.

D. The epidemic areas of hemorrhagic fever are concentrated in rural areas and urban fringe areas, while urban residents are mainly infected with mites in the wild, grasslands or other humid places.