I have read more than 50 chapters, and there is no theme! Keep telling the story of slaves and masters! I didn't see it later. Let's talk about the feelings of these chapters first! First of all, thirteen slaves each gave a sum of money to make them rich. When they came back eighty years later, they happened to meet a rebellious slave. Not treason, just greed! The problem is that more than 90 people still can't see the power of money. I really have enough! I know my master's ability. I want to defect and kill you! You are still considering how to seize the opportunity. It's funny to turn a bicycle into a motorcycle!

The second one! Push! Every memory is puzzling! Talking to Qin Shihuang about the general trend of the world, he said that he didn't like Han Wei, and cheated Tian Lei 200,000 to please him! Ward, my God, this is so funny! I sent a picture to Ma Zhiyuan, ward field, and the end of the heartbroken world came out! Wu Zetian ascended the throne, which was originally driven by the protagonist! What is even more ridiculous is that I made a cup of tea on the day I ascended the throne, and the fragrance of tea overflowed the hall! What the hell is this? Third, the rhetoric is too high, either afraid or kneeling, cold sweat and inner fear! Come on, there are many ways to express fear. Can we not directly add our inner fears? One chapter and one fear are simply terrible! Fourth, the most important point is verbosity. It took more than forty chapters to describe clearly what you can do with your hands! Honey, your theme hasn't been decided yet, and you can't see the direction. So wordy, people who pay can't vomit blood?

Of course, I heard that the author is a woman, but I don't think girls will have such invincible fantasies all day! I think you might as well think of yourself as a passer-by and write about people, things and things in your life journey! Be a spectator, not a participant! Don't care about other people's life and death, just witness! This will be better! Because you are not in the same class as these people, people who meet Pangu can intervene in all kinds of human affairs at will, which is really fucking bad.