First, about the "comment method"
1, comments mainly use the "sandwich" method. A good steamed bread review mainly completes three points: first, sincere praise and affirmation from the heart; Second, professional comments; Third, the altruistic spirit of sincerely helping its progress.
(1) Before commenting, you must listen carefully to each other's works, find out the advantages and highlights, and affirm the whole work first. It must be from the heart, not perfunctory and sloppy. For example, the persistence of completing the speech homework on time, decent image, clean and concise background and so on. (2) Secondly, professional level comments. On the premise of professional level comments, first of all, I am professional, such as the height difference of different gestures, the structure of speeches, and the mastery of various methods. (3) Finally, we should sincerely help them make progress. Most adults may choose their own gap period because of the influence of time, and some even stay late. If we are helpful to others, we will do the first two points well whenever they submit their homework. When it is beneficial to others, we should also treat every comment sincerely. Altruism is also egoism, and we are growing at the same time. In short, we must make good comments, sincere praise, professional comments and altruistic comments, and be an excellent comment teacher.
2、? As for the sound module, I personally made great progress in the 2 1 day training camp. At first, I found that some words were not pronounced correctly, and the speech speed was easy and fast. Once it is fast, the feelings will not be reflected, and the context will be lost. The teacher's comments on reading aloud also gave several key points: first, the preparation of recording; Second, the correctness and fluency of reading aloud; Third, the emotional tone of reading aloud; Fourth, pressure; Fifth, interrupt; Sixth, grasp the reading characteristics of written materials. Mastering these points, when we usually practice reading aloud, we can practice against the standard and compare the comments of our classmates in turn. The premise is that before commenting on students, we should be familiar with and master this reading.
Second, the body template annotation points
Comments on body language should be made from three aspects in turn. The first step is to look at the whole, the second step is to dig out the details, and the third step is to build personality.
The first part focuses on the whole:
1. Look at the whole. When you look at the whole for the first time, don't delve into the details. See if the part above the knee is exposed, see if your hands are all in the lens, and see if the background is refreshing. Because our protagonist is human, we can't be taken away by the complex background. Look at the matching of your dress and the background color. If it is the same color, the characters may be submerged.
2. Looking at the stability, Mr. Long Xiong talked about several bad shaking situations in his speech, such as shaking left and right, shaking back and forth, and even spiraling. Standing like a slob gives people a sense of stability and confidence. Look at the spirit again, don't be listless and faint, be confident and generous, not just Nuo Nuo.
3, look at the chaos, first, the more physical movements, the better, mainly suitable, second, it will be very stiff if you can't move, and third, you can't do the same action from beginning to end. In short, it is appropriate, appropriate, giving people a sense of comfort.
Generally speaking, in the performance of students in the first three days, it is enough to comment on these three aspects as a whole. Don't delve into the details, wait until there is no big problem above.
Details of the second button
1, head, maybe because of nervousness, his head will swing from side to side, back and forth, or he will look at the sky and the ground when thinking about words, avoiding looking at the camera. You can suggest taking the camera as your child and your friend. If you are facing family or children, you will definitely not move.
2, the arm, probably because of nervousness, it is suggested to clamp the arm tightly on both sides of the body and then do some body movements, but if you open your arm a little, you will feel as if there is air flowing under your armpit. Try to open your arm to make your armpit more comfortable, and then the whole person will be very relaxed, so we encourage the same person to experience it personally and tell him why he should open his arm instead of telling him why he shouldn't.
3, gestures, the focus varies from person to person, many people use towers, but if you are facing a particularly petite girl, and this girl looks very quiet, it is not suitable for towers. Then don't point a finger at people. We can invite people or point with our palms. We can give students an example. When we invite a lady to dance, we must put our palms up and invite him instead of extending our forefinger to seduce her. Finally, there is the problem of directionality. Our gestures must help your speech. When you say high, you must put it very high, straighten your arms and raise it so that the audience can feel it. It's really high. When you say low, try to put it under your thigh, and then give people a feeling of low, instead of just saying high with a gesture. At this time, it may mislead your audience and even question the content of your speech.
4, the number 123, you are 2 when you can't say 1, and you are 3 when you say 2. We should point out these small mistakes one by one when digging up the details, so there is no problem with his overall standing posture. When he stands there, you will keep pointing out his habitual little faults, and she will really take her time.
The existence of this person may be a matter of habit. You may say it once, but he changed it, but he committed it again in a couple of days. So in the part of digging up the details, we have to give him a review in three or four days, because he will definitely appear again, so it will really help him if we remind him two or three times.
The third part, shaping personality.
1, personality of the scene
For example, the story he told is a particularly sad story, so there must be nothing particularly energetic, passionate and happy in his body language, but a little sad. If we tell a particularly happy story, of course, it is impossible to tell it to everyone seriously. Our body language, including our facial expressions, must match the scenes described in the speech.
2. Look at the students' own personality and personality, some people have low energy and weak gas field; Some people have high energy and strong gas field, which varies from person to person. We might as well give some suggestions to students on how to be comfortable.
Third, the content review
Content review, mainly from three aspects, one is the details of review, the other is the structure of review, and the third is the way of review.
? The first part is about the details of comments:
1、? Viewpoint: First of all, the content should be valuable, what viewpoint should be conveyed, whether this viewpoint is clear, whether the viewpoint is positive, whether the golden sentence is reflected, and whether the golden sentence is repeated in the speech.
2、? Argument: whether the argument revolves around the viewpoint, if it is a story, it should be true, preferably its own story, and whether the five corners of the story are used in place, vividly depicting the story and bringing a sense of picture to the listener. If you want to use arguments, you should highlight the parallel or progressive relationship of sub-arguments.
3、? End: The most important thing at the end is sublimation. Sublimation can enlarge the pattern, look forward to the future or make a phone call, but remember not to digress and have an echo from beginning to end.
The second part is the review structure, which consists of three main modes: self-introduction, impromptu speech and preparation for speech.
1、? Three ways to introduce yourself:
( 1) ? Praise and thank you (praise first, thank you first, tell yourself and wish the future)
(2) ? Four ones (a name, a label, a story, a golden sentence)
(3) ? MTV (who am I, what have I achieved and what have I provided)
2、? Impromptu speech
( 1) ? PRER viewpoint exemplifies China (viewpoint, reason, example, sublimation)
(2) ? PRS (viewpoint, reason, solution)
(3) ? Catch pigs (thank you, talk about the past and wish the future)
3、? Prepare a speech
( 1) ? Tianlong Babu (universal speech model, which can also be used for impromptu speech)
(2) ? Six-pulse Excalibur (goal, effort, frustration, accident, turning point, result)
? The third part is the way of comment: the way of comment is "sandwich". The first level is to praise the other party first, find out one or two specific shortcomings in the middle, then give targeted suggestions, and finally give summary suggestions, expecting the other party to change.