When I first started learning, don't mention how difficult it was! As soon as I got on the bus, the car seemed drunk and wobbly. Sometimes the front of the car can't be twisted, and I fall to the ground with people and cars. I fall to the ground and make others laugh. Sometimes I can't even get on the bus, sometimes my father pushes me away, but as soon as my father lets me go, I fall down. But I saw other children in the yard wrestling like me, but I didn't give up at all and continued to practice hard with them. A few days later, after several wrestling, I gradually found that the car was like a good horse tamed by me, and finally I could drive freely. That night, I recalled learning to ride during the day, from which I learned a revelation: you can't succeed at once, you must experience failure and then succeed through unremitting efforts. It is said that failure is the mother of success.
2. At the end of the sixth grade writing composition, highlight the truth or sum up experience. Summary: To write a composition, we must write four elements of narrative composition.
Timing, location and people are indispensable. When writing something, you must write about the cause (how it happened), the process and the ending.
The ending must echo the beginning and ask questions. Every narrative composition should have a certain meaning, and you should write whatever it means.
You can't have a whole article without a center. I found a narrative formula for you. Just follow it. Narrative composition formula is the foundation, and three paragraphs should be remembered.
There are three narrative methods, direct flashback and interpolation. It is easy to learn to record events in chronological order, the cause, process and result of things; Explain the four elements at the beginning, time, place and people; The cause of the incident is clear and detailed; The account is closed, so simply write the beginning and the end.
There are many changes in flashback methods, and the results are wonderful in advance; Memory changes at the beginning, and care at the end has many benefits. Tell specific things in the middle, and the details should be interesting; The transition reference is tight, and clear clues are the most important.
The selection of materials should be new, and the words should be true; Few words but good, few things but new. An article has a theme, and a series of examples are not off topic; Clear, clear, detailed and clear.
Well, that's it. I have never written such a summary. I don't know if it's right, for your reference. Don't copy. I typed it word by word ~! ! .
The benefits of writing at the beginning and end of the composition are mentioned at the beginning of the composition. First of all, cut to the chase, cut to the chase. The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which means straight to the point.
For example, "Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This kind of writing is crisp and neat, and it is quick to get into the topic, so it is favored by many students. Second, quote the classics and highlight the details. Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can enhance the momentum at the beginning, make people feel lofty and lofty, and achieve the effect of attracting readers and highlighting the center.
The following example is commonly used: 1. Poetry begins with a poem, which is magnificent and shocking. For example, "Don't be idle, wait for nothing."
My father is over forty, and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary ... 2. At the beginning of the proverb, the child is familiar with it, which makes him feel kind and stimulates his interest. For example, there is a proverb in China: "Three sticks can't make a fart."
My father is a person who doesn't like to talk ... 3. The opening method of famous sayings not only makes your meaning concise and clear, but also concentrates on expressing the main idea of the article, which plays the role of making the finishing touch and adds a lot of color to the article. For example, a student wrote "self-confidence": Edison, a famous scientist, said: "Self-confidence is the first secret of success."
Yes, with self-confidence and constant efforts, you can succeed. 4. The method of introducing stories by quoting allusions or short stories in real life can increase the interest of articles and arouse readers' interest.
For example, when a student wrote Tolerance, he began like this: "A barber was shaving the Premier, and the barber accidentally scratched his face because Premier Zhou coughed. At this time, the barber was so nervous that Premier Zhou would be furious. Unexpectedly, Premier Zhou said apologetically,' It's none of your business. If I say hello before coughing, you won't scratch my face.
In such a warm comfort, we see a valuable quality of Premier Zhou-tolerance. "5. Dialogue at the beginning of pronunciation, piano sound, wind, thunder, etc. Can be used as the beginning, the atmosphere is easy to render.
For example, "Please bring my song back to your home, please leave your smile …" Whenever this familiar melody rings in my ear, I feel very cordial as if I have met an old friend I haven't seen for years. Third, penetrating rhetoric has long charm. Starting with rhetorical devices, it is easy to express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading.
1. Metaphor begins with metaphor to arouse readers' interest in the things or truths to be explained. For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow."
2. The comparison method based on comparison can strengthen literary talent and effectively highlight the theme. For example, at all times and in all countries, those who have made achievements in their careers have earned their success with hard sweat; On the other hand, lazy and fatuous people can't achieve anything. It can be seen that diligence leads to success and laziness leads to failure.
3. Parallelism begins with parallelism, which is neat and sonorous, and promotes people to enjoy reading. If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born; If I were a sapling, I would never forget the land that nourished me. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory ... 4. Ask questions at the beginning, spread the literary atmosphere and take the lead.
For example, why do fashion designers always try their best to design one set of fashion after another? Why is our motherland always mixed with such a sentence in the horn of progress-advocating scientific and technological innovation? Why don't the high-rise buildings that have sprung up follow the architectural style of the fifties and sixties? Everything is just because the times are changing and people's minds are changing. Fashion should conform to the trend of the times and development should keep pace with the times. Life has given us the power to innovate.
Fourth, borrow things to associate the beginning of interesting articles from far and near, or from this to that, write from other things, and then associate with what to write, thus setting off what to write. For example, a student wrote "Road" like this: There are roads and paths in daily life, and there are right roads and wrong roads in life.
One should choose one's own way. 5. Cleverly set up a suspense winding path leading to a secluded place, and set up an unresolved question at the beginning to arouse readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article, and show the beauty of layout.
For example, a student wrote "Feel the Beauty of Life": "I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, and I can only hear my weak breathing in a huge room." The intransitive verb celebrity's answer is thought-provoking. Using celebrity answers to start an article is conducive to enhancing the momentum at the beginning and giving people a feeling of lofty ideals.
For example, a student wrote the opening of Happiness: Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is colorful. Nietzsche thought: "He who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones at the same time without nausea is the happiest person."
The stoics believe that "having unlimited wealth and power and being able to handle things calmly is the real happiness." Vii. Scene Description Rendering Atmosphere Description refers to the description of the scene, rendering the atmosphere and setting off the atmosphere with the help of some rhetoric or some description technique, paving the way for the beginning of the people or things behind.
Please look at the beginning of the article "Examination": Outside the classroom, the whistling north wind slammed on the wall with dense raindrops, "Cha, Cha", and in the classroom, an all-round competition examination reached a white-hot stage. The end of the composition is 1, and the natural end: the story is finished, the result comes out, and the article ends. This is the natural ending.
For example, "You Bijia Mountain": The sun is going down in the west, and we are a little tired, so we take a bus together and set foot on the road home with the joy of playing in Bijia Mountain ... 2. Summary ending: After the story is finished, we summarize our gains and often use progressive relations to say our gains or feelings. Such as "Remember an interesting eggshell experiment": This eggshell experiment is really interesting! Not only did I exercise my hands-on ability, but I also learned the truth of "centralization and decentralization of power". What a great harvest! So I like this experiment! 3. Heuristic ending: Write the enlightenment and clear truth obtained after something.
For example, a little thing: it's been a long time, but I can't forget it. Although things are small, they give me inspiration.
4. Write a composition, about 500 words, with the truth at the end. I have a lovely mother. She has two eyebrows with suitable shades, which look like a bright moon. They are the brightest eyes in my heart. She loves to laugh very much. Her eyes narrowed into a line when she laughed, as if kindness and happiness were about to overflow.
My mother is a good cook. She cooks quickly and is delicious. She is good at telling stories. When I was a child, my mother told me countless stories. There are Andersen's fairy tales, Grimm's fairy tales, and a hundred thousand whys. These stories not only enriched my life, cultivated my sentiment and made me understand what is true, kind and beautiful, but also made me know why chickens eat sand, why the trunk is round and why ostriches can't fly. ...
My mother is very concerned about me. Once I had a high fever, my mother wouldn't let me sleep for days and nights until I had a fever. My mother's mood is cloudy and sunny. Just like the weather outside, all her emotions come from me. As long as I am a little playful, she will keep nagging. She talked more about my study than about Kan Kan. As long as there is a little mistake in her homework, she will be anxious as if the sky is falling. My mother not only nags me about my studies, but also cares about my meals. I don't like tomatoes, so she says every day, "Tomatoes have a lot of vitamins …". I am most afraid of her nagging. Sounds like the mantra of Tang Priest, and my head is about to explode. Every time, I only surrender: "Well, can't I eat?" Whenever this happens, my mother will be happy with a small face, hehe.
However, my mother's mood is also sunny in Wan Li, especially when I get my certificate from school, my face will glow with excitement, just like winning 5 million lottery tickets, and I will keep saying "Well done, my good baby".
This is my mother, the respectable, hateful and lovely mother who walks around the "sun" all day. I am so lucky to have such a mother!
5. "So this is the truth of life." The beginning and the end are both pain and happiness, which may be life.
Sometimes, we are all confused, whether we dominate fate or fate enslaves you and me. However, when we really experience it seriously, we will understand that fate, you and I are both refugees in a muddled world, just like comrades on the same battlefield, and we will live and die together.
When we hate fate: fate is unfair to you and me, why others are as rich as an enemy, but I am poor and fruitless; Fate enslaves you and me. Why do I suffer while others are complacent? Even fate makes fun of you and me. Why am I always unlucky, so who is so lucky? I think fate will blame you and me helplessly. It may just say: I'm afraid of opponents like God, but I'm afraid of comrades like pigs! So, we are ridiculed by fate again. In fact, there is not so much truth in life, only how to fight side by side with fate, how to adjust one's uneasy heart, and then let fate lead you and me to a better life. Only by making them reverently admire you and me, will they live and die together for us and never give up! Facing the ups and downs of life, if we shrink back timidly and feel inferior to the dust, fate will laugh at us, which is also right, because neither you nor I are qualified to complain about fate's indifference.
However, if we adjust our mentality and stand up and resist, it may be painful at first, but we will be happy after the pain, because our blood, sweat and efforts have defended our destiny. Life is a process, a complicated process full of vicissitudes. If you value the result, then the fate that goes straight to the subject will be pale, no matter what the process between you and me is. Painful and happy people will render a life that we will not regret.
Pain and happiness are intertwined between fate and you and me. It can make you miserable and depressed, and it can also bring you joy and joy. So let nature take its course and be influenced by them, should we always fight back and let them know that we exist?
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6. the beginning and end of the composition that makes sense from small things. In our life, there must have been many little things, as many as little stars in the night sky.
Before, I didn't quite understand the phrase "an inch of time and an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time". Later, I understood the meaning of this sentence on a small matter.
It's a sunny Saturday. I get up early. Because there were few homework on weekends, I finished my homework ahead of schedule. I happily showed my homework to my father and asked him, "Dad, now that my homework is finished, can I go out to play?" Dad smiled and said, "Yes, of course. However, your mother and I will go out later and come back around one o'clock. Before I come back, you should do some exercises and check it when I come back. " I said confidently, "OK, no problem."
As soon as my parents went out, I turned on the TV, sat on the soft and comfortable sofa and watched TV with relish. I eat snacks and drink while watching TV. After a while, I looked at the alarm clock and thought, it's still early, and there's still plenty of time. After reading it, I ran to turn on the computer in my room. Bang! Dad came back, so I quickly turned off the computer and ran to the living room. Dad said, "Have you finished eating? Give me a check. " I hung my head, blushed and said hesitantly, "Not yet." My father pointed to me and said, "Do you know? Time is precious and cannot be wasted at all. "
From then on, I made up my mind to race against time and become the master of time. It is precisely because of this that I deeply realized that "an inch of time and an inch of gold cannot buy an inch of time." .
7. Keep a diary (at the end, write the truth you learned through this incident). Years are like a torrent, constantly washing away my memory. Many things have been blurred, but in my heart, there is one thing that has always made me unforgettable.
I remember it was last autumn. In the composition class, the teacher organized a tug-of-war competition in order to let us exercise, cultivate sentiment and cultivate observation.
The teacher divided us into two teams, one is the tiger team and the other is the eagle team. I was assigned
The strength of the two teams is equal, the students hold their heads high, and a tit-for-tat game is about to begin.
With the teacher's whistle, the game began. The players on both sides clutched the rope tightly, landed one by one, leaned back and pulled the rope desperately in their own direction. The red ribbon in the middle of the rope was moved to the tiger and the eagle for a while, to outdo each other. Cheerleaders from both sides also shouted in unison and kept beating drums for their teams. My hands were red, but the rope still didn't move, and the two sides entered a stalemate.
At this time, our players were all red-eyed, some were flushed, some were grinning, and some were clutching the rope and struggling to pull in their own direction. Finally, our team did its best. With the shouts of cheerleaders, HongLing suddenly moved towards us, and our eagles won.
Later, our team took advantage of two victories and won in a row. Finally, we won.
This tug-of-war made me understand that unity is strength, and it also helped me build up confidence in overcoming difficulties in the future. I will never forget this tug of war.
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8. "Explain a truth through one thing. The first person, wearing a coat, trousers and leather shoes, is very particular. He looks like a knowledgeable person, but he squints as if no one is watching.
Look at the second man, wearing a military hat and coat, with his hands in his pockets. Due to lack of self-confidence, he closed his eyes and avoided the eyes of people around him. The third man, short, wearing a hat, stood casually.
The fourth person is wearing a fur coat and a mask, afraid of being noticed by others to avoid embarrassment. Why do these people pretend to be illiterate when they know how to read? Because they are selfish, they only think of their own interests and have no consideration for others at all.
Although they are clean in appearance, they are dirty inside. From this, I think these fake illiterates are really common in society: there is a "no trampling" sign next to the grass, but some people walk on it for convenience, but they never pay attention to the flowers and plants under their feet, and they have been bent over by them; During the exhibition, the sign "No Photographing" was clearly hung next to the picture, but some people still took pictures in their own way.
They only care about keeping it as a souvenir, but they never thought that their actions affected the protection of the paintings. One morning in winter, the weather was cold, the north wind roared and heavy snow fell.
A mother dressed simply, holding her one-year-old child, came to the "mother-child boarding place" and waited for the bus, but she was shocked by what she saw-they just wanted to get on the bus from here, but left the mother and son who really should enjoy the preferential treatment of getting on and off. Why is this happening? Even if there are warning signs all over the street, they do not exist in the eyes of illiterate people.
It seems that they are really illiterate and mentally retarded! This kind of pseudo-illiteracy is everywhere, which is the chief culprit of the moral decline in our society. The morality and behavior of these people are shameful! Civilized society needs everyone's civilized behavior to care for it, and social morality needs the citizens of every society to abide by it.
Especially today, with the continuous improvement of people's education level and the great improvement of people's living standards, our society is more eager for everyone to carry forward virtues, pay attention to morality and abide by public morality. Let our society blow the wind of civilization and virtue to every corner! This week, I sorted out the photos of my previous travels and found that I went to many places and enjoyed many beautiful scenery.
The majestic Forbidden City, Guilin with beautiful scenery and dazzling West Lake will make me linger and revel in it. Looking at it, I saw some photos, and there was a beautiful town. It suddenly occurred to me that this is the most beautiful scenery I just downloaded from the internet a few days ago, and it will remain in my mind forever and will never be erased.
On May 12, the sun was still shining, and we still sat in the bright classroom to study. However, Wenchuan County in the southwest of China is suffering from an unprecedented disaster.
In the evening, I witnessed the 8.0 earthquake on TV news. This earthquake, like the Tangshan earthquake 32 years ago, suffered heavy casualties.
Many children who live a happy life like me are instantly buried under the cold reinforced concrete. Parents have lost their children, children have lost their elders, there are ruins everywhere, there are residual limbs and broken arms everywhere, and cries resound through Kyushu.
In the most difficult time, our beloved Premier Wen visited the earthquake site to direct the rescue. He said: "Even on foot, our troops will arrive in Wenchuan to rescue the people!" At the call of the Prime Minister, the people of the whole country took action. Everyone gave generously and donated money and materials, and I also actively participated in it.
The TV station broadcasts the rescue 24 hours a day. Whenever I see many people throw themselves into rescue work again and again, regardless of the comfort of their families, whenever I see people's soldiers writing suicide notes and jumping at an altitude of 5,000 meters, whenever I see that I haven't slept for days and nights, I only eat two meals a day, but I resolutely get into the ruins and get trapped one by one, and my heart is like knocking over a five-flavor bottle.
Earthquakes are merciless. We should try our best to do something for the people in the disaster area! Dujiangyan, Li Bai Temple, Wuhou Temple, Du Fu Caotang ... They lost their former elegance in the earthquake, and Wenchuan is no longer beautiful.
But the harmonious feelings and sincere care between people have become the most beautiful scenery in Wenchuan today! It is poetic, picturesque, lyrical and melodious. It is deeply reflected in my mind and will never disappear! Roaring large cranes, busy on-site commanders, busy workers with tools. Today, two years after the 512 Wenchuan earthquake, the town is surrounded by a large number of construction sites, and there are scenes of construction everywhere: Yingxiu Town is welcoming a new life. Full of new colors and vitality.
I remember my mother took me to the "Piano Training Center" and found a piano teacher to teach me piano every week during the summer vacation of Grade One. At first, the teacher taught me to wave.
I put my hand on the keys according to the teacher's request, and my arm and the back of my hand are in a straight line. I reminded myself of my playing posture while practicing, and soon my hand passed the test.
Next is to practice fingering. The teacher asked me to practice patiently, and I devoted myself to the training of fingering.
After more than a week of hard training, I have learned fingering practice. I think: playing the piano is easier than I thought! Then, the teacher taught me to read the staff and learn * * *.
She said to me, "If you want to practice * * *, you must persevere and practice diligently." Since then, I have been studying this lesson more intently.
But learning is becoming more and more boring. Before long, I began to get tired of practicing the piano and thought about giving up the piano. I thought to myself: it's boring to keep practicing.
My mother discovered my piano weariness and encouraged me to stick to it. Encouraged by my mother, I continued to practice repeatedly and spent the most boring practice stage.
After many troubles, I finally mastered * * *, and finally I can play a lot of beautiful music! In the process of playing the piano, the encouragement of teachers and mothers helped me a lot. When I was a child, I always thought that the piano was for teachers and mothers. Now that I have grown up, I know that playing the piano is of great benefit to me.
Playing the piano has taught me a long way in life.