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Up to now, Zhu Xiaoming still owes ten thousand yuan. There is nothing wrong with meaning and grammar.

Ill sentences in life: First, there are coordinate phrases, which may be improper collocation, improper classification, improper word order or unclear meaning.

1. The relevant departments criticized and educated sanitation workers in time for a few incidents that did not respect their labor, made troubles without reason, and even beat and insulted sanitation workers, and dealt with them seriously. (Improper collocation makes it impossible to "criticize and educate" the "event")

Our hometown is beautiful and rich, and the land here is fertile, especially suitable for planting fruit trees, cotton and grass. In addition, it is also suitable for planting pear trees and jujube trees. (Improper classification, "pear tree and jujube tree" are all "fruit trees")

The staff of the whole factory discussed and listened to the director's report on improving management. (improper word order should mean "listening and discussing", which has a chronological relationship)

Recently, the new district court concluded the case and ordered Xiao Zhang, who breached the contract, to compensate the plaintiff Hao Luyuan Trading Company for economic losses and legal costs of more than 3,000 yuan. (The meaning is unclear, is it "economic loss and legal fees" of "3,000 yuan" or "legal fees" of "3,000 yuan" alone)

Second, there are many attributives and adverbials, which may be the wrong word order.

1. Criticism and self-criticism are effective ways to correct mistakes and improve ideological level. (The word "effective" should be placed before the word "method")

Yesterday, many delegates had a warm conversation with him in the lounge. ("Enthusiastically" should precede "Talk to him")

This training course was jointly organized by the National Staff Education Committee and the State Economic Commission at the end of May this year. More than 200 staff representatives from all over the country participated in this training. ("United" should first turn to "held" and then give way to adverbial of time)

Third, there are quantitative phrases, which may be ambiguous, repetitive, improper word order and improper use of words.

1. The student union cadres of three schools met in the guidance office to study the development of the second classroom activities this semester. (I don't know, is it "three schools" or "three student union cadres")

Domestic cars are low in price and suitable for people to accept. For example, the unified market price of "Urban Beibei" is only 60,800 yuan, "Engel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only about 10 million yuan. (Again, "over 100,000 yuan" is a rough figure, so "rough" cannot be used. )

3. Carrying out criticism and self-criticism is an effective way to correct the party style and enhance the party's cohesion. (Improper word order, "class I" should precede "effective")

4. The boiler equipment of Huaneng Group's third power plant was reformed this year, and the power generation per ton of coal increased by 1.5 times, while the coal consumption area decreased by 1.2 times. (Inappropriate words, you can't use multiples to mean "decrease")

5. After the completion of the first computer integrated manufacturing system engineering research center in China, its advanced functions were greatly appreciated by domestic and foreign counterparts, and more than 23,000 people visited it successively. (Improper use of words, "person-time" is a compound quantifier and cannot be used as the subject)

At five or six o'clock in the morning, tens of thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport. (Improper use of words, "crowd" is collective noun)

Fourth, prepositions appear, which may be due to improper collocation, chaotic structure, inversion of subject and object, and incomplete subject.

1. When they encounter difficulties, they are not depressed. It is to gain strength from everyone's trust and concern and build confidence in overcoming difficulties. (Improper collocation should be "from")

2. On March 7th, 2007, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee for bribery scandal. The next day, newspapers all over the world reported in detail this event that shocked the international sports community. (Improper use of preposition should be "right")

The name Jiao may be unfamiliar to young people, but it is familiar to people over forty. (The subject and object are reversed, which should be "for young people" and "for people over 40 years old")

4. Why haven't relevant departments paid attention to this phenomenon of wasting talents so far? (Abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject, so "Dui" should be deleted)

Fifth, there are related words (conjunctions), which may be improper collocation, incompleteness and improper word order.

1. Only by fundamentally solving the problem of "why people" can we better serve the people. (Improper collocation of related words should be a necessary condition, and "meritocracy" should be used)

Although your gift is meager, it is as heavy as a thousand pounds in the hearts of farmers. (Related words and adverbs are not collocated properly, so the exact meaning is used here, and the ambiguous "how" is used after "it doesn't matter" and "it doesn't matter")

Although he is a farmer, he usually likes to study, knows a lot of words and is good at yangko. (The related words are incomplete, so "but" should be added before "normal")

Due to the low technical level, these products are either lower in quality than similar products in coastal areas or higher in cost.

(The related words are in the wrong position and the subjects are inconsistent. The relative word should come before the subject, and "no" should be adjusted to "quality")

Nowadays, "letter words" such as "Ah Q" have spread all over the cultural circle of Chinese characters, not only in textbooks, but also in various media. (improper word order, there is a progressive relationship. Serious things should be put behind, and "be active not only in various media, but also in textbooks")

6. Inappropriate language, ungrammatical sentences, lack of coherence and long delay will make the meaning vague, misleading and even puzzling. (Improper word order should mean "incomprehensible or even misunderstood")

6. Pronouns appear, which may be ambiguous and repetitive.

1. This exquisite lantern will be given as a gift to the guest who scored the highest score today. (unclear meaning, who does "he" mean, unclear meaning)

At the age of 80, the old man still clearly remembers his brother's evaluation of himself when he participated in the student movement: a warm-hearted person.

(I don't know, does "self" mean "old man" or "elder brother" of "old man")

Due to this traffic accident, the traffic on Wanping Road on Huaihai Road was closed for nearly three hours. (Again, "for this" means "for this traffic accident")

We must produce our own genuine computer game software, otherwise, without new software, it will be difficult to resist unhealthy pirated software. (Again, "otherwise" means "if not", just like "no new software")