One person I admire most is Mr. Chen, and I will never forget his education.

When Mr. Chen was in our Chinese class, our foundation was not very good. In class, everyone is not very active, for fear that she will criticize us if she answers wrong. I remember once, when she was talking about the class "Grassland", she said, "Who will tell me what the outline means?" At that time, students sometimes raised their hands hesitantly; Some just lift and put down; Some people sat with their heads down ... at this moment, teacher Chen called me to answer. I stood up slowly with my head down, stuttering and incoherent, and my voice was as small as a mosquito. The classmates all laughed, and I buried my head lower in shame, wishing there were no holes for me to get in. At this time, instead of blaming me, Teacher Chen said kindly, "Don't be afraid, don't be nervous, even if your answer is wrong, it doesn't matter. At least you can answer the teacher's questions. This is courage. This is where you do well! " After listening to teacher Chen, I really looked full of courage. I looked up at teacher Chen and met her encouraging eyes. Ah! This look makes me feel the warmth like spring breeze and the care like a mother. I suddenly realized and answered the question fluently. Although not very good, Mr. Chen praised me strongly. Warm applause broke out in the class, which was for me and for Mr. Chen.

Teacher Chen, like a candle, you burn yourself and illuminate others; You are like chalk, sacrificing yourself and leaving knowledge. You are a diligent gardener, cultivating our little flowers. Teacher Chen, the person I admire most is you!

The full score of the senior high school entrance examination is 300 words with comments. As the sun sets, the sunset glow has dyed half the sky red. There is a deep mark where the earth connects with the sky. I think it is the shadow of night, and it is night.

Every household turned on the lights and soon went out, leaving only the night sky, which looked boundless. Seven or eight stars scattered in the night sky, dotted with this thin gauze-like air, I was immersed in this mysterious and beautiful night.

Soon, at midnight, there was a harsh voice from outside, which completely broke the tranquility of the night and cast a layer of noise on the poetic night sky that should not belong to it. I don't know what that sound is "swish, swish, swish ……", which broke my dream of daydreaming at night.

Since then, such annoying sounds have sounded in the same direction at the same time every day. I began to hate such sounds because they disturbed the atmosphere at night.

I don't like listening to night talk anymore. I fell asleep long before the sound, but …

There are many exciting interesting things in my life, among which the idiom game I played with my mother is the most interesting.

My mother is a talkative and eloquent person. Her eloquence is really good. She is always eloquent.

Today, my mother helped me review idioms and four-word phrases this semester. She made up a story of ABCC idiom at random: On a smoky morning, a well-dressed dog met a dead cat.

The dog asked cautiously why the cat looked so dirty. The cat said angrily, "Just now, many friends were talking about it, saying that I don't catch mice in the vibrant spring, enjoy the cool in the hot summer, wander in the fruitful autumn, and tremble in the snow-covered winter, saying that I am an idiot who can't find food all the way!" After listening to my mother, I will never forget all the idioms.

I pestered my mother to continue this game.

My mother turned on tiptoe, and I said "dance".

Mom is eating a big, red apple, and I say "with relish".

Mom cleaned the room, and I said "in good order".

My mother held me in her arms and I said, "I can't bear to part with it."

"Ah, outside the window, bit by bit, whispering, umbrella flowers everywhere, like a single spark, dancing with colorful beauty.

"I also became eloquent and read seven words in one breath.

What an interesting day! What an interesting game.

When idioms are like the seeds of happiness, compared with Qi Fei, I no longer frown, but become alert and keen.

I am deeply attracted by this knowledgeable and interesting word game. I am tireless and relaxed!

I have experienced many things, some happy, some touching, some sad ... among so many things, there is one thing that I will never forget.

It happened a few days ago with some friends.

That day, a dry mother woke me up from bed. As soon as I turned over and looked at the clock, I couldn't help crying. "Oh, no, it's nine o'clock. I have an appointment with my classmates to meet in the store at 9: 30. "

"Say that finish, I jumped out of bed, finished washing, then hurriedly stripped a few mouthfuls of breakfast and rushed out of the door.

The weather is particularly good this day. The warm sunshine spilled down and made my body warm.

But I didn't care about the beautiful scenery along the way. I just run with my head down. I suddenly turned around and saw a stranger walking slowly behind me.

I thought to myself: fortunately, it is broad daylight. I don't know what to do if it is at night.

I held my head high and drove on.

Unconsciously, I came to a crossroads of traffic lights.

It was just a red light. I was just waiting outside the zebra crossing. While waiting, I was very anxious. At this time, the stranger came to the traffic lights.

I looked at him carefully. He wears casual clothes and has a big face. His eyes are like black gems ... he doesn't seem to be a bad person, but just a passerby.

The red light started flashing, and then a child ran off the road. At this time, a big truck came running, and I thought to myself: If the truck hits the child, the child will die of heart disease.

At this critical moment, passers-by rushed out and pushed the child away. The child saved the day, but passers-by were hit by a big truck and flew out.

At this time, the car stopped, and many people got together and surrounded it.

Soon the traffic police uncle came and the ambulance came ... Comments: This article is rich in content and smooth in tone.

Feelings are also very rich.

The author can add color with good words and sentences.

This is a good composition.

300-word composition describing plants with comments: I praise the faithful pine and cypress, I praise the hedge chrysanthemum against the west wind, I praise the proud sludge of lotus, but I praise the proud snowflake blooming of plum blossoms. When flowers fade, only plum blossoms are full of vitality. Facing the snowflake flying all over the sky, it stands proudly in the cold wind. It was freezing in the winter of nine years, and the plum blossoms proudly blooming in the snow were so beautiful. The petals are smooth and transparent, carved like platinum or jasper, which is somewhat elegant and pure. Some are as bright as the morning glow, some are as white as snow, and some are as green as jasper. Plum blossoms bloom sooner or later, and you can see various forms of flowering on the same plum tree. Some are ashamed to let go, and the pink buds are fresh and lovely. Some just bloomed, and a few little bees got in and greedily sucked pollen; Some bloom for a long time, and the pink petals make people love; Plum blossoms, which used to bloom, now have withered petals. The wind blew the flowers down, so you don't have to worry about them breaking. Plum blossoms are not delicate flowers, but the colder they are, the more energetic and delicate they are. There is a saying in the ancients: "The sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold." It is not the gentle spring breeze that blows it, but the cold wind that blows it. It is not the cool and sweet rain that moistens it, but the cold ice and snow; It is not the bright sunshine that shines on it, but a ray of setting sun in the cold. Only a challenging life is a good life. It was a proud fragrance in the cold, and she smiled more brightly in the face of dancing snowflakes. It never competes with flowers for bright spring, nor does it show off its beauty. It has a pair of pride and is never arrogant. Every winter morning, a unique and elegant fragrance wafts from the window. Poets and painters in ancient and modern times are not only admired for their elegant demeanor, but also regarded as the essence of the nation for their ice muscle jade bone and Lingling Liuxiang. Plum blossom, with its noble, strong and modest character, gives people the motivation to work hard. Its color is gorgeous but not demon. Its fragrance is elegant. Its posture is elegant. Whether the weather is cold or hot, whether it is windy or rainy, whether it is cold or freezing, they all work hard in their jobs. I want to learn from plum blossom and be a person like plum blossom. ....

The noblest person I have ever met wrote a 300-word comment. There are many people around us who deserve our respect, such as angels in white, the police uncle who maintains social order, and the aunt who sweeps the road for us. They are ordinary and noble people around us.

However, what I admire most is a retired grandmother.

That day, I saw a touching story of an old woman in a special program on TV.

The old woman's wife died young, her children were in another country, and she spent most of her life alone. However, she is still full of longing for life.

Have confidence in yourself.

In 2008, a natural disaster claimed the precious lives of thousands of Chinese people in Qian Qian.

At that time, people from all walks of life were donating money for our relief.

The old man, who is not well off, donated 3,000 yuan and some relief materials.

After hearing the news, some reporters came to interview the old man.

The reporter asked; Your life is not very rich, why do you donate so much money? The old man said; Brothers and sisters, we are all from China. As long as they are safe, I will feel at ease in the distance.

After reading this story, tears swirled in my eyes.

I firmly believe that there must be many such noble people in our life.

If celebrities are the spires of the pyramids, then these silent dedication people are the towers and foundations.

Without these ordinary and great people, how can there be those celebrities? How can there be the glory and achievements of today's motherland? Let's work together to make our home more harmonious and beautiful!

Full marks in the senior high school entrance examination, with more than 300 words of comments. Thank you.

The sound of the piano touched my sinking red sun and drew lonely oranges all over the sky.

Under the setting sun, the ancient road in Cang Sang is full of blurred amorous feelings, which is particularly quiet.

Everything in the world seems to be intoxicated in this frozen but very short-lived Miri, Malaysia, and all voices are stopped.

I am dragging a long shadow and strolling on a quiet ancient road. My mind is full of thoughts and I am sad for the setbacks and bumps these days.

Suddenly, a melodious piano sound mixed with a gentle breeze gently reached my ears.

The wonderful piano sound seems far away, unattainable and close, lingering in my ears.

I stopped, let this string of smart jumping notes gently slide through my heart and dance happily.

The sound of the piano is still hovering on the path in the pale twilight, but like a clear spring, it washes away the dirt and tired dust of the soul for everyone passing by.

My thoughts gradually merged with this clever and wonderful piano sound, and I felt detached from the world of mortals, "concentrating and relaxing, blending with everything."

I followed the trace of the sound and came to a shabby hut.

This melodious piano sound is coming from inside.

I was just about to hold my breath and play, when the piano suddenly stopped.

A childish voice came into my ear: "Grandpa, I'm tired.

Playing the piano is really interesting. Although I can't see it, I can feel it with my heart, right? "An old voice said," Yes, smiles send us light, you play beautifully.

I see how flexible your fingers are, just like dancing on those keys.

"My heart suddenly felt like an electric shock, and many question marks rose in my mind. Isn't it ... isn't it ... I quietly saw a little girl of seven or eight years old gesticulating with her hands and talking to an old man through the dusty glass window.

It's just that although the little girl's eyes have lost their luster, they reveal a kind of happy self-confidence.

She is blind! The old man sitting there is deaf! My heart was deeply moved again, and two lines of warm tears rolled down quietly.

These tears are sweet! The sunset put away the last ray of sunshine.

At the moment when I turned away, the wonderful piano sounded again, which moved me inexplicably again.

The ancient road echoed with the laughter of grandparents and grandchildren and the touching sound of the piano.

My step forward has become firm, because in this dark night, the moving piano sound is my beacon.

[Comment] The greatest feature of this candidate's article is sincere feelings, delicate and true description, and embodies the writing concept of "writing my heart by hand".

Although the story of this article is fictional, it is not melodramatic, melodramatic or melodramatic. The article is sincere and vivid.

The rendering of the scenery blends with the wonderful sound of the piano, the dialogue of true feelings and the touch of the heart are touching, and the graceful language and beautiful artistic conception are unforgettable.

What we appreciate is that the candidate is writing an article with his sincere heart and his true feelings.

American articles have their own merits and styles: literary talent, punchline, or sentimental ... but no matter what kind of articles can arouse readers' thoughts and feelings, they all have one thing in common: articles must be sincere, natural and touching.

The examinee's work in this examination room just puts this point into practice, and it is a masterpiece with both virtual and real examination rooms.

The 300-word excellent composition in junior high school runs through my heart with comments. I said that books are flowing water, flowing forever, flowing from the wheel of history to a bright tomorrow and a bright future ... I am here, gently opening the title page of the book and slowly entering the world of books.

Then, the cold water of wisdom slowly flowed into my heart, giving me endless knowledge, spiritual support, emotional edification and personality enlightenment.

I bathed in this flowing water, admiring every grass and flower in the book, admiring everyone who has a unique life course, admiring everything that is earth-shattering or plain as water ... I always thought that Grand View Garden was a prosperous, gentle and rich country with fragrant and beautiful girls, but the book proved me wrong.

Running water told me the truth in a common voice, so I finally knew the pain of the beautiful Xiaoxiang Pavilion girl: the blue light shines on the wall and the window is not wet! Beneath the bustling appearance of Jiafu, it is the pain of swallowing gold, the pain of jumping into a well, and the pessimism and despair of becoming a young monk! The book is running water, and her crystal water shows me the laughter and tears, love and resentment of youth.

When the horizon in the east shines with red light, when the green Jialing River ripples, and when the gorgeous rosy clouds radiate all kinds of light, my heart can't be calm. For the sky just breaking dawn, for the dawn bought with blood ... the running water of books is pouring in my heart, and my heart is surging. I can't forget Jiang Jie's calmness and firmness before his death, and I can't forget Xu Yunfeng's indomitable perseverance in enduring pain and digging stones with his nails.

Nothing can stop the pace of patriots whose faces are stung by the cold wind in the morning, with hoses spraying water, whips raised high and bullets flying overhead! The fearless marchers shouted out the voice of the whole Chinese nation! Their throats are hoarse, but their fiery hearts will not stop.

They shouted with their lives: get rid of all those who trample on our country.

Books are running water, and her deep voice flowing through Qianshan explained the greatness of patriotism to me.

"The more thousands of years, the more different the world is; Show great ambitions and ask who is in charge of ups and downs in the vast land; Think, sing picturesque, aim at a thousand miles.

Chairman Mao's poetry has become an art.

"first frost morning, horseshoe deep break, Angle.

""Thousands of trees are red in first frost, and mountain soldiers are furious. "... books are flowing water, and her impressive words let me see the wisdom of a generation of great men.

..... Books are flowing water, flowing forever, interpreting the true meaning of history.

I am willing to bathe in this flowing water forever and let it flow through my heart ... Comments: The unique angle of material selection and the gorgeous language of the article are the two highlights of this article.

I'm afraid that how to be creative and not stray from the topic in the selected composition is the focus of many students' consideration in all aspects.

With the theme of "Books are running water", the author skillfully combines the rich emotional world displayed in the book with the characteristics of running water, generalization, splashing or surging and emptying. In just a few minutes in the examination room, he not only fully demonstrated his rich reading accumulation, but also embodied his profound thoughts and ideas.

This is worth learning for candidates.

Su Shi said, "When you say little, the sky will be magnificent and the color will be gorgeous ...".

The language of this article just confirms this point.

The combination of prosody length and language length, arbitrary confrontation and contrast, handy allusions and poems have created the magnificent atmosphere of the article and touched the gorgeous color of the article.

The gorgeous language and temperament embodied in this paper is probably the key to winning the appreciation of the marking teacher.

I like plum blossom composition, 300 words plus comments. I like all kinds of flowers, including stretched and unrestrained roses; There are elegant and refined lotus flowers; There are graceful and dignified chrysanthemums; There are also peony flowers with national colors.

However, my favorite flower is plum blossom.

Plum blossoms do not compete with flowers.

Every winter, when the flowers are dying and the cold wind is biting, plum blossoms spread their postures in the mountains and slopes, beside the garden path, just like elegant fairies ... with unique charm.

The appearance of plum blossoms varies widely: some are shy and want to talk, and Leng Yan is fragrant; Some are fully open, dignified and warm; Some are extraordinary and dignified; Some are petite and exquisite.

They stand in the cold winter and look up in the cold winter! Plum blossoms, like burning flames and clouds, let us feel a warm spring breeze in our hearts, blowing through our hearts ... Bai Meihua is more like an ice sculpture, while jade bone, the ice muscle, is so beautiful, elegant and innocent that people can't help but respect it.

Plum blossoms are full of fragrance, as Lu Meipo said: "Plum blossoms need three points of snow, and the snow loses a piece of plum fragrance.

"There are no flowers, no trees, but there is a faint fragrance.

Among the plum blossoms, the fragrance is overflowing and refreshing.

At home, Xiang Mei can last for a few days.

You can't just look at her appearance and fragrance, the most important thing is her quality.

Plum blossom, willing to be lonely, indifferent to fame and fortune, selfless dedication.

She will not be lost because there are no colorful butterflies, nor will she be depressed because there are no lovely bees to follow.

On the contrary, she is very strong, stands proudly in the severe winter, blooms selflessly and silently, and brings joy and beautiful enjoyment to people's lives.

Plum blossom is noble in quality and iron in character.

She is not afraid of ice and snow, and she is not afraid of ice invading snow.

Perseverance, head held high in full bloom, unique style.

She is not depressed because of a small setback, on the contrary, she is strong! Therefore, when people meet her, they will be encouraged by her strong, upright and noble temperament.

I like plum blossoms. ...

A social news commentary composition of about 300 words was wronged. Should we do good deeds? At school, teachers teach us to learn from Lei Feng, do good deeds and help others.

It should be praised to see the old man fall on the road and get up again.

However, a 70-year-old woman in Sichuan fell on the road. Finally, she asked the three children to pay 20 thousand yuan for medical expenses, saying that they were joking and caused the old man to fall.

However, seven adults at the scene testified that the old man fell to the ground first and let the children run across the road to help her.

Well, be careful when helping others.

Are you going to help the people who fell or not? Wait a minute.

The health section of the TV station says that when a person falls, don't help him at once.

If someone touches and damages the back nerve, it will cause the injured person to be paralyzed for life.

Therefore, it is safe to call 120 first, or to ask for help from adults around you.

Do good things with strategy.

My name is Zhang xxx, and I come from Tuqiang No.2 Primary School in Haidian District, Beijing.

I am about to graduate from primary school now, looking back on my study life in primary school: I am happy-my teacher taught me to study morality like my mother, and I am determined to pursue being a useful person to society; Love the motherland, build the motherland and serve the motherland; My harvest-the teacher watered my eager seedlings with hard sweat, and gained my due moral character and book knowledge, which made my academic performance excellent; I have grown up-morality and knowledge have given me an optimistic and healthy psychology, which is only part of the growth of my little plant. My alma mater and teachers always care about our health and actively exercise.

I grew up in the all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique; In primary school, "I am happy, I gain, I grow" is the whole process of all-round development of "morality, intelligence and physique".

I spent six years happily with my teachers and classmates in primary school. My teachers have worked hard for us for six years, and we have grown up for six years, including many experiences of growing up together.

Looking back on my primary school life, I make a self-evaluation: 1. Learning-the foundation of my growth As a student, my main task is learning.

I know that the accumulation of knowledge is a long-term process, as the saying goes, "Without accumulation, a thousand miles can't be achieved, and without accumulation, a river and a sea can't be achieved."

After six years of study, I have developed good study habits.

In the first grade of primary school, the teacher told us to listen carefully to the content of each class and finish every homework carefully.

I not only understood what I learned that day, but also previewed what I learned in the next class.

Reading is my favorite. Over the years, I have read many extra-curricular books, including literature, history and science, such as A Dream of Red Mansions, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Biography of the Tang Dynasty, The Journey to the West, China Children's Encyclopedia and Education of Love.

Some of them are extracurricular reading materials for primary and secondary school students.

Through reading, I have enriched my knowledge and broadened my horizons.

Years of study have brought me excellent grades, and my academic performance has always been among the best in my class.

Grade 456 in a row was rated as a three-good student in Haidian District.

Confucius once said, "In a threesome, there must be a teacher.

During the break, I will discuss my learning experience with my classmates, and I will humbly ask them what I don't know.

From it, I got fun, knowledge and learning experience.

Second, school work-I grew up in the class, from grade one to grade six, I have been the monitor and squadron leader, which greatly exercised my organizational and management skills.

I have done a lot of things that I can for my teacher. The head teacher often asks me to help me collect money and pay money in the financial room, and every time I collect money, it is accurate and timely. This shows that the teacher is positive about my work, trusts me, and cultivates me from trivial matters, making me a good helper for the teacher.

Third, life-my growth wreath.

I am cheerful and lively.

I often help my classmates at school, and I can become good friends with my classmates.

At home, I will share housework for my parents.

I have participated in painting, flute, swimming and other training in my spare time.

He also won the third prize of Haidian Art Competition, the third prize of Haidian Calligraphy Competition, the first prize of Haidian Paper Structure Model Bearing Competition and the second prize of Haidian Aviation Model Competition, and won the first, second and third prizes of Haidian Architectural Model and Festival Essay for many times.

The study of these courses not only enriched my extracurricular life, but also exercised my various abilities and increased my knowledge and experience.

In the six years of study and life in primary school, I have gained knowledge and understood some principles of being a man.

Let me form the habit of being practical, modest, diligent and polite.

Although I have made some achievements through the help of teachers, parents and classmates during my six years in primary school, I understand that all this can only represent the past, and I understand that the deceased is like a husband, not giving up day and night.

I will make good use of every precious minute, study hard, keep exploring and climb the peak bravely.

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