Eleventh, sentiment (attached 1)
In the face of complicated life, we often have many feelings: when we see a red sun rising in Ran Ran, we may feel the vitality and vitality of people; When we see leaves falling from trees, we may realize that life is short, so we should cherish time and make great efforts. ...
In the process of participating in social communication, what we see, the scenery we see, the people we think of, and the things we experience … will always cause changes in our inner thoughts and emotions and pluck the strings of our emotions, so we feel something and understand something. What kind of feelings and understanding can cause others to sing after turning into words? Only profound uniqueness can win.
First, feel because of the scenery.
"All the scenes are sentimental." In writing, we can integrate our subjective feelings and ideological will into the scenery, so that the scenery is affectionate and the vegetation is meaningful. We cherish people when we look at flowers, homesick for the moon, spacious when we look at the sea, elegant when we look at the clouds, and everything depends on the scenery.
Sometimes, landscape also shows a natural philosophy. At this time, to write a sense, it is necessary to associate and imagine the scene and give the specific scene an abstract philosophy. When we see the dawn, we feel its power to break through the darkness, and when we see the sunrise, we also feel its difficulty in nurturing hope.
Second, because of things.
Things in literary works are either tied to a story, or entrusted with a feeling, or imply a truth. When recalling things, you can borrow things to express your feelings, you can also express your feelings with things, and you can also sing things clearly. For example, an eraser records a friendship, a greeting carries a family affection, and a bouquet of roses interprets a kind of love.
Feeling because of things is a conceptual writing mode of "saying this and meaning that". The purpose of the author's description of things is not to express this thing, but to elicit a feeling and a philosophy. So, before writing something, give it meaning; When writing, gain motivation for feeling; After writing, it feels natural. For example, writing lotus flowers is actually to praise nobility; Writing bamboo is actually to celebrate modesty; Writing scalpers is actually to show diligence; Writing about bees is actually for eulogizing dedication.
Third, feelings about people.
That is, looking for feelings from people's appearance, language, behavior and personality. You can tell your feelings while describing, and polish your feelings and feelings in the description. You can also express your feelings after the narration. Finish writing, write down your feelings in detail, and be reasonable. We can feel the greatness of our father's deep maternal love because our parents have no worries about food and clothing. We can feel something because of the heroic sons and daughters of the motherland and realize the horror of the descendants of heroic martyrs.
Fourth, feeling because of things.
After taking notes, it is an important means to express feelings on the basis of facts or to elaborate feelings from facts, which makes the composition have a philosophical beauty. Try to climb the mountain, you can feel the taste of conquering difficulties; When you experience fishing, you can feel the realm of tranquility and indifference. To write feelings from events, we should analyze and mine events from the outside to the inside, extract a truth from events, and point it out in incisive language.
Five, because of the text and feeling
After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "feeling after reading". In addition to "feelings after reading", you can also write "feelings after watching a movie, TV series or an exhibition". When writing this kind of sentiment articles, we should carefully choose some meaningful and targeted sentiments for real life, so as to avoid the disadvantages of generalities, scattered articles and aimlessness.
Attachment 1, the sentiment is intriguing.
A person who lives in family, school and society can't always be smooth sailing. There are smiles and tears; There are joys and sorrows. As the saying goes, "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain?" Write all the ups and downs in our life into the composition, and the plot will naturally have waves.
First of all, this feeling should be credible-real.
Only true feelings can make people sing, and once there are traces of affectation, there will be no touching effect. True feelings can move people's hearts. Write articles for feelings, not for feelings.
Second, perception should have the nature of slope.
Perception is not the first sight of people or things, but a process, which must be relevant, transitional, ready-made and paved, otherwise it will make people feel abrupt, difficult to understand and even more unacceptable.
Third, perception should be profound.
First of all, we should analyze the described materials, find out the points that can be expanded, then refine the materials, grasp the essential characteristics of things, and expand imagination and association, so as to explore the meaning of things themselves.
Fourth, the feelings should be concentrated-touching.
The article is not heartless. A good article is often permeated with the author's sincere and strong feelings. Strong feelings will leave a deep imprint on readers' hearts, while shallow feelings will be like passing clouds, leaving no trace.
It feels everywhere! Only through feeling can we discover the wonder of the world and the wonderful life! Only by feeling can we find out how charming the world is and how beautiful life is.
2. How to write a composition about the feeling after reading? Let me answer that. After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The article written is called "thoughts after reading".
How to write a review? The basic idea of post-reading is: (1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc.
This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, the word "Jane" must be highlighted, and the specific contents of books and articles must not be described in large paragraphs, but the parts directly related to feelings should be simply described, leaving out things unrelated to feelings.
(2) clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences.
Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article.
The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
(3) Put facts and reason around basic viewpoints. This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing.
In this process, it should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view. (4) Combining basic ideas with practice.
A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality.
This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting.
The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged.
Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written. We should pay attention to the following issues when writing the post-reading feeling: First, we should attach importance to reading, which is the premise and foundation of feeling in the relationship between reading and feeling; Sense is the extension or result of reading.
You must "read" before "feel". If you don't study, you won't feel. Therefore, to write a post-reading feeling, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp the basic content of the original text, correctly understand the central idea of the original text and the meaning of key sentences, and deeply understand the author's writing purpose and the thoughts and feelings expressed in the text.
Second, we should choose the feeling point accurately. After reading a book or an article, there will be many feelings and experiences. For the same book or article, different people think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "teasing others" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people who have no real skills will "expose their stuffing" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we consider the reason why Mr. Nan Guo Can spent half a day in Qi Xuanwang, we can think that leaders should have a realistic leadership style, not flashy, otherwise it will leave loopholes for those who fish in troubled waters. If we think from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides objective conditions for people like Mr. Nanguo to muddle along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up.
After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose what you feel most and have something to say to write.
We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing problems, pay attention to our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text.
3. How to write a composition about the feeling after reading? Format and writing method
There are usually three ways to write after reading: one is to abbreviate the outline, the other is to write after reading, and the third is to extract good sentences and paragraphs. Generally, I use my feelings (one or two sentences) as the main title, and the next line is the feelings of reading xxx, which is the subtitle. You can also write and read xxx directly.
Second, you should choose what you feel most, which is the key to writing a good summary.
Third, we should closely connect with reality, which is an important content of the feeling after reading.
Fourth, we should properly handle the relationship between "reading" and "feeling" and combine discussion, narration and lyricism.
Fifth, don't describe the original text too much, but reflect the word "Jane".
Sixth, we must carefully examine the questions.
When writing, we should distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to make "reading" grasp the key points and "feel" to write experiences.
Seven, to choose materials.
Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience. This is the central idea of the article and the sentence that points out the central idea of the article. When writing a work, you can't cover everything. You should write down the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it.
Eight, to write a post-reading feeling, you should start with a brief introduction of the content of the work you read, and then write your experience.
The original content is often summarized in 3~4 sentences. In the end, most of them return to the works they have read. Give priority to the word "emotion", remember to contact with your own life reality and combine with your own life, otherwise the composition will be empty.
Nine, be reasonable and write the true feelings.
Matters needing attention in writing after reading
The feeling after reading is by no means a copy or simple retelling of the original text, and you can't play it arbitrarily without the original text. It should be based on writing "experience".
Write with true feelings. It should be a heartfelt feeling, not a "criticism letter" or a "guarantee".
(3) Write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to have new ideas to attract or infect readers.
Be careful not to write a running account!
4. How to write a comment? Take a 500-word composition as an example.
The topic is the beginning of the composition, so be sure to write it well. Don't write comments on XX. For example, if you write about Helen Keller, you can write it as a sonorous rose-thoughts on reading Helen Keller's biography.
You can write the main content first. The main content cannot exceed 100 words. Otherwise, there is nothing to say about the deduction. Don't go straight to the main content at the beginning. You wrote a comment, not a narrative. You should set some suspense. For example, I have seen many movies, but this one let me write the main content after I did it.
Next, write about yourself. Give some examples of things you see that express the center of opposition. For example, Helen Keller wrote an article about perseverance. Then you can write about your lack of perseverance.
Then you can write about other persevering people, not celebrities, but people around you.
Then I wrote Enlightenment.
The composition pays attention to cockatoo, pig's belly and leopard's tail, so the ending can't be hasty. Get to the point and call it the center.
5. Write a short article about reading experience. 500 words only read the feeling of childhood. 1 Everyone has experienced childhood.
Childhood is beautiful, childhood is happy, childhood is happy, childhood is unforgettable ... and Gorky's childhood is horrible and tragic, which makes people afraid to recall. Even Gorky lost his father at the age of 3, lost his kind fatherly love, and followed his mother and grandmother to a small dyehouse of Grandpa.
Since then, a dark life has befallen Gorky. Grandfather's grumpy temper often hit his grandmother and Gorky, casting a shadow over Gorky's young mind.
Later, Gorky met Ivan Zgang, his bosom friend, and they talked about everything and formed a profound friendship. However, the good times did not last long, and poor little Zgang was killed by two fierce uncles.
Gorky lost his friend like this. Yakov and Mikhail are demons, beating their wives and clamoring for sharing property every day. The two brothers are not United at all, and their two sons Sasha are not good at teaching, playing tricks on Gorky everywhere.
Since then, Gorky has met the carpenter again. "Good things" were not so good at first, but later they became good friends. As a result, Gorky got a stepfather, who was fierce and often hit people. A few years later, his grandmother, who loved him the most, died, and so did his mother, so he was kicked out by his grandfather and made a living by picking up garbage.
We are well-fed and have everything we want, and we are "the apple of our parents' eye" and "the darling baby", which can't be compared with Gorky's miserable childhood. The difference in age is this difference, one is heaven and the other is hell; One is full of sunshine, the other is dark everywhere. Our childhood was hard-won! Childhood is full of joy, childhood is warm everywhere, childhood is a camera worth remembering, and childhood is full of love! Gorky's childhood has nothing to remember except some education and friendship! Childhood is an autobiographical novel written by Gorky according to his childhood.
It exposed the dark, cruel and inhuman life of the Russian czar. Gorky lived in such an environment since he was a child, suffering from torture and humiliation both mentally and physically.
However, Gorky did not lose confidence in life, but came strong. Gorky's original name was Alexei Macsimovici Peter Skov, and his nickname was Aletha.
He lost his father at an early age and followed his father and grandmother to his grandfather's house. Everything is just the beginning of the tragic fate of the protagonist Aletha.
Grandpa's home is not so much a home as a hell on earth. Grandfather is in charge of everything in the family. He has a bad temper and treats money like life. Aletha, the protagonist, is often beaten up for his mistakes. Two uncles often quarrel and struggle to separate; Women have no position in the family, and let their husbands beat and scold them to vent.
All these have left a shadow on Alisha's young mind. After that, Alisha left her grandfather's house and set foot on the society alone.
He worked as a handyman in many places, during which Aletha was bullied, but he survived. Because he has been supported by his indomitable spirit and belief.
Now, we really don't know when we will be blessed and have nothing to eat and wear. But little Aletha didn't have enough to eat and put on, and he was beaten and bullied.
Scene after scene of tragedy, I can't help but think: what would happen if we lived in the Russian czar period? Do you think it is not a inhabited place at all? The times are progressing, but people are getting weaker and weaker. When encountering difficulties, they want to retreat, escape or take shortcuts. Turgenev said: "If you want to be happy, you must first learn to suffer hardships."
A good life will last only if you pay, and you will get it only if you work hard. The novel is described with a child's eyes, which casts a layer of innocence on the tragic scene. It is sad and tragic to read, but it is not too heavy. It makes people see the light in the dark, the goodness in the evil, the light of human nature in the ruthlessness, and the great power of the people to overcome the tragic fate in the tragic atmosphere.
Gorky's childhood was full of infinite darkness, cruelty, terror, selfishness and greed. From the perspective of modern people, it can be said that Gorky had no actual material happy childhood at all, or even that he had no childhood at all. But in fact Gorky has a childhood, and his childhood is more meaningful and rich than that of anyone in modern times! When he was a child, he could not and could not do whatever he wanted; When he was a child, he could not and could not spend money like water; In his childhood, he could not and could not live a carefree life.
But because of this, Gorky saw a world different from ordinary people, and also understood and understood the life goals different from ordinary people! Therefore, he became a great writer in the former Soviet Union. Compared with Alesha, we have brilliant childhood, colorful childhood, carefree childhood, carefree childhood. Most children don't understand the meaning of "beating" because they haven't experienced the taste of being beaten and whipped.
Family intrigue, disowning six relatives for property, fighting, this kind of thing rarely happens in our family. There will be no such "terrorist incident" that tortures people to death.
Careful comparison, we seem to be so happy, as if we live in a greenhouse every day, without worrying about freezing and starving ... fate always cares for us. Living in this era, we don't have to consider food, clothing, housing and transportation. Adults let us eat and sleep well, but this does not satisfy us.
We always have all kinds of luxuries. Spending money is like running water, and making money is as easy as blowing off dust.
Maxim Gorky's childhood is world-famous. On an ordinary Sunday afternoon, I opened it.
Emotion also rises and falls with the black song in the book ... The protagonist Aletha's painful childhood moved me: he lost his father at the age of four, followed his grief-stricken mother and kind grandmother to his overbearing and bankrupt grandfather's house, but he was often beaten by his violent grandfather. But the kind grandmother protects him everywhere.
At his grandfather's house, he met many "quiet" relatives, including two selfish and insatiable uncles Mikhail and Yakov, and two cousins named Sarah. Simple and deep in love.
6. How to write a composition after reading an article or a book, and write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "post-reading feeling". How to write a review? The basic idea of post-reading feeling is as follows:
(1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, the word "Jane" must be highlighted, and the specific contents of books and articles must not be described in large paragraphs, but the parts directly related to feelings should be simply described, leaving out things unrelated to feelings.
(2) clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.
(3) Put facts and reason around basic viewpoints. This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing. In this process, it should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view.
(4) Combining basic ideas with practice. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged. Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written. Pay attention to the following questions when writing the post-reading feeling:
First, attach importance to "reading" in the relationship between "reading" and "feeling", which is the premise and foundation of "feeling"; "Feeling" is "reading"
An extension or result of. You must "read" before "feel". If you don't study, you won't feel. Therefore, to write a post-reading feeling, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp the basic content of the original text, correctly understand the central idea of the original text and the meaning of key sentences, and deeply understand the author's writing purpose and the thoughts and feelings expressed in the text.
Second, we should choose the feeling point accurately. After reading a book or an article, there will be many feelings and experiences. For the same book or article, different people think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "teasing others" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people who have no real skills will "expose their stuffing" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we consider the reason why Mr. Nan Guo Can spent half a day in Qi Xuanwang, we can think that leaders should have a realistic leadership style, not flashy, otherwise it will leave loopholes for those who fish in troubled waters. If we think from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides objective conditions for people like Mr. Nanguo to muddle along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up. After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose what you feel most and have something to say to write. We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing the problem, contact our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text.
7. How to write a composition of 400 words about how to write a composition of 500 words and 300 words? Mentioning the feeling of writing after reading will naturally be associated with writing reading notes. As we all know, writing reading notes can help us deepen our understanding of the ideological content of the article, improve our reading and writing skills, and also help us accumulate materials and fundamentally improve our understanding ability. Writing reading notes helps us to form a good habit of writing diligently. There are usually three ways to write it: one is to abbreviate the content outline, and the other is to write the feeling after reading it. One is extracted sentences and paragraphs. Today, let's focus on the second one. The topic can be * * * after reading, or * * *.
First of all, we must carefully examine the questions. When writing, we should distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to make "reading" grasp the key points and "feel" to write our own experiences.
Secondly, choose materials. Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience, that is, the central idea of the article, that is, the sentences that point out the central idea in the article For a work, you should write about the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it, and make a fuss about one of them.
Third, you should start with a brief introduction of the contents of the works you read, and then write your experience. It is often appropriate to summarize the original content in 3-4 sentences. Finally, you should mainly return to the works you have read. You should focus on the word "feeling" and remember to contact your real life.
Finally, the points for attention in writing the post-reading feeling: ① Writing the post-reading feeling is by no means copying or simply repeating the original text, and it should be based on writing "experience"; 2. Write with true feelings, from the bottom of your heart, not "criticism letter" or "guarantee letter"; (3) to write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to have new ideas, attract or infect readers.