"People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs." Su Shi told us his feelings about the laws of nature. Qiu Chunhua stone, summer rain and winter snow, the stars move, the four seasons alternate, the tide rises and falls, and life and death depend on each other. Finally, it is "I wish people a long life, which is beautiful for thousands of miles."
A writer once wrote that culture is the expression of life and can be used as a yardstick to measure the rise and fall of a country's civilization and society. Gorky said: Life is the struggle between master and slave to get rid of the oppression of power. Its beauty lies in its richness. In order to make life interesting, we must constantly enrich it. However, isn't our cultural life a combination of the two? It should be both expressive and colorful.
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2. How to write a good description of the scene 1 at the beginning of the composition:
Spring is full of vitality and colorful; Jiangnan in spring is beautiful, the wind is soft, the air is fresh and the sun is warm. Wheat seedlings in the field are like the sea, scattered villages are unsinkable boats, criss-crossing winding rivers, willow branches by the river spit out buds, and reeds are green as soon as they come out; The calm river wakes up from the simplicity of winter and is covered with the color of nature.
Scene 2:
In summer, Wan Li is sunny and Wan Li is clear; Summer is a season of changing faces. It sometimes cries and sometimes laughs. In a short time, Wan Li was clear, the blue sky was like washing, the sky was high and the clouds were light, and the sun was like fire; For a while, the sky was low and dark, the clouds were gathering and the wind roared; After a while, the weather went on the rampage, with lightning and thunder; It will rain cats and dogs later. It rained for a while, and Hongqiao flew north and south. Summer is like a child's face, changing without warning.
Scene 3:
In winter, it is covered with snow and the north wind is howling. Winter is a surly teenager, sometimes docile and clever, and sometimes playing some practical jokes. When he is happy, the sun is shining and the breeze is blowing gently. When he is unhappy, dark clouds cover the sun, and it rains and snows.
Scene 4:
In autumn, the sky is crisp and golden, which is really intoxicating! Autumn is golden. In the field, the heavy ears of rice let farmers enjoy the joy of harvest. You see, the ears of rice are still shining with the glittering and translucent sweat of farmers! No wonder some people say that autumn is a happy season! Autumn night, the shadows of trees are dancing and the cool wind is blowing gently. My friends and I sat by a calm lake, listening to the rustling of autumn leaves and looking up at the dazzling stars in the night sky. They shine in the autumn night sky, like gems embedded in the night, so beautiful! The shining stars gather together, and that is the Milky Way! Look, the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl are walking. The beauty of autumn night is really wonderful! The autumn wind is bleak, and yellow leaves fall. They used to be so green, however, did they end their lives like this? No, next spring, it will give people green power and green hope. Looking at the falling yellow leaves, I think of the past laughter, the past happy time, and of course, the past troubles and unpleasant things. Memories are often exciting. In fact, life should be like this fallen leaf, and the past is the past. We should not only recall the past, but also plan the future. The leaves will be green again next year, and life will be better tomorrow. Ah! Qiu, I finally understand! Life is hope, and life is beautiful. Autumn is pleasant! I love autumn deeply. Autumn inspires me to live. Autumn is the season that interests me.
Scene 5: Olympic venues
This afternoon, the diving springboard area of the Water Cube is particularly eye-catching. Eight teams, including the host China, gathered here. They are Russian team, Australian team, British team, German team, American team, Ukrainian team and Canadian team, while China's old rival, Russian team, was the champion of this event in the 2000 Sydney Olympic Games. This time, they are still led by the famous soldier Suoding, ready to attack the gold medal.
Scene 6: Campus
A crimson sunset glow shone on the western hills, and large white clouds floated in the blue sky. They are flaming purples in the sunset. If you look carefully, you will see clouds flying in the air, just like in a veiled dream, which will keep you away from troubles.
I walked comfortably on the playground of the campus, and my steps were so light and slow that I didn't seem to want to disturb this intoxicating evening. I've been tired all day. At this time, I looked west and saw the sunset holding the top of the mountain. The sunset was like blood and clouds were like fire, coating the campus, Woods, rivers, villages and mountains with a soft layer of carmine, surrounded by a faint golden light.
3. Create a beautiful situational composition. The first move is the best, and the beginning of the article should be attractive. The beginning of a good article includes: setting a suspense beginning; Flashback to the beginning; At the beginning of the scene description; Start point by point; Talking about the lyric beginning; Quote famous words or philosophical words, etc. Second, the plot arrangement should be tortuous, vivid and fascinating. "The text looks like a mountain, not like peace." Therefore, the narrative should be a bit "turbulent" and not straightforward. Third, the expression should be flexible and avoid single repetition. Fourth, ask questions skillfully. For example, PHS will travel again at the beginning of the future. It was really fast. The earth rolled two thousand times-in a flash, six years passed. Right, right, it has been six years since the announcement of PHS roaming in the future.
In these six years, the editorial department has received many letters. Some of these letters are addressed to me-dear editors and big friends; Others are addressed to our little reporter.
4. Write a scene description composition at the beginning of the scene (composition guidance) open sesame-Meet you happy composition At school, in the classroom, on the street, in the market ... There are often many interesting scenes, such as the dragon leaping on the sports field, neon flashing in the street at night, laughter on the playground, bargaining in the market ... Choose a scene that you are most familiar with and write it down.
Pay attention to the combination of point and surface to reflect the characteristics of this scene. Golden Finger-Give you the trick of "turning the stone into gold" ● Fengtou-Write the opening 1 Directly explain the time, place and people of the live event.
A. Today, our composition training class held a special wrench competition. Everyone is eager to try.
B, Thursday's 10-minute team will become an ocean of joy. We played an interesting game-passing packages.
C, Thursday, sunny. Teacher Wang took us to the new playground for a special relay race.
In today's composition class, we played an interesting game-sticky nose. 2. Describe a close-up.
A, you see, they just hold each other's hands tightly and pull hard to their side, deadlocked. Some of the audience on our field waved and shouted for refueling, some stamped their feet in a hurry, and some looked at their trembling hands and shouted, "Come on, come on!" " To tell you the truth, we are having a wrench competition! Hey, come and see the students in our composition class! Both boys and girls are sweating profusely.
Oh, so they are comparing wrenches. C. The students held their breath, sweated palms, and looked at the deadlocked players with rapt attention.
The air seems to be solidified, and it seems to be constantly expanding and expanding. As long as there is a little spark, it will explode ... our relay race is in full swing, very intense and tense ... D, "Let me do it, let me do it!" Several students shouted. It turns out that my classmates are playing the game of "nose to nose".
The game is played like this. The teacher drew a big-headed doll with hair, eyes, ears and a big mouth. The fly in the ointment is that it has no nose. This nose needs us to stick it on.
E, "Ha ha ha ....." The classroom has been shrouded in this laughter, and every member is surrounded by joy-the teacher is teaching us to play the game of "sticky nose". 3. Start with cheers and laughter.
A word, "Come on, come on ..." A burst of shouts came from our classroom. We are having a wrench competition. Come and have a look! B, "Ha ha ha ..." There was a burst of laughter from time to time in our classroom.
What's going on here? We are playing the game of sticky nose! C, "Come on, come on." I heard a crisp and loud refueling sound. This is the fourth grade relay race of our sports meeting. It's really wonderful! Aren't you going to see it? Never regret. 4. Let's talk about the students' reaction to the news of wrench strength. A. In the composition class on Thursday afternoon, Mr. Yang announced that the whole class would carry out "pull strength" activities.
As soon as Mr. Yang's voice fell, some students jumped up happily, and some students began to prepare. When the class began, the teacher smiled and walked into the classroom and said, "classmate, today we are going to play the game of passing parcels."
The students were overjoyed. Today, in the composition class, Mr. Huang said that he would introduce a game called "Sticking Nose".
Everyone talked noisily: strange! We have noses. How do we post them? Everyone looked at Miss Huang with curious eyes. 5. Write down your feelings at that time.
A, the students looked forward to it and finally came to the autumn sports meeting of our school. The sports ground is full of fierce competition, especially the relay race.
B, the last event of the sports meeting-the head-on relay horse race has started. I am excited and excited, because I am also a member of this project ● Pork belly-write key paragraphs. First, let's watch two clips together: clip one: the kite competition has started, and colorful kites are scrambling to fly into the blue sky. Hey! There are many styles of kites: mandarin jackets, one-legged swallows, dragonflies, goldfish, butterflies and the Monkey King ... all show their magical powers in the air, which makes people dizzying.
Look how beautiful this flying "red butterfly" is. It seems to say proudly, "I am the king of butterflies, and my beauty is unparalleled." Look at the Monkey King's "the Monkey King", with a golden hoop in his hand and golden light in his eyes.
Among them, Wang Weimin's The Yellow Jacket is the highest. He is calm and calm, sometimes slowly retreating, and sometimes pulling back hard.
Kite seems to understand the owner's mood to participate in the competition, and the more he flies, the more excited he is. Segment 2: One afternoon, under the grape trellis on campus, some students were watching the ball game.
The students who participated in the competition stood next to two small partners: one was ready to count and the other was ready to time. At this time, I saw the referee teacher holding up a small red flag and shouting, "Go!" " I saw the students reaching out and patting the ball up and down quickly, only to hear the ball "snapping" on the ground.
"come on Come on! " The onlookers cheered. This game is very tense.
Some put the racket high, some put it low, and some accidentally put it at someone else's feet, which caused a burst of laughter among the friends. Xiao Fang squatted down and patted the racket, which was very short.
"One, two, three, four ..." When the cashier shouted, she was absorbed, her eyes were fixed on the bouncing ball, and sweat was oozing from her head. Suddenly, she slipped and sat down on the ground, and the ball jumped high.
Just as her classmates were sweating for her, she suddenly stood up again and continued to clap the ball with her hands. "7 1, 72, 73 ..." The voice of the tellers became louder and louder, and the onlookers cheered and laughed from time to time.
Then the referee shouted, "Stop!" At the end of a wonderful game, the teacher announced: "Xiao Fang took a lot of photos and won the first prize!" " "Friends ran to her and congratulated her. The first paragraph depicts the lively scene of the kite-flying competition.
First, make a general description of colorful kites, such as: "Hey! There are too many styles of kites.
5. At the beginning of the scene, the composition is 600 words "Come on, come on!" The playground was filled with cheers. It is Class Four (1) and Class Four (2) who are having a tug-of-war nervously.
In the first two games, the two sides drew 1-1. At the beginning of the third game, Class 4 (1) took the lead. I saw them make full efforts like little tigers, holding the rope with both hands, leaning back and kicking their legs hard. The students in Class 4 (2) were unprepared, and the rope was dragged inch by inch. "Come on, Class 4 (2)! Four (2) classes come on! " Shouts broke out on the playground. Suddenly, I don't know where I came from. Class 4 (2) students, some gritted their teeth, some tightened their faces, some held their breath, all stared round and exhausted their strength. I saw the big rope moving in the direction of Class 4 (2) bit by bit. Suddenly, the rope stopped moving and the game came to a deadlock. At this time, there was a sound of refueling on the playground. The encouraged students waved small red flags and shouted rhythmically, "Four (2)! One, two, four (2)! One, two! " After about seven or eight seconds of stalemate between the two sides, Qi Xin and Xie Bi, students of Class 4 (2), produced a great force and suddenly pulled the rope, and the red sign suddenly crossed the river boundary. "Class two won! Class two won! " The students sang and danced, and they were very happy.
6. At the beginning of the narrative of the situational composition, the beginning of the narrative is written like this:
Narrative is the key training content stipulated in the Chinese teaching syllabus of grade one in junior high school. Narrative is not only widely used, but also the basis of writing articles of other genres. Therefore, writing a good narrative is very important in junior high school composition teaching. People are often most interested in beautiful things and fascinated by beautiful articles.
The beauty of human beings is first displayed on the face of the head, and only when the head is beautiful will it attract onlookers to insist on looking at the whole body. Therefore, the beauty of the head is the key. The beginning of a good article is like "the head of a beautiful woman". If you write well at the beginning, you have already tied the reader's heart and guided him to read the article. In the reader's mind, such an article will inevitably be moved and praised.
The ancients said that "there is no definite style in writing", but there are rules to follow. Different types of articles have different ways of writing at the beginning. The following ten patterns are all good moves at the beginning of a narrative.
First of all, cut to the chase:
At the beginning of the article, point out the theme, that is, cut to the chase. If a classmate writes this article, it begins with a few inscriptions:
Teacher, your eyes, sometimes deep and sometimes bright, welcome my progress and feel uneasy about my depression. I get a satisfactory answer from your eyes, asking for nothing in return. I just finished junior high school, and there is a childish child under your nose ...
Second, the description of the gods:
From the beginning, the article describes the characteristics of the protagonist's appearance and form. It is a description of form to describe the characteristics of the protagonist's appearance and form with vivid language and appropriate expressions. This is how a female student wrote this article "Introduce me to everyone":
Standing in front of you is a junior two student, tall, with a round face and two heavy eyebrows across his modest eyes; Lips with little blood are often sipped, and the lower lip is often more prominent than the upper lip, showing a look of never being convinced. My black hair is cut short like a boy-this is me.
Third, the dark ambush pen:
At the beginning of the article, some methods are described to let readers know the hero's later situation at first sight. For example, if you want to write about an unhappy mother, you can start by writing:
At the age of 25, an unfortunate car accident took the life of her dear husband, leaving her with endless pain and two young children.
As soon as the reader sees the beginning, he will come to the conclusion that when the woman loses her child, her situation will be even more difficult. However, in order to train the child into an adult, she will certainly go through vicissitudes and hardships, and her deep love and lofty maternal love for her son are reflected between the lines. However, her deep love for her mother was an unfortunate hug, really unfortunate.
Fourth, express the feeling of * * *:
At the beginning of the article, the author expressed strong feelings with full * * *, or expressed his thoughts for distant relatives, or revealed sadness between vicissitudes of life, or showed sadness that his ambition was hard to pay, or expressed his praise for new people in society. Some students successfully used this writing method when writing "The Flower Season of Seventeen".
Seventeen years old, poetic years, like a quiver in the melody of life, like a smile on a spring flower. Seventeen-year-old, thoughtful years, because the world has never been so grand as it is today, a lot of new things and new information rushed into our field of vision at an extremely fast speed, so many new problems and troubles also filled our hearts.
Fifth, promote the first type of inhibition:
In order to achieve the purpose of praising the hero, the author tried to belittle the hero from the beginning, saying that he could not do this and that, and then made a 180 degree turn, revealing the noble spiritual quality of the hero from the opposite side. This way of writing means that he wants to praise the hero first. In order to create a child who doesn't live up to expectations and has the worst grades, a student hates iron and doesn't produce steel. As a result, he is very strict with his children, and later he is made to be very strict with them.
I hated my father since I was a child, and my father hated me.
In just two sentences, I want to praise first and then suppress. I hate my father because my father is strict with me, and I hate my father because I love to play and fail to live up to expectations. However, it is precisely because of my father's strict control over me that I got rid of my bad habits and made progress in my studies. This opening style can be said to be wonderful.
Contrast and contrast of intransitive verbs;
That is to say, at the beginning, two situations completely different from the protagonist are stated to set off the outstanding quality of the protagonist in a certain aspect. One candidate used this writing method at the beginning when writing the article "I found beauty", which played a leading role.
Where is the beauty? Some people say that beauty is in the night sky, and the twinkling stars are her eyes. Some people say that beauty is in a stream, and the falling petals are her tears; Some people also say that beauty is in the canyon, and the morning mist is her veil ... beauty is sacred and illusory in people's minds. But not long ago, a girl appeared, which made me really realize the true meaning of beauty.
On Wednesday afternoon, the rain fell from the sky, and the whole white campus was immersed in the rain and fog-a crisp sound of class sounded, and the students packed their bags, took up their umbrellas and disappeared into the rain and fog.
At this time, I am anxious like an ant on hot bricks, because I don't have an umbrella. When I went to school in the afternoon, it rained very little, so I thought it would stop raining after school.
This time, I looked at the distant figures of my classmates. Can I not worry? Suddenly, someone hugged my shoulder. I turned disapprovingly and was surprised! Standing in front of my eyes is my good friend-Zi Min. He said to me, "Dude, I knew you didn't bring an umbrella.
Go home together! ""this ... back to ... ok ... "I didn't know how to answer, and I became faltering. But he plunged in, pulled me up and walked out.
Answer: He sent me home first, and then went home by himself. Looking at his distant back, my eyes are moist, and I don't know whether it is rain or tears.
8. At the beginning of the scene, writers who write stories close to life often experience many unforgettable things in life.
These things are like a cup of strong tea. Only by savoring them carefully can we feel their sweetness. It was a bright afternoon in early spring, and the sun shone through the cracks in the trees and fell to the ground, becoming a mottled and broken shadow.
I am alone, walking on the tree-lined path, smelling the fragrance of flowers and plants, feeling the fragrance of the earth, humming a ditty and strolling on the beautiful road in early spring. Suddenly, I heard a faint birdsong: chirp.
I followed the sound and looked around. A small sparrow is chirping under a big tree. This little sparrow has not grown up, its hair is sparse, and its yellowish mouth is open and closed. It must have been stabbed by some naughty child, poor little thing ... I was curious and bent down to pick it up.
Suddenly, there was a voice in my ear, which was very urgent and seemed to panic. I turned around and saw an adult sparrow not far from the little sparrow.
It should be sparrow's mother. Maybe her foot is hurt and she can't move at all. I saw it flapping its wings desperately and screaming, as if to fly.
When the sparrow saw a huge shadow hanging over it, it immediately cried out in fear, as if calling: mom-mom-. I continued to reach out to it.
At the moment when I was about to touch the sparrow, I was shocked. A scene that surprised me happened: I saw the injured female sparrow jump by, suddenly jumped to the sparrow's side, spread her wings to protect the sparrow, and stared at me with a complicated look, full of kindness and fierceness. The little sparrow hid under her mother and closed her eyes comfortably.
I was shocked by the power of maternal love. I slowly retracted my hand, and the shadow that frightened them left them again.
The little sparrow let out a cry of joy, as if to say thank you. Mother sparrow's eyes softened and her eyes narrowed. I left them and walked forward, thinking about what happened just now, and I couldn't help but feel deeply: it turns out that maternal love is not only in humans, but also in animals.
Mother sparrow bravely protected the little sparrow when it was in danger, and wrote an ode to maternal love, which made me understand that love does not distinguish between people and animals. Although it has been many years, I am still shocked and moved, and the touching scene reappears in front of my eyes.
In my ear, I seem to hear the chirping of the little sparrow again-chirping-chirping ... that time, I was really touched.