(1) French writer Hugo said: "The ocean is the widest in the world, and the sky is wider than the ocean. Our mind is wider than the sky." Learn to be tolerant and let the flowers of tolerance bloom in your heart.

(2) There is a line in Shakespeare's famous play The Merchant of Venice: "Tolerance is like a drizzle in the sky, nourishing the earth. It blesses the tolerant and the tolerated. We should learn to tolerate others ... "Indeed, in life, we should let the fire of tolerance ignite in our hearts.

2. At the beginning of the quotation: Yimihua is trying to find the nutrients for its survival in the arid desert of Africa and under the dark ground, and all these efforts are only for its vision-to compete with the vicious sun in the sky with colorful petals, even at the cost of life. Vision makes a better life.

3, the beginning of support: one meter of flowers, because the "vision" will eventually be colorful; Thorn birds, because of their "vision", sing well after all. That's the way it is, people are still. Have a vision and fight for it. A bright tomorrow belongs to you.

4. Metaphor begins

(1) If life is a rushing river, then responsibility is one of the most beautiful waves; If life is a bright star, then tolerance is the brightest star. With responsibility, life will be better.

(2) Life is like the sea, and tolerance is a boat. Only by boating in the sea can we know the depth and breadth of the sea; Life is like a mountain, tolerance is the path, climb along the path and you will know the height of the mountain; Life is like a song, tolerance is a song, and only by singing with it can you know the beauty of this song. So: life needs tolerance.

(Note: Generally, the metaphor begins with a transitive sentence, two or three sentences are enough.)

5. Declarative opening (the most general opening)

In this troubled world, there are bound to be some misunderstandings and frictions between people, so we must learn to be tolerant.

6. Turn virtual into real.

(Supplementary note:

Among them, 1, 2,4 is an excellent beginning of the tolerance of propositional composition;

The wonderful beginning consists of two materials. The material is: On the Gobi Desert in Africa, there is a small flower called Aimi. This flower has four petals, each with its own color: red, white, yellow and blue. Its uniqueness does not stop there. Plants with huge roots can grow well, but there is only one root, which meanders into the deep underground. It usually takes five years to complete the work of interpenetrating rhizomes, and then, accumulate nutrients bit by bit. In the spring of the sixth year, it bloomed green flowers and a four-color floret on the ground. This one-meter flower, which is extremely difficult to grow, has a short flowering period. In two days, it will die with the mother plant. )

Attention at the beginning of argumentative paper:

Don't start too long, don't exceed four lines, or it will be too slow to do such a question;

The case should be summarized at the beginning, and analyzed while quoting; Don't be far-fetched at the beginning of metaphor;

The first paragraph clearly puts forward the argument;

How to use the materials in the first paragraph will be discussed below.

How to deal with materials in composition

1, the first case: if the composition materials are extremely simple and contain extremely clear opinions, there is no need to analyze them at all, then the materials in the first paragraph can be omitted;

For example: 20 1 1 composition materials of Henan volume of the college entrance examination Chinese paper:

According to the top ten news of the 20th century published by the American Institute of Global Languages, the news about China's rise as an economic and political power ranks first and becomes global news. The Institute has tracked 750,000 pieces of information in print media, electronic media and Internet around the world, and found that there are more than 300 million pieces of information reporting the rise of China. So, what are the main features of China's rise that deserve praise and attention? China Youth Daily and Sina.com conducted a survey among netizens in China, and the top six results are: economic development, international influence, improvement of people's livelihood, scientific and technological level, new urban process and openness. Please talk about your thoughts and feelings according to the above materials.

Such as: full score composition "Love you, the choice of my life";

Whenever that red sun rises from Ran Ran in the east, whenever that flag flutters in the morning breeze, I will silently say to myself: Love you, I love you.

Of course, you can also simply quote (but don't need to analyze), such as the college entrance examination composition "China's Pentium Heart of Science and Technology":

I was shocked to hear that The Rise of China ranked first among the top ten news stories in the world, and what I felt most was the rapid development of science and technology in China.

In the second case, if the composition material is a little more complicated and needs simple analysis, it is suggested to quote the material in the first paragraph as much as possible and analyze it while quoting.

For example, the "opening" at the beginning of several common argumentative papers:

(You can start with "case" or "parallel case". )

The third case: If the material is complicated and needs in-depth analysis, it is recommended not to quote the material in the first paragraph. The first paragraph refers to the beginning of the "first case" (of course, the central argument should also be placed in the first paragraph), the second paragraph specifically deals with the materials, and the second paragraph should be analyzed in depth in the overview materials.

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4. The fourth case: If the material is very complicated, you can not only use the third method to deal with the material, but also ask questions at the beginning and end of each paragraph in the argument of each subsequent paragraph.

For example: "Compulsory five for senior three? Composition exercise "a material:

One of Confucius' students saw a child fall into the rushing river, so he jumped down to save him. The child's father gave him a cow to thank him, and he accepted it happily. Many people say that he is too greedy. Confucius said to him, you did the right thing, because your behavior announced to the society that as long as you saved people in danger, no matter how big the reward, you can accept it, which can encourage more people to save people.

During the Spring and Autumn Period, there was a rule in the government of Lu that when Lu people traveled abroad, they could reimburse their own people who were enslaved in foreign countries, and then go to the government for reimbursement after returning home. One of Confucius' students didn't pay the bill after redeeming the man. People praised him for his noble character. Confucius severely criticized him, saying that his behavior prevented more slaves from being redeemed in Lu, because people would suffer if they paid for slaves, but if they paid for them, their character was not as good as Confucius' students, so they had to pretend not to see them in the future.

Pay attention to when handling materials:

In short, how to deal with the composition materials at the beginning of the composition depends on the complexity of the materials;

Remember: the materials in the composition cannot be used as arguments for sub-arguments.