Qingliu, Tanghe, who is the leading role and who is the supporting role?

Loess, towering mountains, who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role? Word asymmetry. I think it should be "loess, towering mountains, who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role?" Because your stream is facing the river, the loess should be facing the mountain below.

"Ying Ying Moonlight, Falling Afterglow" are two "supporting roles" from a landscape perspective.

"There is no absolute supporting role in this world, but there is an absolute protagonist, and that is ourselves." I think the best position of this sentence should be at the end. As an argument result, the full text should be closed.

(1) "Don't put the hat of the supporting actor on your head, because it doesn't belong to us. Anyone can be himself, even if no one pays attention to you, even if your task is to play a supporting role! "

2 "The leading role and supporting role are insignificant, and whoever is the most useful is the most wonderful. Does this not conform to the previous words? We ourselves are the absolute protagonists. "

3. "Lu You sighed with emotion," East wind evil, with a weak feeling and a cup of sadness, has been separated for several years, wrong! No! ! No! ! ! "Without Tang Wan, what is his leading role? Li Bai sang "Raise a glass to see the bright moon, bring my shadow and make the three of us", with only the moon as the companion. What do you do as the protagonist? Su Shi joked: "There are plenty of fish in the sea. "Without a female companion, what else do you lead?"

Absolutely. As soon as you write this, your writing angle and scope will be greatly reduced, and there is no way out, giving people the feeling that only you know life. Moreover, there is no room for readers to think.

"Let people see, let people guess and make people laugh. We take ourselves as the leading role and sincerely interpret our lives. Why bother? What's the plan? I just want to open the memory of the future. There are always scenery that belongs to me in those past events. " The thought is too negative. The teacher wants to see your positive, youthful and energetic side, but you are lonely, gloomy and gloomy. I feel terrible.

Overall evaluation: I think the biggest failure of this article is that your language is too absolute! Stabbing people everywhere like a hedgehog. No one wants to see a savior here claiming that he is the only one in the world. I recited many ancient poems, but it didn't work in the right place. Polish your language and make readers feel that you are not a hedgehog, but a kind and kind consultant. When you write articles in the future, you should stand on your side and on the reader's side. The most important thing is to pay attention to your language. Good luck!