The theme of the composition
Strange things happen from time to time in life. How to face strange things, different people have different attitudes and practices, and naturally, the results are often different.
Contact the experience and understanding related to "strangeness" in life, write an article, do your own topic and style, not less than 800 words.
Some doubts
U 1, is the college entrance examination a topic composition?
O is not necessarily the most likely to write a propositional composition, but it is possible to examine the topic composition in the form of this topic, or to point to a given material composition with only two clear meanings.
U 2, leave the lead writing off topic?
O lead is just a reminder. The composition is not written in the introduction, but it is closely related to the topic or topic and conforms to the meaning of the topic.
U 3, I didn't write my own personal experience and experience. Is that a digression?
O there is no such statement, as long as the thoughts and feelings in the argumentative essays are consistent, even if they are demonstrated by the ancients.
U 4。 What should I pay attention to when writing a topic?
O first of all, don't forget to write the topic. Secondly, the topic should reflect the theme and attract reviewers. Again, the topic should not be too long.
A question
O Why do we think normally, but when it comes to writing, it becomes "unreasonable" and "absurd"? Out of body experience?
O composition is just a written expression of our daily thinking. Everyone is doing something to convince others every day. Writing an argumentative essay means that you turn your voice into words to convince others, but the form is different and there is no essential difference. So there is no need to be afraid of writing. Don't separate the relationship between composition and life, and then write some illogical words.
O thinking in writing: intentional thinking; Debate thinking
Breakthrough thinking
First, how to open your mind?
U 1, the concept is clear
O clarifying the concept of topic is the premise of opening up the train of thought, otherwise it is better to interpret and refine some abstract and polysemous topics in the text.
O strange setbacks; Unfamiliar opportunities; Unfamiliar in thinking; An unfamiliar dilemma; Strange Sudan Red, Clenbuterol and Waste Oil; Unfamiliar mentality; Strange honesty; Strange love; Unfamiliar caution; Strange Hearts ...
O strangeness does not mean indifference.
U 2, start thinking with lead.
U 3。 What other ways do we open our minds?
O When you get the essay question, what's the first thing that comes to your mind?
O How to operate the so-called "adding information", "reverse thinking" and "dialectical thinking"? Why can't you think of anything during the exam?
N is the simplest and most direct: similarity and related association.
O About strange strangers, strange things, famous sayings, proverbs, stories, film and television works and literary works.
Contrary association
O Familiarity, "There is no scenery in the familiar place"-homeopathic thinking-is there a scenery in the strange place? Why?
Oh, a familiar stranger
N adding information method (subject-predicate-object definite complement)
O strange phone calls; A strange place (homesickness)
O be kind to strangers; Don't be a cold stranger; Abandon prejudice against strangers;
O How to face strangeness (timidity, positivity ...)
Dialectical thinking:
O (thinking in two, that is, seeing both the good side and the bad side of things)
N abnormal thinking:
A strange hometown; A strange father (what makes him strange finally boils down to familiarity) ...
Second, how to make our reasoning more convincing?
U argumentation thinking:
O 1, the logic should be accurate.
O 2, the theme should be clear.
Language should be dialectical.
O 4, horizontal and vertical comparison
O 5, taboo:
O Avoid describing stories as "visible" without analysis;
O avoid stealing themes;
O avoid repetition, dryness and tasteless;
O Avoid stereotypical examples;
Avoid childish language
Third, re-examine our thinking loopholes from the existing problems.
U 1, the inspection is not accurate enough.
O The original meaning of "strangeness" is: strangeness and strangeness, but many students' understanding of "strangeness" is not accurate enough and fail to grasp the most essential connotation of "strangeness". All things that have never been seen or met are classified as "unfamiliar", so that "unfamiliar" is regarded as a big basket, and nothing is typical in the selection of articles. In fact, the root cause lies in strangeness.
O The implied meaning of the word "unfamiliar" should be unfamiliar relative to "familiar", such as the unfamiliar environment caused by the change of life and career; Strangers met in life; Unknown territory ... these strange things are waiting for you to understand, adapt, explore, change, and finally become strange from strange.
O Many students don't consider the potential meaning of the word "strange", so that everything that has nothing to do with them is classified as "strange".
O there are still some compositions that seriously deviate from the meaning of the topic. For example, just list a person (the person who touched China) and write that you have learned some qualities from that person; Draw you closer with strangeness. I ...
U 2, the thought is not deep enough
O first of all, it is reflected in the inaccurate refinement of opinions. The overall intention of this article should be to write about attitudes and practices towards strangers, such as adaptation, communication, courage, curiosity and exploration ... But many candidates write about perseverance, persistence, tolerance, self-confidence and optimism ... This idea is broad, general and lacks pertinence, which is actually beside the point.
O Secondly, it is reflected in the fact that the composition has roughly the same conception angle, and there are not many compositions with profound conception and personality.
O In addition, the viewpoint is not deep enough, and the results and significance of treating "strangeness" are not written, and the facts are listed on the surface.
U 3, the angle of conception is not concentrated enough
O There are many angles of thinking, and the objects of "weirdness" are too wide. The environment, people and knowledge are multi-angles, and there is no unified center, and there is no internal connection between arguments.
O case 1 the first point: helpful to strangers;
O sub-argument 2: In the face of unfamiliar shackles, we must take a firm attitude;
O sub-argument 3: in the face of strange fashions, we should have a tasteful attitude.
O Case 2 Key arguments 1: Treat strangers with humility;
O sub-argument 2: treat strangers with an attitude of reserving differences;
O sub-argument 3: treat strangers with deep love
U 4, thinking is not rigorous enough
O The composition of "syllogism" based on templates is greatly reduced, and many of them are simply superimposed compositions of several materials. But there is a lack of strict logic between paragraphs, which is not rigorous enough. Some compositions are confused, which makes the marking teacher look very hard.
U 5。 The materials are the same or atypical.
O The phenomenon of materials following the trend is serious, such as Edison, Liu Wei, Liu Xiang, Sima Qian, Su Shi, Tao Yuanming, Helen Keller, Wu Juping, Alim, Yue ... There are not many impressive and novel materials.
O in addition, the materials are not typical, such as Sima Qian being beaten and facing strangeness, which is mainly related to the inaccurate examination of the questions.
U 6, interplanting
N (1) full-text interplanting
O Case 1 only points to "strangeness" at the beginning and end, and the text has nothing to do with "strangeness" at all, without pointing or deduction.
O example 2 when disaster comes, we should fight it persistently;
O when happiness comes, you should face it with a calm mind;
O when success comes, accept it with a normal heart.
N (2) sub-argument set
O case 1 frustration is a kind of strangeness;
Success is a stranger;
The road of life is strange.
O Example 2 Be brave to strangers.
O be persistent when dealing with strangers;
O be optimistic about strangers.
1 (57 points)
A door left unlocked.
Tens of thousands of years ago, the trees in the virgin forest were knocked down by lightning and a raging fire broke out. The ape, the ancestor of human beings, sat and watched for a long time, but finally went forward, tempted, burned and repeatedly tempted ... Finally, human beings understood and mastered fire.
Fire is completely strange to primitive humans, and eventually they can get close to each other, because strangeness does not mean a blocked wall, but a door left unlocked.
Facing the door left unlocked by strange things, we should at least inherit the curiosity of human ancestors and sit and watch the flames. "Curiosity is the most necessary quality for philosophers." Those strange things stand on the plain of understanding from an angle that they have never seen before. If you don't have curiosity, if you turn a blind eye, the door is in front of you and you don't know it, or if you see the door left unlocked but you don't have the spirit to explore the things behind you, everything will be a joke in the future. Lu Yu was adopted by the Zen master from birth, but he had nothing to do with Buddhism. I'm curious about the strange clothes on the wall of the tile, and I see the door left unlocked, and I want to know what a strange world it is after the period. When the Book of Tea came out and Lu Yu became synonymous with tea, he either secretly congratulated himself on his strange curiosity, otherwise how could a Buddhist be such a tea master?
It's not enough to be curious about the door left unlocked. You should also have the courage of your ancestors, dare to step forward and watch the door for a lifetime. I have been curious about that stranger all my life, holding the fantasy of "swinging in the wall and getting out of the way". Why not summon up the courage to push open the door left unlocked? In the face of strange scientific fields, Mendel took courage and took the first step of genetic law; Darwin summoned up the courage to bid farewell to his hometown and set sail with the sailors on an unknown journey; Levin Hook took courage and spent more than ten years polishing his lens. Walking into a strange microbial world is not terrible. The door is not threatening, but the courage to dare to go strange is precious. So Tolstoy's greatness and sadness led him to hesitate all his life. At the end of his life, he finally opened the door left unlocked during recess and closed his deep and desolate eyes in a world where he sympathized with the unfamiliar lower class all his life.
The door left unlocked was pushed open, and a strange world was revealed. Can you try again and again like your ancestors until you know good and bad and let strange things work for you? Many people can't take heroin and ecstasy ... How many young people are trapped after the strange world of drugs is opened? How many former good officials, when plucking up the courage to open the door of accepting bribes, could not distinguish between good and bad, then fell into it and finally fell down? Strange things are good and bad, and the strange world is unknown, rain or shine. You can be curious and dare to explore, but you also need to distinguish between good and bad. Open the door for your own use, close the door, taste the sweetness, and quit. You must distinguish between good and evil and try again until you can distinguish between good and evil. Everything in the strange world depends on you.
There is a door left unlocked in the boundless knowledge square. Find it, doubt it, push open the door left unlocked, and a completely strange world appears.
Your world
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In this paper, the vivid expression of pushing open the door left unlocked and entering a strange world runs through the whole text, supplemented by the philosophy contained in the ancestor's "Try Again ……", and the three paragraphs of the article How to Enter a Strange World are concisely and accurately explained, involving "curiosity", "courage" and "distinguishing good from bad". The article is relevant, thoughtful, substantial, persuasive, detailed and appropriate. Just through a door left unlocked ","Watching the door all my life and wondering about the stranger all my life "and" There is a door left unlocked in the vast knowledge square "are concise philosophical poems.
Scoring content 24, expression 23, development 10, total score 57.
Document No.2 (55 points)
Face strangeness
"It was a great surprise to see a fisherman, but I never knew what to ask." Taoyuan people choose panic when facing strangers. "Laugh and ask where the guests come from." The children playing at the head of the village chose to relax and calm down in the face of strangers. What about you? How do you treat strangers who appear from time to time in your life?
Out of human nature, you will probably flee in horror and bury your head in the comfortable world you are familiar with, such as Chang Ju and Chu Kuang. They hid in the mountains when the world collapsed and lived the old life, such as Cao Cao making the illusion of land with chains on the river, such as Zhang Ailing's love for a corner of the petty bourgeoisie in the ever-changing times ... Only familiarity can bring you a sense of security in the ever-changing world and let you live in the inertia of the past. People are always unwilling to change. Because strangeness implies unknown dangers, their choices are understandable, but they are confined to the familiar world, and their lives cannot be updated and broadened. They only long for a stable life and must not have colorful colors.
Then, why not learn from Sanmao, embrace the strange world with open arms and open up a new situation in life? The yellow sand is rolling all over the sky, the desert is lonely, the long river sets the yen, the camel bells are melodious, and the roughness of the Sahara is strange to her who was born in the beautiful treasure island! The local aborigines robbed 10-year-old bride and kept smiling and refused to return the borrowed things. What a shock their barbarism brought to her! However, she looked at the strange land with deep affection and gave her her whole heart. Bai Sensen's camel skull has become her precious wealth, and simple villagers come to her for treatment if they have any diseases. Once a sentimental woman, she turned into a tough camel thorn, and brought out her best self in a once strange desert. She accepted the strangeness, adapted to the strangeness and then integrated into it, becoming an admirable and enviable strange girl, sensitive and generous. It is this strange experience that adds another dimension to her life and allows her to roam freely in the vast and unfamiliar sky. This is a door to a new world. If you go out bravely, God will give you a rich life.
However, on top of this, there is another realm, that is, the "unchangeable" that should be changeable with constancy is not limited to familiarity, but to understand the * * * essence of strangeness and familiarity. With ordinary rules, Deng Yaping has answers. After retiring, she practiced English and entered the world of another language from scratch. However, she said, "I recite a word every time." Climbing english, a mountain, is the only way to overcome academic difficulties with dribs and drabs of accumulation and perseverance. Deng Yaping holds this idea and is invincible in the face of unfamiliar fields. How calm she is now standing on the podium of the Olympic Committee! If you can find the familiarity hidden behind the strangeness, you can naturally adapt easily.
Xi Murong said, "Life is a flowing river". How many strange beaches and whirlpools there are! Let's face the stranger with a calm heart, embrace the stranger with a happy heart, and write a unique chapter in life with a brush!
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Paying attention to argumentative writing is a highlight of this paper. The beginning is introduced from the classic scene, which makes people think deeply. Quote famous sayings at the end, and epigrams call on the subject to use the step-by-step method. First, it is pointed out that people may choose to escape from nature in the face of strangeness; Point out why not "embrace the strange world with open arms and open up a new situation in life"; Finally, it is pointed out that the higher level realm is to face strangers with "constant strain" The full text shows that the language expression of thinking about life is also eye-catching, and the second paragraph is clear and rich. The third paragraph describes the argument in situational language, which is very appealing and beautiful, but the clarity of the third layer of the subject can be strengthened, and the significance of the argument is not as good as that of the two layers.
Scoring content 22, expression 23, development 10, total score 55.
Document No.3 (52 points)
Be the first person to eat crab
How were crabs first discovered? How can it be delicious for human beings? The first person who meets a crab will be afraid and curious about this strange creature. The first person willing to eat this creature, facing the strangeness and unknowns of the world, is really amazing. Do you want to have a taste? Just like Mr. Lu Xun said, be the first person to eat crabs!
"Spiders must have been eaten, but they are not delicious." Mr. Lu Xun went on to say, do you dare to eat spiders? I'm afraid most people will answer "no". If they are afraid of everything new, how can they explore deeply and get familiar with it? If so, we can know that we are not afraid before we can "eat crabs"
If you cringe, I'm afraid even unfamiliar caterpillars will be mistaken for dragons! In Qian's Donkey, a lion was frightened because he had never seen it before. Isn't that ridiculous? Then, after all, the lion was not afraid of the donkey, and returned to its mighty state. It was once heard that tomato was regarded as a "wolf fruit" with toxic effects at the beginning of its discovery, and its delicacy was little known. It was not until someone finally overcame his inner fear and bravely tasted it that this fruit was able to get rid of its notoriety and overcome his inner fear of strange things! Those who dare to try early will get unexpected surprises, as the writer Zhang Xiaofeng said: "The gift of life was originally given only to those who are willing to taste it."
Unfortunately, some people are not afraid of strange things themselves, but the fear of others has formed an "impossible" net, trapping their hands and feet. The ancients loved to name strange and unknown worlds such as gods and ghosts, and never thought about going to heaven. I don't know how the first flying man in China overcame other people's eyes and countless gossips and dared to explore in heaven, although his experiment failed. However, his spirit of "going its own way" is admirable. In the face of unfamiliar e-commerce, others laughed at Ma Yun's hard work, but Ma Yun devoted himself to this unknown field. In the end, Alibaba Kingdom will drive e-commerce to sweep the world. We may never be able to bear the pressure of others' evaluation, but we can face things that are unfamiliar to everyone. Before no one dares to taste them, all evaluations and theories can only be counted as guesses. Only by standing up to the questioning eyes of ordinary people can all guesses be verified.
There are many strange things in the world, but there are always people who can't restrain their inner curiosity and want to find out. In that case, why don't we become "the first people to eat crabs"? Maybe we can not only find the delicious crab, but also change the world and cause a trend.
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The center of the article is clear and the title is loud and powerful. The author is good at analysis and reasoning, especially the paragraph "It's a pity that some people are not afraid of strange things themselves, but others' fears have made up an" impossible "net and caught their hands and feet", which further analyzes the deep-seated reasons why people are afraid of strangeness. The idea of the article reflects the clear level of the full-text argument. Although appropriate, it is not rich enough, and the content is a bit thin. For example, in the third paragraph, eating tomatoes is related to eating.
Scoring content 2 1, expression 22, development 9, total score 52.
The fourth cycle (48 points)
Brush away the dust of indifference
Strangeness is like a bright red rose, with thorns on its surface, which makes you afraid to touch it easily, but its beauty makes you crazy. Many people don't want to touch strange things, but when you brush off the indifferent dust and touch it, you get unexpected gains. Therefore, we should abandon indifference and dare to contact new things.
Refusing indifference with love and letting warm seeds spread all over the world "Little Yue Yue" incident once reported, immediately aroused great concern from all walks of life. If people passing by at that time could dig out the love in their hearts instead of walking coldly, a life might be saved. Is it because the victim has nothing to do with us that we can find a reasonable explanation for our indifference and ignore ourselves? Indifference is not lack of love. Love is deeply hidden in everyone's heart, but it will cover up the love in our hearts because it has shown an irrelevant attitude for too long. We should find the love hidden in our hearts. Only in this way can indifference disappear.
Only by rejecting indifference in a warm way can we spread the virtue of friendship and mutual assistance. Not long ago, a bicycle theft happened in Wuhan. The victim is a Japanese tourist. The tourist asked for help by calling the police, and netizens forwarded it to each other through Weibo, which finally helped the tourist get his bike back. Although the case seems unremarkable, Wuhan people's crazy story through Weibo reflects the enthusiasm of the citizens. Perhaps many people will shout "deserved it" when they learn that the victims are Japanese tourists, but the enthusiasm of Wuhan citizens makes us sigh and admire. Enthusiastic help is a catalyst to eliminate indifference, and enthusiastic heart is also the embodiment of people's innocence. Isn't it a good result to eliminate indifference with enthusiasm?
Treating strange things with caution and helping others to be wrongly accused are now raging, and people sigh: "It seems that kind help should be implemented under the premise of caution." Should we take out our mobile phones and film the whole process when we want to help others to prevent being wrongly blamed? Maybe not, but careful thinking is essential. Therefore, caution can minimize the harm caused by strange events.
Indifference is like a ruthless meat cleaver, constantly destroying our hearts. Let's find our true self, reject indifference, and put an end to indifference by warming others.
Comments: This paper closely follows the "strangeness" and puts forward the measures that should be taken in the face of "strangeness". The materials are practical, with a strong sense of the times and thorough analysis. The language expression is clear and fluent, but it lacks literary talent.
Score: 22206
Document No.5 (46 points)
Defeat strangers
In life, anything strange will happen around us. I always tremble after I get the math test paper. Just because I am afraid of those strange math questions, I always study math very hard and try to get good grades, just like them.
I firmly believe that through hard work, we can overcome strange problems and finally succeed.
He is not afraid to blame the genius with the first history score for giving up liberal arts and choosing his very strange science to study Mr. Qian Weichang. This bold decision made many tutors feel sorry and puzzled. Will strange physics problems tremble like me when presented to him? But I didn't know that even if he trembled for a while, he would pick up his pen and bury himself in calculation. Through unremitting efforts, he will overcome these strange problems. He firmly believes that he can overcome strangeness with his own efforts and finally succeed. His spirit of overcoming strangeness is worth learning and experiencing.
He is not afraid to be a strange high jumper on the playground. How upset are you that Liu Xiang suddenly turned to hurdles? How to treat strange hurdles? Imagine that you are trying to sweat in the track and field, and you can't help but admire your persistence and hard work. When your teammates are resting, you are still practicing in the face of those strange hurdles, just because you firmly believe that you can beat these strangers by your own strength and finally achieve brilliant success. Your spirit of hitting strangers left a deep impression on everyone. China, you will be proud of you. Learn the spirit of beating strangers, just because you are their successful example.
In her early twenties, she is even more afraid of strangers coming to strange countries alone, leaving a trace on this land of Korea with her own sweat and efforts. Victoria Song, a sunny girl, overcame her strange language and living habits with her own efforts and persistence. She has long been a good sister in the eyes of her teammates and a good mother who can cook. She has been living in Korea with an attitude of not being afraid of strangers. It is precisely because of her spirit of overcoming strangeness that all fans only remember her smile, so we will feel sorry for her like that.
In fact, strangeness is not terrible. What is valuable is your attitude towards it. Just like them, you are not afraid of strangeness, and you are determined to defeat the strange spirit in our hearts. Then success is really not far from us.
Score: 1920746
Comments: This article has an accurate understanding of strangeness, a clear point of view, "Don't be afraid of strangeness, try to defeat strangeness", and its thinking is clear. The selected materials are typical, but the shortcomings are that the analysis of the materials is not deep enough, and the process of how to overcome difficulties and make strangeness unfamiliar in the face of unfamiliar things has not been excavated. In addition, the full text does not reflect the author's deep understanding of strangeness, and the content is mainly based on material analysis, which does not highlight the author's own thinking and lacks depth.
Circular No.6 (44 points)
strange
Everyone is encountering everything for the first time. However, when we first meet, we are often unfamiliar with what we see. But if there is no strange process, how can you be familiar with it?
In life, our first feelings about the things we meet for the first time are unfamiliar, but behind the strangeness, there are often different attitudes, some are curious, some are afraid, some are determined to try, and face the strange things with different attitudes, and the result is divided into two factions. Therefore, we should face strange things with an optimistic and natural attitude.
Facing strange things with a good attitude is the first step to success.
In the forest, when spring comes, many birds will hatch. When they break their hard shells and open their eyes, the scene before them is strange. They saw the colorful world in front of them, but they didn't know that there was a jungle trap hidden in this world. They walked out of the nest happily, but they didn't know that they had not learned to fly. After countless failures, birds curious about strange things gradually become familiar with the world and know how to eat and avoid natural enemies. They have entered the journey of life and taken the first step of success, while those timid chicks can only groan behind their brothers and sisters.
Optimism in the face of strange things in life will make people's lives more exciting.
Anyone who knows the story of Helen Keller will think that she is unfortunate, but she feels lucky that Helen lost her sight and hearing because of a serious illness at a young age. Fortunately, she met an excellent tutor and became familiar with strange things under the patient guidance of the teacher. Through physics teaching, Helen learned everything in the world optimistically. Through continuous efforts, Helen realized this colorful world. She began to write and give speeches all over the world. After all, she became an influential writer. Being optimistic about strange things is the magic weapon of Helen's success, and it is for this reason that Helen has shown her wonderful life.
In the face of strange things, we can't shrink back.
Sitting in the examination room now, I will join the society in a few years. At first, we will face life alone. We will be unfamiliar with many things, such as finding a job. But when we face a strange thing, we should not be full of fear, even have the idea of shrinking, and then do it. If so, we will never be able to achieve great things or face strange things. Even if we are wrong, we can learn from the past and avoid making mistakes in the future.
In the face of strange things, the result is often beyond our control, so we should face it with an optimistic and natural attitude.
Comments: This paper has a more accurate understanding of the word "unfamiliar", which can be demonstrated from three aspects. We must treat unfamiliar things with an optimistic and natural attitude, including natural phenomena, typical figures and social phenomena. But this article is not very clear, the certification is not strict enough, and the expression is not smooth enough. This article was rated as second-class, with 44 points: content 19 form 18 development 7.
Document No.7 (43 points)
Don't be afraid of strangers.
How many strange things have we faced since we lived today? From birth to seeing the world, this colorful world is strange; When you walk into the classroom, you will see people of similar age. The people who follow you everywhere now used to be strangers.
Strange things will become familiar one day, so don't panic and face it bravely.
From the moment she was born, she was a deaf, dumb and blind child, unable to see or hear the world she lived in. She became anxious with inexplicable fear. Later, she met a gentle and patient teacher who took Helen Keller to the garden and introduced her to the world. When Helen learned about water by writing on her hands, she realized that she was very happy to know strange things. Helen always feels happy when she realizes new things again and again. She is not afraid of new things. On the contrary, she is eager to know more things so that she can appreciate the beauty of the world.
We are always afraid of strange things, because we become irritable because of fear. If we choose to stay away from strange things because of fear, we will lose the opportunity to know them and feel their beauty. If we are afraid of distant places, how can we see a broader and more colorful future?
We all go from strangeness to familiarity, because we are not afraid to face strangeness and then mature and develop step by step. How could Magellan be afraid of the strange road ahead, and how could he find that the earth was round? If Einstein is afraid of time and space and everything he doesn't know at present, how can he get the theory of relativity? The slow development of national capitalist economy in modern China is precisely due to the obstruction of traditional feudal forces. They are afraid of unfamiliar modern science and technology, and they stick to the old saying, so they try their best to obstruct and hinder their development.
Don't be afraid of strangeness, accept it and you will feel the uniqueness of strangeness; Accept it, you will know that the past life and the past world are not perfect, and you will have the courage to pursue the distance. We sailed from a strange destination to a familiar destination.