1. It makes sense to choose another topic. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, I have my own experience and sense. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. The words are fluent. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.

2. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.

3. The research of this paper provides a new basis for XXXX to have strong practical value in controlling accounting information distortion. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.

4. This paper is accurate in topic selection, reasonable in structure, rich in content, sufficient in data, advanced in analysis method and reasonable in writing progress. The conclusions and suggestions have regional practical significance, and are recommended as excellent graduation thesis at the university level.

5. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is used comprehensively to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are new opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.

6. This article is very novel. Taking xx as a clue, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and causes of xx in combination with local standards, and puts forward solutions to the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.

7. This paper meets the professional requirements and reflects the social hot issues. Therefore, the research of this topic is conducive to promoting the further development of xxx in China. The full text starts with the problem of xxx, and then analyzes the reasons of xxx. On this basis, the related xxx is analyzed. The full text has proper structure, clear thinking and basically correct views.

8. The paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Can well investigate the problems existing in xxx. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.

9. The title of the full text is xxx. Pay attention to xxx problem, and then put forward effective suggestions for the problem. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is reasonable. The reference materials are closely combined with the theme.

10, with the title of xxx. This paper mainly discusses and analyzes the problems existing in xxx company and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures for the problems. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing. The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze XXX, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.