The second chapter is a short comment-both my teachers and students love to comment on students' compositions in the form of argumentative essays and reprint the full text of classic compositions. In fact, Mr. Wang doesn't simply correct children's compositions, but walks into children's inner world through compositions, feels and listens to children's voices attentively, understands their ideological trends and speaks highly of their thoughts. It is not difficult to see from the article that she thinks that children's thoughts are rich and colorful, far beyond the imagination of adults. Children's thoughts are not completely naive, even quite mature, thoughtful and far-sighted. It can be seen that neither parents nor teachers can treat children simply and rudely, perhaps because your own subjective arbitrariness may have stifled the birth of a genius. There is a famous saying, "Edison and Newton may be in your cold eyes." Therefore, I think one of the ideological work for children.