1. The title of this paper is xxx, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The demonstration method is reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is more thorough.

2. The paper is rigorous in structure, strong in logic, accurate in text expression, detailed in content and irregular in format. In the process of writing the thesis, the student actively contacted the tutor, conducted serious investigation and research, read a lot of literature, and was able to master the basic theoretical knowledge of this major skillfully, with certain scientific research ability.

3. This paper focuses on the analysis of the problems existing in xxx company and their causes, and puts forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing.