"A scholar doesn't go out and knows what's going on in the world". Sitting in front of the computer and clicking the mouse lightly, the world is close at hand. Elegant music and online chat let us relax; Anecdotal anecdotes, great rivers and mountains have opened our eyes and traveled all over the country without going out; Funny videos add a bit of fun to our lives; Online shopping and reading make our life convenient ... The network is integrated into our life, which makes us enjoy it!
When life is at stake, a dying life finds the cause and is reborn through online help; When we are under great pressure, we can relax ourselves by listening to songs and chatting with netizens on the Internet. When you encounter a problem, press the button to count the mouse and it will be solved; When we are bored, playing games makes us feel happy ... we don't have to worry about leaving home to go to cram school. Don't worry about going through a lot of trouble to buy what you want; Don't worry that your home will be full of finished books; Don't worry about not being accompanied by a partner when you are bored ... The Internet has always been around us, and it has also brought us closer to the world.
During the SARS period, primary and secondary schools in Beijing could not attend classes normally, so online teaching was implemented, and students attended classes at home through the Internet. How amazing! A thread and a computer not only ensure the life safety of teachers and students, but also ensure the normal study.
The benefits of the Internet are numerous.
Laozi said that everything has advantages and disadvantages, and the Internet is no exception.
I remember a trip in primary school, and we went to a juvenile detention center. Many brothers and sisters are kept in cages. At that time, the leaders there prepared a speech for our arrival. It turns out that the brothers and sisters inside are addicted to the internet and neglect their studies; Because they have no money to surf the internet, they kill and rob; I did something because of the yellow on the Internet. ...
Internet allows many simple-minded young people who can't stand the temptation to study, indulge in the illusory world, have fun and delay their youth. They embarked on the road of crime and made their parents suffer.
There is more knowledge on the Internet than in our books. Therefore, we become dependent on the internet and lazy. Write a composition, don't think about it, there are copies on the computer; Do the problem, nothing, the computer will tell me. Doing homework is like finishing a task, as long as it is finished. We copied all the homework assigned by our teacher to make us remember our knowledge more firmly, but we didn't remember it. Without computers, we will accomplish nothing.
The network is a double-edged sword, which gives us ideological satisfaction, brings us convenience, lets us know the richness of the world, and at the same time lets us revel in it, become addicted to it, and gradually move towards illegal crimes because of dissatisfaction.
The popularity of the Internet means the improvement of people's living standards. In this high-tech era, people can't live without the Internet, which enables us to better understand the world. However, the Internet is not perfect, and its disadvantages are not limited to these. Therefore, we should "take its essence and discard its dross" for the Internet.
Internet is a double-edged sword. As long as we make good use of this sword in our hands, we can surf the Internet in a green, civilized and happy way, and the Internet will be beneficial to us.
Write a composition about the understanding of the network, so that our life is more modern and more contemporary; The network allows me to buy things, learn knowledge and play games without leaving home; Network, let me
Chat with distant friends and relatives at any time to enhance feelings; Network, let me learn to seek medical advice; Network, let me know the world events in time ...; Internet makes me happy and makes my life more interesting. Just when people are happy, the Internet makes people more and more happy and worried.
How many people can't find their way home because they are addicted to the internet; How many children have lost their way because they are addicted to the internet; How many families have broken up because they are addicted to the internet; Because of indulging in the internet, many flower-like lives have been destroyed or even died.
Therefore, the network is a good or bad double-edged sword. Internet is both an angel and a devil. If you don't choose well, you may be pushed into the bottomless abyss by angels and demons. One of my mother's students fell in love with their own imagination because they were addicted to the internet, and did not listen to their parents' painstaking persuasion and committed suicide by jumping off a building. Zhang Xiaoyi, a 0/3-year-old boy from Tanggu District, Tianjin, also committed suicide by jumping off a building because he was addicted to playing World of Warcraft online. These tragic examples are enough to make people understand that the internet has both advantages and disadvantages. Network can be a treasure chest to help you learn knowledge, or it can be the devil that leads you to the road of crime and the claw that pushes you to the bottomless abyss.
Please stay away from the clutches of the network, control yourself, and use its efficient, fast and convenient functions to help us study and live better and thrive better.
Writing skills, the theme of multi-genre articles and comments is writing "net"
Dehua composition network
Xue Yuchu
Composition theme
The internet is tangible, intangible, beneficial and harmful ... please write an article of no less than 600 words with your own topic.
Writing skills
The basic characteristics of topic composition are openness, flexibility and foresight. Openness means that in recent years, there are fewer and fewer restrictions on topic composition, which provides candidates with relatively free choices and opportunities for association, so that candidates can truly "write my heart"; Flexibility means that there is no genre restriction, and candidates can choose their own styles and expressions to give full play to their advantages; Forward-looking means that writing has a broader vision, pays attention to reality and the future, and becomes people's knowledge.
In the examination composition, narrative and prose articles are still the first choice for candidates. On the one hand, such articles are rich in sources, and they can tell their own experiences, or they can be interspersed with materials they have read or what they have seen and heard. On the other hand, in addition to narration, they can also use lyricism, discussion and description, which is more flexible. But to really write a good composition on this topic, we must also pay attention to the following points:
1. Thinking must be divergent.
When you get a composition topic similar to "net", don't settle on a certain "net" first, but let your mind fully open, from tangible fish net and ball net to intangible relationship network, interpersonal network and computer network, from beneficial network to harmful network. In other words, in a very short time, you can list the nets in all directions on paper, analyze, distinguish and compare them. The liberalization of ideas gives full freedom and broad space for material selection. In the comparison of materials, priority should be given to realistic and targeted hot materials, such as caring for others, caring for society, enjoying life, thinking about life, loving the motherland and imagining the future.
2. The key points must be in place.
For a variety of materials, we should consider making them serve a clear theme. Topic composition is by no means a "theme-free variation" of piled materials, but an article with a clear theme of "scattered form but not scattered spirit". We must think high and far. At present, there is a serious phenomenon of "calcium deficiency" in middle school students' compositions. The main reason is that students' compositions lack the ideological strength, ambition and momentum that young students should have, and lack sympathy and infinite enthusiasm and love for the country and the nation. Therefore, there must be something spiritual in the composition, and we must always think that there is a big life behind the composition.
Third, we should pay attention to the integration of materials.
Because the selected materials come from different sources, such as personal experiences, others, ancient times, modern times and Chinese and foreign countries, they are all fragmentary, so we should consider how to bond these materials together. Specifically, we can consider the distribution of these materials and the transformation of context. And don't give people the feeling of "hard-loading the axe handle".
Bird, look out!
Wei Shi, Class 6, Grade 3.
I don't know why, the first thing I think of when I see this "net" is not the increasingly huge computer network, but the huge bird net standing in the field, like an invisible maw, while the free birds in the sky are completely unaware of the impending death.
One day, I followed my grandmother to the field and suddenly found a row of high nets trembling not far away. "Grandma, what's that?" I asked, pointing to the net. "Oh, that's Uncle Wang's bird net, which was just put up a few days ago." Bird catching? I was so excited that I stopped listening to my grandmother's nagging and rushed to the internet.
How high! This net is like a giant, waiting for its prey with open arms. I am full of envy: if this net is my own, I can catch many birds to play with me! You can feed the bird like a pigeon, watch it jump lightly and listen to it sing around.
At this time, an unknown object hit the net not far away, and when it came closer, it turned out to be a sparrow, struggling constantly. This sparrow is not very big, but it is still very small. The lovely little sparrow struggled desperately, but wrapped its wings tighter and tighter. After a long time, it seems too tired to struggle for a while, but its small round eyes have been looking around, not knowing whether it is fear, despair or pleading. I feel curious and want to touch it. But just touching it, it struggled desperately and scared me back at once. At this time, I noticed that there was a black thing wrapped around the internet not far from the bird. Ah, that's a bird's leg! Why are there so many dismembered bird legs and wings on the Internet? Poor bird! At this moment, my original curiosity has disappeared, replaced by chills, sadness, surprise and anger. This bird net is not a giant, but a demon, a demon in the abyss of hell, covered with the blood of fresh life. It turned out that the bird catcher cut off the bird's legs and wings tightly wrapped in the net to save trouble and took the bird away. In the face of the sharp knife of the bird catcher, the bird's fear can be imagined, and in the face of other birds being dismembered bit by bit, the bird's fear is even unimaginable. I begged my grandmother to let all the birds go, but finally she didn't agree.
Birds, young birds, I may never forget the scene where they hang on the Internet. I want to cut that horrible net, and I want to stop drinking birdman: put down the bird! But I can't help them. I can only shout in my heart: bird, be careful!
short review
This is a story.
What is written here is a sinful "net" that captures life and harms creatures.
In the article, the author tells an unforgettable thing he experienced personally. The beginning summarizes the unforgettable reasons. Then, the article first wrote a happy discovery of its own, which triggered a rich and beautiful imagination. At this time, the mood suddenly fell from heaven to hell, which also brought the reader into the emotional trough, leaving an indelible scene of sin and tragedy.
At the end of the article, the author shouted a heartfelt voice in a tone of extreme sadness, indignation and helplessness, "Bird, be careful-!" Give readers a strong shock.
Loving life is the theme of this article, and it is also the most shining place of this article, but some readers may ask: Since you love life, why do you particularly want to have a huge network from the beginning? Isn't this a contradiction? Careful readers will find that the author has a fictional text, where there is not only no idea of hurting life, but also appreciation, respect and help for life. Then let us all appreciate, respect and help every life, not because we are young, not because we have no adult rights. Before life, before respecting and protecting life, all people should be equal!
Loosen the net and release happiness.
Living in Renren, Class 5, Grade 3.
A fish, carefree in free water, swings its gorgeous fins. In the water, it is like a happy angel; A net was cast in the distance, but the fish didn't see it and plunged in. Since then, it has lost its freedom and troubles, just waiting to become a delicious food.
It is undoubtedly a kind of sorrow that fish are caught in a net. The net prevented its fins from swinging, prevented its body from going where it wanted to go, and prevented it from being free and unrestrained in the water and dancing beautifully. It waited helplessly for the death sentence and twisted helplessly.
It's sad that fish are bound by nets, but isn't nets sad? Because it imprisons the fish, it also prevents its own happiness. The existence of fish makes its heart have a heavy burden, so that it can no longer enjoy the warm sunshine. The net will be immersed in water all day, the aquatic plants will gradually corrode its mind, and the fish will drown its ears. But it still stubbornly imprisoned the fish and refused to let go.
What is the purpose of this continuous imprisonment? I can't answer this question either. It only knows that this is its innate mission. However, what is the significance of such a mission?
In fact, everyone's heart also has a net that binds their happiness. Happiness is like a fish, trapped in a net and unable to be released freely. As a result, many people are sullen and gloomy every day.
So, what is our heart network? It's desire. It makes us want to have many, many impossible things, and once we fail to achieve these desires, we will be depressed, depressed, lose confidence in ourselves and no longer have happiness; But the desire will become stronger. Since then, we have entered a terrible vicious circle.
Happiness is fair, and it doesn't mean that anyone who wants to be happy is happy. If you want to have happiness with me, then let go of the net of desire and let happiness swim freely in our hearts!
short review
This is a unique argumentative essay.
At the beginning, it does not simply put forward the central argument, but depicts a striking picture, and a pair of contradictions are also highlighted in front of the readers.
Next, the author wrote the sadness of fish with affectionate pen and ink, which deeply infected the readers. But the third paragraph turns to a pen and personifies the sadness of the net. At this time, the groundwork has been fully laid. Let's talk about the "net" in people's hearts and the "fish" in their hearts.
The author used a rhetorical question, "What is the significance of such a mission?" Expressed dissatisfaction with the "net" and used a rhetorical question "What is the net in our hearts? It is desire. " Pushed the article to a new height. Finally, it clearly shows the main idea of the full text: abandon desire and enjoy freedom.
This article does not involve our own life reality, nor does it list celebrity cases at all times and in all countries, but a story of "fish" and "net" is enough as an argument, and it is closely related to the topic, so that readers can appreciate a thought-provoking truth from the simple to the deep in the story.
Spiders and webs
Yao Yixin from Class Five, Grade Three.
Once upon a time, there was a little spider who always wanted to weave the biggest and most beautiful web. So it got busy among the branches of a big tree. It climbed up and down, busy left and right, and after a day and a night of unremitting efforts, it finally woven a very beautiful net. The net is a "gossip" shape, like a snowflake. Thin and transparent spider silk intertwines with each other to form a circle net, which forms a beautiful picture. Its companion was surprised and amazed when he saw this net. The spider looked proudly at her web and was filled with joy.
One day, a poor little flying insect flew in a hurry and unfortunately ran into this beautiful line. It panicked, lost its mind, and its wings stuck to the sticky spider silk, unable to get away. The little flying insect struggled painfully. Just then, the hungry spider noticed that the little flying insect had been stuck, and his eyes showed fierce light, thinking: Now I can have a good meal! It bared its teeth and ran to the flying insects, and the spider web swayed up and down with the spider, crumbling. But the spider loves this net dearly, and doesn't want to destroy such a beautiful net, so it has to climb gently to reduce the degree of net jitter. Small flying insects have enough time to break free from the net. After a fierce struggle, it finally managed to escape and fly out. The spider felt remorse when she saw the delicious food in her mouth fly away. The tree shook its head, sighed and said, "Ah, this silly spider, for the sake of beauty, forgot the original function of the net."
A few nights later, it was stormy. The cobwebs swayed from side to side with the storm and tottered. The spider curled up on the internet, terrified. The tree advised it: "run for your life!" " The spider shook his head and said, "No, I want to protect my web!" " "The wind has become more violent. One silk is broken, two, three ... finally, the beautiful net is broken and falls from the branch. Until then, the spider still clung to the web and kept saying, "Don't get pregnant with my web ..." But no one paid attention to it. Finally, the spider left this world with a broken net.
The spider web entangled itself. Later, the spider remembered this lesson: "Don't give up everything for the network."
short review
This is a fable.
On the surface, what is written here is a beautiful spider web, but on a deeper level, it is a narrow, conservative and vain web of ideas.
The tragedy is amazing and the lesson is thought-provoking!
Network association
Yang Yanwen, Class 6, Grade 2.
The net is a barrier that will block the road from here to there; The network is a circle that can revolve around the ideas that people are trying to explore; The net is a kind of love, which can wrap the loneliness of the soul and immerse people in boundless sweetness.
On a small fishing boat moored on the shore, there are several nets made of green hemp rope. They lay there lazily and fell asleep greedily. An old fisherman in a straw hat came over. He picked up a net and hung it on his shoulder. He propped up the boat and rowed slowly into the river, his eyes shining and his mouth smiling. He suddenly grabbed the net, quickly opened it and threw it on the river. The net floated on the river. The fisherman lit a cigarette and smoked leisurely. When the net is put away, it is full of small fish. They kept jumping, their eyes showed infinite fear, because this hateful net blocked their way of survival and opened a road of death that they didn't want to take. This net just shows an innocent look.
In front of the computer desk, some people's eyes are shining with excitement. In the virtual network, they like swimming. Tapping the keyboard and clicking the mouse has become an essential exercise every day. In the network, they don't have to bear any responsibility, because everything is fake. This is a fascinating net, which sprinkles * * * on ignorant people and imprisons their thoughts.
But some nets are also cute. We live in a web of love. When you are lonely, you have long-term friends around you; When you are in pain, you have family to share your troubles with you; When you don't understand, a teacher will enlighten you; When you are happy, have friends to share with you; When you are helpless, there is love to help you through; When you are bored, there are pets to make you happy; When you are sad, there are relatives who can help you. What a warm net it is! It makes you unforgettable, makes you feel like a spring breeze, and lets you know what real life is!
Some nets are made of life; Some networks are full of interests; Some nets are made of love; Some nets are made of happiness. See the shape of the net clearly, understand what kind of net to cherish and what kind of net to cut off, in order to grow healthily and sturdily.
short review
This is a paper.
The advantages of this paper are as follows:
First, the overall thinking is better. The title is "Lenovo on the Internet", and the content is really written around "Lenovo". From banning network to charming network to caring network, from the function of network to the connotation of network to the attitude towards network, the thinking is very clear and the overall structure is well grasped.
Second, the language is accurate and concise. The words at the beginning and end of parallelism sentences pay great attention to change, and the content between sentences is also rich in change. The main part of the article pays great attention to the description of characters' expressions and actions, which is infectious.
Of course, it is worth mentioning that the author's writing style is also very skillful, neat, beautiful and beautiful.