Thinking of writing: Simplify task language directly. In narration, direct narration should be changed into indirect narration, and the language of characters should be simplified as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentence is "concise".

Today, I am playing. I put the straw on my head, rubbed it on my hair for a while, and then put the straw in that small pile of paper. Ah! A strange thing happened: the straw acted like a magnet, sucking up all the scraps of paper on it. That's interesting. Can you make this game more interesting? It suddenly occurred to me: what magical things will happen if a piece of paper is turned into a small butterfly?

I brought a thin piece of colored paper and drew many butterflies on it. I wonder what will happen. This time, I brought a sweater and a straw to complete the task.

I immediately picked up the straw on my sweater and rubbed it hard for about half a minute. Then I picked up the rubbed straw and gently stroked the butterfly's wings. Sure enough, as I expected, when I slowly lifted the straw, I saw the upward trend of the small butterfly hovering. Wow! It worked!

I checked the reason online, and it turned out that butterflies were dancing because of static electricity.