Note: This paper is suitable for beginners of task-driven composition writing, with obvious structure and clear thinking, and suitable for composition in examination room. This article comes from Chinese monthly magazine. For more details, please pay attention to the official account of Chinese monthly WeChat.
Method 1: explain the reasons and solve the problem thoroughly.
-The basic framework of task-driven composition writing
The full name of task-driven composition is task-driven composition with narrative style and new materials. Its essence is a "commentary" composition in some places, and its essence is still a material composition, but a clear directional task is added on the basis of materials, which is intended to enhance the purpose of writing and prevent plagiarism. This kind of composition focuses on students' attitudes and views on a thing or social phenomenon, the depth and breadth of thinking, and the clarity and fluency of expression. Therefore, when writing this kind of composition, some basic things are essential, and only with basic elements can we meet the requirements; Only with the basic framework can we be in an invincible position in the examination room.
What are the basic components of task-driven composition? The author thinks there are five parts as follows.
A resounding title
It is based on the examination of the topic, clear thinking, choose the writing angle, and draw up an eye-catching topic. This title should be the "core idea" extracted from the material as much as possible, and it is a concise phrase or sentence composed of keywords and phrases selected from the material. Try to replace attitude with opinions or opinions. It is better to use the established words to transform. It's better to be unconventional.
(2) Quote+statement+viewpoint
The first paragraph of the text adopts the form of "quotation+statement+opinion" to achieve the effect of "debut". Citation can be direct or indirect, but it must be targeted. The position must be firm, decisive and clear. Don't procrastinate, but get to the point.
(3) Explain the reasons at different levels.
It is untenable to have an attitude and an opinion without reason. Therefore, the third step of the composition must explain your reasons. Elaboration must be organized, that is, divided; Also pay attention to the hierarchy of content, such as from shallow to deep, from surface to inside, from concrete to abstract. Only in this way can we show the depth and breadth of a student's thinking.
(4) further elaboration.
This step is difficult for ordinary students to play. How can we go deeper? The author believes that the most basic way is to put forward a feasible and meaningful solution to the problem, that is, to solve the problem. In addition, you can also "horizontally expand" and "vertically dig" and simply refute. In particular, refutation can presuppose the opposing party first, and then persuade it euphemistically, which reflects the thoroughness of the author's thinking and meets the requirements of "civilized reasoning" in task-based composition.
(5) Connecting with practice and completing it quickly.
Any article should consider its practical significance. If there is no practical significance, the article will be much inferior.
Yes Therefore, it is necessary for students to combine exercises with compositions in the examination room. However, this one
Don't be too mother-in-law, be like a piece of music, come to an abrupt end and have endless aftertaste.
An exercise is built with the above five components, and it has been very good. If you can add some necessary condiments, such as ginger, onion and garlic dishes, you will definitely get high marks and favorable comments.
Case analysis
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
In order to urge students to study, Teacher Jiao of a vocational and technical college came up with a "new trick" to send red envelopes with WeChat after class, giving red envelopes to students with high attendance, good academic performance and serious classes. As soon as this move came out, none of his students skipped classes, the classroom atmosphere was active and the relationship between teachers and students became better. As soon as the news came out, the teachers and students of the school agreed, feeling that this practice was very innovative. After the media reported, it caused controversy. Some parents explicitly oppose the teacher's practice and think that using "money" to guide students to attend classes will make children utilitarian and make education tasteless.
What do you think of the above matter? Please express your attitude and views on the performance of teachers, students or parents. It is required to synthesize the content and significance of the material, choose a good angle, determine the train of thought and complete the writing task.
Teaching and educating people should also have "new tricks" (concise and loud titles)
In order to urge students to study, Teacher Jiao of a vocational and technical college came up with a "new trick" to send red envelopes with WeChat after class, giving red envelopes to students with high attendance, good academic performance and serious classes. As soon as this move came out, teachers and students recognized it and caused controversy in society. Some parents think it will make education obsolete. In my opinion, Mr Jiao is an innovative teacher. Under such a depressing educational background, teaching and educating people should indeed have new recruits to activate the positive energy of education. (Quote+Attitude+Viewpoint)
First of all, the traditional way of educating people is based on the class collective teaching system, and the exam-oriented education based on indoctrination makes students feel bored and far from achieving the purpose of education. Under such circumstances, it is natural for teachers to "cross the ocean and show their magical powers" and adopt some new measures that conform to the times. Only by constantly updating their methods can they constantly activate their motivation to learn.
Secondly, the new trick of sending red envelopes by WeChat has obvious effect. None of Mr. Dajiao's classes skipped classes. The classroom atmosphere was lively and the relationship between teachers and students was very good. Regardless of the durability of the effect, this has proved the feasibility of the new measures.
Thirdly, if we can organically integrate the new thing of "giving red envelopes" with the traditional way of teaching and educating people, we can also provide people with a new thinking and educational concept. For example, in the Internet age, making good use of mobile technology to guide and educate students all the time will certainly inspire countless energies. Therefore, Teacher Jiao's new measures will definitely cause ripples in the education sector. (Explain the reasons at different levels)
Some parents explicitly oppose the teacher's practice, thinking that using "money" to guide students to attend classes will make children utilitarian and make education tasteless. Indeed, modern students live in a materialistic environment and blindly use money to guide their studies, which is very likely to become utilitarian and make education tasteless. However, education should not be timid and hesitant because of certain risks. As long as it is "after class" and "with small money" in a proper way, while encouraging red envelopes, the main line is spiritual edification and positive education. This new measure is bound to play an important role in activating and assisting education. (Default counterparty, simple rebuttal)
As the old saying goes: Learn from your teacher and believe in his way. Red envelopes can bring students and teachers closer together, so it goes without saying that "believing in the truth". You Yun: Teaching and learning learn from each other. Students' enthusiasm for learning is stimulated by red envelopes. Then, the enthusiasm of students will inevitably affect the enthusiasm of teachers, and finally achieve the goal of "learning from each other." The key to teachers' charm lies in academics and personality. If a teacher can closely rely on his academic and personality charm, supplemented by novel and ingenious methods, various factors will complement each other and form a joint force to promote the great improvement of teaching and educating people. (Horizontal expansion)
Nowadays, due to various reasons, education in China is full of difficulties. More teachers, like Jiao, who are unwilling to be mediocre, dare to innovate and come up with more new tricks, will surely break through the heavy haze and move towards the broad road of education power. (Connecting with practice and completing it quickly)
comment
This exercise is basically written according to the basic framework of five parts, with clear reasoning, clear organization, depth and breadth, moderate quotation and strong significance of the times. It is a rare excellent composition and worthy of reference by candidates.